Summative assessment: Ned Kelly Untold Story

Mark: A B C D

Comments:
Criteria Significantly above Above standard At standard Not Demonstrated
Knowledge and
Understanding of the
events of the Ned Kelly
Story
Demonstrates a comprehensive
knowledge of the events of the Ned Kelly
Story through authentic and accurate
representations of events, perspectives
and ideas.
Demonstrates a thorough knowledge of
the events of the Ned Kelly Story
through authentic representations of
events, characters and perspectives
Demonstrates a sound knowledge of the
events of the Ned Kelly story through
representations of events, characters and
perspectives.
Demonstrates very little knowledge of
the events of Ned Kelly through very
basic representations of ideas and
events, with significant support.
Constructing a
narrative that uses
appropriate structure
and language
components
Writes a coherent narrative using
appropriate generic structure that
includes a beginning, complication,
resolution and conclusion.

Uses sentences that are controlled and
well-developed with deliberate choice of
language to enhance meaning and engage
the reader.
Writes a well-sequenced narrative that
contains a beginning, complication,
resolution and conclusion.

Uses sentences that demonstrate
variety in structure, length and
language features.
Writes a narrative using the modelled
generic structure that contains a beginning,
middle and an end.

Incorporates both simple and compound
sentences and uses some topic specific
vocabulary and language features to make
meaning clear.
Writes a narrative using small amount of
features demonstrated in the modelled
generic structure.

Uses mainly simple sentences and some
topic specific vocabulary with limited
descriptive language and significant
support.
Communicating their
ideas through a
cohesive and
descriptive narrative,
using characters and
events that suit the
topic.
Creates a well-structured, factually
accurate and logically sequenced
narrative that creatively tells an untold
story and appeals to a target audience.

Details of events and characters are
innovative and built upon, in great detail,
throughout the narrative.
Creates a well-structured, creative and
descriptive narrative, using
information from the Ned Kelly story to
create an untold story in great detail.

Details of events and characters are
creative and built upon throughout the
narrative.
Uses information from the Ned Kelly story
to write a creative narrative about an
untold story.

Events and characters are selected and are
maintained throughout the narrative.
Uses some information regarding the
Ned Kelly story to create a diary entry,
with significant support.
Using planning,
drafting, editing,
publishing to
demonstrate their
decision making
processes and
illustrating text to add
meaning.
Shows comprehensive evidence of the
planning, drafting and presenting
sequence through detailed plans, and
precise modifications to drafts.

The final product is presented in a
creative and professional format that
includes very detailed illustrations that
add meaning to the text
Shows significant evidence of the
planning, drafting and presenting
sequence through detailed plans, and
significant modifications to drafts.
The final product is presented in a
creative and professional format that
includes detailed illustrations that
relate to the text.
Shows evidence of the planning, drafting
and presenting sequence through plans,
and modifications to drafts.
The final product is presented in a creative
format that includes illustrations.
Shows little evidence of planning,
drafting and editing. Very little editing
done to final product.

The final product is presented with
some illustrations.