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you picture you cant be frowning. No one walks the red carpet
with tears of sadness. So Im going to need you to tear this closet
apart and give me supermodel. My words dont convey anything
but happy emotions. So I only want to see happiness in the faces
of the people in my blog. My blog doesnt consist of many pictures
I must admit but then again thats exactly what I want. I want my
readers to add their own images and have fun with it; add a
second bracelet if needed. Itll all tie together once the whole
ensemble is complete.
Words by Rachel: Under Construction
My blog has essays, blog post, and drafts from day one up
until now. Going through it all one might think that this blog was
typed by a professional, not at all. There were essays with littered
with comma splices and post with awful sentence structure. The
first three drafts of my Portrait essay might have the most
awkward and painful diction to read through but it was all
necessary to get to where I am today. This blog was under some
serious construction before being in the spotlight. Before I had the
chance to really think about my writing Id just dive right in with
these daily readings seemed like a tedious busy work when in fact
it was the exact opposite. After reading and typing up what ideas
stuck out to me and hearing about what stuck out to my peers the
assignments really made me understand how the little parts of
writing form together seamlessly.
Blog Post, Peer Review, and Portrait Essays Oh My!
The blog post got me more comfortable explaining and
expressing my ideas verbally. Which began to make a difference
when it came to essays. In my Portrait of a Writer essay I talked
about how I struggled with getting my thoughts out in a coherent
flow verbally and on paper. Now I am better at coherently
expressing ideas with confidence and perfect it by the third draft.
The peer workshops have really made a big difference on how I
view my writing. For our first writing, the literacy Narrative, I was
fairly surprised with the feedback I got. I was initially expecting
lots of marks and notes for grammatical errors but instead I found
more comments about how my peers actually enjoyed my details
and wanted more or found my evidence for an idea relatable
and funny. These comments gave me confidence in my writing
and helped me muster the energy to give them more. With their
comments I on my paper I read and reread their words trying to
anticipate any detail they might be missing, or questions they
may ask. It was an eye opening experience that got me a little
less stressed about my next writing assignments.
After receiving comments, questions, and praises I thought
that I could easily take on the portrait of a writer essay; I was
wrong. Painting a fictional scene or describing a past event is
something I am comfortable with but I did not expect attempting
to paint a portrait of myself as a writer to be so challenging. This
assignment turned my whole process upside down. First I had to
sit down and think about myself and what I liked and disliked as a
writer. My rituals and process had to be included, admirable
qualities in other writers, commas and periods, and many pages. I
saw this essay as a way to be partially vulnerable to my reader. I
could let them into my mind and give them the map that mimics
every step that I take to achieve decent writing. I hated it.
Looking back I can honestly say, although it may not be my best
writing it was my favorite. I was worried about exposing too much
towards the little guy, and I couldnt even remember more than
three of the key concepts let alone write about them. The
midterm helped me with seeing how far I had come as a whole.
Not just how much better I was with sensory detail specifically or
how much better I am at expressing personal thoughts about
myself. Looking at the questions I was able to see progress and
appreciate how much better I became at simple things. This
encouraged me to explore more challenging things, like sensory
detail. If I was putting up a facade before about the confidence I
had in my writing. I was certainly genuine after the midterm.
Light Turquoise and Teal
Looking over all the work Ive put into my essays, blogs, and
e-Portfolio. Factoring in all that late nights that I had trying to
finish up readings that couldnt be done in study hall. Subtracting
the time I was a little lazy in class. And acknowledging the lovely
work I produced, draft after draft. I would say I deserve an 80. I
dont like odd numbers but I dont feel like I deserve less than a B.
I mean, of course I know how much work I put into my work and I
dont want to fail but it would be crazy to ask for 99. Or would it? I