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Higher sentence complexity with a variety of sentence structures used (18-20 words on average) Hedging devices (e.g. seem, appear, may, probably, possibly) A self-explanatory title CONSIDERING PURPOSE AND AUDIENCE Music and Movie Piracy on the Internet Eliminating music and movie pirates through Education, Legislation, and Technological Innovation Education and awareness programs to mitigate illegal music and movie download on the Internet Violent crimes committed by youth Exploring effective ways to prevent juvenile delinquency Reasons for young people to involve in violence and possible actions to combat the problem Make sure your essay is narrow, researchable. 1. Writing a refined problem statement (Problem + Evidence + Urgency + Causes + Solution) Match solutions with causes of problem Present alternative solutions with reference to criteria: suitable, realistic, reasonable, feasible, practical Evaluate each possible solution in detail: pros and cons; difficulties and constraints If the solution has already been tried, the evaluation will discuss how effective the solution is. If the solution is proposed but not tested, the evaluation may predict its effectiveness. Conclusion: Outlook and future development specific, and

A call for action To attract readers attention stress the importance, significance and urgency of solving the problem relate to needs and interests of readers highlight contributions of this essay (new information; fill the knowledge gap) E: evaluate alternative solutions (evaluation criteria; effective & practical;

pros and cons; difficulties & constraints Conclusion (10%) - echoing: restate problem statement - summary of solutions: benefits & - wrap-up: a final overall comment - outlook / call for action Thesis statement reappear in conclusion Westley (2005) widened our scope of view by citing plenty of research evidence to support the use of music therapy in treating patients with emotional problems.

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