Professional Documents
Culture Documents
CREATING BUSINESS
MESSAGES
Audience
Oriented
Purposeful
Economical
Improving Your
Business Writing
To improve your writing skills, you
need
Good teaching materials with
excellent model documents
A trainer (like your instructor)
Practice
An effective writing
process
Prewriting
Analyzing
Factors Determining
Channel Selection
Importance of message
Factors Affecting
Media Richness
Speed
Interactivity
Verbal and
nonverbal cues
Everyday language
Focus on individual
What channel is
best to announce
decreased
insurance
benefits for 250
employees?
Fax
Letter
Memo
Report
Telephone
Voice Mail
Meeting
Conversation
Web
What channel is
best for a sales
message
promoting a new
product to
customers?
What channel is
best for
responding to
similar customer
inquiries?
E-mail
Fax
Letter
Memo
Report
Telephone
Voice Mail
Meeting
Conversation
Web
Prewriting
Try this:
You will enjoy total peace of mind with our affordable hospitalization plan
that meets all of your needs.
Spotlight
Audience
Benefits
Draw on
Familiar
Words
Cultivate
A You
View
Create a
Message That
Suits Your
Audience
Use
Inclusive
Language
Sound
Conversational
Employ
Positive
Language
Try this:
You may begin making purchases on your new account in two weeks.
We are pleased to
announce that you have
been approved to enroll
in our leadership
training program.
Sound Conversational
Instead of this:
The undersigned takes
pleasure in . . .
It may be of some concern
to you to learn that your
check has been received
and your account has been
credited for $250.
Try this:
Im happy to
Weve credited your account for $250.
Formal
Found in
Some comic
strips, and
songs, some
commercials,
some
conversations,
some IM and
email messages
Business messages,
novels, most
newspapers, and most
magazines
Scientific writing,
legal documents,
scholarly books,
formal essays,
proclamations
Unprofessiona Conversational
l
Examples
wasted
nab
bad-mouth
dough, bread
stewed,
plastered
I aint
humongous
Tight
decee
ruined
catch
criticize
money
intoxicated,
drunk
Im not
enormous
Frugal
decent
Formal
annihilated
apprehend
disparage
currency
inebriated
I am not
prodigious
Penurious
satisfactory
To facilitate contract
ratification, your negotiators
urge that the membership
respond in the affirmative.
Unprofessional Conversational
Formal
Characterized by
Incorrect
grammar,
unpredictable
sentence
structure,
inappropriate
punctuation,
slang,
vulgarisms
Correct
grammar and
punctuation,
conversational
tone, simple
sentence
structure,
familiar words
Correct
grammar,
serious tone,
complex
sentence
structure,
polysyllabic
words
Try this:
Employees may use the Market Street entrance during
remodeling.
Hidden Messages
Some words and phrases convey a
negative and unpleasant tone.
They may imply a hidden message
that the writer does not intend.
Think twice before using the
following negative expressions.
Negative Language
You overlooked
You state that
You failed to
You claim that
You are wrong
You do not understand
Your delay
You forgot to
Hidden Meaning
You are careless
I dont believe you
You are careless
Its probably untrue
Im right
You are not very bright
You are at fault
You are inefficient and careless
This alternative is
wordy and calls
attention to itself
Try this:
Have you called a salesperson?
All executives have their own offices.
Every executive has an office.
Every executive has his or her own office
Simple alternatives
encounter
extrapolate
meet
project
obligatory
required
terminate
end
down.
Because we cannot
check all activities, we
must end the contract.
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