Annalise Bezri Dr. Paul Houghton English Composition II MW 8:00 am 9:30 am Spring Semester April 23, 2014 Final Research Paper Draft
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A dream has two definitions. A dream can be a figment of your imagination when youre sleeping. Or a dream can be a goal that you as a person work towards to accomplish. The topic of discussion here is going to be the American Dream. A dream that I believe a person can apply both definitions for. The dream supposedly died a long time ago, but can a dream ever die? James Truslow Adams wrote a great book titled The Epic of America and in that book he gives a great description of what he feels the American dream stands for: that dream of a land in which life should be better and richer and fuller for everyone, with opportunity for each according to ability or achievement (pg 214-215). Great American philosophers along with outside research helped me explore more into what the basis of the American dream was for society and how each of these individuals I believe influenced what the American dream stands for today. Martin Luther King Jr. was not only a powerful driven man but he was a powerful writer and speaker. One of kings most powerful and most attended speeches was given on the steps of the Lincoln Memorial in Washington D.C. the I have a Dream address (Barnet and Bedau 687). King had many remarkable accomplishments in his life as stated in the preface of the speech, He then organized the Southern Christian Leadership Conference, which furthered civil rights, first in the south and then nationwide. In 1964 he was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize (Barnet and Bedau 687). Bezri 3
One of Kings most powerful tactics he used in this speech was his use of repetition within the words of the speech. He made so statements that left his over seers in shock. King had a dream for America and this is where he let it be known to the nation. This speech is purposeful and had many reasons to be addressed to the public, But one hundred years later, the Negro still is not free. One hundred years later, the life of the Negro is still sadly crippled by the manacles of segregation and the chains of discrimination. On hundred years later, the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity. One hundred years later, the Negro is still anguished in the corners of American society and finds himself in exile in his own land. And we have come here today to dramatize a shameful condition (King 687). As King executes his powerful use of repetition he is describing to the American people both black and white that the Negro community will rise above. In all sense his basis dream was for all society, This note was the promise that all men yes, black men as well as white men would be guaranteed the inalienable rights of life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness (King 687). His dream was indefinitely a branch to the larger dream The American Dream. King had an American dream for all the African Americans and Americans residing in the United States. We as one nation need to act as one nation, was Kings basis to the whole African American movement. African Americans were not at one time accepted in todays society as we know of today. Treating the Africans Americans like they didnt belong defeated the whole purpose of our so called American dream. King was the national face and inspirational voice between the nonviolent civil rights movements from the Montgomery Bus Boycott in 1955 to his assassination in 1963 Bezri 4
(Kienzt). The biggest misconception here is that King was not the only man that made this dream come true for African Americans. There was many others such as Stokley Carmichael and Malcolm X, These leaders repeatedly challenged each other in their speeches and writings. They highlighted the stark differences about integration, interacting with white people, and the use of violence in their ideas in order to sway their audiences about the rightness of their approach (Kienzt). The bottom line here was that each of these men had basically the same ending goal for their fellow African American people. They worked separately but together at the same time showing their people what the real dream for America looks like to the African American people. King and his fellow leaders and peoples dream did come true and is still coming true, They are now more educated, earn higher salaries, work in more prestigious jobs, and participate more fully in politics (Zoom 1). African Americans are living in a society that they created all for themselves. Without the African Americans that held true to their dream of becoming free and accepted, this dream would have never even seen the light. This is what the dream was about in Kings eyes he knew that change is allowed in America and thats why they call this land the promising land. Henry David Thoreau the great creator of the famous book filled with experiences called Walden. We looked at the insert from chapter 2 titled We do not ride on the Railroad; It Rides upon Us (editors title) (Barnet and Bedau 778). Thoreau was a very unique individual, He taught and lectured, but chiefly he observed, thought, and wrote (Barnet and Bedau 778). This man had many great observations and ideas that contributed to what a perfect society for the American people should look like. Bezri 5
Thoreau was such a simple minded man he knew that as a man of human kind he only needed simplicity to actually stay alive. For example our minds our so stuffed with the thoughts of wants and not the necessities actually needed to live. Man has lost the whole simple concept of life. As Thoreau states in his passage, Simplify, simplify. Instead of three meals a day, if it be necessary eat one; instead of a hundred dishes, five; and reduce other things in proportion (Thoreau 782). Thoreau in this quote is attacking the known American life style he is stating by taking away some of these known traits that man can become closer with ultimate reality and what the true meaning of life is. The only way this can be done is by simplifying the standard life of living for American people. Another point Thoreau loves to talk about, Our life is fritted away by detail (Thoreau 781). This statement looks pretty explanatory but Thoreau is a man of deep meaning. He is just trying to explain to his people that we as individual work so hard to get other peoples approval before we gain our own approval of ourselves. How can others in this giant world gain appreciation of you if you cannot simply appreciate yourself. Thoreaus whole goal was to get into mans head and make us as human beings really think about how we go about everyday life. This was Thoreaus American dream for the people, he wanted the people of this nation to actually sit down and enjoy the life god has blessed them with. Instead we are too caught up in materialistic items and feelings that we are losing ourselves not only individually but as a whole society. In the book that discusses all of Thoreaus ideas and lectures Life Without Principal, It would be glorious to see mankind at leisure for once. It is nothing but work, work, and work (Dean 6). The people of this nation have worked too hard to constantly still be working. Thoreau doesnt just mean physically working Bezri 6
either me means mentally working giving your brain leisure and relaxation is a necessity in life. With all that being said Thoreaus American dream can be categorized as simple all he wants for his fellow Americans is to enjoy and appreciate what they have right in front of them. The people of this nation are searching for a dream that they already have if they would just open their eyes and minds they would be able to experience the American dream to its fullest. Poetry was his passion Wystan Hugh Auden better known as W. H. Auden wrote the poem titled The Unknown Citizen in 1940. Auden used his poetry as hit outlet to express his personal views and opinions, In the 1930s his witty left-wing poetry earned him wide acclaim as the leading poet of his generation (Barnet and Bedau 691). This mans poetry was characterized as a combination of colloquial diction and technical dexterity (Barnet and Bedau 691). Audens underlying theme to this poem is characterizing the typical unknown citizen. Auden is writing this poem in honor of the unknown citizen who lives among the rest of the unknown citizens. Why do we as citizens of this country have to do some remarkable achievements to be honored? Auden in his poem is just simply honoring this average citizen. (To JS/07/M/378 This Marble Monument Is Erected by the State) (Auden 691), this was the name that Auden had given to this unknown citizen. This was no significant name just a line of some letters and numbers as one can see. Auden is showing how this unknown citizen, JS/07/M/378, had conformed to what we call the norm in society. This man lost his unique personality and identity; who really was JS/07/M/378? The people in this society have lost their individuality because they are scared to stand out and be different, but isnt that what this society was built on? This is Bezri 7
supposed to be the land of the free, the land of create your own destiny, and the land of speak your mind. Our ancestors moved to America in search of this and Auden is explaining in this poem the misconception of being free. Was he free? Was he happy? The question is absurd: Had anything been wrong, we should have certainly have heard. (Auden 692). We as citizens as well and even those government officials will never know if the unknown citizen truly felt free or if he was even truly happy. The unknown citizen was afraid to speak up and speak his mind and Auden is using the poem as a symbol to what this nation is and has become. The young in this society are working on changing that perception of the average just being unknown. Average people do remarkable deeds daily and they arent acknowledged. Therefore just obeying and living life through the morality of your society is ok and should be recognized like W. H. Auden is doing in his poem. Russell J. Dalton explores this topic in his book titled The Good Citizen: How a Younger Generation is Reshaping American Politics. One thing Dalton likes to touch base on is the fact that these young people in this nation are making a difference, they are speaking up, and offering up new and innovative ideas. Many young people in America and in other Western democracies as well are concerned about their society and others in the world. And they are willing to contribute their time and effort to make a difference. They see a role for themselves and their government in improving the world in which we all live. At the same time, they relate to government and society in different ways then their elders (Dalton). Dalton feels that the young are keeping the dream alive through their giant aspirations and goals they set for themselves (Dalton). Our society can only grow and Bezri 8
continue to get better we are learning from our mistakes and we are learning how to make a perfect place to live. The ideal society seems to be a synonym for the American dream, a man by the name of Sir Thomas More wrote a book titled From Utopia. The books name, however, is Greek for no place with a pun on good place (Barnet and Bedau 655). Utopia being the perfect ideal society, in this book More discusses what it takes as a society to create the perfect society. Mores work is playful but is to be taken serious, writing From Utopia was an outcry letting King Henry VIII and all of parliament know that he refused to subscribe to the Act of Succession and Supremacy (Barnet and Bedau 655). More spoke up and expressed his ideas through this brilliant work of explaining what guidelines need to be followed to be the perfect ideal society. More clears up to his readers first thing on how he pictures his ideal perfect society, In Utopia they have a six-hour work day three hours in the morning, the lunch then a two-hour break then three more hours in the afternoon, followed by supper. They go to bed at 8 p.m., and sleep for eight hours. All the rest of the twenty-four theyre free to do what they like not to waste their time in idleness or self-indulgence, but to make good use of it in some congenial activity (More 656-657). More does not want his people to be consumed in idleness, staying active keeps the brain healthy and functioning properly. How can the people ever have a perfect society if idleness of their egos are holding them back? Self-indulgence is also a bad trait for the people of the ideal society to carry with them. Accomplishing goals for yourself is important; but only to a certain extent, a perfect society is created by the people accomplishing all of these goals together. Working together as one will make the outcome of society perfect. Self- Bezri 9
indulgence is considered to be greedy, one should not possess more happiness than ones neighbor. More goes more in-depth about this subtopic [THE HOUSEHOLD], Theres more than enough of everything to go around, so theres no risk of his asking for more than he needs for why should anyone want to start hoarding, when he knows hell never have to go short of anything? No living creature is naturally greedy, except from fear of want or in the case of human beings, from vanity, the notion that youre better than people if you can display more superfluous property than they can (More 658). The current society has raised and trained its people to be greedy and always want more knowing we dont need it. Once the people that make up this society realize there is indeed enough to go around but we first have to live like there is enough to go around. The famous African American writer, Langston Hughes constructed a beautiful poem titled Let America Be America Again. Hughes believed that America once was that perfect and ideal society to live in. America was so called the land of the possibility and the people had hope and desire for their society to thrive. America once stood for possibility and not the impossibility that surrounds our children and even adults today. Hughes expresses this in his first stanza of the poem, Let America be America again. Let it be the dream it used to be. Let it be the pioneer on the plain. Seeking a home where he himself is free (Hughes 693). All Hughes wanted for America again was that be fresh, new, and free again just like it used too. After all of that, is the American dream still alive and thriving or dead and gone? I personally believe the American dream is still alive and thriving. Reading all of the philosophers take on this society they provided substantial evidence to support my conclusion. American can once again be that place where everyone wants to be it just all Bezri 10
depends on individual attitude. We just need to once again raise up to a self-made society and motivate our fellow peers around us. The famous Andrew Carnegie would agree to this as some people say his favorite expression to say to people was, People Who are unable to motivate themselves must be content with mediocrity, no matter how impressive their other talents (Jenson). To conclude, I believe the American dream is deep rooted into everyone all it takes is the right attitude and mindset. With that being said the famous question as to whether the American dream is still alive and thriving has be answered.
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