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Something else that helps is varying the conjunctions you use in a sentence.
The common ones are: but, and, or, and yet. However, varying
conjunctions can direct the interest of your reader and keep them interested. Others
include: However, because, moreover, as well, nor, for, although,
where, or whereas.
Special point: Ellipses! They dont mean what you seem to think they
mean! Think about what you mean to convey when you add ellipses to your
writing, and then think What could I do to convey this? My best guess is that
ellipses convey that sense of pause/contemplation. The sense of prolonging that
one gets in a short story. This is not so in an essay, and generally it is a rather
informal punctuation that leaves a lot unsaid and distracts from your point. I would
suggest we avoid using it!
5. What helped you or how did you come to a better understanding of this
writing skill?
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Homework:
Read your essay over again and think about these different ways of improving your
writing. Clarity, Formality of Language, and Punctuation, were problems every
student had when writing. Find an example of the other two examples you didnt
cover in class, roughly 4 lines of text each, and rewrite them in a way you believe
improves them in a way that that we discussed in class.