Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish .why do you think this is happening ?

What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Comment [M1]: Cause + object + infinitive

These days, different kinds of reasons cause people to make more and more trash and it is going to be a major concern especially in mega cities in coming years. Various factors affect why people produce more rubbish. Sure enough , standards of living have increased during the past years in the modern life .For instance, people take care of their health and hygiene more than past and that is why new disposable products like tissue ,toilet paper and disposable glasses are being used far more in compare tocomparison with past which causes producing more rubbish. Packaging to attract customers is a main factor to produce rubbish. Every small item is packed these days to attract shoppers. which since the packaging is thrown away after opening so companies also play a role in producing rubbish by packaging. Habitual activities also increase amount of garbage. Nowadays, People are working longer hours so they have to eat lunch in fast food restaurants instead of their homes .Fast food restaurants create a lot of rubbish . To avoid crisis in the future, governments are supposed to take an active role or for decreasing the amount of rubbish. They should try their best to make some educational and training advertisements in order to teach people to reuse some items. For example, news papers can be used as cleaning cloth for cleaning windows. Recycling is the step that governments ought to take. Dry rubbish like papers could be converted in to (into) second hand papers for packaging. New mechanism must be made in order to convert the rubbish in to(into) energy and other items. For instance, fertilizers could be made from out of wet rubbish. Another thing that can help to produce less rubbish is separating wet and dry rubbish to avoid landfills to be filled up quickly. So educational and training advertisement, reusing, recycling, new technologies and separation of wet and dry rubbish are some of the steps governments should take in consideration to help reduce the rubbish. In conclusion, too much rubbish is going to be an important worry in societies in coming years so governments especially municipalities should think in advance to find and create some methods for reducing rubbish

Comment [M2]: This word is repeated. / Alternative : litter Comment [M3]: Which is not a good choice for reasoning so SINCE is suggested. Comment [M4]: The word is again repeated/ alternative: garbage Comment [M5]: Alternative : wastes Comment [M6]: The idea is not that reasonable. Dont traditional restaurants produce rubbish? Comment [M7]: More literal : take an active role in order to decrease Comment [M8]: More literal : make an effort Comment [M9]: For making it more literal , THAT can be omitted here. Comment [M10]: When sth is used as a material for producing sth else, instead of from you have to say : out of Comment [M11]: It is recommended not to use TO after help.

Comment [M12]: Repeated / alternative: near future

Bandscore : approximately : 7 Examiners comment: avoiding repetition and correct use of prepositions are to be considered.