Geyer1

ShainaGeyer
Gardner/4
EnglishHonors10
17November2015
SocialExpectationsTyrannySpeech
Throughoutlife,constantremindersareconveyedbyindividualsassertingwhatthe
differencebetweenrightandwrongare,tous,theyoungindividualsofsociety.1Asone
becomesmoreintelligentandcapableofexpressingopinions,asimplestatementescalatestoa
complexcontempt.Icanguaranteethatatleasthalfofthepopulationhasbeenneglectedby
anotherindividualbasedontheprinciplesofhowtheypresentthemselves,orwhattheir
interestsare.Startingwithinahighschoolcampus,anendtosocialismrequirementsshould
pursue,andanaghastsocialtyrannyshouldbeabolished.
Theoverallhighschoolexperienceislikeanitchy,mosquitobiteyouareawareits
thereandyouwanttoitchisbutyoucan'tbecauseitwouldinflamethearea.Noonescratches
thesurfacetobringattentiontotheirmisguidedthoughtsandmostpeopledontexpress
themselvestoothercliquesoutsideoftheirown.Highschoolaffectspeoplebecauseitis
whereyoudevelopinterestsintoyourstudies,actions,andhobbies.Therecomes
expectationswitheachsoughtpursuitandthoseexpectationsthatpeopletrytoliveuptoor
arefrowneduponforconveyingaredeeplyaffected.Standingincrowdsofpeople,Iusedtofeel
anurgetocontortmyselfintoafigurethatwouldplease.Iwantedtomeetthestandardssociety
hadformeevenifitmeantdisplayingmyselfasafictitiouscharacter,nottruetomyself.Im
startingmypathtofindingthepersonIamandamaspiringtobe,andthejudgementthatnot

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onlyI,butwearesurroundedbyeveryday,isnotinfluentialtothisincrement.
Thisinfectious
stateofminddevelopslikewildfiretomentalillnessessocialdisorders.
2
CareyBenedictinsiststhesocialdisordersthatareadaptedwiththeideato
conformwithacceptancefromsocietyareinanarray:depression,anxiety,conductdisorders,
bipolardisorders.
Wefearsociety.
3Itsaninternalmockerythatbeingourselvesisntgood
enough,buttheonlypeoplewhoweshouldbetryingtoproveourselvesto,isourselves.We
shouldnthavetoliveuptostandardsthatotherpeoplesetforus,theonlystandardweshould
setforourselvesistoaccomplishapersonalambition.
Asocialhierarchycanbeincorporatedwithinthemindsofstudentsthroughouteach
divisionofhighschool,buttheseallusionswillberepented
.4Itisnotalwaysanegativeconcept
betweentheopinionsdirecteduponothers,butsometimespeoplegeneralize.Inthetimespanit
takesforsomeonetojudgeyou,ittakessevenseconds.Ittakessevensecondstomakeafirst
impression.
Ifsomethingispopular,doesthatmeanitsright?Doespopularexist?
5
Somethinginsocietymadetheseassumptions,andas21stcenturypeopleandhumanbeings,I
believethatadifferencecanbemadeinordertomakehighschoolabetterexperiencea
differencethataltersimperfectionsandimprovesanoverallselfesteemandselfconfidencein
peopletheyneversawinthemselvesbefore:appraisalforactionsinsteadofnegativity.
Somepeoplemaydisregardthissubjectofdismayorotherssaluteit.
6Accordingto
theHarvardMentalHealthletter,conceptscontradictwithpersonasinsistedupontheiridealsof
aconstructivesocietybut,thereisnothingexistenttomeetthestandardizationsofperfect.
Thereisaflawtoeveryperceivedindex.
Thereisaflawincorporatedincorporations.Thereare

metaphor
shortsentence
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antithesis
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rhetoricalquestion
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chiasmus
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flawswhetheryoulookleftorright,butthatshouldntdetrimentsociety.7
Learntoacceptflaws
becauseimperfectionsarewhatmakestheworldabeautifulplaceimperfectionsarebeautiful.
ThebibleverseRomans12:2states,Donotbeconformedtothisworld,butbe
transformedbytherenewalofyourmind,thatbytestingyoumaydiscernwhatisthewillofGod,
whatisgoodandacceptableandperfect.8

Notonlyinthisschoolinthisworld,wecanfollow
ourreligion,andpracticewellmannerisms,andpursueactsofkindness,andneglecthostilityin
anattempttoalteranantagonisticsociety. 9

Changetheperspectiveyouviewthesmallest
objectsin,andseetheresults.10Socialismisatyrannythatcanbetriumphedthrougha
distinguishablydeveloped11
societybutfirst,societyhastomakethechange,andsocietystarts
withuswearethepeopleofsociety.

anaphora
allusion
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polysyndeton
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imperativesentence
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alliteration
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New
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.Nov.112006:A1+.
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"InterpersonalPsychotherapy."
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