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NewtownSchoolShooting

MypoemisabouttheNewtownschoolshooting.Theshootdown happenedthe14thofDecemberattheelementaryschoolofSandyHook. Theshooter,AdamLanza,20yearsold,shottwentykids,eightboysand twelvegirls.AdamLanzaalsoshotsixfemalestaffmember.Hewasseen carryinganarsenalofhundredsofroundsofdeadlyammunition.Before drivingtotheelementaryschoolLanzashotandkilledhismotherNancy Lanza.Thekidsthatwereshottodeathwerearound6to7yearsold.One ofthevictimsfatherRobbieParkerstruggledtocatchhisbreathashe describedhisdaughterEmilie.Asixyearoldgirlwasasolesurvivor.She survivedtheschoolshootingbyplayeddeadandstayingstilluntilthe buildingwasquietandfeltsafetoexit.Shewasthefirstchildtoleavethe building.WhenshereachedhermothershesaidMommy,I'mokay,but allmyfriendsaredead.ShedescribedLanzaasaveryangryman.When thepolicefinallygottotheschoolAdamLanzacommittedsuicide. IchosetodothepoemabouttheNewtownschoolshootingbecauseI thinkthatitisverysadandscarytothinkthatsomeonehasandwould actuallydonesomethingsoterrible.Ialsointhinkinthevictimsfamilies andhowheartbrokentheymustbe.Ialsochosethiseventtohelpavoid thishappeningagain.

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NinaSielskiElizalde

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NinaSielskiElizaldewasbornJune9th2000in Montevideo,Uruguay.NinaisfromUruguayand ArgentinabutlivesinNewYorkCity.She attendstheUnitedNationsInternationalSchool. Ninalikestoseeherfriendsandlistentomusic duringherfreetime.Shetakesmoderndancein PeridanceCapezioSchoolduringtheweekendsandtakespianoatTurtle BayMusicSchool.

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TwomajorpoetelementsusedinthepoemNoMoreisrepetition andalliteration.Inpoetryrepetitioniswhenyourepeatawordora phrasemorethanonce.Iusedrepetitioninthispoemtohighlight point.IrepeatedthephrasesItbroughtacountrycloser,Ittore familiesapart.(lines1,2,6,7)sothattheystandout.Ithinkthatthose twophrasesshouldstandoutthemostbecausetheyare,inasense, contradictory.Thisspeaksonhowconflictingitmusthavebeenforthe childrenThatwerepresentandontheentirenationwatchingonTV. InthepoemNoMorethereisalliterationinafewparts.Alliteration iswhenthesameletterorsoundhasbeenusedatthebeginningof adjacentorcloselyconnectedwords.Iusedalliterationinthepoemfor variousreasons.Oneofthemwasbecauseitgavemusicality, contrastingtotheharshthemeofthepoem.Also,itemphasizedthe twolinesWhenandWhy.

Lyrics http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/fosterthepeople/pumpedupkicks.html IthinkthatthesongPumpedUpKicksbyFosterthePeoplecanrelate mosttomypoemNoMorebecauseitstalkingaboutsomeonetrying tokillaninnocentperson.MypoemmostlyrelatestoPumpedupKicks inthelinesHe'lllookaroundtheroom,hewon'ttellyouhisplan.He foundasixshootergun.Youbetterrun,betterrun,outrunmygun.

Betterrun,fasterthanmybullet.Thesleightofmyhandisnowa quickpulltrigger.Allofthoselinesdescribemypoembecausethey havethesametheme.Bothhavetodowithschoolshootings.

NewtownSchoolShooting
By: Nina Sielski Elizalde

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