1. Made a claim/stated position 2. Supportive evidence 3. Counter- argument (5th grade and above) 1. The writer made a claim about a topic or a text. The writer is developing the ability to use supportive reasons that do not overlap.
2. The writer included evidence to support the claim. The writer is developing the ability to discuss the way that the evidence went with the claim, but the link may be formulaic or lack clarity for the reader.
3. The writer presents one side of the argument and may only briefly address another side of the argument. 1. The writer made a claim about a topic or a text and some of the reasons were supportive and substantial, although some claims or evidence may overlap.
2. The writer included evidence to support the claim. At times, the writer discussed the way that the evidence went with the claim.
3. The writer is beginning to address more than one side of the argument. 1. The writer made a claim or thesis on a topic or text and supported it with reasons that were parallel and did not overlap.
2. The writer selected evidence such as facts, examples, quotations, micro- stories, and information to support the writer's claim. The writer discussed the way that the evidence went with the claim. The writer made choices about how to angle the evidence to support specific points.
3. The writer addressed different sides to the argument. 1. The writer made a strong claim or thesis on a topic or text. The reasons were parallel, did not overlap, and were convincing.
2. The writer selected well-chosen evidence that strengthened the argument. The writer used trustworthy, scholarly sources.
3. The writer clearly presented the counter-argument. Organization
1. Overall sequence (2 nd grade and above) 2. Introduction 3. Transitions 4. Conclusion 1. The writer is beginning to introduce the order for the reader. At times, the order may not have made sense to the reader or may not have been followed throughout the piece.
2. The writer stated a claim, but the reader may not have been hooked or may have been confused about the writers position.
3. Some words and phrases were used to transition between reasons and evidence, but the transitions may have been repetitive or unclear. At times, the reader may have been confused between the reasons and the evidence.
4. The writer wrote an ending and restated or reflected on the claim, but some parts may have been left out or given too much attention. 1. The writer presented the order of the reasons formulaically. Most of the time the order the piece supported the stated reasons and claim.
2. The writer wrote a few sentences to hook the readers, but the introduction could have been more engaging. The writer is beginning to tell readers information about what was significant about the topic.
3. The writer used transition words and phrases to connect evidence back to previous reasons, but they may have been repetitive. Most of the time there were clear distinctions between reasons.
4. The writer wrote an ending for the piece in which the writer restated and reflected on the claim. The writer may have tried to suggest an action or response based on what was written, but it was formulaic or unconvincing. 1. The writer let readers know the reasons to be developed later in the piece. The writer put the parts of the writing in the order that most suited its purpose and helped to prove the stated reasons and claim.
2. The writer wrote an introduction that led to a claim or thesis and got readers to care about it. The writer gave readers information about what was significant about the topic.
3. The writer used transition words and phrases to connect evidence back to previous reasons and there are clear distinctions between reasons.
4. The writer worked on a conclusion which connected back to and highlighted what the text was mainly about, not just the preceding paragraph, and left the reader with a lingering thought for readers to consider. 1. The writer let readers know the reasons to be developed later in the piece. The writer deliberately chose the order and arranged the claims and evidence purposefully leading readers from one claim or reason to another.
2. The writer wrote an introduction that got readers to care about it. The writer is developing the ability to think backwards to make sure that the introduction fit with the whole.
3. The writer used transition words and phrases help readers understand how all of the pieces supported the argument.
4. The writer wrote a conclusion in which the main points were restated and left the reader with a lingering thought or new insight to consider. Voice
* Convincing The writer is beginning to use a convincing tone that supported the stated opinion. Some parts could be Most of the time the writer used a convincing tone that supported the stated opinion. The writer used a convincing tone to help readers understand the writer's position. The writer used a convincing, scholarly tone to help readers understand the writer's position. Opinion Rubric Grade 5 tone revised to more clearly state the writer's position. The writer may have used shifts in tone to help readers follow the argument. Word Choice
* Details, images, figurative language The writer is beginning to make deliberate word choices to convince the readers. At times, the word choices reflected precise details and facts to help make specific points. Figurative language may have been used, but may not have been effective or convincing. Most of the time the writer chose words to convince the readers. Most of the time the word choice reflected precise details and facts to help make specific points. Most of the time the figurative language and images contributed to the readers understanding of the writers position. The writer made deliberate word choices to have an effect on the reader. The writer reached for the precise phrase, metaphor, or image that would convey ideas.
The writer made deliberate word choices to have an effect on the reader. The writer reached for the precise phrase, metaphor, or image that would convey specific ideas and strengthen the argument.
Sentence Fluency
* Flow and variety The writer occasionally varied sentences, but the flow may be not be smooth at times. The writer varied the sentences, but may not have used sentence variety to help the reader understand what was most important. The writer varied the sentences to create the pace and tone of the different sections of the piece. The writer effectively and deliberately varied the sentences to help readers take in and understand the stated opinion/claim and to engage the reader. Conventions
1. Spelling 2. Resources 3. Punctuation 4. Risk
1. The writer inconsistently applied grade-level conventions.
2. The writer may need to use resources more often or more deliberately to spell unfamiliar words.
3. The writers use of punctuation is not yet contributing to the mood or tone of the piece.
4. The writers conventions show minimal risk. Errors significantly detract from the meaning. 1. The writer applied grade-level conventions most of the time.
2. The writer occasionally used resources (peers, dictionary, and thesaurus) to spell unfamiliar words.
3. The writers punctuation occasionally contributes to the mood of the piece.
4. The writers conventions show some risk, but errors may obscure the meaning. 1. The writer demonstrated grade-level appropriate conventions; errors are minor and do not obscure meaning.
2. The writer used resources to spell unfamiliar words (peers, dictionary, and thesaurus) to spell correctly and chose nuanced words.
3. The writer used correct capitalization and punctuation, including dialogue, to convey meaning.
4. Any errors in conventions show advanced use of language. 1. The writer demonstrated above grade-level use of conventions.
2. The writer independently used resources (peers, dictionary, and thesaurus) to spell unfamiliar words chose words with nuanced meanings.
3. The writers use of punctuation is deliberate and conveys the meaning or builds tension in the piece.
4. Any errors in conventions show advanced use of language.
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