Name: Zoe

Task: Movement

Response:

T+/T-

Ao1
- Mind map
- Analysis of Natsumi Hayashi (YowaYowa)
- Analysis of Francesca Woodman
- Analysis of Michael Bosanko
- Analysis of 3 selected photographers

Excellent work, both the practical and analytical work

show great understanding of the process and the
Artist. Continue to use the analysis sheet and be
creative using key words and technical information
when analysing all the images.

T+

Ao2
Explanation of techniques. Annotations of WWW and EBI.
Progress from 1st to 2nd response.
- Levitation
- Zoom blur
- Movement of a figure
- Light painting

You have explained the techniques using all the

camera setting that shows me your understanding.
Good progression from 1st to 2nd response. I like the
way you have used a simple background to make the
subject of the photograph stronger. Do you have a
tripod? This would help to control your techniques
more for light painting and create even more creative
responses.

T+

Ao3
Quality of the photographs taken:
- Application of technique
- Composition
- Other success criteria (e.g. Amount of photos)

The compositions are developing well and the

subject has been recorded well in a suitable location.
For the next project try presenting your contact strip
in a different format: 6 x 5 for example. Make the
images slightly larger as well. A tripod would help
improve your zoom blur photos.

T+

Ao4
Final response:
- Present 6 selected photographs
- Evaluation of WWW, EBI. Why did you choose your 6
selected photo

Good evaluation and use of relevant vocabulary.

Please avoid using abbreviation e.g. wouldve
(change to would have). Your final images show
good understanding of the techniques and creativity.
Continue to experiment and make unique
compositions. I particularly like the levitation post
box and mirror photographs that source good
locations.

Grade: B+

Target: B

Final Comment: Keep working at this level and aim for A or T+ as you have been doing so far. Great analysis and
pr4esentation of your Weebly site.

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by

contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and

selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques
and processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to

their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response

Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.