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ENG 102

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Is this correct?
Some questions that people ask are: why is marijuana not legalized in all states?; why isnt everyone trying to get help for their pain through the use of marijuana?

Semicolon
used to connect major sentence elements of equal grammatical rank

Use a semicolon between closely related complete sentences not joined with a coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS)

In 1800, a traveler needed six weeks to get from New York City to Chicago; in 1860, the trip by railroad took only two days.

Use a semicolon between items in a series containing internal punctuation Classic science fiction sagas are Star Trek, with Mr. Spock; Battlestar Galactica, with its Cylons; Star Wars, with Han Solo, Luke Skywalker, and Darth Vader. Classic science fiction sagas are Star Trek, with Mr. Spock, Battlestar Galactica, with its Cylons, and Star Wars, with Han Solo, Luke Skywalker, and Darth Vader. Use a semicolon between independent clauses linked with a transitional expression Many corals grow very gradually; in fact, the creation of a coral reef can take centuries.

Semicolon

Do not use a semicolon between an appositive and the word to which it refers WRONG - The scientists were fascinated by the species Argyroneta aquatica; a spider that lives underwater. Do not use a semicolon to introduce a list WRONG - Some of my favorite foods include; pizza, fries, and lobster. Do not use a semicolon between sentences joined by FANBOYS WRONG - Five of the applicants had worked with spreadsheets; but only one was familiar with database management.

Semicolon

Hacker Chapter 35 Colons

Colons
used primarily to call attention to words that follow

Use a colon after an independent clause to direct attention to a list, an appositive, a quotation, or a summary/explanation The daily routine should included at least the following: twenty knee bends, fifty sit-ups, and five minutes of running in place.

My roommate is guilty of two of the seven deadly sins: gluttony and sloth.
What do these two sentences have in common? This is the rule of thumb for colon usage.

Colons

Use a colon according to convention

Dear Sir or Madam:

5:30 p.m.
In proportions 2:1

Title and Subtitle The Glory of Hera: Greek Mythology and the Greek Family

Avoid using a colon between a verb and its object/complement WRONG - Some important vitamins found in vegetables are: vitamin A, thiamine, niacin, and vitamin C. Avoid using a colon between a preposition and its object WRONG The hearts two pumps each consist of: an upper chamber, or atrium, and a lower chamber, or ventricle. Avoid using a colon after such as, including, or for example WRONG The NCAA regulates college athletic teams, including: basketball, baseball, softball, and football.

Colons

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Some questions that people ask are: why is marijuana not legalized in all states?; why isnt everyone trying to get help for their pain through the use of marijuana?

Parenthesis DO NOT OVERUSE!!!

Use to enclose supplemental material, minor digressions, and afterthoughts


Nurses

record patients vital signs (temperature, pulse, and blood pressure) several times a day.

Use to enclose letters or umbers labeling items in a series


Regulations

stipulated that only the following equipment could be used on the survival mission: (1) knife, (2) thirty feet of parachute line, (3) a book of matches, and (4) two ponchos.

Dash

type word, space, next word, and Word will do it automatically

Use to set off parenthetical material that deserves emphasis


Everything

that went wrong from the peeping Tom at her window last night to my head-on collision today we blamed on our move.

Use to set off appositives that contain commas


An

appositive is a noun or noun phrase that renames a nearby noun. They are usually set off with commas, but when the appositive itself contains commas, a pair of dashes helps readers see the importance of all pauses. In my hometown, peoples basic needs food, clothing, and shelter are less costly than in a big city like LA.

Dash

Use to introduce a list, a restatement, an amplification, or a dramatic shift in tone or thought (basically can replace a colon, but colons are more formal and less dramatic than a dash) Only use if there is a specific reason for its use (dont want unnecessary chopiness)
In

my hometown, peoples basic needs sesame seed oil, honey, safflower oil, and that half-liquid peanuts only peanut butter.

Brackets

Use to enclose any words/phrases that have been inserted into an otherwise word-for-word quotation
Audubon

reports that if there are not enough young to balance deaths, the end of the species [California condor] is inevitable (4).

The Latin word sic in brackets indicates that an error in a quoted sentence appears in the original source. Do NOT overuse because calling attention to others mistakes can appear snobbish.
According

to the review, Nelly Fortados performance was brilliant, exceeding [sic] the expectations of even her most loyal fans.

Brackets

Use to enclose any words/phrases that have been inserted into an otherwise word-for-word quotation
Audubon

reports that if there are not enough young to balance deaths, the end of the species [California condor] is inevitable (4).

The Latin word sic in brackets indicates that an error in a quoted sentence appears in the original source. Do NOT overuse because calling attention to others mistakes can appear snobbish.
According

to the review, Nelly Fortados performance was brilliant, exceeding [sic] the expectations of even her most loyal fans.

Brackets Worksheet
1. Lisettes speech contained the following remark: I accept this medal Comal College Student of the Year with the acknowledgment of the support of my family, friends, and teachers. [Comal College Student of the Year] 2. The actor remarked, none too humbly, When I deliver my characters famous speech Act I Scene 3, the audience weeps. [Act I Scene 3]

Brackets Worksheet
3. If you read the quotation from the Navy captain (see the article entitled Life Down Under page 4, column 5), you will have a better understanding of life on a submarine. [page 4, column 5] 4. At one point in the interview, the singer responded, When Im home London, England, I occasionally give free concerts. [London, England]

Brackets Worksheet
5. As part of the preparation for your trip, you will find it immensely helpful to read about the local customs (the When in Rome... section of Chapter 2 pages 18-20). [pages 18-20] 6. The mayor-elect then commented, It is imperative that we make this the proposed loop around the city a priority of this administration. [the proposed loop around the city]

Brackets Worksheet
7. The winner answered my question about the best type of racing bicycle with Theres no doubt that mine a twenty-seven speed Italian bicycle is the best. [a twenty-seven speed Italian bicycle] 8. To get to the Connellys farm, you go down Arrowhead Road (between Route 10 the turnoff is north of Evinston and Route 52). [the turnoff is north of Evinston]

Brackets Worksheet
9. Do you happen to know the year that Tony Dorsett was awarded it the Heisman Trophy? Luella asked. [the Heisman Trophy] 10. Please turn to the statistics on the world population (see page 46 Chart C) before continuing. [Chart C]

Ellipsis Mark

Use to indicate that words have been deleted from an otherwise word-for-word quotation
Shute

acknowledges that treatment for autism can be expensive: Sensory integration therapycan cost up to $200 an hour (82).

If a full sentence or more is deleted in the middle of a quoted passage, use a period before the three ellipsis dots
If

we dont properly train, teach, or treat our growing prison population, says long-time reform advocate Luis Rodriguez, somebody else will.This may well be the safety issue of the new century (16).

Ellipsis Mark

Use to indicate a hesitation or an interruption in speech or to suggest unfinished thoughts


The

apartment building next doorits going up in flames! yelled Marcia.

Slash

Use to separate two or three lines of poetry Add a space before and after the slash
Roses

are red / violets are blue / sugar is sweet

Use to separate paired terms Do not use space before or after slash
Pass/fail,

producer/director Do not use and/or, he/she, is/or Rewrite instead

Hyphen

Use the dictionary to see if whether or not a word is hyphenated or compound


Water-repellent,

waterproof, water table

Use when two or more words are used together as an adjective before a noun
Richa

Gupta is not yet a well-known candidate.

Do not use to connect ly adverbs to words they modify


WRONG:

A slowly-moving truck tied up traffic

Hyphen

Hyphenate fractions and certain numbers when they are spelled out
One-fourth

Use with the prefixes all-, ex-, and self Self-help

Use with the suffix -elect


President-elect

Hyphen

Use in certain words to avoid ambiguity or to separate awkward double or triple letters
Re-creation

and recreation Anti-intellectual (double i) Cross-stitch (double s)

Hyphen Worksheet
1. In the story, the villain dies from a self inflicted wound. Self-inflicted 2. Bill Bradley is an ex basketball player. Ex-basketball 3. Governor elect Rousseau was born right here in our town. Governor-elect 4. The Assad family left Istanbul on a bitterly cold day. Bitterly-cold

Hyphen Worksheet
5. Have you hear that only forty two percent of the people in this area favor a bike trail? Forty-two 7. Did you know that manatees have trouble hearing low frequency sounds? Low-frequency 8. At this location today, one hundred and three people have registered to vote. Hundred-and-three 9. Elissa is looking for an oil free moisturizing liquid. Oil-free

Welcome to the Cat express where all cats say Meow Meo Meeeeow [sic] Meow meo.

tap water, well-water, spring water, rain water, and milk


Its in wonderful flavors you love (fish, chicken, and tuna)

and enjoy.

According to our chef, it is the greatest cat


nip around and has all the flavors that every cat loves. The Chicken Fest has so much flavor even the humans are jealous that it will make your mouth water.

Grammar Tasks

Create either single panel cartoons or a multiple panel cartoon illustrating each semicolon rule
What is the rule of thumb for using a colon? Give an example of when not to use it. Give an example of how to use a colon correctly.

Create a menu for a restaurant

On the menu, include one correct example of the dash, parentheses, brackets, ellipsis mark, slash, and hyphen.

For Tuesday...

Analysis rough drafts

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