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MypoemisabouttheNewtownschoolshooting.Theshootdown happenedthe14thofDecemberattheelementaryschoolofSandyHook. Theshooter,AdamLanza,20yearsold,shottwentykids,eightboysand twelvegirls.AdamLanzaalsoshotsixfemalestaffmember.Hewasseen carryinganarsenalofhundredsofroundsofdeadlyammunition.Before drivingtotheelementaryschoolLanzashotandkilledhismotherNancy Lanza.Thekidsthatwereshottodeathwerearound6to7yearsold.One ofthevictimsfatherRobbieParkerstruggledtocatchhisbreathashe describedhisdaughterEmilie.Asixyearoldgirlwasasolesurvivor.She survivedtheschoolshootingbyplayeddeadandstayingstilluntilthe buildingwasquietandfeltsafetoexit.Shewasthefirstchildtoleavethe building.WhenshereachedhermothershesaidMommy,I'mokay,but allmyfriendsaredead.ShedescribedLanzaasaveryangryman.When thepolicefinallygottotheschoolAdamLanzacommittedsuicide. IchosetodothepoemabouttheNewtownschoolshootingbecauseI thinkthatitisverysadandscarytothinkthatsomeonehasandwould actuallydonesomethingsoterrible.Ialsointhinkinthevictimsfamilies andhowheartbrokentheymustbe.Ialsochosethiseventtohelpavoid thishappeningagain.
NoMore
Itbroughtacountrycloser Ittorefamiliesapart Whenwilltherebeareform? Whydowealwaysconfirm? Thisshouldcometoastop Itbroughtacountrycloser Ittorefamiliesapart.
NinaSielskiElizalde
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Analysis
TwomajorpoetelementsusedinthepoemNoMoreisrepetition andalliteration.Inpoetryrepetitioniswhenyourepeatawordora phrasemorethanonce.Iusedrepetitioninthispoemtohighlight point.IrepeatedthephrasesItbroughtacountrycloser,Ittore familiesapart.(lines1,2,6,7)sothattheystandout.Ithinkthatthose twophrasesshouldstandoutthemostbecausetheyare,inasense, contradictory.Thisspeaksonhowconflictingitmusthavebeenforthe childrenThatwerepresentandontheentirenationwatchingonTV. InthepoemNoMorethereisalliterationinafewparts.Alliteration iswhenthesameletterorsoundhasbeenusedatthebeginningof adjacentorcloselyconnectedwords.Iusedalliterationinthepoemfor variousreasons.Oneofthemwasbecauseitgavemusicality, contrastingtotheharshthemeofthepoem.Also,itemphasizedthe twolinesWhenandWhy.
NewtownSchoolShooting
By: Nina Sielski Elizalde