BASIC SCHOOL OF SCIENCE, TECHNOLOGY AND ENGINEERING

ENGLISH 3

ACT 5:. WRITING ACTIVITY

EDINSON JOSE BARRAZA ESQUIVEL

CODE: 1085094485

TEACHER: BRIGITTE CAROLINA ROJAS

GROUP: 90121_286

NATIONAL UNIVERSITY OPEN AND DISTANCE

UNAD

Paso 1: Eleccin del tema principal del texto.

En una oracin responda a esta instruccin:
Imagine Colombia in 2050 taking into account technology, transportation and
health. Recuerde que el tema gramatical es Futuro (will, going to, presente
continuo) y es necesario usarlo.
Colombia in two thousand and fifty will, with great technological advances to
facilitate the lives of people in the household, transportation change, and counted
with autonomous vehicles, and we will, with automata doctors.
Paso 2: Planeacin del texto.
Llenar la siguiente tabla de planeacin de acuerdo con la respuesta dada en
el paso 1
List
of
words and
connectors

Main Idea

Supporting
Ideas

Contrast: However

Result: As to what, therefore, consequently.

Reason: as a result/

Moreover: Addition

Finally: Sequence
Colombia in two thousand and fifty will, with great technological
advances to facilitate the lives of people in the household,
transportation change, and counted with autonomous vehicles, and
we will, with automata doctors.
Subtemas:

Subtema 1: Technology: describa aqu el subtema (una

oracin)
As to what we will have great technological advances in
electricity generation

Subtema 2: Transportation: describa aqu el subtema (una

oracin)
Taxis and self-autonomous driving

Subtema 3: Health: describa aqu el subtema (oracin)

The computers would act as medical assistants

Conclusion

Escriba en una oracin la conclusin de su texto.

A Colombia awaits a promising future with great
technological advances to facilitate the lives of people in
when mobility, health and education

Paso 3: Escritura del texto.

Llene la tabla de acuerdo con la informacin de la tabla anterior (paso 2).
Tenga en cuenta el nmero de oraciones solicitado.

Topic

Imagine Colombia in 2050 taking

technology, transportation and health.

into

account

Paragraph 1: Introduction

Colombia in the two thousand and fifty the water will be

critical to the future growth. Because Also can Become
Each paragraph must the major limiting factor to future. However, this shall not
have minimum four (4) prevent the population grows significantly.
sentences and maximum
eight (8) sentences.
Paragraph 2: Technology

As to what we will have great technological advances in

electricity generation, the Buildings may become energy
Each paragraph must traders instead of being merely energy consumers.
have minimum four (4)
sentences and maximum
eight (8) sentences.
Paragraph
Transportation

3: Life will be way different, Therefore We have driverless

taxis and self autonomous driving. Consequently some
Departments will allow you to drink while your car is
Each paragraph must driving. Shorter commutes due to intelligent connected
have minimum four (4) self-driving vehicles.
sentences and maximum
eight (8) sentences.
Paragraph 4: Health

Moreover the computers would act as medical assistants,

giving the Ability to perform complex interventions,
Each paragraph must additional will feature more sophisticated tools for the
have minimum four (4) cure of diseases.
sentences and maximum

eight (8) sentences.

Paragraph 5: Conclusion

A Colombia awaits a promising future with great

technological advances to facilitate the lives of people in
Each paragraph must when mobility, health and education
have minimum four (4)
sentences and maximum
eight (8) sentences.
Paso 4: Consolidacin del texto.
Cuando tenga la tabla anterior desarrollada, podr consolidar su texto y
entregarlo completo.
El texto que se entregar al final es el que sale de esta tabla. Simplemente es
copiar la informacin de cada casilla y pegarla en una hoja aparte.
Colombia in 2050
Colombia in the two thousand and fifty the water will be critical to the future growth.
Because Also can Become the major limiting factor to future. However, this shall
not prevent the population grows significantly.
As to what we will have great technological advances in electricity generation, the
Buildings may become energy traders instead of being merely energy consumers.
Life will be way different, Therefore We have driverless taxis and self autonomous
driving. Consequently some Departments will allow you to drink while your car is
driving. Shorter commutes due to intelligent connected self-driving vehicles. It will
definitely change the cityscape, or at least how we interact With It.
Moreover the computers would act as medical assistants, giving the Ability to
perform complex interventions, additional will feature more sophisticated tools for
the cure of diseases. Finally Robots May Become household servants to the higher
class as well as middle class, supercomputers May shrink down in size to the size
of peas and Virtual Universities May exist online for everyone to access due to
relative lack Their entry requirements line.
A Colombia awaits a promising future with great technological advances to
facilitate the lives of people in when mobility, health and education

Paso 5: Llenar la lista de verificacin o checklist y entregar con el texto final.

Checklist:
YES
Hice las tablas de planeacin del texto en el foro?
En mi texto es explcito el tema principal o intencin?
Mi texto desarrolla los tres subtemas?
Mi texto tiene un cierre, conclusin?
Particip en el foro durante todo el proceso?
Utilizo vocabulario aprendido en la lectura What will
life be like in 2050
Utilic los conectores que puse en la lista que hice?

PARTICIPATION IN THE FORUM

NO
X

X
X
X
X
X
X

UNKNOWN
WORDS

Leading

Global
warming

MEANING

conducen

Calentamiento
global

PEOPLE NAMED IN THE ARTICLE

INFORMATION
OF THE
PERSON

NAME

Rockefeller
University
mathematical
biologist

Joel Cohen

That by 2050 the

majority of the
people in the world
will live in urban
areas, and will
have a significantly
higher
average
age than people
today.

Director of MIT's Bill Mitchell

Smart Cities
research group

Cities of the future

won't look like
"some
sort
of
science-fiction
fantasy," but it's
likely that "discreet,
unobtrusive"
technological
advances
and
information
overlays
will
change how we
live in significant
ways.

Director of the
Energy Security
Initiative at the
Brookings
Institution

Thinks that by
2050 we will also
have a so-called
"smart grid" where
all
of
our
appliances
are
linked directly to
energy distribution
systems, allowing
for real-time pricing

Demographic Cambios
changes
demogrficos

Information
overlays

Informacin
superpuesta

Charles
Ebinger

OPINION

based on supply
and demand
New York Times Daniel
Public Editor
Okrent

Smart grid

Crop
shortfalls

Red
inteligente

Dficit de
produccin

Director of the
Information &
Innovation
Policy Research
Center at the
National
University of
Singapore

Viktor
Hopes
that
Mayeradvances
in
Schnberger technology
will
make us more
empowered,
motivated
and
active, rather than
mindless
consumers
of
information
and
entertainment

Environmentalist Bill
McKibben

Healthier

saludable

The most common

kinds
of
news
organizations
in
the future will be
"individuals
and
small alliances of
individuals"
reporting
and
publishing on niche
topics.

says that if we
don't make major
strides
in
combating global
warming, it's likely
we could see outof-control rises in
sea
levels,
enormous
crop
shortfalls,
and
wars
over
increasingly scarce
freshwater
resources.

Green
markets

Oceanographer

Sylvia Earle

Who thinks that

services
like
Google Earth have
the potential to turn
everyday
people
into
ocean
conservationists.

Founder and
"real food"
proponent

Nina Planck

Is optimistic that
there will be more
small
slaughterhouses,
more
small
creameries,
and
more regional food
operationsand
we'll be healthier
as a result.

President
NAACP

Benjamin
Jealous

Predicts that in the

coming
decades
the issue of race
will become "much
less
significant,"
even as the issue
of class may rise in
importance.

Mercados
verdes

FORUM PARTICIPATION
In which
paragraph
can you find
information
about
this?(number
of the
paragraph)

Education
change

system Smart grid

Global warming
Better
future?

This information is this

found in paragraph information is
two
in paragraph
three
In the U.S. cities
theorist Richard
Florida thinks
urbanization trends
will reinvent the
education system,
making our
economy less real
estate driven and
erasing the divisions
between home and
work.

Mass media

This information is
found in
paragraph four

The Internet will

That by 2050
continue to radically
we will also
transform media,
have a so-called destroying the
"smart grid"
traditional model of
where all of our what a news
appliances are
organization is.
linked directly to
energy
distribution
systems,
allowing for
real-time pricing
based on supply
and demand.

life

Health
in

This information
is found in
paragraph six

This information is
found in paragraph
eight

That if we don't
make major strides
in combating
global warming, it's
likely we could see
out-of-control rises
in sea levels,
enormous crop
shortfalls, and
wars over
increasingly
scarce freshwater
resources.

We will live longer

and remain healthier.
Patricia Bloom, an
associate professor
in the geriatrics
department of Mt.
Sinai Hospital, says
we may not routinely
live to be 120, but it's
possible that we will
be able to extend
wellness and shorten
decline and disability
for people as they
age.