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Advantages and disadvantages of using technology in
the classroom
Introduction:
Technology now is the important things every person
in this life are using the technology the kids or the
adults. For everything in this life, there are the
advantages and disadvantages. In my journal, I will

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talk about the benefits and disadvantages 1 of

integrating technology into the classroom.
The advantages:
The students in every age they should use the
technology in the good 2 way or right way. Example,
some students using the technology for saving the
materials of the courses. Students are able to 3 learn
on a global scale without ever leaving their
classrooms. Also 4 the students can use it for working
in their assessments or projects. The use of
technology in education can be helpful in terms of

the ability to distance education 6 .

The disadvantages:
Some teachers think there are some disadvantages of
using technology in the classroom and this
disadvantages example, reorganization and
integration of new technology into any lifestyle will
result in much loss of time to become acquainted with
the new system, or when a student takes all his time in
the use of technology may weaken eyesight and
focus. 7 Also 8 Classroom management-teacher could
find it difficult to draw students' attention.
Conclusion:

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Technology is a tool and mission in life is 9 a way of

life 10 and a ton depends on each individual 11 and how

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to use this technology. And by giving us students to

these modern means we have to guide them to use
these techniques in the right way and intensify
supervision on them, and for example, we have to we
select some of the aims and programs of education
and the development of each student's ability to
function.
References:
Belcher, L. M. (n.d.). Advantages and Disadvantages of
Technology Advances. Retrieved from
smallbusiness.chron:
http://smallbusiness.chron.com/advantagesdisadvantages-technology-advances-12579.html
Technology as a communication tool within the
education system. (n.d.). Retrieved from
technoedu.weebly:
http://technoedu.weebly.com/advantages-anddisadvantages.html
Advantages and disadvantages of using technology in
the classroom. (n.d.). Retrieved from sites.google:
https://sites.google.com/site/embracingtechnology30/
advantages-and-disadvantages-of-using-technology-inthe-classroom

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