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1g ees pea roche cee nen Ctr ee en ieee arene eed Pee ern eee ees coe Eoin Core ees eed + How descriptions ae used in techni + Common features of deseitons ‘+ How to determine the store station for a deseiption tates fo partitioning jets, places, or procs nt majo and Techniques fr organising and drafting deseiton The use of pain tye to make descriptions understandable How to use page layout and graphics ohiggh and istrate The importance of resin and eiting description for acursey Janta carer yo wi in that habit to ste things eo of et nae thy vd ie vay + A media researc nc to dsr chemotherapy treatment + Amastopysiist neds to deere a newly discovered come ha ‘he sun te oming year + A mechanic! engineer eds to ite new mie Uhat her eam a dele ‘+ An arciet neds ousted a ute pion that wl be the cena of eel pak There are ew types of eclipse for vvous purposes i he eel wokplae Teena description — Mantas we teal descriptions to dese Ae poets rates, quality enol and aes Tes esto a oflen used to stabs an retype, el asin ich te pds ‘en be meee te Engineers writ Lr erie rode ingest deal, providing exact infomation about features, dimensions power regiments capac, sd other quale. As dcased in Chapter 30, pelcatons te aso sed to describe step-y sep haw npr! essed a ski completed oes to lp them accurately deste peopl, nina a pl OberationsScitiss and medi persae need to make dete servations, For example, modal dtr heed to dese the patents cits in get dtl Tee bserations ep Une he hangs Ue ple pt, puters hve nine our aii to deste things, With apap opr ial ssn! (PDA), you can wee deers nthe ek inthe ce your workable These ont espana ar mare erate as rated fom writen oles Ao, employ yu enc our 7m with alge on stare, gaps, and even sai st vio. With thes ‘alanis, you ean present highly dtl despa gy sacs {ook round and yon wil find hat descriptions appear in alist every tei ocament,lacuing expert reports, wes mama ference Proposal markng teste, marine atl, and eotlrene preset Ping how to write eine deseipon wil ily ea important pa av the lowing fiance | DISCOVER THE ‘SEGWAY HT EVOLUTION. soul and reise ie Itteducton wih ever dsr sea ess sles tags aot ‘onc tt shows the tig se, or proces i Wien ania daserption nes to tan alter ke he oe sta in Fgue1 BALANCE SENSOR ASSEMBLY Ear Reece eee eee Planning and Researching ‘Technical Descriptions Ate ere ps, you sould detly what kn of infor i The, you ned to earch he sujet oe Pl Teena sero are writen or ayo pope ses, Sas planing jour desert mpartnt at oft hve he FW ah How Questions ti wl be Ino Why isis decrigion nod? (Once yo ave ey ans 1 are ety to start defning ‘he sb, pps, ear conte ou desrpion sunincr Tenia doeiptons tend tobe writen shat te tps of sbi ob Sens yr Jets ples. or ross As Jas yorsibie, deine shou at mae Se PURPOSE Ask yourself what your desertion should achive, Do roid exact dal? Or, are yo jst ying alsin Your Tone sate, ite down the purpose of our dsrpin Here are sme vrs fede werent tose ‘our purpose statement might sy something ik the allowing hepa ofthis scons sh hl gee po “Wu should be ble to wite your purpose statement in oe sentence. it oes Tecnica deitons end oe wien for ede wh ae untanar ‘wh the sujet So, jou st ei there understand iy using es and ingest thy wt Bt ie ou lo eto ad Ue deal el coe ‘ey of our desrpon ts the spec ness and ned Primary readers action kere) ae rears who os ee o ude ‘ur descnpton What ioe do they eed to koto mai de $on about yur pred ple, o pres? ‘Secoary reader (ais wil aly be exert in your aes. They nay engl, tcl or scents wt re isn he primary readers aout the srcas and wesc of he prc, place, pres Hew uc el deta ad asircy wl hee renders eget fel sie fd with your dest? Teng readers alist) could indde staat anyone who sao teat thm proc pice or proces en are dering Your ehnia e ‘srinton may be sdb au, lar opr contre acs ‘Galekeper eer (pervs) may wan to check yr desrition for nei Destin esl spins ad oben bet be tact bur spears may wat fo review your mats for exactness, an cormrnes Inge he plas whee your description might Be ed. Wl docuneat's append to prove ditional deta? Wl salespeople use the descrip on tn pone pro service? Wil the desiton be pls in a cto eve? ‘Alogi your primary ede in hey conte sing our description ‘wont igen economists, an pola fore wi iene how Uy te Addressing ISO 9000/1SO 14000 Issues (ne portant se invaing contest si wheter your tec eet ted to eonformt 180 9000 or SO 1400 tana Pes our standart ae acted neratinal an developed bythe Iteratioal Ognizaiion for Standristion (90) 190 0D stands ioe quay nage yes whe SO 1400 ile eavuonetal mere sits. Many high-tech ane nes espcily aes working for he US vere flo te ay manage The 80 standards cannot be disse nse depth here, ty shoul be avaze htt ext I Your company allows 0 tnd, a ese 0 ‘te il ed ortet nd confor Yo hse andar Researching Tn teases dig ear for testa desis eri expieni n ‘ber words you wl Hely nto petal cserve oe thing proces sae dering. Here are some trtgies that ae esl apple o wating ‘sertns Before making dite obsenatons, you shuld know ‘ss uch spose about jour sabjet On the Inert se seareh engine to 23 ‘much inflaton you ean, The, call pet oes like blk cuenta ‘ote trate These materi ll el ou uaerstnd your subj bet yu can ake metre beets While making det observations, se lof your ev senses AS th pole lentes st how someting lok fel and totes Py special enn to colors an textures eee they wl end ress tour desertion KE EASLRENISSTS When posible mean quate ike height, with, dept, znd mp3 mt in hoc sees ake sim In se a, yu cn eompae tsb a sdhing of sa se (eg, The ough ged Fave me nerd ws abot the it fs ag ro {Gt Pay allen to our subjetsmoveneats. Lak tor pater and nt pce where your sje devotes om tse ales Aly, takes note of ay change in your sje. 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For eps desertion of comptes might dsr Dart by past by fst parting into oto kes exter tive od etal proesng uni (CPU), By fuetos—You ight partition the subject by ning a ts ieent Pars Rnction A desertion othe Inkeetnal Space Stato, fo xa might parton it faeion by fusion it reech, poe pein, Insc habtaton, and docking sector Iysages ofa proces Vou a partition the sai hry by sowing how is asembled or bow wrk, A dseipton o Helis ‘ies for example ight walk aes step by sep tough delta, ‘lego aging, nd rein sages Pa td Er} Partitioning with Logical 2. Write down theo eri [NASA desiton ofthe Mars Ex swags 174 Wogan (38 pau. ay ae ttt age ii > The ray em roost 00 wat fener a ears rv dara sa, tain ees bs ieibeuocamnmatesmamraon on ni e198 Th exch ft pata sed nal yp tn fe Organizing and Drafting Technical Description onto mae and minor ates, yo ar edt stat eas ae cating your deseiption. Thre many afer wags te datas Your sujet, ut iiss to oo an nnn paler ht demons ‘nous lg that readers wl mel eae. 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sucess tenia scion shee of dt o Bring ou ie otto malt ee eA wel writen desiton help the eer alae he hg. plas or poss Jon ae ating rte, To a is evel of DESCRIPTION THROUGH SENSES Humans experene the wr ough tc ve "ay lg youre,“ How doi ok?”"How dst sand?" dos Sal?” "How dost ie and "Howden tte” ‘ran pt seen ob samen Cs feo clo pe Fuel Cell Technology Secon Pre Pere etd ey cy ae cpa pi fr monet reader, be has on semicon iy rnc on cscsing a y's two dierent tings [AB For exanpi, conser ts two coon lah ice and nr id: Readers wo ae unamiarwh yur sje wl epetaly Pel rm thse ones, becuse concepts hey dst bee Conclusion ‘The een of cil desertion ten porta one workin othe nerd le fy wae wang spi ecg td rnp Te pe Se il np ing Style in Technical Descriptions Most ual dros te ren inthe ln se, Home thre eines «propo Her are sone gto fr ang ea deepens oo ery Keep sour wards snple—The words you use sulle fart sour "er ty re you sho die an Wor ey ato oe Keep sentences short, within bathing length 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