Finka Rahayu 1207C21576 OLC40 Planning Sheet Step one: Allow people feel the pain from my story

in order to change peoples mind about how family effects for our life. Step two: I decided to use the first point of view, which is I and my as the main character in my story. Step three: Strongly ideas about setting such as time, year, seasons in that day, location and particular special thing in that moment. Step four: i would like to mention 4 peoples of my family that can support the moment which is included mother, father, and brother. They would be able to describa how was my feeling through event and how moment goes on at the beginning and end story. Specially my brother who identify the causes of problem and conflict that happened from my experience. Step five: Graphing organizer (Plan out the narrative)

Moment!!!

Before the moment

Setting

Life Goes On

Finka Rahayu 1207C21576 OLC40 Setting: describe the houses condition before the moment and the causes how conflict happened. Before the moment: More explanation in order to tell the readers how my brother grabs the digital game tools and feeling that i will include clearly from my story. Moment: i will develop the idea from main purpose by feeling, how my brother threw glass out my head and from moment that i went to the hospital that make everyone panics. Life goes on: my vision in the future through accident, relationship with my brother after he felt guilty of me and my family that being respects each other. Step six: All the major events, all of the amazing and detailed language I can use. Action Verbs (ran towrd him, grab the tools, play the game, talking with him, cooking in the kitchen) Specific Nouns (PSP game tools, Bandung Indonesia, The Sims 2) Adjectives (being silent, really quite, panic and shock)

Step seven: Time to write this now!!!