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    "Why and When We Speak Spanish in public" essay was one of my notably lower scores. Ironically, the article was one that I had actually found rather interesting. I improved the piece by making my ideas clear and forthright.

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    "Why and When We Speak Spanish in public" essay was one of my notably lower scores. Ironically, the article was one that I had actually found rather interesting. I improved the piece by making my ideas clear and forthright.

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    "Why and When We Speak Spanish in public" essay was one of my notably lower scores. Ironically, the article was one that I had actually found rather interesting. I improved the piece by making my ideas clear and forthright.

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    EvasofiaHantzis
    Ms.Woelke
    ERWC
    Scholarship
    27April2016
    ReflectiononRevisedWhyandWhenWeSpeakSpanishinPublic
    Myreasoningforchoosingthisessaywasthatitwasoneofmynotablylowerscores,and
    IcouldtellfrombrieflyreadingoveritthatIdidnotputtheproperamountoftimeinto
    formulatingtheessayorrereadingitthatIshouldhave.TheironicpartisthatMarianMarquez
    articlewasonethatIhadactuallyfoundratherinterestingandcouldeasilyrelateto,soIfeltthe
    needtogivemyselfanothershotattheessay.Asopposedtomyfirstessay,Ielaboratedmoreon
    myideasandpersonalexperience,aswellascreatingmorestructurebyaddingaparagraph
    wheretherewasachangeininformation.Furthermore,Iworkedonthefluidityofthepieceasa
    wholebyaddingtransitionwordswherenecessary,fixingcitations,andnumerousgrammatical
    errors.AlthoughIstillleftthepronounIintheessay,whichisgenerallyfrownedupon,we
    weregivenpermissionfromtheoriginalinstructionaslongasitwasinassociationwitha
    personalexample,whichitwas.Iimprovedthepiecebymakingmyideasclearandforthright,
    andintegratingpiecesfromthetextasopposedtoabruptlyintroducingthem.

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