Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Eliminate redundancies
Daniel is now employed at a private rehabilitation center working as a registered physical therapist. Daniel works at a private rehabilitation center as a registered physical therapist. Sylvia very hurriedly scribbled her name, address, and phone number on a greasy napkin. Sylvia scribbled her name, address, and phone number on a greasy napkin.
Our fifth patient, in room six, is a mentally ill patient. Our fifth patient, in room six, is mentally ill. The best teachers help each student become a better student both academically and emotionally. The best teachers help each student grow both academically and emotionally.
Cut empty or inflated phrases Along the lines of...like As a matter of fact...in fact At all times...always At the present time...now, currently Because of the fact that...because Due to the fact that...because For the reason that...because In order to...to In the final analysis...finally
verbs and there is, are, was, were Investigators were involved in studying the effect of classical music on unborn babies. Investigators studied the effect of classical music on unborn babies. All too often, athletes with marginal academic skills have been recruited by our coaches. All too often, our coaches have recruited athletes with marginal academic skills.
words We took a side trip to Monticello, which was the home of Thomas Jefferson. We took a side trip to Monticello, the home of Thomas Jefferson.
We outsourced the work to an outfit in Ohio because we didnt have the bandwidth to tackle it in-house. We hired a company in Ohio because we had too few employees to do the work. The CEO should dialogue with investors about partnering with clients to purchase land in economically deprived zones. The CEO should talk with investors about working with clients to buy land in poor neighborhoods.
Taylors employment of multihued means of expression draws back the curtains and lets slip the nostalgic vantage point from which she observes American society as well as her lack of comprehension of economic realities. Taylors use of colorful language reveals that she has a nostalgic view of American society and does not understand economic realities.
Economically deprived
Negative savings
Strategic withdrawal
Correctional facility
Revenue enhancers
Chemical dependency
Avoid doublespeak
Deliberately evasive or deceptive language Downsizing = firing employees
Fireman
Mailman
Mankind
weatherman
When a student writes a paper, he must proofread carefully. When a student writes a paper, he/she must proofread carefully. Rather than use too many he/she his/her, use plural When students write their papers, they must proofread carefully. Best to rewrite sentence to avoid problem completely
North Dakota takes its name from the Indian word meaning friend or ally. North Dakota takes its name from the Lakota word meaning friend or ally.
When American soldiers returned home after World War II, many women abandoned their jobs in favor of marriage. When American soldiers returned home after World War II, many women left their jobs in favor of marriage.
The senator spoke about the challenges of the future: the environment and world peace. The senator spoke about the challenges of the future: pollution, dwindling resources, and terrorism.
These days the training required for a ballet dancer is all-absorbent. These days the training required for a ballet dancer is all-absorbing.
Different than
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Different from
Off Plan to do Think of; think about Try to; sure to
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The writer who breeds more words than he needs, is making a chore for the reader who reads.
-Dr. Seuss
Intentionally break all the rules for wordy sentences, appropriate language, and finding exact words by rewriting the lyrics to a song.
I wasn't born for diggin deep holes I'm not made for pavin long roads I aint cut out to climb high line poles But I'm pretty good at drinkin beer I'm not the type to work in a bank I'm no good at slappin on paint Don't have a knack for makin motors crank, no But I'm pretty good at drinkin beer So hand me one more That's what I'm here for I'm built for having a ball I love the nightlife I love my budlight I like 'em cold and tall I aint much for mowin thick grass I'm too slow for workin' too fast I don't do windows so honey don't ask But I'm pretty good at drinkin' beer
A go getter maybe I'm not I'm not known for doin' a lot But I do my best work when the weather's hot I'm pretty good at drinkin' beer So hand me one more That's what I'm here for I'm built for having a ball I love the nightlife I love my budlight I like 'em cold and tall
I wasn't born for diggin deep holes I'm not made for pavin long roads I aint cut out to climb high line poles But I'm pretty good at drinkin beer I'm pretty good at drinkin beer
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A go getter maybe I'm not Ive been known using excuses But I do my best work when the sun is aligned with my location. I'm a professional fermented yeast beverage consumer.
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The intention of my conception wasnt for the purpose of agricultural advancement or to have a career with PENDOT, and not a fan of high altitude atmospherically conditions. However, I'm a professional fermented yeast beverage consumer. I'm a professional fermented yeast beverage consumer.
Original I wasn't born for diggin deep holes I'm not made for pavin long roads I aint cut out to climb high line poles But I'm pretty good at drinkin beer
Rewrite The intention of my conception wasnt for the purpose of agricultural or luminescent engineering. However, I'm a professional fermented yeast beverage consumer.