Name: Libby greenwood

TASK

COMMENT

T+/T-

Early history of
photography

A thorough and well presented section that demonstrates a good

understanding of the mediums history.

Oldest Family photograph

The oldest photograph is well analysed however where is the second

modern image that it is to be compared to.

T-

Camera Obscura

This section is excellent you demonstrate an excellent understanding of the

process in your visual images and you back this up with excellent
contextual research. To improve this section you could add the work of an
artist that uses the Camera Obscura in their own visual practise and
compare it to your own work.

Photograms
Photogram Portraits

This section is particularly strong the visual examples and the written
analysis work well together to create a strong piece of work.

Pinhole

The images in this section are a little small and would have more of an
impact if they were larger. The only way to improve this section further
would be to add an artist that uses the pinhole camera in their own visual
practise and compare it to your own work.

T-

First Film
Shutter speed
Aperture

A good description but it would have been good to see visual examples
alongside your written description
Well done a thought out section that demonstrates a good understanding of
the process and the tasks sets
You must put the F stops that the images were taken with next to the
images you have taken

T-

Comment

Well done you have produced some good work please read the comments made and make the changes listed.
When you have made the changes please list them above and the marks can be changed accordingly.

WAG

TARGET GRADE

T+/T-

B+

AO1:
Develop

Discussion of the development of photography including the definition of a camera obscura and camera lucida.
Reading photographs and analysis from the introductory lesson.
Earliest family photo
Gallery visit% notes from Horst exhibition and visit to the general' photography collection.

A02:
Refine

Camera Obscura.
Pinhole camera
Manual camera and processing 2 darkroom techniques.
Annotation of techniques and outcomes

A03:
Record

Camera Obscura made in class and documented.

Photograms, process and outcome. Examples of different darkroom techniques moving an image' solarising etc
Pinhole camera images.
Film camera images.
Depth of field and shutter speed experiments.
V/A photographs

Well done you have produced some good work please read the comments made and make the changes listed.
When you have made the changes please list them above and the marks can be changed accordingly.

WAG

TARGET GRADE

AO1:
Develop

T+/TT-

Discussion of the development of photography including the definition of a camera obscura and camera lucida.
Reading photographs and analysis from the introductory lesson.
Earliest family photo
Gallery visit% notes from Horst e&hibition and visit to the general' photography collection.

A02:
Refine

Camera Obscura.
Pinhole camera
Manual camera and processing 2 darkroom techniques.
Annotation of techniques and outcomes

A03:
Record

Camera Obscura made in class and documented.

Photograms, process and outcome. Examples of different darkroom techniques moving an image' solarising etc
Pinhole camera images.
Film camera images.
Depth of field and shutter speed experiments.
V/A photographs