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OCR AS MEDIA STUDIES H140

Unit: G321
Student Name: Ben Grindle ( C Block)
Topic/Essay Title: Preliminary Task

“Using DTP and an image manipulation program, produce the front page of a
new school/college magazine, featuring a photograph of a student in medium
close-up plus some appropriately laid-out text and a masthead. Additionally
candidates must produce a mock-up of the layout of the contents page to
demonstrate their grasp of DTP.”

The table below gives you feedback and understanding on how your work has
been marked against assessment criteria for the Preliminary Task.

Assessment Objectives Summative Feedback (Have


these been met? Yes/No)
AO2 Apply knowledge and HAS TARGET AUDIENCE BEEN THOUGHT
understanding to show how meanings ABOUT?
are created when analysing media Yes – appropriate mode of address
products and evaluating their own for student audience on front cover
practical work. and contents displayed

AO3 Plan and construct media DOES THE PRODUCT DISPLAY BASIC
products TECHNICAL COMPETANCY?
using appropriate technical and Not entirely - some technical
creative skills competency displayed on Photoshop
and Quark and use of ICT on blog but
photograph blurred which fails
criteria.

AO4 Undertake, apply and present DOES THE PRODUCT DISPLAY MATERIAL
appropriate research APPROPRIATE FOR SUB-GENRE?
Material appropriate for sub-genre of
college magazine on front cover and
contents page.

Key Areas for My Individual Development


The table below provides you with tutor feedback, and/or their recommendations for key
areas on how to pass the task.
Ben - You haven’t passed the pre-lim task – the front cover photograph
is blurred which is not acceptable.

BLOG SO FAR:
• You need to upload all of your skills videos.
• You need to upload your magazine industry research.
• Also to fulfil AO4 more research is needed – more images /scans of
magazines and analysis on their conventions as your blog is looking
bare. Please look at the presentation more carefully – you are marked on
this.
Mark 0/15

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