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entire article was very strong but relied too heavily on the logos and makes it very bland and
tiring to read. While the main issues are now in the past the article gave very specific causes that
could end NASA allowing readers to learn more about them if they wished it. Overall, the text
was not very good and was hard to stay focused when reading.
However, in the second text written by David Masci in 2003 looks at the issue from a
different point of view. Since this text was written several years before John Feltons work, it
lacks some of the details that are in the first text already making it a weaker argument.
Nevertheless, David also believes the space program should continue advancing and continue
going into space. While this is not specifically stated in the text it is assumed by the authors
connotations and whenever a mistake was brought up David explained how NASA fixed it
showing them in a positive light. The text titled NASAs Future begins with an overview of the
recent (back in 2003) shuttle explosion, shuttle Columbia. David then goes on to explain that this
accident that cost the lives of the seven crew onboard placed NASA in a position of distrust due
to their safety measures. Latter in the text it states For now the shuttle program is grounded.
Meanwhile NASA is planning repairs on the remaining three shuttles. Meaning that due to the
shuttle explosion the other three shuttles were decommissioned. Rather than stating whether or
not NASA should continue David just accepts that NASA will continue and adds examples of
what NASAs future may lead to. This is an excellent text, David supports his cause by providing
practical easy to read facts as well as several diagrams explaining in pictures what he is
describing with the text. David also supports his text with several quotes from sources that are
then showed their background information showing their credibility. Overall this text written by
David Masci showed strongly his view of NASAs future while supporting his facts with both
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reliable sources and helpful diagrams. The author also used simpler terms allowing the text to be
read easier and allowed the information to be understood better.
While the future of NASA is still an unknown and a large concern for many American
citizens and employees that work at NASA the hope of space exploration is not far from peoples
mind. Both John Felton and David Masci would agree that NASA should continue and further
humans into the space age. However their belief on how NASA will continue and how they
wrote their texts differ. While John Feltons text was more current and offered much more hard
data than Davids, it was far less superior. When conveying large quantities of information like
these texts did, it is important to maintain the readers attention and David did a far better job at
this.