Ironyessay WritingProcess/40 Incomplete/Poor(F) PromptIrony Essaydoesnotfollowor answerpromptor doesntfocusonIrony. Meh(C) Essaypromptis answeredbutIneedto seemorereferencesto Irony. Essay/100 Excellente!

(A) Promptisfullyanswered andIknowwhythe authorusedIrony,what kindofironyandwhatthe ironychangesaboutthe message.

Intro

Introdoesnotincludea Hookcouldbestronger. hook,appropriatefilleror Somefillerisincluded, thesisisinthewrong butthereaderdoesnt place. haveagreatideaofwhat Doesnotincludestory thepaperisabout. tilteorauthor. IncludesstorytitleOR author.

IfIwereafishyouwould havecaughtme!You haveagreathook,strong fillerandyourthesisisin thecorrectlocation. Includesbothstorytitle andauthor.Summarizes story.

3Bodyparagraphs

Paragraphorderdoes notmatchthethesis, paragraphsdonotprove thethesis.Missing evidence.

Someevidenceis includedbutmoreis neededtofullysupport thethesis.

Thesisisfullysupported andevidenceisclearand exact.Exactexamples aregiven.

Quotesandwiches

Incorrectformatisused. Thequotesareatthe beginningortheendof theparagraph.Not surroundedbywriters ownwords,dont connectorarenot sorted.

Somequotesareusedin Correctquotesandwich thecorrectformat.Some used.Citedand areatthebeginningor explainedandconnected end,orlackingwriters well. ownwords.Someare citedcorrectly.

Conclusions

Conclusionismissinga clencherandsummary, thesisismissingorinthe wrongplace.Attheend oftheessayIcanstill asksowhat?

Clenchercouldbe stronger,andsummary ispresentbut incomplete.Thesisis presentintherightplace butnotnotreworded fromfirstthesis.

Yourclencherleftme thinkingaboutyour paper!Thesiswas rewordedandsummary wasthoroughand excellent.

Organization

Paperispoorly organized,hardtofollow andconfusing.Didnot followthesis. Paperincludessomany mistakesthatitishardto followorunderstand.Not revised.Commasplice problems.YouandIis used.Pronoun inconsistencies.

WithsomeeffortIcould understandandfollow thepaper.Partially followedthesis. Includessomeerrors, buttheoverallmessage ofthepaperisnot inhibitedbytheseerrors.

Followedthesisperfectly. Greatorganizationand easytofollow. FinalDrafthasnoneor veryminorerrors.Itdoes notaffectcomprehension atall.Nocommasplices! YouandIisNEVER used.Pronounsare consistent.

Grammar,Usage, spelling,fluencyetc.

Format(font,spacing etc)

DoesnotfollowMiss Sturmsformatforfinal drafts.

FollowsMissSturms finalformat.

Includedandhandedin(40pts) ______PreWriting/Brainstorm ______Outline ______QuoteSandwiches ______1stdraft/Revisions ______2ndDraft/Edit