ENGLISH WRITING Thiu nng

Session 32 Module II Instructor: H L V

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OVERVIEW
Review Translation: Leantek Homework solution

LEANTEK
S mnh

mission | goal
goal vs. objective vs. target e.g., study abroad take TOEFL desired TOELF score LeanTek ch da tin cy cho mi doanh nghip Vit

Each and every Vietnamese business may rely on | count on | depend on | lean on LeanTek LeanTek: lean on | upon us

LEANTEK
Cng ty c phn LeanTek c thnh lp bi nhng chuyn gia u ngnh

join-stock company was founded | formed | established | set up by by a group of frontline | leading | first-rate | top-class | topnotch | wellrespected experts if I'm having brain surgery, I want it done at a frontline hospital.

LEANTEK
chuyn gia u ngnh v t vn qun tr doanh nghip, t vn pht trin ngun nhn lc, t vn h thng sn xut tinh gn. chuyn gia u ngnh (E) v t vn (A) qun tr doanh nghip (B), t vn (A) pht trin ngun nhn lc (C), t vn (A) h thng sn xut tinh gn (D). E[(AB)+(AC)+(AD)] = [(EA)(B+C+D)] expert consultants | consulting experts (EA) in Food for thought: consulting vs. consultative vs. consultation vs. consultancy service? Internet check: consulting (1), consultancy (2), consultation (3), consultative (4)

Repetition: t vn the issue of linking scope

business management (B), human resource (HR) development (C), and streamlined production | lean manufacturing (D)

LEANTEK
Trn quan h hp tc vi nhiu t chc t vn quc t, chng ti t vn v gip khch hng xy dng chin lc pht trin doanh nghip ton din. Through our partnership with

Joining force with a number of our international partners in consulting we aim to help customers create a comprehensive strategy for business development.
We are well-equipped | in a qualified position to help why? a good all-around education | an all-round singer diversity a well-rounded scholar | a well-rounded curriculum balance SOP/LOR application: check the target schools curriculum

LEANTEK
Vi slogan Cch tn qun tr chng ti s em n cho khch hng ca mnh nhng kinh nghim khch hng t lt xc tr thnh nhng doanh nghip, nhng tp on kinh t hng mnh, nng lc cnh tranh trong thi k hi nhp. Cat's motto: No matter what you've done wrong, always try to make it look like the dog did it.

Standing by our Innovative Management motto | credo we committed ourselves to providing customers with relevant expertise that allows them to self-transform into a powerful business, capable of staying competitive
vs. All reptiles have to slough [off] to grow.

in the context of globalized economy | entering the economic integration period

vs. the transition period

GROUP ACTIVITY
Teamwork:
What is the TP distribution of the Vietnamese version? What is the hyper-Theme of the first paragraph?
What should be the TP pattern of choice for this paragraph?

Re-organize the Vietnamese version accordingly to improve its TP in two different ways
Theme-Theme (3 points) Rheme-Theme (6 points)

Write down your answer on a piece of paper. Also give your solution to the V.I.E.T.N.A.M homework (3 points) Revise the English version accordingly to improve its TP in two different ways

A SAMPLE SOLUTION
A Theme-Theme development [S1] LeanTek c thnh lp bi cc chuyn gia u ngnh. [S2] Chng ti, cng vi cc i tc quc t, s gip khch hng.. [S3] Chng ti tun th theo ng theo nguyn tc "Cch tn qun tr" khch hng c th t lt xc... [S1] LeanTek was founded by [S2] We, joining force with our international partners, aim to help [S3] We stand by our Innovative Management motto, committing ourselves to

A SAMPLE SOLUTION
A Rheme-Theme development
Cng ty C phn LeanTek Vit Nam t vn v gip khch hng xy dng chin lc pht trin bng cch em n cho khch hng kinh nghim khch hng t lt xc theo nguyn tc Cch tn qun tr vic ny kh thi bi i ng chuyn gia t vn u ngnh + partner quc t gip khch hng thnh doanh nghip, tp on kinh t hng mnh, nng lc cnh tranh.

LeanTek helps customers create business development strategies help them self-transform under the Innovative Management principle this is made possible by our team of top-class experts + international partners Eventually, customers will become powerful and competitive

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HOMEWORK SOLUTION
Country names and abbreviations
H.O.N.G.K.O.N.G. Hug Only Nice Guys, Kiss Only Naughty Girls. L.I.B.Y.A. stands for Love Is Beautiful; You Also. Competition: come up with a meaningful phrase for V.I.E.T.N.A.M. (5 points)
(Google search) V.I.E.T. N.A.M. = Very Intimate Emotions Towards NonAppreciative Men My own solutions: V.I.E.T. N.A.M. = Viagra Incredibly Extends Turned-on Nights (of) Aging Men V.I.E.T. N.A.M. = Vestige (of) Incursion Era That Nags American Minds watch a sample clip

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LEANTEK
Linear idea development (6 points)
LeanTek pht hin nhng th mnh ca khch hng trong nhng nng lc cn tim n nhm nh thc nng lc tim n . Vi phng chm gip khch hng thay i pht trin, LeanTek bin tim nng thnh kt qu bn vng, thng qua hot ng tng cng nng lc lnh o, h thng qun l v to dng vn ha doanh nghip. To ra s pht trin bn vng cho khch hng.

Linear idea development (6 points) Phng chm gip khch hng thay i pht trin pht hin th mnh tim n ca khch hng nh thc nng lc thng qua hot ng tng cng nng lc lnh o, h thng qun l v to dng vn ha doanh nghip bin n thnh kt qu bn vng

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LEANTEK
Phng chm gip khch hng thay i pht trin pht hin th mnh tim n ca khch hng nh thc nng lc tim n thng qua hot ng tng cng nng lc lnh o, h thng qun l v to dng vn ha doanh nghip bin n thnh kt qu bn vng redundancy

Change to develop??? With | standing by our change for better motto

vs. Listening to customers is now part of the mantra of new management in public services. But how many public bodies really do it?

LeanTek seeks to discover and bring out the best in our customers
watch a sample clip

and through a series of activities, such as management capability improvement and corporate culture cultivation, help them utilize their own resources to full advantage and maintain their growth rate.
maintain vs. sustain vs. keep up: whats the difference?

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LEANTEK
Chng ti la chn v u t vo cc doanh nghip Vit Nam vi t cch l i tc u t chin lc. Chng ti u t vo khch hng khng bng ti chnh m bng chnh ni dung t vn.

How to improve the TP and switch from TT to RT? use marked Theme As a potential business strategy partner, we selectively invest in Vietnamese businesses
select and invest vs. selectively invest: coordination vs. subordination

2-verb sequence in Vietnamese adverb + verb in English

ci v chp nhn (li mi) smilingly accept (the invitation) go tht phn i screamingly protest bit m vn vi phm (lut) knowingly violate (the law)
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LEANTEK
Chng ti u t vo khch hng khng bng ti chnh m bng chnh ni dung t vn.

in forms of advisory services rather than financial funds vs. Our contributions will be in forms of
Chng ti u t vo khch hng mt cch bi bn v lu di nhm to dng mt vn ha v thng hiu c th cho doanh nghip.

How to improve the TP? Which elements can be used as the link?

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LEANTEK
Chng ti u t vo khch hng mt cch bi bn v lu di nhm to dng mt vn ha v thng hiu c th cho doanh nghip. Gia tng ti a gi tr ca doanh nghip. how to make it less awkward?

can we put bi bn and lu di in the same clause? We will contribute in forms of long-term advisory services which will be delivered in a well-planned | well-thought-out manner

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LEANTEK
Chng ti u t vo khch hng mt cch bi bn v lu di nhm to dng mt vn ha v thng hiu c th cho doanh nghip. Gia tng ti a gi tr ca doanh nghip. combination or cause-and-effect?

what is the relationship between the last two sentences? in order to | in an effort to cultivate business culture and brands representative of the company Solution 1: combination
and maximize the market value of the business

Solution 2: cause and effect

, and subsequently, help maximize the market value of the business which, in turn, would help maximize the market value of the business

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LEANTEK
Summary of the structure changes (in Vietnamese)
Chng ti la chn v u t vo cc doanh nghip Vit Nam vi t cch l i tc u t chin lc.Chng ti u t vo khch hng khng bng ti chnh m bng chnh ni dung t vn. Chng ti u t vo khch hng mt cch bi bn v lu di nhm to dng mt vn ha v thng hiu c th cho doanh nghip. Gia tng ti a gi tr ca doanh nghip.

Vi t cch l i tc u t chin lc chng ti u t c chn lc vo cc doanh nghip Vit Nam u t khng bng ti chnh m bng chnh ni dung t vn lu di (m ni dung ny) c thc hin mt cch bi bn nhm to dng mt vn ha v thng hiu c th cho doanh nghip v (do gip) gia tng ti a gi tr ca doanh nghip

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LEANTEK
Trit l kinh doanh: i nhng con ng m cha ai i, lm nhng vic cha ai hoc khng ai dm lm redundancy

Business | operation philosophy | principle [Dare to] venture into uncharted waters | territories
explore unbeaten path take on groundbreaking works

Blaze a trail | Always be a trendsetter! My solution

LeanTek Take the Lead!

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GROUP ACTIVITY
Watch a short clip and identify the implicit link:
Patient: I think I'm ready to die. Delivery guy: I've got a ton of bricks for Dr. Dorian.

The groups able to identify the link will get an extra 2 points.

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GROUP ACTIVITY SOLUTION

Dialogue:
Patient: I think I'm ready to die. Delivery guy: I've got a ton of bricks for Dr. Dorian.

Idiom:
The truth hit him like a ton of bricks. The woman he was in love with turns out to be his half-sister.

Past solutions
Bc s cha km bnh nhn cht th xng ng b nm gch Bc s mun cht theo bnh nhn lun. Bc s bo: mun cht th cho gch xy m / xy ngha a lun. Nm cu ni ca b lo
the schema issue

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HOMEWORK
For session 34: Translate the two stanzas of a Vietnamese poem by an unknown author.
Nu mt ngy ta bng thy yu nhau Em ng bt ng, cho rng mnh v c Anh cho rng tnh yu nh hi th Khng th ln ny cng s th ln sau. v... Nu mt ngy ta bng mun xa nhau Em ng bt ng, cho rng mnh v c Anh cho rng tnh yu nh hi th Trong ci ngi ny, ai th mi c u. clue: pay attention to the linking between the two stanzas

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