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Maniace 2
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Isabel and Curzon can break their chains: escaping and not
being controlled by their masters
Madam Lockton: chained to her husband, chained to her fear of
standing up for her rights (Negative: has to take the abuse of her
husband, being physically harmed) ex: Madam Lockton is hit as well as
thrown against a bookshelf; chained to Loyalism by her husband
(Positive or Negative: depending on what Madam Lockton really
believes) ex: lives in fear of being arrested with her husband.
Madam Lockton never breaks her chains: still pretends that she
is being treated well
Master Lockton: chained to Loyalism and the dangers of being
punished for his Loyalist ideas and plans (Negative: punishments, may
not be able to convert if he changes his mind) ex: lives in fear of being
arrested.
Never breaks his chains: chooses not to, wants to be Loyalist
Essay Rubric:
Introducti
on
Body
paragraph
s
4
Good
introductory
paragraph,
clear thesis
statement,
examples from
all three
supporting
paragraphs,
background
information
and attentiongrabbing
opening
included
Strong
introduction
and
conclusion,
good transition
3
Thesis
statement,
examples from
some
supporting
paragraphs,
some
background
information,
and attention
grabbing
opening
included
2
Thesis
statement, but
somewhat
confusing and
unclear, very
little link to
other
paragraphs
1
Confusing thesis
statement (or
none at all), no
clear link to the
other
paragraphs
Introduction
and conclusion,
some choppy
transitions,
missing several
Weak
introduction
and conclusion,
choppy or
limited
Conclusio
n
Spelling/
grammar/
punctuati
on
words, well
worded, three
examples from
book per
paragraph
examples from
book for each
paragraph, at
times
awkwardly
worded
Good
conclusion
paragraph,
well restated
thesis, clear
link to the
body
paragraphs,
thoughtprovoking
ending
Very few (or
no) spelling,
grammar, or
punctuation
errors
Restated
thesis, some
link to the body
paragraphs
Ideas/
concepts
Strongly
developed
ideas with
supporting
facts and
examples from
the novel
Some spelling,
grammar,
and/or
punctuation
errors, but does
not interfere
with
understanding
Developed
ideas, some of
which have
supporting
facts and
examples from
the novel
Writing
style/word
use
Well-written
using a large
vocabulary,
varied
sentence
structure,
avoids
overused
words
Uses an
average
vocabulary,
some different
types of
sentence
structure,
occasionally
overused words
TOTAL:
transitions,
only a few
supporting
examples,
confusing/
awkward
wording
Poorly restated
thesis (or thesis
copied from
introductory),
few links to
body
paragraphs
many examples
of
confusing/awkw
ard wording
Significant
spelling,
grammar,
and/or
punctuation
errors,
interferes with
understanding
Some
developed
ideas, most
ideas have no
supporting
facts or
examples from
the novel
Repeats the
same words
many times,
uses the same
structure for
many
sentences,
uses overused
words
Numerous
spelling,
grammar,
and/or
punctuation
errors, interferes
with
understanding
No or very
limited
developed
ideas, no facts
or examples
from the book to
support the
concepts
Very limited
vocabulary,
mostly the same
sentence
structure, often
uses overused
words
Grading:
Essay 1 question, 24 points (based on rubric)
Multiple choice 30 questions, 1 point each (no partial credit)
Patriot or Loyalist 4 questions, 1 point each (no partial credit)
True or false 4 questions, 2 points each (1 point T/F, 1 point detail/correction)
Timeline 4 questions, 2 points each (no partial credit)
Short answer 5 questions, 3 points each (2 points correct concept, 1 point 2 5
complete, grammatically correct sentences)
Document based questions 2 questions, 5 points each (3 points correct concepts,
1 point proper paragraph format, 1 point 5-8 complete, grammatically correct
sentences)
Honor Code 1 point if signed