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Which phrase creates the clearest sentence considering grammar, choice of words,
sentence construction, and punctuation? Choose from one of the following options.
1. One example of people with time-management problems is students who spend most
of their free time practicing sports, and then, later, they are too tired for concentrating
on homework.
a) who spend most of their free time practicing sports, and then, later, they are too
tired for concentrating
b) that spend most of their free time practicing sports, then being too tired to
concentrate
c) who spend most of their free time practicing sports and then are too tired to
concentrate
d) spending most of their free time practicing sports, but later are too tired to
concentrate
e) spending most of their free time in sports practice, then are too tired for
concentrating later
2. The Antiquities Act of 190619061906 authorized the President to declare national
historic or prehistoric ruins or monuments as their being a historic landmark.
a) as their being a historic landmark
b) as being a historic landmark
c) to be historic landmarks
d) to have become a historic landmark
e) with becoming historic landmarks
3. Besides publishing ten poetry collections for adults, Gary Soto, who is writing numerous
collections of short stories and novels for children.
a) Soto, who is writing
b) Soto, the writer of
c) Soto writing
d) Soto has written
e) Soto, in addition to writing
4. It is not uncommon for a great novel to be turned into a mediocre film, Scott Spencers
Endless Love is only one case.
a) film, Scott Spencers Endless Love is only one case
b) film, as was the case with Scott Spencers Endless Love
c) film, in this case Scott Spencers Endless Love
d) film, in the case of Scott Spencers Endless Love
e) film, Endless Love, by Scott Spencer, is a case in point
5. Advertised specials that are located in the front of the store tempt shoppers to stop, the
best buys are often found in less prominent spots.
a) the best buys are often found in less prominent spots
b) it is the best buys that are often found where they are less prominent
c) but the best buys are often found in less prominent spots
d) and the best buys are often found less prominently
e) in spite of this, the best buys are found to be less prominent
C - First of all "ruins or monuments" means landmarks must be plural. So that leaves C and E. E has a gerund
(becoming) and is too wordy. C is concise and keeps the infinitives consistent (to declare + to be).