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The following is the document where I received all my placement feedback. This involved what was done well and even better if. The
highlighted section is a great example of is.
Swimming Program
Tamsin also walked to and from the pool with a
Grade 4
Adriana Caratti
Mariam Dawood
Chris Nguyen
Austin Thorne
Nathan Costello
Isaac Katsaros
Joshua Paino
Sean Struik
Grade 5
Bella La Bruna
Ben Mondry
Joshua Struik
Grade 6
Victoria Andrikopoulos
Clare Hegarty
Shannagh Leydon
Dev Panwar
Nicholas Parker
Hiruni Wijeyesekera
Georgia Katsaros
Damon Maurice
Tito Leong
Focus:
Religion Lesson - Class Mass
Date:
Tuesday 18/11/14
Focus:
Morning Routine
Maths Lesson - Traffic Jams
Date:
Wednesday 19/11/14
Maths Lesson:
Good way to start, warmed up to the kids already with humour. It is good
that you can show the kids how to be serious and humorous at the same
time.
I like how you ask the students to wait for all the instructions
Maths Lesson:
Be mindful with your voice projection at the same time as we are in a
shared space
Maybe go through the problem solving strategies with the students before
you send them to do the task. Go through what each strategy may look like
with this problem.
Sit down at each table and challenge the students with their thinking
Encourage the students to focus on the thinking process, not the answer.
Success Criteria: something that I will need to go through with you properly.
To set an expectations for the students.
Ask for comments. Ask students to challenge each others response
Think about your response when students for the answers. Encourage them
to show more logical thinking processes rather than the answers
You may need to think of stories for students they can relate with.
Reflection of the lesson: go through what strategies worked and did not
work - challenges.
Date:
Morning Routine
Maths - Matchstick problems
Inquiry (continuation)
Thursday 20/11/14
The boys were given chance to share their experience at Orientation. Great
classroom management while Noah was sharing. Asking each child who
went.
Matchstick problem
It is good to revise yesterdays problem. Choosing a few students to share
their findings.
Keep reminding the students of the expectations they need to follow while
they are on the floor.
Giving time the students for the first task
Silent teaching - whisper master works for these students. You know how to
approach and solve the problems immediately - writing whisper master on
the board.
You place the students you are working with closer to you, great set up.
Noticing the student who is disruptive - Tito and attend to him
Not allowing arguments with Nick when he was being moved
Checking the time with Anna - improvising the lesson
Keep challenging the students with why?
Going through mathematical terminology/language
Inquiry
Checklists for the students to refer to, asking for examples
Keep in the time allowed for the lesson - allowing only a few students to
Matchstick problem
More clear expectations before you send them to do their task - quiet work,
what you are looking for
Be more assertive when Nick tried to argue - I guess it depends on the
situation and whether you have a good rapport with the child
Would keep waiting work all the time? Do you have any strategies in place?
Acknowledge interesting discoveries students made e.g. by writing it on the
board.
Think on the spot if you notice the kids are getting less engaged or more
engaged, use the opportunity. Takes time.
Keep attending to Noah and Dev.
You may need to plan for further questions or challenges for the students
e.g. when do use this skill? what skills are we learning/practising today?
Ask them whether they have achieved the success criteria
Challenge Tito when he said school work - further develop students
thinking
share
Thinking on the spot to organise laptop
Mental Maths
Walking around the classroom while going through the answers. Breaking
up the answers - who got that right? who worked that out?
Position your body where you can see the students as well when youre
writing on the board
Writing
Think about and constantly refer to time to enable you to complete all the
planned tasks for the lesson. This will keep the lesson moving and ensure
you stay on task.
watch you use of informal language my bad grab you are a model for the
students so be careful - there is a time and place for different styles of
language.
Small Group - make sure you go through the reading with them first, you
may need to reread the text with them, read with characters voice
good to refer to your planning as you going so that you stay on track and
keep the lesson to the focus. Good instructions for the task and great
examples.
good to show sense of humor with students.
great way to get the students attention - clapping and use of voice
good questioning to deepen the students understanding. referred to
previous lessons to build students understanding.
Transition from recess
Clear instruction at the line.
Tamsin you have done very well with you first day of full control. You have
built such a good rapport with the kids within such a short time. You are very
confident. I like how you can see an opportunity to play games with the kids
- good class control. You have taken all my feedback on board and I can
see the improvement you are trying to do in the next lesson.
Meditation
Clear expectation when were about to pray - stay quiet and the kids
understand that expectation just from the use of body language
Maths - Fraction
Good start of the lesson by getting the kids to move around the classroom
Maths - Fraction
Think about the language you use in front the kids my bad
Be careful when you say shading, divide this, colouring in. Think about
more appropriate mathematical language
Make sure you check with Alice as she could not do a fraction in the board say something to her before she sits down
Think of using benchmarking - lets use half as our benchmark. Any of these
fractions are bigger or smaller than ? how do you know?
May need to find other resources to show the kids - may use the timeline
activity for tuning in for next session but faster.
Challenge them with 3/2 (any other improper fractions)
Good that draw and explain that the drawing is not perfect - fraction needs
to be equally divided
You sit with the students when one of the students are sharing
Correct mathematical language - whole, part
Good to rephrase your thinking for the Mia - what is of 8 so what about
Clear explanation of instructions of why they need to do. Repetition of what
to do - get your maths book, pair up and get a set of cards
Roving around to check all the kids are settled
When I finish speaking, you will need to ...
Religion
Good setting up in front of the classroom. Counting down to get the
students attention
Writing
Good to allow students time to choose the character to describe. Revising
what the previous lesson was about - this is continuation. Clear
Writing
May need to talk about success criteria
Clarify students thinking in the small group
Water Safety
Consider cybersafety - can the kids put all their details online. You will still
need to remind them about it.
You may need to explain where the quiz is from and the purpose of doing
this quiz.
Think about how you might like to finish to sum up the lesson e.g. where
can we find water?
Dismissal
Clear instructions to pack up.
Great class control this morning. The kids listened to you beautifully.
You may need to explain why we double the bottom and top number
You have taken my feedback to get the students to read the fractions first.
Instead of saying parts shaded you might like to say how many parts it is
showing
You use different ways to teach the lesson - using sticky notes to find
equivalent fractions. Sticking their answer on the board.
I like your powerpoint presentation - clear visual representations
You may need to sit next to students who you think may struggle with the
task e.g. Ben
Referring to the fraction wall to check your answer. You are showing the
kids different strategies to check their answer.
Good to use an example from a students book
Fantastic class management - you sent the kids to do their task beautifully.
Simple and clear instructions.
You gave an example (after Sophia asked) one way to prove their thinking
Writing down the success criteria on the board
You plan enough time for them to find the equivalent fraction for , not too
short and not too long
Being persistent so Mia still puts her answer on the board.
Using the correct mathematical language such as parts, list the vocabulary
on the board is a great idea, to remind you how to say the proper language.
I like how you kept referring to it.
Good language used to encourage thinking - good investigation Bradley
and who has different thinking
It is good to clarify the instructions even after you send this kids away to do
the task
Good to modify your questionings as you do not get much responses from
the students
we looked at
Sharing some examples as the students are writing, Giving them some
inspiration
Find students who may need further support e.g. Anthony J and Joshua S
You may need to read their work, so handing in their workbook to you
Inquiry/Letter Writing
Clear expectations on what they need to do
Reminding them about how to find legible sources and using them well
(copyright)
Water Safety
Good to point out who has been respectful (grade 3/4)
Checklists so students can refer to, even a list of resources to guide
students to follow the websites given. Find legible information from the sites
only.
Grouping the kids based on interest and listing the group on the group
Better position when you are writing on the whiteboard
Sending the students to their task based on what theyre doing
Clarifying your expectations about planning to tackle their research e.g. role
allocation, how are they going to investigate their topic
Roaming around to check that all groups are settled and given tasks to do.
Having your ears ready listening to students conversation. especially when
they need help
Transition from lunch - making sure the kids line up properly before you
allow them in the classroom
Water Safety
Dismissal
Reading through the notes properly.
Another great today Tamsin. You are good at identifying what you can do to
consolidate students learning. I am thinking of the water safety unit. The
students are very much engaged and enjoying the unit. Doing a water
safety unit can be quite dry and you have managed to modify and pitched
the unit to engage the students at different level.
Writing
You may need to explain what the success criteria might be about. What is
it that youre looking for?
You may need to go through the revised sentence with the students first
before you ask them to do it in pairs
Do not forget to remind the students how much time they have to complete
the task
Why we need this skill in our writing?
Stopping the video and having a discussion. Stop play stop play to
consolidate students thinking
You may need to revise previous lesson and see how it can be relevant for
todays lesson
You may need to stop the video earlier, when he talks about common
denominator
I would stop the video when he is reading the fractions, see if the students
can read the differently. Avoiding the use of over.
Have you asked them why need to change the denominator? Why cant we
just add the fractions together?
Have a look at the two different ways listed and see which one would more
efficient.
Asking different students to come up and explain their thinking - have you
got a different way to solve this?
Think how many kids you would like to be at one station - classroom
management
Good to list different ways of the same problem on the board. It is a good
opportunity to compare them
What does multiple mean? You may have to list the timetables for the kids
to understand
Brainstorming the words first at the start. Good to put each child on the spot
to come up with a word (verbs, nouns, adjectives, adverbs), listing the
words together.
Good to allow students to think about the food they are going to write about.
Good to revise the lesson when Nathan comes in halfway of the lesson and
putting him on the spot to come up with his own word.
Good to write the sentence together.
Tell me more about your chosen food, teasing out their thinking about what
they are going to write.
Good to have the first sentence written down together in their book so then
they can refer to it when they write their own sentence
Ask the student the highlight the literary devices of their own sentence.
Focus: RE Lesson
Roll, meditation, RE
Good choice of tuning in resources - you tube video, selecting the relevant
Have something ready when some students are being stubborn and difficult
Reading what the kids have done so far on the google docs. Good to have
a slide about what they need to include in their summary
Sending the kids based on what theyre doing, not sending all of them
You may need to put them on the spot and check what they know about
symbols
Getting the kids to de brief on the floor and share what they have found so
far
Very clear for kids to stop when they are speaking over you
Good questioning - who are the people who made you as the star now
Good to ask for someone else when you are stuck with some of the
behavioural choices students made
Clear expectation on their art activity
Good to check what they know about symbols - who has questions?
Writing - Post Assessment
Going through the success criteria
Tamsin took full control of the class on Thursday 4th December. The supervising teacher was at school planning for 2015 and there was an ET observing
Tamsin i the classroom.
Focus: Full control
Roll, meditation, SEPEP (sport), Writing, Religion, Flash Dance
Religion
How would the kids get to see what other people have written about their
work? maybe the each student completes their own assessment and swap
with someone else?
Think about the criteria whether it works for both self and peer assessment
Flash Mob
Good to type the words onto a powerpoint for the kids to read together
instead of reading from the sheet
Make sure you check what you type before you share with students
(grammar) in particular e.g. your youre
Good to ask the kids to compare the difference with the story they know
Religion
Clarifying the Nativity story
Religion
Be careful when you say 5 lines for summary. What does that mean?
You pitch the lesson at the right level e.g. ask questions about census, what
that means
You may need to come up with open ended questions instead of short
responses from them
Art
Good to remind about the use of materials such as careful use of glue
Art
Consider the time of the lesson. Early finishers task?
Discussion and briefing about the reading and what it all means. Stop and
explain some of the vocabs.
Maths - revision
Good to estimate the product first before going through the process of
solving the problem. Its good to get the students to estimate and reason
with their thinking before they work it out.
Maths - revision
Maybe think about getting the kids to read the numbers out loud so they
know what their place value is.
Check what that means by the numbers are not lined up?
It is ok to ask someone to explain it properly. I do that all the time with
Louise
Gauge the kids understanding on the floor. Do you need all of them to do
the second problem, is it worth sending them to do the tasks and only work
with a small group on the floor and the rest of the kids can practise the
strategies
To use a assessment sheet suggested by ACU when you are working on
the floor
Religion
Some of the vocabs in the video?
diagram