McGann 1
Meaghan McGann, :
Professor Swindell Ha
ENGW 104 ae
18 December 2012
Portfolio Cover Letter
Dear English Department Faculty,
‘Throughout the second half of my first semester at Wheaton College I have had the
‘opportunity to participate in an English Writing and Composition Course. This course has
enabled me to evaluate my effectiveness as both a writer and a communicator and enhanced my
ability to critique my own writing in order to convey my ideas more clearly. In contrasting the
first draft of my first essay for this class, and the first draft of my final essay for this elass, I
found improvements in the overall flow and phrasing of my writing and in my implementation of
supporting evidence.
In my first essay I lacked a clear thesis statement, making it harder for me to support my
el
s effectively. My essay lacked connectedness because my main points were not clearly
related to an overarching thesis, It was much harder to support these main points in a manner that
added to the general flow of the paper while effectively arguing my ideas. In the first draft of my
final paper, my thesis statement could still be more directly stated but the connection between
my thesis and my main ideas is much clearer; this has allowed my paper better flow and support,
Ttook care to connect this paper in such a way that my main points directly argue for my thesis
and have been better able to integrate and explain my sources as a result,
1 greatly appreciate and recognize the value of taking this course. Through the practice of
‘writing several different drafts and then critiquing and editing my own work I have been able to
identify some of my strengths and weaknesses as a writer and have been more intentional about