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Chelsea
Molato
John Kubler
ENG 115
9: 30 am
Everything
Im not
made me
everything I
am.
-Kanye West
About Me:
My name is Chelsea, but a lot of people
call me Chels. I love all things Disney,
candles, the beach, and sour gummy
worms. My hobbies include writing songs,
playing tennis, and volunteering with
children with autism. My younger sister
Camille is my life. She was diagnosed with
Autism at 3 years old. I wouldnt be the
person I am today without her.
causes wars.
In efforts to improve
this essay, I decided to
strengthen my thesis and find
more effective evidence to
support my claims. I had a
good idea of what I wanted to
do with my essay, but I did
not have enough evidence to
make my argument stronger. I
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+ Me as a Writer:
Just like any other person, I have major strengths and weaknesses
in my writing. My writing strengths include coming up with simple ideas
that are actually very complex. My professor has pointed out how my
curiosity comes out in my writing. My weaknesses include not finding
strong enough evidence to support my claims and too many ideas that do
not necessarily support my thesis. This semester, my writing has
developed drastically. During the beginning of the semester, we used the
text They Say, I Say, which helped me to give variety and improve my
writing. With the credit/no credit assignments, I was able to practice these
amount of knowledge I gained from all the articles we had to read was
endless. I think the topic that we learned that affected me the most was
learning about transgender children issues. No child deserves to go
through such bullying for being who they feel they truly are. Jazz, one of
the main examples from this unit, serves as an inspiration for not only
transgender children, but also every other child who feels like they do