6 5 4 3 Content Consistently focused with ideas that are purposeful, specific, sophisticated leading to fully developed writing. Clear focus with ideas that usually support the topic and are usually purposeful, specific and usually developed. Generally focused with ideas that may be developed but tend to be predictable. A focus can be identified but ideas are poorly-developed; sometimes list-like. Structure (org.) Organization enhances the central theme. Opening and closure provide unity and outstanding resolution. Arrangement of ideas is purposeful. Transitions are smooth. Organization reinforces the central theme. Opening and closure provide unity and clear resolution. Arrangement of ideas and transitions are effective. Organization satisfactorily develops central theme. Clear opening and closing contribute to unity but resolution is obvious. Arrangement of ideas and transitions tend to be predictable. Organization minimally develops central theme; may be erratic. Opening and closing may be formulaic or too weak to tie the piece together. Few or formulaic transitions. Stance (voice) Distinctive tone or style that adds interest and demonstrates a clear perspective. Formality/informality suits audience and purpose. Tone or style adds interest and demonstrates a perspective. Formality/informality suits audience and purpose. Tone or style is adequate to demonstrate a perspective. Formality/informality is adequate for audience and purpose. Tone or style unevenly demonstrates a perspective. Formality/informality may be inappropriate for audience or purpose. Sent. Fluency Sophisticated rhythm and flow with a variety of sentence structure and length. Fragments are stylistic with relationships among ideas smoothly established. Usually has rhythm and flow with a variety of sentence structure and length. Fragments are stylistic with relationships among ideas established. Some rhythm and flow but more mechanical. Some variety of sentence structure. Fragments are purposeful. Relationships among ideas are usually established. Little rhythm or flow: rigid. Little variety of sentence structure and fragments are not purposeful. Relationships are only somewhat established, may be illogical or unclear. Diction (word choice) Words and expressions are powerful, vivid, varied, and precise but natural. Lively verbs and precise nouns. Words and expressions are vivid and precise but not always natural. Active verbs. Words and expressions are often clear, precise, and varied. May contain bland verbs and commonplace nouns. Words and expressions are sometimes clear and precise, but yet simple and general. Conventions Outstanding control of wide- range of age-appropriate standard writing conventions. Almost error-free; almost editing needed. Effective control of age- appropriate standard writing conventions. Minimal editing needed. Reasonable control of age- appropriate standard writing conventions. Minor editing needed. Limited control or reasonable control of a limited range of conventions. Moderate editing needed.