Reviewer: David Grabowsky

1) Introduction: Clearly states that the purpose of your proposal is to discuss the problem
of rising heroin drug usage throughout Charlotte. Does not include too much background
information, maybe you could include a small statistic about the rising number drug
usage, however your problem section really covers all of that pretty thoroughly, so
perhaps it isnt needed.
2) Problem: The problem is made apparent and explained thoroughly and a need is
created for a solution. Provided good examples as well as technical knowledge. Was not
specifically related to why this is important to me, however it is easy to infer that any
increase in drug use will likely lead to an increase in crime rate( among other things)
which of course is bad for everyone.
3) Objectives: The objectives are very nicely outlined and provide a clear path for your
on-going proposal, maybe the determine possible solutions could be a little more in
depth to explain how you are determining you solution (without giving it away).
4) Solution: Definitely seem to understand it. Many of these seems like great solutions,
and you should mention how you plan to achieve them in your objectives.
5) Method: This functions very well as an outline and gives a good overview about the
proposal. Adding some possible solutions would increase its effectiveness.
6) Resources: Good quoting of articles and statistics
7) Schedule: Good, gave a time period for competition as well as information on what
you will accomplish during this time period.
8) Qualifications: If you had some sort of prior experience (such as a volunteer emt or
something) you should definitely include that, otherwise this is pretty difficult for a
college student to have and is thus irrelevant.
9) Management
10) Costs: Definitely outline the costs of said proposal and I think that the entire proposal
functions to persuade people of the reasonability of the cost.
11) Conclusion: Could just summarize your introduction
12) Reasoning: This is a well thought out, logical, and well researched proposal.
13) Prose: Good grammar, spelling, and punctuation. All information was presented
clearly.
14) Graphics
15) Page Design: I thought it looked well designed
16) Ethics: Seemed perfectly ethical.

Reviewed by Julian:
Introduction
Clearly states the purpose of the proposal well
No background information present
Could use more lead INS

Problem
Yes, explains the problem clearly
Yes, seems important even to me
Objectives
Yes, relates to problem and goal
Yes, presents obj without naming solution
Solution
Yes, I understand
Yes, valid solutions
Yes, persuades
Yes, think is protects well, solutions dont seem far fetched
Method
Maybe, outlines topics not really steps to follow
Maybe, again topics not really plan of action
Resources
Yes, obtained needed resources
Yes, protects
Schedules
Yes, lays out a reasonable plan for awareness
Yes,
Qualifications
Yes, able to complete
Management
Yes, will work effectively
Maybe, not sure on the depth required for chart
Costs
Yes, lists costs
Yes, costs reasonable
Yes, protects
Conclusion
Not present,
Reasoning
Not present
Prose
Not present
Graphics
I would consider changing your image, I not sure if image of reports seems
appropriate
Page Design
Page design seems simple enough and allows for quick access to the information,
again may consider changing the image.
Ethics
Ethically seemed good, there was singling out any one type of culture, religion
etc.
Treats all stakeholders fairly as well.