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These are useful both in the introduction for restating the question and in the main body for introducing
the main arguments in an impersonal way.
Personal opinions
These phrases for expressing personal opinions are particularly useful in conclusions, where you are
much more likely to be personal. They are also of use in the introductions in opinion based essays.
Personal opinions
My personal view is that
It seems to me that
I tend to believe that
I am of the opinion that
I would argue that
In my experience
Commenting
A second category of opinion language is showing the strength of your opinion. This language can be
used either with personal opinions or more impersonal opinions. Commenting
Of course,
Naturally,
Evidently,
Generalising
making your writing look academic and more cautious Part of the academic process - and IELTS is at
least partly academic - is to generalise
appropriately. This language is needed to soften statements which would be too strong.
Generally speaking,
On the whole,
......tends.....
Typically,
By and large
......tends.....
..may/might/could.....
Often/frequently/sometimes/usually
Explaining opinions
Sometimes it is sensible to restate an opinion with a further explanation. This is particularly relevant in the
main body of an essay when you have introduced a complex point or argument.
For example,
For instance,
A good illustration of this is
If we take an example
Evidence for this is provided by
We can see this when
Concluding
Evidently, this language is needed in the conclusion of the essay.
To summarise
In conclusion
On balance,
This is a complex issue with no clear answers
If we look at both sides of the argument
problem
difficulty
question
issue
solution
Adjectives
One key here is to avoid words such as big and little and to choose accurate word combinations. Here
are some adjective-noun combinations
Adjectives Examples
significant
fundamental
real
minor
pressing
Up variations
Down variations
Up and down
Sometimes you need to describe a graph that goes up and then down. Here we have
fewer options.
No change
Top
Here are some basic variations of I think. There are many more: my suggestion is to choose
those which you feel comfortable with
The impersonal IT
One strategy you can think about is using IT phrases to start your sentences when you
are about to give an opinion. This has two effects:
ONE and WE
This one is slightly trickier. Personally, I rarely use either of these structures but some
people do. So here are a few:
How to plan
There is no easy answer to this question. Planning tends to be very individual and what
works for one candidate may not work for another. However, there are one or two
guidelines to follow:
be methodical: before you get to the exam, know exactly how you are going to plan your essay
and stick to that plan in the exam.
give yourself enough time: you only have 40 minutes to write in the exam, but dont start writing
too quickly. Time spent planning is rarely wasted and candidates who fail to finish are generally
those who start to write too soon.
remember its a language exam: IELTS is a test of language, so make sure your plan helps you
produce good language
keep it simple: your plan is there to help you write. If it is too complex, it may not work in a 40
minute exam scenario.
read the question: make sure your plan relates directly to the question.
the introduction identifies the task the question and outlines your position
There is much debate about the position of physical education on the school curriculum
nowadays. There are some people who make a valid argument that school time would be better
spent on academic and vocational subjects that will prepare students for life rather than on doing
sport which is much less relevant. Despite this, my view is that children learn vital life skills such
as teamwork and dealing with competition by practising sport at school.
I hope you see that the second paragraph works better simply because it makes the personal
opinion of the writer clear. The first introduction is very dangerous because it can lead to
an essay that doesnt answer the question as it is asked.
A more impersonal essay question example
Other IELTS essay questions are phrased more impersonally i.e. they dont ask you to express
your personal opinion. When this is the case, you can use much more impersonal opinion
language. See this example:
Some people believe that sport should be made compulsory in schools. What are the advantages
and disadvantages of this proposal?
Here there is no you in the question. You are being to discuss something more generally. Now
more impersonal vocabulary does become useful.
There is much debate about the position of sport on the school curriculum nowadays and it is a
well-balanced argument as to whether it should become mandatory. There are clear advantages
in encouraging children to do more sport as this will develop skills to prepare children for later
life. At the same time, however, there are possible drawbacks to making sport compulsory as it
may restrict time for more academic subjects. I will discuss both these advantages and
disadvantages in this essay.
The first rule of IELTS essays is to answer the question. One problem in doing that is
there are different types of IELTS essay questions each of which poses its own
problems.
In this post, I talk you through the three main types of essay questions and show you
how to identify them and what problems they pose.I strongly suggest that you practise
writing essays on each type of question before you get to the exam.
1. The discussion
Here you are given a social issue or problem and asked directly to discuss it and very
often asked to suggest a solution for it.
Two examples
In this type of question you are given the problem (here in red) and then told how to
discuss it/your task (in blue).
In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you
think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
And
Many universities charge higher fees for foreign students. Why do they do this? Do you
believe that it is fair?
Typical task words
Typical problems
There are 2 typical problems with understanding this type of essay question.
1. You are being asked for your personal opinion: it is not enough to talk generally about the topic.
You must give your personal view.
2. Very often you given two tasks: for example, to discuss the causes and the solution. If you
discuss only one of these, you will be penalised on Task Achievement.
3. The question does not give you much help with ideas: you may need to spend more time
planning and thinking of ideas
2. The proposal
Here you are given an opinion about some social issue to discuss. Typically, you are
asked whether or to what extent you agree with it.
Two examples
In this type of question you are given an opinion (in red) and then told how to discuss
it/your task (in blue). Sometimes the question is longer and you are given some
background information (in green), then the opinion and then the task.
Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are
solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that
they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
And
Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at
best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent
do you agree or disagree?
Typical task words
Discuss
Typical problems
There are three typical problems with understanding this type of essay question:
1. The questions are simply longer to read and sometimes harder to understand. Spend plenty of
time reading the question and underlining the key words and making sure you understand what
words like this and these refer to.
2. It can be easy to confuse the background information from the opinion. You must discuss the
opinion (the bit in red). If you only discuss the topic (the bit in green), you will be penalised on
Task Achievement.
3. You need to discuss the opinion in the question. You cannot only give your opinion.
3. The argument
Here you are given a problem or issue and two different solutions or opinions about it.
Typically, you are then asked to decide which solution/opinion is the better.
Two examples
The argument type essay question has two main types. In the first type, you get two
different situations or opinions (red) and then your task (in blue) is to decide between
them.
In some countries people pay different rates of tax depending on their salary, in other
countries everyone pays the same rate. Which do you believe is the best system?
In the second type, you get a solution (in red) to a situation (in green) and you then your
task (in blue) is to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of that solution.
Unemployment is one of the most serious problems facing developed nations
today. What are the advantages and/or disadvantages of reducing the working week to
thirty five hours?
Typical task words
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this
Typical problems
There are two typical problems here:
1. The essay discusses the problem generally and doesnt talk about advantages or disadvantages
or make a choice between the two options. Again this will be penalised under Task Achievement.
2. The essay only looks at the advantages or the disadvantages. It needs to look at both sides of the
question.
A checklist
This is my very simple checklist to help you decide which type of question you are
looking at:
1. Does it ask me what my own opinion is about a topic? Discussion question Use
my own opinions
2. Does it ask me to discuss a particular proposal? Proposal question Discuss that
proposal
3. Does it ask me to decide between two different opinions or look at the advantages and
disadvantages of a topic Argument question Discuss both sides and come to a
decision
An exercise
Look at these reported recent IELTS questions and decide which type of essay you need
to write:
1. Many people have an unhealthy diet and do not take enough exercise. What do you think are the
reasons for this and what can be done to encourage people to lead a more healthy lifestyle?
2. Although countries with long average working hours are economically successful, this often has
some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
3. Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to society. Others argue that being a
citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss.
4. Many people argue that children should stay in school until the age of eighteen. What are the
advantages and disadvantages of making school compulsory until the age of 18?
5. Many people nowadays leave their county to work abroad and take their family with them. What
are the advantages and disadvantages in terms of family development?
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really practical essays in an exam. My essay, which you will find below, is I think much
simpler than almost all the essays I received and perhaps a more practical model for
exams.
I should add that these are mostly band score 8.0 writing tips and are written especially for
candidates who are aiming high. The moral is:
the road to band score 8.0 often means doing the simple things well
The really practical thing is to have your own checklist in your head before you start writing.
7. See the whole essay in your head before you start writing
8. Focus on the backbone of your essay
This is a related point. All the essay matters of course, but perhaps some bits matter more
than others. Id suggest the practical thing to do is concentrate on the backbone of your
essay, the bits that help you write better and the examiner to understand better. The
backbone is:
1.
The introduction: this should identify the question and outline your position. Dont rush
it as it is the first thing the examiner will read. First impressions count.
2. The first/topic sentences of each paragraph: these should be clear and to the point.
They should identify exactly what that paragraph is about and show how it relates to the rest
of the essay. The practical tip is to keep the detail/clever ideas for the body of the paragraph.
Start off general and then build towards the specific.
3. The conclusion: this is the easiest part of the essay normally. Most often, all you need to
do is go back to the introduction and rephrase it
Get these bits right and the rest of the essay tends to take care of itself.
Problems often happen when reasons and examples get put in the first sentence when
you try to explain your idea without saying what it is first.
the shortest sentence in each paragraph is the first one (thats not a rule!)
I do use more complex structures (relatives and if clauses), but I keep them for my reasons and
examples once the examiner is clear about my point of view
The clearest advantage of this new technology is that it enables people to read at their
own convenience and whenever they want.
There are of course some disadvantages to this technology.
This one is of course an advantage/disadvantage essay. So here I just concentrate on
showing the examiner what each paragraph is about and how they relate to each other.
Read your first topic paragraph before you write the second
topic paragraph
This is I believe a top tip. It is very easy to get lost in writing your essay when you are
under pressure. I suggest you stand back a little give yourself little breaks. One time
you could do this is when you start a new paragraph. Dont start writing immediately.
Rather I suggest you go back and read what you have just written first. If you do this,
you are much, much more likely to link your paragraphs together. See this example:
There is some reason to believe that newspapers and books will not survive into the
future in their current form.
Despite this, it is still likely that traditional print media will not completely disappear
for a variety of reasons.
This time I simply start my second content paragraph with a reference to what I have
said in the first. How can I do that? By knowing what I have just written.
What is the task in each case? Try and say in your own words what the question is
asking you to do.
Some people believe that the internet will replace traditional books in the
future. Do you believe this would be a positive or a negative development?
As technology progresses, so has the way we read books and many people
now prefer to read using new forms of technology such as e-readers. What
are the advantages and disadvantages of this new form of publication?
Some people believe that newspapers and books will eventually be replaced
by new forms of technology such as the e-reader and the internet. What is
your opinion?
This brings me to my simple suggestion. DO NOT PLAN IDEAS. Rather, I suggest you
plan much more precisely. You plan the 3 things the questions tells you must write
about:
1. your answer (point of view)
2. reasons
3. examples
For me, it is much easier to extend B because I have the natural next sentence of:
But some dont and prefer to go out with their friends. By using the cautious most I
almost automatically get to some and achieve coherence. If you choose option A you
may find it difficult to think of the next thing to say.
explain it a little
I guess it will be about twice the size it is now because the population is growing
rapidly. There are a lot of new industries that have been set up there recently, so
people want to move there. Just to give you one example: in my own street at least 10
new houses have been built in the last 2 years alone. So, as I was saying, Id say itll
double in size in the next 20 years.
But could you do this, if you didnt know what you wanted to say? Quite possibly not.
What you may need to do is give yourself some thinking time.
How do you think your city will change in the next 20 years?
How do I think it will change? Thats a tough question and one I havent thought about
before.I suppose it might be pretty much the same as it is now. Although now I come to
think of it, there are a lot of new industries that have been set up there recently and
people want to move there. Just to give you one example: in my own street at least 10
new houses have been built in the last 2 years alone. So, I suppose it may grow
substantially in the next 20 years.
This is the basic pattern used. Please note that it is just one alternative and should not
be learned by heart.
Because
Obviously the word you will use most is because but there are some useful variations.
notes
1. because , as a resultand as a consequence are used with a verb and because of,as a result
of and as a consequence of with a noun
2. some people believe you shouldnt start sentences with because. This is rubbish but in the
exam it may be sensible not to do it
3. due to is normally used with negative situations and thanks to with positive situations
Cause verbs
A useful variation is to use because as a verb. Here are the 3 main variations
notes
1. you cause something to happen but it results in something happening
notes
1. please note the spelling of affect as a verb and do not confuse it with effect the noun. Just to
confuse you, the pronunciation is identical
Nouns
The essential nouns are of course cause and effect but there are alternatives here;
notes
1. you talk about the cause of something but the reason for it
Negative Effects
This group of climate change vocabulary gives you language to explain what the effects
are. As you read through the examples note the different language I use for effects and
probability.
ill-health: It sometimes goes unnoticed that there is a clear connection
between climate change and ill-health.
floods/rainstorms: One result of the rising temperatures is that floods
and rainstorms are now a frequent occurrence.
the Polar ice cap: One major concern is that rising temperatures in the Arctic are
causing the Polar ice cap to melt, which in turn is leading to rising sea levels.
heatwaves and droughts: Most experts agree that there is an increased risk
of heatwaves and other extreme weather conditions.
the natural world: Climate change will not only have a severe impact on people, but
also devastate the natural world and lead to the extinction of important
species.
food shortages: We are already seeing in many parts of the world that climate
change is leading to food shortages as a direct consequence of extreme weather
conditions.
housing/homelessness: One side-effect of rising sea levels is that more and more
people who live by the coast will become homeless.
conflicts/wars: If no action is taken on climate change, then it is likely that there will
be more conflicts between nations, especially over water supplies.
cost: It has been shown that any delay in making emission cuts will increase the
cost of reducing carbon dioxide by almost 50%.
Causes
You may also need to discuss the causes of climate change too. You dont need any very
technical knowledge and this vocabulary should be enough. Again, note the cause
language.
human activity: It is no longer possible to say that human activity does not
affect weather conditions.
greenhouse gas emissions: If we are to halt climate change, we need to make
substantial reductions in greenhouse gas emissions.
power stations: One of the leading causes of climate change is the number of dirty
power stations using fossil fuels.
carbon emissions: Carbon emissions are still rising year by year and are at
record levels.
illegal logging and deforestation: It should not be forgotten that illegal
logging in the Amazon Basin is still a major factor in climate change.
burning fossil fuels: Individuals can make a small contribution by not burning
wood and other fossil fuels.
CO2: The root cause of much global warming is the amount of CO2 in the
atmosphere.
Possible solutions
These words and phrases show different kinds of solutions. Some show what should be
done (use more renewable energy and invest money), others show how it should be done
(quickly and together).
wind and solar power: An obvious solution is to deploy much more wind and
solar power.
renewable energy: Wind farms and other sources of renewable energy will
help to reduce Co2 emissions to an acceptable level.
international action/cooperation: International action on climate change could
have a significant impact.
quick/immediate action: Any action should be immediate because this is not a
problem that can be delayed.
investment: There should be greater incentives to invest in renewables and to
reduce the current reliance on fossil fuels.
decommission power stations: It goes without saying that coal-fuelled power
stations should be decommissioned.
protest/campaign: Individuals can help force governments to act by taking part
in legal protests against the continuing use of fossil fuels.
energy efficiency and waste: A greater emphasis on energy efficiency and
reducing waste would undoubtedly mean that less fuel was consumed.
You may be asked what we as individuals can do about climate change. Here are some
ideas there are plenty of them:
lobby MPs: If enough of us lobbied our MPs and other elected
representatives then they would have to bring in legislation.
participate in peaceful protests: Another possibility is to take part in
marches and other peaceful protests to apply pressure on governments and raise
awareness of the issue..
community projects: In some areas there are small-scale community
projects to encourage local residents to install solar panels and, in some places, help
pay for them.
share transport: We also have the responsibility to consider how we contribute to
global warming by making unnecessary car journeys. We can always cycle to work,
have a joint school run with other parents and even share a car on the daily
commute to work.
diet and our carbon footprint: Reducing food wastage is perhaps the way
individuals can minimise their carbon footprint and so help global warming.
energy-efficient lightbulbs: Another small way in which we can use less energy is
to switch to energy efficient lightbulbs.
solar panels: There are an increasing number of solar panels on the market and
these can not only reduce energy bills but also mean that less carbon fuel is consumed.
heat insulation: Likewise, it is important that people insulate their houses
well so that less gas and electricity is consumed.
Conclusion
Golden rules
Ideas
1. Make sure you answer the question as it is asked. For example, if the question asks you to what extent,
make sure your conclusion says how much you agree.
the introduction matches the conclusion the opinion/point of view is the same: you just need
to change the language
the two body paragraphs link to the opinion/point view in the introduction
To do this try this simple essay structure plan. It may just look like 4 boxes on a blank
piece of paper , but it might save your life!
a little bit more about why I think it helps to concentrate on the process of writing an essay
a suggested process with explanation about what you should think about in each stage
advice on common mistakes that can happen if a stage in the process is missed out
a practice exercise
I should add that there is no magic formula here. This is just one process that I believe
works for IELTS essays. You may be familiar with other processes. Thats fine.
The smart candidate will adapt what they read here to themselves.
In many many cases, this is where things go wrong and this is the part of the process
that gets forgotten in the heat of the exam. There is always time for this part of the
process its not something that should be automatic and forgotten.
You get an essay topic, you have written before. You write the same answer. The question is
different.
The ideas and examples are fine, they dont relate to the question as it is asked
You start writing and then half way through you realise that your essay doesnt make sense its
too late to start over
Theres too much detail and it isnt clear what the main idea is
The ideas are good but they dont relate to the question
sometimes the conclusion doesnt get written that means you havent written an essay
sometimes the conclusion doesnt match the content of the essay or, even worse, it doesnt
answer the question
your essay needs to focus on that question as it is asked this is Task Response 25% of your
mark
more generally, many IELTS essays go wrong before they have even started as the question isnt
identified or understood
To help with this. I briefly talk you through 5 possible ideas to help you understand
questions. Most of ideas are very simple and in exams simple tends to be good. There
are also a couple of exercises for you to test your skills.
If you are a more visual thinker, then it can help to underline/highlight key words to
make you focus on the question. There is a danger here though that you focus too much
on those words and ignore the meaning of the question as a whole.
3. rephrase the question in your words
This may seem to be a waste of time in the exam, but it can in fact be very practical. The
benefit of doing this is that you are much more likely to understand the question if you
put it into your own words. Also, it need not be a waste of time because you are very
likely going to rephrase the question in your introduction too and you can use what you
write in the intro.
4. categorise the question/essay
Some people like to put essays into categories such as opinion essay discussion essay
argument essay etc and decide to answer the question based on a certain model. To do
this, you look at the question and decide what type of essay it wants. This can help
because it makes the planning of your essay less stressful its already half done. Id add
though:
you want to be flexible in how you use your models and remember to focus on the question in
front of you. This is especially true if you want a high band score, then you need to learn to vary
your models or have a much greater range of models.
you get a mark for answering the question , not writing a discussion essay or following a
particular model. The examiners do not have a special set of criteria for different models of essay
and it can be misleading to think that any one question must be written according to one model.
A key stage in writing the IELTS exam essay is the planning stage. Very often whether
you write an effective essay depends on how well you think before you start writing. The
trouble is that often it does not get done or done inefficiently.
This lesson is divided into 2 main sections.In the first the emphasis is on making sure
that your plans are practical that they fit your essay. The second section simply
outlines different things you might want to plan . The overall concept is that the more
clearly you think before the writing phase, the clearer and the better your
essay will be. The key word there for me is think.
Planning though does tend to be a very personal process and different things will work
for different people. This is part of the reason for giving you options. There is little right
or wrong and the question is: does it work? Try the ideas if they work, use them if
they dont, try something else!
Planning stage
Exam practicalities be prepared before the exam
practice and learn some skills
Make a plan for how long you plan before you walk into the exam room, you should know
more or less how long you expect to plan for
Know how you will plan the exam is not a time for experimentation there are different
ways of making plans find out which way(s) works for you before the exam
Know what you will plan there are different things you may plan know what you
personally need to plan before the exam
solution is to make sure that you can see in your head (or on a piece of paper) what the
final essay will look like.
Skill: What I personally do here is draw a picture of my essay.Its much quicker than
writing things out and visual often works. How much detail you include will depend on
you. I typically dont include much as I am concentrating on the structure of the essay,
not the detail.
Practical use: This is practical as drawing a plan is quicker than writing one and time
is of the essence.
I choose to put not much detail on my drawn plan just the main ideas and notes of
reasons and examples. I use it as a map and I find too much detail can confuse. You may
like to put more detail there. Experiment.
Do I know what details to include? Can I tell my main points from my
examples and reasons?
Aim: The idea here is to make sure that you are able to support your arguments with
supporting reasons/examples. One reason some essays go wrong is that the main ideas
are not supported. Its no good having a great idea in an IELTS essay unless you can
explain it.
Skill: It often helps to categorise your ideas. You want to sort out what are main
points and what are supporting reasons and examples.If you can do this, you have made
a big step towards writing coherent paragraphs paragraphs that are made up of main
points, supported by reasons and ideas.
Practical use: This is extremely practical. When you get to write your main
paragraphs, you should be much better able to combine your ideas so that are coherent
with the main idea supported by reasons and examples.
One final tip learn to select that means not including all
your ideas
Many essays go wrong because they try and include too much everything that is in the
plan. If you want to write a coherent essay in exam time, you need to make sure that all
your ideas fit together. Choose the ones that suit argument,leave out the ones that dont
no matter how good they are.
Rewrite the question from those words without looking at the question (if you do, it is
much harder not to repeat things)
Look back at the question to see if you have covered all the main points
See my introduction
Heres an exercise you can try with one of your own essays. Read the essay introduction
and then write the question. If you have written the intro well,you should also be able to
rewrite the question.
The introduction
There is some dispute whether the best method of assessing students is to use
examinations or some form of continuous assessment. This is a complex issue and my
belief is that there is probably no one method that applies to all educational systems.
See the question
Museums often represent different things to different people. On the one hand, many
people feel a museums primary purpose is to entertain. However, others feel they
function to house an educational resource. The merits of both arguments will be
analyzed before a conclusion is decided upon. IELTS Writing Blog
Which is better? Neither though my preference is for the first type. You might note
that both these questions are Discuss questions. There is always more than one
approach available.
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25% Grammar
If you are well prepared, then that may be enough information. I would emphasise,
however, that it still pays to stop before you write each paragraph and ask yourself
how you will answer the task, be coherent and cohesive, use a range of vocab and
write accurately. You might even do this before each sentence!
Coherence is how well your ideas link together and is the skill of making sense it is
something you should focus on as you write. In essays, it works at two levels and as you
write you need to think about both of these:
1. Do the paragraphs link together so that my essay makes sense.? This is a question of essay
structure.
2. Do the sentences in the paragraphs link together so that the paragraphs make sense? This is
a question of paragraph structure.
Example
Sometimes it is easier to see the problem when something goes wrong. Try this.
know how you will finish a sentence before you start it a lot of mistakes are caused by
starting- stopping starting again. The first bit is ok. So is the second bit. They just dont
work together.
good vocab tends to be precise vocab precise vocab tends to come from examples
some of the best grammar you can use comes from qualifying your ideas (modals,
relatives and if clauses)- so if you want to use better grammar think about not having too
many general statements, but using one statement that you explain in different ways
You might note that there is a strong connection between these ideas and coherence, which
is part of the reason why I started this lesson talking about it. If you want to focus on just
one thing as you write your content paras, for many people coherence may be the
best answer
what your answer is. So if the question asks you To what extent do you agree,your
conclusion must say how much you agree, not simply that you agree.
Tip: Reread the question to see what type of answer you should give: look at the task
words carefully
Exercise
Read this essay question. Ask yourself what language you need to include in the conclusion
to answer it