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Sample Materials Guide 2012

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2012 Cambridge Michigan Language Assessments

Table of Contents
Introduction...................................................................... 2 Contents of the Sample Materials ................................. 3 How to Take the Sample Writing & GCVR Sections ..... 4 Scoring the Sample Writing & GCVR Sections ............. 5 GCVR .......................................................................... 5 Writing ......................................................................... 5 Interpreting Your Scores ................................................. 6 Grammar, Cloze, Vocabulary, and Reading (GCVR) Section ........................................................... 6 Writing Section............................................................ 6 Passing the ECPE Overall ........................................... 6 Important Points to Note ............................................ 6 Appendix 1: Writing Section Scoring Rubric ................. 7 Appendix 2: Sample Essays & Comments .................... 8

Introduction
The main purpose of the ECPE 2012 Sample Materials and this accompanying guide is to familiarize examinees with the Examination for the Certificate of Proficiency in English (ECPE). It also gives examinees the opportunity to test themselves to see whether their English is at the level required for the actual exam. Some examinees take the ECPE before they have reached the standard required to pass. We hope that this sample test will help examinees to better judge their preparedness for the exam. Examinees who intend to take the ECPE should use this guide to complete the sample writing and GCVR sections, mark it themselves, and see whether their scores are sufficient for them to attempt the exam itself. It must be noted, however, that the score received on the sample materials do not guarantee that the same standard will be reached during an actual ECPE administration. These materials should be read in conjunction with the ECPE Information Bulletin. This guide includes instructions on how to take and score the sample writing and GCVR sections.

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Contents of the Sample Materials


Format and Content of the ECPE 2012 Sample Materials Section Writing Grammar Cloze Vocabulary Reading Time
30 minutes 75 minutes

Description
Examinees write an essay based upon one of two topic choices. Grammar (multiple choice) An incomplete sentence is followed by a choice of words or phrases to complete it. Only one choice is grammatically correct. Cloze (multiple choice) After reading a passage from which words have been removed, examinees must choose one of four words that best fills a missing word slot in terms of grammar and meaning. Vocabulary (multiple choice) An incomplete sentence is followed by a choice of words to complete it. Examinees must choose the option that best completes the sentences in terms of meaning. Reading (multiple choice) Four reading passages are followed by comprehension questions. Examinees choose the correct answer from the printed answer choices.

NUMBER OF ITEMS 1 task 40

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Further information about the format of the ECPE can be found in the ECPE Information Bulletin.

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How to Take the Sample Writing & GCVR Sections


It is important to take the sample test under proper test conditions. You should take the test in a place with a table and chair that is quiet and free from distractions. Please allow at least three hours of uninterrupted time. Do not take a break between sections. Additionally, when you take the sample test you should follow these steps. 1. Gather the test materials: a. the sample test booklet b. an answer sheet c. a piece of paper for the writing section d. pencils e. a timing device such as a clock or stopwatch 2. Turn to the writing section on page 1 of the test booklet. Read the instructions carefully and make sure that you understand them. Once you have read the instructions you may read the essay topics and begin writing. You should write your essay on a separate piece of paper. 3. After 30 minutes, stop writing. Do not reread your essay or change your essay after the 30 minutes has ended. 4. Turn to the general instructions on page 3 of the test booklet. Read the instructions for completing the answer sheet and make sure that you understand them. Fill out the answer sheet according to the instructions. 5. Turn to the grammar, cloze, vocabulary, reading (GCVR) section instructions on page 5 of the test booklet. Read the instructions and make sure that you understand them. 6. When you are ready, turn to the GCVR section on page 6 of the test booklet and begin answering the questions. Mark your answers on the separate answer sheet. Please note that you should begin at number 51 on side 2 of the answer sheet. 7. Stop writing after 75 minutes. Do not change any of your answers after 75 minutes. 8. Read the Scoring the Sample Writing and GCVR Sections portion of this guide. Follow the instructions for checking your answers against the answer key (included with the sample test materials) and example essays (included in this guide). Please note that if you allow yourself longer than the time allocated for each section, you will not get a true picture of your ability.

ECPE 2012 Sample Materials Guide

Scoring the Sample Writing & GCVR Sections


When you have finished taking the sample writing and GCVR sections, you should have a completed answer sheet with one answer per question and a completed essay for the writing section. You now need to score the writing and GCVR sections. Please follow these steps.

Writing
1. This guide includes the writing section scoring rubric and ten sample essays, two at each band on the ECPE writing scale. 2. Read your essay and then read each of the sample essays and the comments that accompany each sample. 3. Compare your essay to the sample essays and decide which sample is the closest to yours. 4. The score of the sample which is closest to yours is your score for the writing section. You should ask a teacher to review your writing and to confirm that you have chosen the right band score. 5. Read the Interpreting Your Scores section of this guide for an explanation of what your sample essay score means.

GCVR
1. For each GCVR item, you should have only filled in one answer on the answer sheet. 2. Compare your answers with the answer key. If your answer matches the answer key then award yourself one point. If your answer does not match the answer key do not award yourself a point. 3. Add up all of your correct answers in the GCVR section. This is your GCVR section score. 4. Read the Interpreting Your Scores section of this guide for an explanation of what your sample GCVR score means.

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Interpreting Your Scores


When the ECPE is taken under examination conditions, the listening section and the grammar, cloze, vocabulary, reading (GCVR) section are scored by computer using Item Response Theory (IRT). This method ensures that the ability required to pass a section, or to receive a high score, remains the same from year to year. IRT scores are not the same as number-right scores, but there is very high correlation between number of correct answers provided and the IRT scores.

Writing Section
If you have strictly followed the instructions for taking the sample test and your writing meets the criteria of at least a C on the ECPE writing section scoring rubric, then you have a chance of passing the ECPE writing section under examination conditions. If your writing meets the criteria of at least a B on the ECPE writing section scoring rubric, then you are likely to pass the ECPE writing section under examination conditions.

Grammar, Cloze, Vocabulary, and Reading (GCVR) Section


Scores 90 and above: If you have strictly followed the instructions for taking the sample test, you are likely to pass the GCVR section of the ECPE under examination conditions. Scores 78 89: You have a chance of passing the GCVR section of the ECPE under examination conditions but you may benefit from more lessons or more practice before you register for the examination. Scores 77 and below: You are unlikely to pass the GCVR section of the ECPE under examination conditions and should spend more time improving your English before taking the examination.

Passing the ECPE Overall


Examinees who pass three sections with a Low Pass (or higher) and receive no less than a Borderline Fail in one section will be awarded an ECPE certificate. If you are able to meet the standards described above then you are probably ready to take the ECPE.

Important Points to Note


1. Although the sample materials are designed to be similar in difficulty to the ECPE and will give you a reasonable idea of how you should expect to score on the exam, there is no guarantee that your score on the sample materials will be the same as the score you receive when you take the ECPE. 2. The writing section scores you receive when you take an ECPE under examination conditions are determined by raters trained and certified according to standards established by Cambridge Michigan Language Assessments. It is possible that when you review your own writing performance, the scores assigned might be different from those that would have been assigned by certified raters and examiners.

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Appendix 1: Writing Section Scoring Rubric


RATING A Honors RHETORIC
Topic richly, fully, complexly developed Organization wellcontrolled, appropriate to the material Connection is smooth

GRAMMAR/SYNTAX
Flexible use of a wide range of syntactic (sentence level) structures; morphological (word forms) control nearly always accurate Both simple and complex syntax adequately used; good morphological control

VOCABULARY
Broad range, appropriately used

MECHANICS
Spelling and punctuation errors are rare and insignificant

Topic clearly and completely developed, with acknowledgment of its complexity Organization is controlled and shows appropriateness to the material Few problems with connection

Vocabulary use shows flexibility, is usually appropriate Any inappropriate vocabulary does not confuse meaning Adequate vocabulary, but may sometimes be inappropriately used

Spelling and punctuation errors are infrequent and not distracting

Topic clearly developed, but not always completely or with acknowledgment of its complexity Organization generally controlled; connection sometimes absent or unsuccessful

Both simple and complex syntax present For some, syntax is cautious but accurate, while others are more fluent but less accurate Inconsistent morphological control

Spelling and punctuation errors sometimes distracting

Topic development usually clear but simple and may be repetitive Attempts to address different perspectives on the topic are often unsuccessful Overreliance on prefabricated language and/or language from the prompt Organization partially controlled

Morphological errors are frequent Simple sentences tend to be accurate; more complex ones tend to be inaccurate

Vocabulary may be limited in range, and is sometimes inappropriately used to the point that it causes confusion

Spelling and punctuation errors are frequently distracting

Topic development may be unclear and/or limited by incompleteness or lack of focus Might not be relevant to topic Connection of ideas often absent or unsuccessful

Pervasive and basic errors in sentence structure and word order cause confusion Problems with subject-verb agreement, tense formation or word formation Even basic sentences are filled with errors

Incorrect use of vocabulary causes confusion Even basic words may be misused May show interference from other languages

Basic vocabulary words regularly misspelled Little or no control over sentence boundaries Spelling and punctuation errors regularly cause confusion

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Appendix 2: Sample Essays & Comments


On the following pages are ten sample ECPE writing section essays. Each essay is followed by sample examiner comments. Essays 1 through 5 are responses to Prompt 1: Essays 6 through 10 are responses to Prompt 2:

Prompt 1

Prompt 2

In some countries the government places a limit on the number of children a couple can have, while in other countries the government offers economic incentives to a couple to have more children. Why do governments establish population policies like these? What effects do these policies have? Discuss, and give specific examples to support your views.

There is no universal definition of the word adult. Different cultures, religions, legal systems, and individuals have varying ideas about when a person becomes an adult. What factors do you think define adulthood? Support your opinion with specific reasons.

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Essay 1

Rating: A

The number of children a couple can have is limited in some countries whereas in other countries, couples are offered economic incentives to have more children. The reason why these policies exist are mainly for the situation of the national economy of each and every country. Countries which are underdeveloped and lack major necessities for their people, such as employment, education, health, basic sanitation and food, just to name a few, try to limit the number of their population using limits on how many children a couple can have and in some cases placing heavy fines on those who do not comply with these limits. This way, if they manage to reduce their population, they might be able to offer a better living standard for their people. On the other hand, countries which are highly developed and advanced, usually can offer all the major necessities to their people in abundance. Therefor, these countries seek to boost their economies even higher by trying to increase the number of people who are employed and pay taxes, the number of people who seek better education and pay for it, and as you can imagine from the examples, a significant increase in the population can be interpreted as more income for the governments, resulting in a much stronger economy. This is why these governments offer economic motives to young people to have as many children as they can, because they know that, even though they might be paying a small price to increase their population, they will be receiving a lot more from this increase in the future when these new members of society will be a part of the economy.
Examiner Comments on Essay 1
This composition is an A-level essay.The language is controlled well and it develops the topic well. These strengths make up for the occasional weakness in word choice. Topic fully, complexly developed Organization well-controlled, appropriate to the material Connection is smooth The writer selects low frequency conjunctions and uses them appropriately to indicate expansion or elaboration of a point (e.g., and as you can imagine from the examples...; just to name a few...). Flexible use of a wide range of syntactic (sentence level) structures; morphological (word forms) control nearly always accurate There is a wide range of syntactic structures used: these countries seek to boost their economies even higher by trying to increase the number of people who are employed and pay taxes, the number of people who seek better education and pay for it, and as you can imagine from the examples, a significant increase in the population can be interpreted as more income for the governments, resulting in a much stronger economy. Vocabulary use shows flexibility, is usually appropriate and does not confuse meaning Word choice lacks polish in a couple of areas: economic motives was used instead of economic incentives; and living standard in place of standard of living. Although word choice is not always appropriate, this weakness is ameliorated by the other strengths, resulting in this essay being awarded an A.

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Essay 2

Rating: B

It is true that special population policies exist in each country. In some countries, the government tries to restrict the number of children a couple can have, by enacting suitable laws, while in other countries the government gives economic incentives so that more children are born. This situation may be quite contradictory but there are reasons why this happens. Firstly, in the countries where the government tries to limit the population, there is pressing need to do so. These countries are usually overpopulated or highly-populated and in most cases, the national economy of each of these countries experience problems. In such places, there are many births every year, each family has many members and the economy of the country is unable to handle this situation and afford everything for these children (education, health services, etc.). In addition, except for the poverty that usually dominates in such countries (for example India), there is a high rate of unemployment, as well. Hence, it will not only be difficult to raise children, but it will also be difficult for these children to make ends meet later in their lives. Hence, the government tries to limit the number of births and most times, this try is effective and efficient. The number of the members of a family is dwindled, so we have smaller families (usually with 2 parents and one or 2 children). On the other hand, there are the governments which give economical incentives to couples in order to give birth to more children. In this case, as well, there is vital need to do so. These countries, which are underpopulated, usually experience demographic problems. This means that the elderly far outnumber the young. This is followed by economic problems as well. There are fewer people who work thus many work-positions are empty and rarely filled, as there are not enough young people to work. Hence, they need to augment the number of children, the number of future employees who will help to boost the economy of the country. Of course, these measure are quite effective, maybe due to the economic benefits provided. The fact is that in these countries families become larger and are made out by more members. On the whole, the number of births should be controlled in each country for its own good. In some countries, they will need to dwindle the rate of births and in others to augment it, but in both cases they promote their cause with suitable policies. Let us hope that the number of births in each country will be as wanted and expected.
Examiner Comments on Essay 2
This composition is a B-level essay. The topic is thoroughly developed and the writer addresses both sides of the issue. The ideas are generally connected together clearly for the reader. Topic clearly and completely developed Organization is controlled and shows appropriateness to the material Few problems with connection Connectors are somewhat mechanical: Firstly,; In addition; Hence; On the other hand... Both simple and complex syntax adequately used; good morphological control Vocabulary use shows flexibility, is usually appropriate There is some evidence of idiomatic language (e.g., make ends meet; pressing need). Any inappropriate vocabulary does not confuse meaning Sometimes word choice is inappropriate (e.g.,to dwindle the rate of births and in others to augment it) but the reader can understand the gist. Overall, the essay is well developed. It has some idiomatic expressions, but it is otherwise written in relatively simple language. The vocabulary choices are usually appropriate, but not sophisticated.

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Essay 3

Rating: C

Many governments nowadays are believed to get involved in the couples decision of how many children they are going to have. However this policy can be separated into two different attitudes. Some governments put a limit on the number of offspring in family, while at the same time in other countries governments encourage the childrens birth. To begin with, overpopulation is considered to be a major problem for some countries and consequently governments try to deal with it. A known example of this situation is China. Its generally acknowledged that its population increases more and more so as to be considered as a threat. For that reason, couples are obliged to have only one child. With this measure peoples freedom is limited because they dont have the right to decide about their family. However this solution seems to be the only one effective for solving the problem. Overpopulation leads to overconsumption and overproduction. In this way our planet deteriorates as the natural sources decrease in an extremely fast way and what is more, we should not forget the consequences of this situation which are very harmful for the environment. As a result, many families face phychological problems from the fact of being prohibited to have more than one children. On the other, in some countries where the birth rate is quite small governments push parents to have more children by offering many economic benefits. Its true that in contemporaries societies families face financial problems and this deters them from having more kids. Apart from money parents lack available time as well in order to be with their family. In such a case, governments realize that their nation may someday become extinct and try to prevent this and create a balance between the low births and the high rate of life expectancy. Its a common phenomenon in some countries the elderly to outnumber the young people. To sum up, this governments policy is implemented in two completely different ways. However, this involvement doesnt seem to be quite ethical but its the only possible solution for countries to deal with their current and future hazards.
Examiner Comments on Essay 3
This composition is a C-level essay. The essay is on-topic, but the authors views are not completely developed and an argument is never clearly established. Topic clearly developed, but not always completely Organization generally controlled Both simple and complex syntax present For some, syntax is cautious but accurate, while others are more fluent but less accurate Sometimes, the language lacks precision of expression (e.g., decrease in an extremely fast way). The writer also makes some grammatical mistakes in this essay, including some run-on sentences. But these errors do not impede meaning: In such a case, governments realize that their nation may someday become extinct and try to prevent this and create a balance between the low births and the high rate of life expectancy. Inconsistent morphological control There are some morphological problems (e.g., many families face phychological problems from the fact of being prohibited to have more than one children.) Adequate vocabulary, but may sometimes be inappropriately used The writer has a broad range of vocabulary (e.g., offspring; overconsumption; deteriorates; phenomenon). Nonetheless, there are several instances where the vocabulary is used inappropriately (e.g., couples are obliged to have only one child; its the only possible solution for countries to deal with their current and future hazards; its true that in contemporaries societies...). Overall, this is a C-level response due to the shortcomings in topic development, inconsistent morphological control, and inappropriate use of vocabulary.
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Essay 4

Rating: D

Nowadays, there are so many countries all over the world. Every each country hase a sum of problems to deal with in order to have a good Function. Such problems can be financialy, environmental, political and so many others.

A common problem that many Asian and African countries face is the big number of population. As long as I know at least China and some other Asian goverments have place limit on the nulmber of children a couple can have. In specific, a Chinese couple can have only one child. These restrictions have been placed by the goverments in order to minimize the number of population in their country. All these children that are born have the need for a home to stay and for food! But, already, these countries, have a big populations and the most of the people are living under bad and unhealthy circumstances. In conclusion, these countries had no other option but to put these limits.

On the other hand there are some countries that dont have big population and even more their population is consisted, mostly from elder people. So, these countries dont have enough people to work and this results to a bad finance situation. Moreover, the governments have to give retirements to their elder populations. Due to that fact the government of these countries offers economic incentives to a couple in order to motivate them have more children. The goverments target is to raise the population and so add the workforce. In this way, these countries can have better financials. In my opinion, the goverments that offers incentives, of which one is my country Greece, can motivate people have more children and that is good for the country for the reasons I have already told. But for the goverments that put limits on how many children can I couple have, I cannot agree, I think its unfair. Everyone has the right to choose of how many members his family can be consisted of. This right shouldnt be banned. Examiner Comments on Essay 4
This composition is a D-level essay. Topic development is simple and limited. Word order causes confusion, but after close reading, meaning can still be retrieved. There are many grammatical errors throughout. Topic development usually clear but simple Organization partially controlled Morphological errors are frequent For example: Such problems can be financialy; a bad finance situation; their population is consisted; In specific Simple sentences tend to be accurate; more complex ones tend to be inaccurate The areas of syntactic inaccuracy include subject/ verb agreement (e.g., China and some other Asian governments have place limit on the number of children a couple can have ; governments that offers incentives) and word order (e.g., these countries had no other option but to put these limits). Vocabulary may be limited in range and is sometimes inappropriately used to the point that it causes confusion For example: big population, elder people, countries can have better financials Overall, the language limitations present in this composition are typical of a D-level essay.

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Essay 5

Rating: E

In our days there are many countries in all over the world which face to a problem of reducing the population. On the other hand there are countries like China which has rapidly increasing of population. For this reason each country receive measures to solve the problem. On the one hand there countries like Greece and I think the majority of European countries which offer economic incentives to a couple to born more than one child in order to increase the population. On the other hand there are countries like China, Indian and other countries specially in Asia and in Africa which the government places a limit on the number of children a couple can have because in these countries a couple often has 4 or 5 children. The majority of families which has many children has economic problem and they are very poor. In my opinion should the countries which attemp problem of reducing to give motives to a couple to borm more children in order to succeed the aim, because after years the order may be more than younger. In countries like China should firstly learn young people to be more mature and not to born such children and if it is necessity to place limit on the number of children. To conclude, I advocate the opinion that there are experts who should find a solution in each country and to give their knowledge not only in the government but specially to young people, to a young couple.
Examiner Comments on Essay 5
This composition is an E-level essay. The text is quite confusing and a lot of effort is required to try to understand the writers intended message. Topic development may be unclear and/or limited by incompleteness or lack of focus Connection of ideas often absent or unsuccessful Pervasive and basic errors in sentence structure and word order cause confusion Many sentences are almost impossible to understand: In my opinion should the countries which attemp problem of reducing to give motives to a couple borm more children in order to succeed the aim, because after the years the order may be more than younger. Problems with subject-verb agreement, tense formation or word formation Even basic sentences are filled with errors There are numerous syntax problems (e.g., there are many countries in all over the world which face to a problem; there are countries like China which has rapidly increasing of population). Vocabulary may be limited in range and is sometimes inappropriately used to the point it causes confusion Every sentence in this essay contains errors. It takes a great deal of effort on the readers part to discern meaning. Therefore, this is an E-level essay.

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Essay 6

Rating: A

Youngsters all around the world are looking forward to the moment when they will be able to make their own decisions in life and act without needing permission from their parents. But the age after which a person is considered adult varies a lot, depending on the country where you grow up and your nationality. In Greece an adolescent is considered as an adult once he enters his eighteenth year of age. In other countries around Europe this threshold is slightly higher or lower. In tropical countries, isolated tribes have a tradition of celebrating their childrens entrance into adulthood once they are about the age of fourteen, or even ten, which is surprisingly early based on our own criteria. Consequently, we cant determine exactly the borderline between adolescence and adulthood-all the above are just for typical reasons. As far as I am concerned, being an adult is all about independence and maturity. So, these should be the requirements, in order to call somebody so. If you really want to grow up, then you need to ask yourself whether you possess certain qualities. When a person, especially a boy, enters adulthood he usually leaves his parents home and sets out to live his own life. This requires that he be independent. He will need to make his own decisions in life, concerning anything, from the most trivial to the most meaningful things, such as getting married and having children. Furthermore, we will need to be able to survive on his own, which means being able to maintain a household. Although most boys and girls might still be going to college, when they enter adulthood, some may have chosen to end their studies and therefore it will be necessary to them to find a job and make a living. All these require a lot of selfknowledge, maybe even courage. Making decisions also requires some fundamental education, which will provide you with adequate judjement of what is going on around you and what your position should be in specific occassions. It is therefore understandable that age is of no importance. You may be considered as an adult, because your eighteen or older, but a younger person than you could be much more capable of surviving on his own.
Examiner Comments on Essay 6
This composition is an A-level essay. The composition is richly developed with supporting examples. Topic richly, fully, complexly developed Organization well-controlled, appropriate to the material Connection is smooth Flexible use of wide range of syntactic (sentence level) structures; morphological (word forms) control nearly always accurate The writer uses a broad vocabulary that is directly relevant to the topic (adolescence; threshold) The use of formulaic phrases (e.g., maintain a household; end their studies; enters adulthood) and other idiomatic language (e.g., age is of no importance) demonstrates linguistic resources similar to those of an educated native user of English. Broad range of vocabulary There are grammatical errorse.g., to them instead of for thembut these are minor and infrequent. Spelling and punctuation errors are rare and insignificant Overall, this essay is representative of an A-level response.

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Essay 7

Rating: B

Nowadays the information available to young people through television, internet, newspapers, magazines is enormous, especially in the Western World. The exposure of children and young people to enormous amounts of information makes them more knowledgeable, curious to try different things and willing to enter the adult world sooner than our parents maybe did or wanted. Different Countries have varying ideas about when a person becomes an adult. For example in Greece you are given the rights of adulthood when you turn eighteen years old. That means that you have the right to vote, to join the army, consume alcohal, get a drivers licence. In Britain the system is different, they allow you to do different things at different ages. On the whole though you are considered an adult when you turn sixteen. My view is that what defines adulthood has to do with personality traits such as sense of responsibility, problem solving skills, ability to be independent, ability to cope with stress. Furthermore, knowledge, skills, life experience are important as well. There are of course many adults that dont possess the aforementioned traits but nevertheless they are adults. There is no denying that the older one gets the wiser one becomes. To conclude there should be a balance between knowledge and emotional maturity. Below the age of sixteen I feel that the emotional maturity is lacking. At the age of 18 up to the age of 21 young people tend to have a better balance between life experience and emotional maturity and can make better and wiser decisions.
Examiner Comments on Essay 7
This composition is a B-level essay. The response is directly relevant to the prompt but the topic development is not rich or complex. The supporting examples consist of listing specific traits and providing general views rather than giving a definite opinion. Topic clearly and completely developed Organization controlled and shows appropriateness to the material Few problems with connection For the most part, the essay has a smooth connection, yet paragraph four gives statements that almost appear contradictory to points made in the previous paragraph: There are of course many adults that dont possess aforementioned traits but nevertheless they are adults. There is no denying that the older one gets the wiser one becomes. Both simple and complex syntax adequately used; good morphological control Other than the occasional missing conjunction (and), the writer demonstrates good control over grammar and syntax. Vocabulary use shows flexibility, is usually appropriate The composition demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, although some words and expressions are overused showing some limitation in word choice (enormous; wiser; emotional maturity). Spelling and punctuation errors are rare and insignificant Although the essay shows sufficient evidence of advanced language resources, the inconsistency in connection, limitations in word choice, and lack of sophistication make it a B-level essay

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Essay 8

Rating: C

Nowadays, countries in all over the world do not have the same definition for the word adult. It varies from country to country. In some regions it has got a serious and important meaning, but in others it is minor. What factors define this meaning, adulthood? To begin with, in different cultures people do not become adults in the same age. For example, in european countries people are supposed adults when they reach the age of eighteen years old. In this age, one is able to get married, to vote, and generally to do things and take decisions that are to be taken into consideration from the government and other public domains, no matter how mature he is. Whereas, in other non-civilised countries people are faced as adults when they are ready and mature enough to take on serious decisions. Furthermore, as far as I am concerned people should be defined as adults when they are decisive, when they know what they want to do in their own life, when they are independent and do not depend on their parents so as to live. In other words, those who are ready to handle their lives seriously. Also, people in the age of eighteen are not well-developed mentally, so this supposition that adulthood begins at the eighteen is only a theory because pratically does not exist, only in some exceptional cases. To sum up, the meaning of adulthood varies from country to country and from culture to culture. But one thing is sure, that someone becomes an adult when he feels it, when has self-confidence and he is sure for himself, he does not become when he reaches a certain age.
Examiner Comments on Essay 8
This a C-level essay. The response addresses the prompt directly. It is simply organized, with moderate development that is typical of a C-level composition. Topic clearly developed, but not always completely or with knowledge of its complexity Organization generally controlled; connection sometimes absent or unsuccessful At times, the reader has to reformulate in order to interpret the writers intentions (e.g, In this age, one is able to get married, to vote, and generally to do things and take decisions that are to be taken into consideration from the government and other public domains, no matter how mature he is). Both simple and complex syntax present For some, syntax is cautious but accurate, while others are more fluent but less accurate For example, the writer repeatedly uses the wrong preposition in the phrase in the same age. This should be at the same age. Adequate vocabulary, but may be sometimes be inappropriately used Some basic words are used incorrectly (e.g., are faced as adults) but the misuse does not cause confusion for the reader. Overall, the response is easy to read and is relevant to the prompt, but the argument is insufficiently developed to warrant more than a C.

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Essay 9

Rating: D

A matter of considerable controversy is the issue of whether a person become an adult. Every country define a person to come of age when the factors that play a really important role is the religion, the legal system of the country, the culture.

To begin with, for me, one main factor that define a person as an adult is the age. For example, I believe that when a person become eighteen years old, has already finished the school and have received some basic education and have mature enough to take decisions for its life. Moreover, a person when is eighteen years old have a legal paper which offer to him or her the opportunity to take part to every social events like voting for the goverment. In addition, it can take a drivers license and this shows that is really mature and with critical mind. Secondly, one other major point that I claim that has great value is the maners with which communicate it with the other people in society. For instance, until this age the person has passed many experiences at school, in family and also its parents must have taught it to communicate with the fellowmen with compromise and friendlyness.

Thirdly, a person have to have respect to his or her religion, cultures, goverment and to be a good model of citizen. An adult ought to be serious, responsible for his or her actions and must receive the all forms of punishments when he or her break the law. Moreover, a very major factor is to have a job and earn the money on himself or herself and not depend to his or her family. To sum up, the factors what I mentioned are playing a great importance for someone to become and adult, like seriousness, maturity, education, manners, and having his or her own money to survive in the modern world. Examiner Comments on Essay 9
This composition is a D-level essay. Topic development usually clear, but simple Overreliance on prefabricated language and/or language from the prompt The first line begins with incorrect use of scripted language: A matter of considerable controversy is the issue of whether a person become an adult. Furthermore, the language of the rest of the first paragraph is taken directly from the prompt. Organization partially controlled The connectors used are quite mechanical (To begin with; Secondly; Thirdly; Moreover; To sum up) but the composition is generally well organized. Morphological errors are frequent Problems with subject-verb agreement, tense formation or word formation Meaning is retrievable, but at times requires conscious reader effort (e.g., I believe that when a person become eighteen years old, has already finished the school and have received some basic education and have mature enough to take decisions for its life.). Vocabulary may be limited in range and is sometimes inappropriately used to the point that it causes confusion The writer does not appear to have the lexical resources to express their meaning concisely and precisely (e.g., it can take a drivers license and this shows that is really mature and with critical mind). May show interference from other languages For example, incorrect use of the pronoun it in place of he or she or its in place of his or her. The main weakness of this response is the lack of syntactic control. Almost every sentence contains an error. Although the errors do not usually prevent the reader from deriving meaning, the cumulative effect has a negative impact on the reader, making this a D-level essay.
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Essay 10

Rating: E

It is a prevalent and undeniable fact that different cultures, religions, legal systems and individuals have different ideas when a person becomes an adult. Thus, they have to deal with sometimes insurmountable problems. In this way, the word "adult" for people from different countries must be changeable. As a consequence, a person that is 18 must be considered as one adult from one country but not for other. But what factors define adulthood? On the one hand, I think that one child would be adult if he/or she had the basic education. By saying, having done at least 12 year of education. So he or she must have the right knowlge and communicated with other people. Furthermore, he or she can define the right and the wrong know what he do. Of course, the most important is the education of their parent but and friends. Not only do parent have something for their children in the side of education but and goverment should not give permission to children up to one age. I wouldn't fail to mention, that we should work as a whole for solving this situation and not having negative affect To cut the long story short, it is a personal view for define if one children is or not adult, but I think education. It's up to us as a whole to do something.
Examiner Comments on Essay 10
This composition is an E-level essay. It is consistently difficult for the reader to derive meaning from the composition because of prefabricated chunks of language placed incorrectly throughout the essay. Topic development may be unclear Connection of ideas often absent or unsuccessful Overreliance on prefabricated language Connectors are often used inappropriately (e.g., It is a prevalent and undeniable fact that...; As a consequence; On the one hand; Thus, they have to deal with sometimes insurmountable problems; To cut the long story short). Pervasive and basic errors in sentence structure and word order cause confusion Problems with subject-verb agreement, tense formation or word formation For example: So he or she must have the right knowlge and communicated with other people. Even basic sentences are filled with errors The awkward use of scripted language and poor control of syntactic structures causes confusion. Overall, the writer does not have sufficient language resources to convey his or her point of view in this composition, thereby making this an E-level essay.

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