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Introduction/Opening Paragraph
A matter of great controversy at present is TV with supporters
maintaining that media entertains and educates us while opponents
claim that news isolates people. As for me, the disadvantages are
more than the advantages.
Structure of a Paragraph
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Linking word
Expression of opinion
Argument
Elaboration
Rephrase
Cause
Result
Examples
A
First and foremost (1), I can say without hesitation (2) that TV is
used to manipulate people (3). To elaborate on this (4), it is
indisputable the fact that information can be controlled (5) on the
grounds that the news is not always objective (6) as governments
(and most commonly oppressive regimes) might censor the
information (7).
B
Additionally, it is my firm belief that news seems to praise violence
and there is no doubt in my mind that children adopt aggressive
behaviour. To put it in another way, there are too many violent films
and it is a sad reality to see a child trying to imitate the film.
C
Moreover, it is a commonly held belief that watching TV makes
people passive. To elaborate on this, TV series restrict family
communication due to the fact that there is a big variety of soap
operas so everyone chooses their own series. I am convinced that
there is no interaction and, as a result, people sit on a sofa and give
their whole attention to a programme they watch thus becoming
coach potatoes.
Conclusion/Closing Paragraph
All in all, for the above mentioned reasons, watching TV makes
people passive and many TV programmes do have a lot of
disadvantages.
It is wise to ...
In conclusion, ...
Similarly, ...
Although it is true that ..., I feel that the idea of ... can only be
good.
In my view, ...
The main reason why I believe this is the fact that ...
Another factor that will lead to life being better in the future is
the fact that ...
The main argument in favour of/against ... is the fact that ...
Finally, the fact that ... cannot be overlooked and for this
reason ...
Those who are in favour of it are quick to point out its many
advantages, while those to whom it does not appeal fail to see
anything positive about it at all.
The ... is a topic about which scientists have been debating for
years.
The former stress the .... whereas the latter argue that ...
Disadvantages
Have become hard and are left with physical and emotional
scars
Television
Advantages
Disadvantages
Be An Only Child
Advantages
Has the luxury of having its parents attention all the time
Understanding
Caring
Disadvantages
Be overprotected
Tends to be spoilt
Vivisection
Advantages
Disadvantages
Ambition
Advantages
Having ambition means you know where you are going in life
Disadvantages
Honesty is the best policy. Do you agree with this statement? Why?
Honesty
Advantages
Disadvantages
Career
Advantages
Disadvantages
You may have a better income than your spouse (in the case
of a woman) which causes arguments
Friendship
A friend must
Be honest
Be trustworthy
Be willing to help
Have humour
The legalization of soft drugs would help solve and take away some
of the mystery surrounding drugs. Do you agree with this
statement? Why or why not?
People would not think that they would be sth illegal so they
would not use them so much
Disadvantages
Even soft drugs can have bad effects on your health in the
long term
Globalisation
Advantages
Disadvantages
Censorship
Advantages
Disadvantages
Everyone has the right to choose what they read, see, hear
and no limitations should be placed
Surveillance cameras
Advantages
Disadvantages
Working Mothers
Advantages
Stay-at-home mothers
Advantages
People should marry before the age of 25 so they have time to have
children. Do you share this view? What is your opinion? When
should people marry? Why?
No generation gap
Disadvantages
Immaturity
Causes
Broken families
Unemployment
Problems
Effect on family
Solutions