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Teacher___Miss Horton__________________
I.
Grade Level_____3rd________
II.
Prerequisites:
Students already
III.
Essential Questions
What are story hooks/leads?
What are the types of hooks/leads?
What are the three main parts of a story?
What is a closing?
What are the different types of story closings?
IV.
Instructional Objective:
V.
Instructional Procedures:
BEFORE:
The class will be asked what the 3 main parts of a story are: beginning, middle, and end.
DURING:
First, the students will review the different types of hooks. The teacher will then show a
boring example of a personal narrative. Using what the students have learned from
previous lessons (such as strong leads/hooks), the class will determine the beginning,
middle, end, and why the story needs to fixed. (Please see example.) The teacher will
show an example with a hook. After the students name the type of hook used in the
story, they will be told that they will be focusing on closings today.
How to close a personal narrative will be discussed and examples will be shown using the
following:
o Good Endingsinformation sheet.
o Anthology:
Remember p. 51
Feelings p. 29
Wish/Hope/Dream p. 69
o Reading book:
Learned p. 27
o Lilys Purple Plastic Purse
Future Last two pages
o Junior Great Books
Advice p. 55
Once these closing are discussed, the students will look at pictures from the museum trip.
The class will revisit the teachers story and will view possible endings. Using
everything that they have just learned, the students will come up with a new ending for
her story. Afterwards, the students will then write 2 different closings for their own
personal narrative.
AFTER:
Students will share one of their closings with a partner.
VI.
VII.
Assessment/Evaluation
Questions
Discussion
Observation: Are they paying attention? Do they look confused? Do they need
help with the assignments? Do I need to go over the information again? Could
the students write appropriate closings? Could the students identify the different
types of closings?
Writing Notebook
IX.
X.
Students having trouble writing may use the computer to type their narratives.
Additional time will be provided if needed.
Technology:
Computer
Projector
Self-Assessment
Self-reflection:
o Did the students pay attention?
o Did they look confused at any time? If so, what was I doing?
o Did they need help with the assignments?
o Did I need to go over the information again?
o Should I review the information again?
o What would I do differently?
o What went well?
o What did not go well?
o Was there enough time for the lesson?
EXAMPLES:
NOTE: Each day, the writing examples will be developed more until a good personal
narrative is produced.
Extremely Boring:
I took Arielle to the Bucks County Childrens Museum for a school project.
When it was time to go to the Old Town Square exhibit, she didnt want to go. I bribed
her with cookies and she agreed. She enjoyed playing in the train so much that she didnt
want to leave. She did not want to leave, but I bribed her again. I told her we would get
cookies, and we left.
Boring, but has a hook and no closing:
Come on Arielle. Its time to go to the old time train. Its just like the trains
Gammi and Gampis parents rode on.
My niece yelled back, I dont want to go anymore! I want to stay in the
clubhouse.
I had taken Arielle to the Bucks County Childrens Museum for a school project,
but when it was time to go to the Old Town Square exhibit, she didnt want to go. I
bribed her with cookies and she agreed. Arielle enjoyed playing in the train so much that
she didnt want to leave.
Closings:
BORING:
FEELINGS: I am so happy that she went with me. She really liked the museum and I
got a good grade. I should get an Aunt of the Year award.
REMEMBER: The trains gave her a taste of what it was like to work on the railroads
when my grandparents were younger. Remember, it is always important to know your
history!
FUTURE:
She really liked the museum and I got a good grade. Maybe we will go
back again this year, or maybe we will even take a trip on a real train!
LEARNED:
trains.
I learned that my niece really likes trains. I wonder if she would like real
ADVICE: If you are thinking about taking a five year old to the museum, take my
advice: dont bother bribing her. She will have a blast anyway!
WISH/HOPE/DREAM:
time!