Cotton Candy

By Valerie Garnace

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Locker door opens and we see a love letter.

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Pop's hand reaches into the locker.

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Pop grabs the letter.

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Pop holds the letter in his hands.

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Pop begins to open the letter.

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Pop opens letter and sees the message.

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Pop looks around.

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Pop smiles and blushes.

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Pop runs off screen left.

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Pop runs towards the door.

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Pop runs through door.

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Camera pans right to reveal Candy peeking around the corner.

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Candy turns around.

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Candy notices her hair is out of place.

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Candy fixes her hair.

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Candy takes a deep breath.

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Candy runs towards the door.

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Cut to shot of a door.

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Candy swings open door excitedly.

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Candy: *gasp*

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Candy becomes shocked.

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Pop: Did you write this?

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Pop points to letter.
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Camera pans out to reveal Pop talking to another girl.

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Cotton nods her head.

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Cotton: Mhmm.

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Candy: No she didn't! I wrote it!

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Candy shoves Cotton aside.

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Pop: R-really?

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Candy: Yea!

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Bubble pops.

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Candy: I really wanted to tell you something!

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Candy fidgets with her fingers.

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Candy: I really like y--

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Camera pans up to Candy's face.

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Candy gets punched.

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Candy flies off screen.

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Candy flies backwards.

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Candy crashes to the ground and tumbles backwards.

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Candy lies motionless.

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Blood drips from Cotton's fist.

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Camera pans upwards to reveal Cotton and Pop.

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Pop: Ah! Is she okay?!

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Pop: Eek!

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Cotton looks at Pop which scares him.

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Pop inches away from Cotton.

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Pop shakes in fear.

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Candy: Is that all you got?

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Cotton turns around.

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Candy: RAUUUGHHHH!

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Candy throws a punch towards the screen.

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Candy: RAUUUGHHHH! (continued.)

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Candy: RAUUUGHHHH! (continued.)

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Candy: RAUUUGHHHH! (continued.)

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Cotton gets punched.

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Cotton: OOF!

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Cotton's nose starts to bleed.

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Cotton looks at the blood.

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Cotton: Grrrrr!!

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Candy: Heh heh

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Candy: *gasp*!

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Cotton throws a punch in slow motion.

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Candy: AH!

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Silhouettes of Cotton and Candy are projected on
Pop and the wall behind him as they throw punches
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Cotton: UGH!

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Candy: OOF!

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Candy falls backwards.

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Candy gets up

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Candy runs toward the screen.

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Candy: RAUUGHHH!!

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Cotton dodges the punch Candy throws at her.

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Cotton grins.

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Cotton winds up for a kick.

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Candy: UGHH!!

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Cotton knees Candy in the stomach.

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Candy coughs up blood.

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Candy: *coughs*

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Blood lands on the floor.

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Candy falls to the ground.

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Cotton walks away.

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Cotton hands grab onto a pipe.

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Cotton: Urgh!

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Cotton breaks off the pipe.

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Cotton walks away as Pop looks at her with concern.

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Pipe hits the ground.

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Cotton walks towards Candy.

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Cut to Candy breathing heavily on the ground.

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Cotton walks up to Candy.

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Cut to Cotton's POV.

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Cotton swings pipe upwards.

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Cotton swings pipe down.

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Truck in to Candy's face.

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Candy catches the pipe.

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Cotton: *gasp*!

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Candy: Grrrr

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Candy grips onto pipe.

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Candy gets up while still holding the pipe.

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Cotton and Candy fight over the pipe.

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Cotton: Grrrrr!

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Candy: Grrr!!

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Candy looks at pipe.

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Candy: Heh heh..

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Candy lets go of her side of the pipe.

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Cotton: *gasp*!

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Cotton starts to fall backwards.

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Pipe flies off Cotton's hands as she falls
backwards.

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Pipe flies upwards.

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Pop looks up.

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Pop: Huh?

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Cotton gets back up.

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Cotton and Candy both look at pipe.

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Cut to downshot of Pop looking up.

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Pipe starts to come down.

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Pipe hits Pop on the head.

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Screen blacks out.

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Pop's POV as he opens his eyes.

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Cotton and Candy come into view.

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Pop: AAHH!!

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Pop screams and grips his sheets.

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Pop: GO AWAY!!

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Pop hides under the covers.

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Candy: Wait, don't be scared!

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Pop: I SAID GO AWAY!

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Cotton and Candy flinch from Pop's yell.

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Cotton turns to Candy.

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Candy: YOU!

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Candy: This is all YOUR fault!

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Cotton: What did you say?

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Candy: You heard me!

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Both girls: Grrrr!!

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Both girls: Grrrr!! (continued.)

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Cotton gets up from her chair and both girls take a
step back.

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Pop peeks out from under the covers.

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Pop: Wait please! Not in here!

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Pop starts to panic.

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Cotton: HAAAAA--!!

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Candy: HAAAAA--!!

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Cotton winds up for a punch.

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Candy winds up for a punch.

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Both girls: HAAAA!!!

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Cotton and Candy start to throw their punches at
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Scene ends with cut to title card.

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