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AnthemCompetitionEssay,PromptII
DeFlitch
January5,2015
Youryoungersiblingisscreaming.Shefellandhitherhead,butnaturallytheblame
wasthrownonyou.Yourparentsareconvincedthatthetwoofyouwerefightingandyouhit
her.Justanhourintoyourweeklongperiodofbeinggrounded,yourparentscomebackafter
furtherassessingthedamage.Theyapologizeandrevokethepunishment.InAynRands
Anthem
,shewrites
Itisasintowritethis,(17).Equality72521hasprominentandvast
knowledgeofthelawandtheconsequencesofbreakingit.However,bytheendofthestory,
hetookasecondlookandrealizedhismistake.Hebeginstounderstandandlearnwhatthe
governmenthasdonetothemindsofthecitizens,andthroughtheeventsofhislifehascometo
realizethewrongsandhorrorsthatarearealitywithintheparametersofhiscountry.He
developesanassessmentofthecountryunlikeanyoneelses,whichultimatelyleadstohis
outcastandremovalfromsociety.Throughatonofresearchandsoloinvestigations,he
decidedthatmaybethegovernmentwasnotasangelicasitseemed.
TheCouncil(Rand15),istheformofgovernmentthatrulesoverEquality72521and
hisbrothers.Intheircountry,theCouncilmakesalltherulesanddecisionsbasedonaformof
thinkingcalledcollectivism.Theylookatthecitizensasone,notasindividuals.Thelaws
requireeveryonetobeequal,nooneisallowedtobehappierthananyoneelse,bemore
talentedthananyoneelse,besmarter,bemorefavored,oranythingatallthatwouldmake
someonefeelbadaboutthemselves.Thisledtoadystopiansociety,andeveryonethoughtthe
Councilwasallknowingandhadnofault.Thecitizensweredrawntoobeyingandabidingby
everylawthatwasputforthbytheCouncil,nomatterhowharsh.TheCouncilhidevidenceof
theprosperouspast,sendingallofthepeoplethatwerefromthateratotheHomeofthe
Useless.Whenthepopulationneedstogrow,thereisaMatingNight.Menarerequiredto
haveintercoursewithwomenthattheydonotevenknow,forthesimplereasonthattheCouncil
needsmoreinfantstoraiseundertheircarewithnoinfluencefromtheirparents.Itisthrough
thisthattheCouncilisabletobrainwashchildrenandputintheirmindsthattheyarealmostlike
aGodfigure.Aftertheyfinishschool,theyaresentbacktotheCounciltoreceiveajobdecided
bytheallknowingtosupposedlyservetheirbrothers.However,thejobsaredesignedsothat
themostintelligentofthemalllikeEqualitycannotusetheirtalentsagainstthegovernment.
Equalityfindshimselfsweepingthestreetsdaily,untilhefindsamanholewithhiddensecretsof
thepast.Thisiswhatbeginshisstudy,hisslowrealizationofthetruthbehindtheCouncil.He
beginstofallinlovewithagirlhemeetseverydayonhiswaytohistunnel,butthelawsofthe
Councilpreventshimfromfindinganddeclaringfavoronher.Soeverydayheslowlybeginsto
talktoher,somethingthatisoutlawsandhighlyfrownedupon.Eachdayhesaysafewwords
toher,speakingofhowmuchhelovesher,thenhecontinuestohistunneltoworkonhislight.
Heuncoversthesecretsofthepast,andwhenhebringsthebrilliantinventiontotheWorld
Council,heonlygetsshotdown.Hethendecidesthatheshouldjustrun,runandneverstop
becausetheCouncildoesnotappreciaterealtalentandrealintelligence.Soherethinkshis
outlookonthegovernmenthehasrespectedforsolong.
Equality72521isrighttorethinkhisjudgement.ThethingsthattheCouncildoesis
wrong.Holdingpeopleapartfromlove,happiness,joy,peace,andaslewofotherthingsthata
personneedsinordertoliveahappylife.Equalityrealizesthesethings,andalthoughheis
disobeyingauthority,hewantstoliveanactuallifewithallthelibertiesanyhumandeserves.
ThetyrannythatistheCouncildoeshorrifyingthings,thingsthathewantstoprotecthimself
andhislovefrom.Andwhenhegetsintothewoodsanddiscoversthatthereareevenmore
secretsthatthecouncilhashidden,hefindsthenewwordsI,me,andmythatenhancehis
lifeandmakehimfeellikeanindividual.Hefindsmirrorsthatallowhimselftolookathis
reflectionforthefirsttime,andthendeterminesthatonedayhewilltrytogobackandallowthe
restofthecitizenstofeelthepleasuresofbeinghuman.Beingaliveissomethingyoucannot
feelwhenyourbodyisalreadydead,thereforeEqualityiscorrectinhismoralreassessmentof
thesituation.Afterall,parentsshouldalwayslookatthesituationandevidencebeforemaking
amajordecision.