Professional Documents
Culture Documents
H.B.Wilson
DEPT.
THE PRINCIPLES OF
ADVERTISING
The use of
TH E PRINCIPLES OF
ADVERTISING
A TEXT-BOOK
HARRY TIPPER
of "Automotive Industries";
ex-President of the Association of National Advertisers; ex-President of the Advertising Club of
New York.
Business
HARRY
Manager
L.
HOLLINGWORTH,
Ph.D.
M.A.
B.S.
New York
University.
NEW YORK
CITY,
CO.
1920
EDUCAI
IOIN uc.fl
by
PRESS COMPANY
Cop3rright, 1915,
THE RONALD
Copyright, 1920, by
THE RONALD
PRESS COMPANY
PREFACE
Until recently the scientific study of advertising has been~
confined chiefly to practitioners in the field and to those who
less definitely preparing for work in the profes'however, the subject has been recognized as
advantageous, if not essential, to any general course of train-
were more or
Now,
sion.
The
present volume
is
courses.
It is
been
bulkiness
its
compre-
is
not to be considered as a
in the
is
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PREFACE
vi
New York
City,
December, 1919.
CONTENTS
PAGE
CHAPTER
I
What
is
Advertising?
III
IV
Extent of Advertising
The Organization and the Product
II
V
VI
VII
VIII
Is
Used
Kind and
18
Purpose of Campaign
The Trade-mark
The Chief Psychological Problems Involved.
The Chief Human Needs and Their Satis.
faction
IX
X
XI
XII
XIII
The Chief
the
30
36
42
50
58
Classes of Advertisements
71
82
Establishing Associations
Making Associations Dynamic
90
98
106
Appeals
Nature and Purpose of Advertising Copy 113
The Structural Principles of Advertising Copy 129
XIV The
XV
XIX
XX
XXI
XXII
XXIII
Color
XXIV
Illustration
XXV
XXVI
142
Human-Interest Copy
Smaller Units of Advertising Copy
165
182
202
214
225
242
253
262
Ornament
Type
153
273
Principles
vii
CONTENTS
viii
CHAPTER
XXVII
XXVIII
XXIX
XXX
XXXI
XXXII
XXXIII
PAGE
282
The Men
293
Periodical Media,
The
Principles of Advertising
CHAPTER
WHAT
IS
ADVERTISING?
many people to accuse this branch of marketing of being new and experimental, and to overlook the part
The truth is that
it played in the earlier growth of business.
ress has caused
centuries.
crude and of
appear
yet these announcements formed a fundamental part of the sale of goods and
were used to draw attention to wares of various kinds in all
at this time
little
moment;
So
PRINCIPLES OF ADVERTISING
gave an added stimulus to the use of
all
The
first
goodsarose.
From
improvement
in the
machinery
of production, transportation, communication, etc., has increased the production of all classes of commodities by leaps
to those
The problem of disposing of these goods became, consequently, more and more important.
People had
to be taught to use more material and many more varieties.
already in use.
all meant, and means today, an increasing selling probCoincident with this development came the spread of
This
lem.
its
natural consequence,
Recent Growth.
This condition changed, for the necessity of enormous investments in manufacture brought with it the necessity of more
touch withjhe_consumer, which could be secured mosT
economically through the use of advertising. Some means of
definite
identifica4ion~ei-JJie__rnanufacturer s goods
also
by the consumer
WHAT
IS
ADVERTISING?
etc.,
degree.
units
was
and
size
demanded a correspond-
demanded a more
to ^a distributor
would
give.
giving individuality and identity to the particular product, became a necessary^ rt o,fjjip sales proceedings. Coupled with
the increasjr^ competition between manufacturing units and
the cost of Jhat competition, drivin -Jhos_e^_c^ninis to take
jT^anjJo"Heveloj^_market, the
all availatjTe
necessities of the
case forced^th^jnjLmjj^turer to give particular attention to advertising which provided a means of massing some of the
selttn^operations under
The
more
definite control.
During
down
been
tising itself
have made
involving, as
it
rop
study
of
fields
Some
problem.
may be given, however,
to the general efficiencies which govern and the need for further investigations, so that these shall be properly and reasondifficult
ably measured.
Advertising, in
consideration
common
with
ciency^Jts value
is
this
low
efficiency.
On
ac-
count of
its
measures looking to
and indeed
all
Advertising
of
its analysis,
Ideas.
made
As a matter
at the present
a fundamental change.
Like all mass methods of work, advertising
greater limitations,
is
bounded by
less flexible, and is subject to less change
For this reason, factors which assumed
is
WHAT
IS
ADVERTISING?
to exhibit the package in the public prints with all the finality
and vitality of the printed word, it becomes important that
By wrong methods
sible to
of publicity,
educatejhe consular
ftf
it i-vflhyiniiftly jtist-as
flTI
prHrla tn
*UKW
it
posas it
Not
is
ten over the spoken word. The intonation, inflection, and emphasis which add so much to_th_e meaning of the spoken jword
also take away from it the fixity belonging to the cold type.
Where
methods
business
entirely,
^^?*
mmmrn
is
it speaks truthfully.
This
of course, because the written or printed vQrd has
is
that
to Confront the
man
it is
not influenced
by personal idiosyncrasies and the fluctuating value which accrues from contact with an individual in a personal way, it is
affected by mistakes which are apparently of little importance
It may not be a very seriin the old method of oral selling.
ous matter to put your goods in a package which is not entirely convenient when you start to sell it, through a few salesmen, to a few people. Mistakes can be rectified in these cases
at a later period without causing
much
trouble.
Where, how-
ever, you wish to introduce this package to several million people at the same time, with the idea of rapidly acquainting them
with
it
it
will
you
will
CHAPTER II
THE WAY
IN
WHICH ADVERTISING
IS
Advertising
USED
is
the
ma-
liner
chine, or bulk,
it,
or to
act
upon it.
In some cases the printed method of selling in bulk is the
only method used. This is the method employed by the mailorder house, which secures its business by advertising in periIn this case the personal
odicals and through catalogues.
the
is
and
whole proposition is put
force
eliminated,
selling
his
to
the
customer,
approval secured, and his order placed
up
without the personal representative of the
called in at
seller
having been
all.
Where
The
is
Advertising as a Control. That part of any business organization which comes in contact^ilJiJLbe^public is the one
upon which the good-will of the business depends, and the one
difficulty.
The
to confront the
man
it is
not influenced
by personal idiosyncrasies and the fluctuating value which accrues from contact with an individual in a personal way, it is
affected by mistakes which are apparently of little importance
in the old method of oral selling.
It may not be a very serious matter to put your goods in a package which is not entirely convenient when you start to sell it, through a few salesmen, to a few people. Mistakes can be rectified in these cases
at a later period
without causing
much
trouble.
Where, how-
you wish to introduce this package to several million peosame time, with the idea of rapidly acquainting them
with it to the extent that it will became one of the familiar
ever,
ple at the
sights, it is
from your
possible patronage.
CHAPTER II
THE WAY
IN
WHICH ADVERTISING
IS
Advertising
USED
is
the
It is directed to large
ma-
groups
it,
or to
upon
In some cases the printed method of selling in bulk is the
only method used. This is the method employed by the mailorder house, which secures its business by advertising in periit.
seller
having been
all.
Where
The
is
I0
work of
may
be allowed
to continue.
and record.
The statement
of the salesman is no longer the only statement of the house; another statement is found in the printed
it
is
certain
necessary;
it
The
longer an entire stranger to the'T^rospective customer.
factor uftmie camic^^
in considering
the cost of securing business, and a certain period must elapse
before there
is
MWV
WAY
WHICH ADVERTISING
IN
USED
IS
Advertising can break thejground for the salesman by introducing the product, the service, and the house, and can
do this at a fraction of the cost of the same work by salesmen.
;
it
Eco-
for products
necessary
to
consequently the efficiency of selling is concerned with the economics of distribution as wellas wTfh the
the
consumer
The general
ture are:
the
are
"
~~*^~*
*-
consumer.
This
is "trie
method of
distribution
most widely
used for
all articles
Advertising is used as an_ecqnomicf actor in theuiistribution because its influence is wielded through a much more extended circTe than
4
trie
actual marketing
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ganization. Its effect, therefore, arises from the general character of its influence and the small unit cost involved
Where
to
To
To
1.
2.
act as missionary.
Where
2.
To
the consumer.
To
3.
ground for
4.
to
it.
is
established.
WAY
IN
WHICH ADVERTISING
IS
USED
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business,
has been found possible to introduce the buying entirely by advertising, or, at
any
rate, to
the advertising. In these cases advertising acts as the principal an4^direct force of selling, and the other items of selling
The Economic
products for
all
over
it is
to the
this end.
As we have
These differences
force otherwise necessary.
little more exactly, as they form n.Q.Ljonly
should be note^ a
A4vertising, because of
dividual at a
sum which
is
its use.
c\
p ^arn
mmt
which wo.ujd be
to bring the
required^
infnrmitinnJrvMir rmtnmrr
in nnjr nthrr
way.
the effect of the use of advertising has been, generally speaking, to increase the sales without a proportionate increase in all
the marketing expenses, so that the marketing expense, while
greater in total volume, was less in percentage cost on the individual unit.
effects
of advertising which
its value under
any given
set
whom
The
first
economic
The
salesman himself.
of a very indefinite character; the cushe comes in contact have a thousand differis
edy
this trouble,
in all this, to
some
extent,
lost
all
arguments
gi&Jil
sales-
whom
the
WAY
IN
WHICH ADVERTISING
IS
USED
15
formation
ter
is
is
Thus, in the case of one concern, the advertising department was created for the purpose of "eliminating a lot of correspondence with salesmen and dealers and defining the servbeing considered as the limit of its usefulness.
ice," this
In
some directions, the
upon the dealer and jobber
otherwise the distributor arises from the same cause. That
advertising has a tremendous effect upon him, apart from the
effect upon his customer, is shown by the fact that great inEffect
economic
effect of advertising
way
The consumer,
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sumer asks
for, instead
of using his
value.
makes
its
less
Value
The value of
to the Manufacturer.
the manufacturer
advertising to
value to the
its
sa^ms,
to hold in his
withouLa^roportionate increase
Of
in expense.
all
which
cured
it
is
it
the
power
to
do
all
the things to
has been harnessed, but the value of the power sein direct proportion to the efficiency of the equipment
it is
WAY
IN
WHICH ADVERTISING
IS
USED
17
in
ment
from
in advertising
it
is possible,
CHAPTER III
THE FACTORS WHICH DETERMINE THE KIND
AND EXTENT OF ADVERTISING
Underlying Conditions. The value of advertising is not
determined simply, or chiefly, by the amount, measured in
terms either of dollars, of space, or of strength of appeal; like
any other force, its value is determined largely by the conditions surrounding its application.
These conditions must
be assembled and their several factors analyzed before deciding upon the amount or kind of advertising to be used in any
given case. Unless this is done, the size of the appropriation
and the plan of expending it will have to be based upon a combination of guess and personal experience
no adequate basis
for defining the place of advertising as a regular part of the
sales operations.
The
do
its
The
considera-
first
how
tion in determining
may
question.
18
goods
in
vitally
19
important in connection
consumer or through
dealers,
it
often hap-
usually covered by the sales organprovided proper intensive means were used to defull possibilities of the territory.
the
velop
These principles are even more strongly applicable in cases
is
ization,
economy could be
narrower
effected
by more intensive
efforts within
limits.
Other factors, of course, have to be analyzed with reference to these general considerations.
Among them are the
possibilities of expansion of the market, which may make it
desirable to advertise in a wider territory than that immediately surrounding the factory. The future output of the busijustify plans w hich would not be efficient, judged
purely from the standpoint of present necessities.
ness
may
20
The
total
it is
sell
It
pansions of the business would require expansion of the territory, or whether it might be taken care of by an increased percentage in the same territory.
unit by advertising.
The
buying
by
form
of
remains
hence
constant;
advertising
any
practically
the amount of profit to be derived by securing its trade will depend upon the amount it consumes.
Suppose, for instance, the total consumption of the business is 1,000,000 packages a year, and our output is 100,000
packages a year. It will then be necessary for us to get 10
per cent of the business. If the buying unit is a person, as in
the case of a breakfast food, and the population of the territory
one
I
is
unit.
business,
would be:
Price of one unit
Or
if,
as
is
number of times
it
is
five
times
impossible to determine
securJor one
unit,
it is
determinethe^gross
profit,
andjfrom that
2I
As
we
the percentage
10 units.
the time
The
of salesman
square mile
make a preliminary
1.
The percentage
2.
3.
4.
The
The
buying
unit.
cent, in
tended.
territorial limits
With weak
is
22
whether he
sells
manner
Value of
Value of 10 units
^_
5 units
as
_.
against
square mile
trade.
The
price at
which an
article is to
upon the cost and value of the services rendered by the manufacturer in manufacturing and selling. In point of fact, the
rnnHiHnn o f fVip^narkpt with reference to the supply and deof the product actually has greater influence in determin-
mand
ing the price aLwJaich^th? product can be sold in order to dispose of the output.
is
enough to
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it
put
viduaj.
it
in another
depends urjonjhe value_pf the indiservice and the strength of the buying habit to which
way,
it
appeals^
In all cases, of course, price has a certain amount of influence because the great bulk of the buying public for almost
any commodity is obliged to figure costs so closely that^rjrice
much
2, 3,
and
shown
service are
The
ness secured
is
therefore mutual.
The percentage
of business
work of the
Packages.
alsoJ2_studied.
organization.
it
buying public with the package conis of utmost importance that this
24
by the
fact that
is
in packages of various sizes, it has been found that only onethird to one-sixth of the number of sizes ordinarily supplied
Any
most convenient
size.
it
what
is
the
frequently
quite inconvenient. One manufacturer of a certain product determined to put upon the
size
chosen
is
made
it
defeat
its
own
object.
first
considered.
In the
and
distinctive
competitors.
new
25
Buying Habits.
The
analypjff
t9...b?
may
followed.
same manufacneed
to be used.
2.
It
amount of
effort required
by
its class,
than
its
hm
mdicateTthe
d^gr^r*
an
influ-
a differ-
The apparent
quently offset
money
is
fre-
individual.
the length of time usually necessary to secure a certain perIn some lines it is easier than, in
centage of the business.
others to swing the buyer from one brand to another.
When all the factors named above have been analyzed and
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Economic Use.
The economic
value of ad-
and discrimination of
the buying habit. Most staples are bought without discrimination between individual producers.
Grades are standardized
and within the same grade price is the controlling factor.
Changes
in the
is little
'
staples,
stances, this tendency is due less to the attempt to market increased supplies than to a desire to stabilize the market already
and to protect good-will. Such attempts have reaof success where they represent a real and
chances
sonable
demonstrable service to the buying public.
established
The economic value of advertising is greatest with specialized goods in which the skill of the manufacturer or his special
advantages in materials enable a differentiation to be made be-
that
would be of
interest to the
buying public.
There are
27
it is
the total
the
The
Unfortunately, this is not always the case. Oftentimes the business has grown simply through the accumulation
concern.
scientific
such study
may
not be seriously
felt until
is flexible
an advertising policy
advertising
is
con-
and can be
conditions.
When
work
is
is established,
is
completely
formulated.
Personal selling may be likened to a hand-operation. Mismay be remedied by the skill of the operator and may
even be turned to advantage. Advertising is like a machine-
takes
28
in
advance so as to
affect
offset difficulties
which might
ruin the
Information should therefore be secured and properly used in devising a plan which can consistently be main-
machine.
tained.
It
monopoly.
There are also sometimes abnormal conditions of trade
in which the relationship of supply and demand is materially
for example, the available supply of a product
is inadequate to meet the normal requirements of the buying
public, and attention is therefore focused upon materials and
altered.
When,
own
limited experience or to
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there
is
no
upon an ap-an
and
advertising
campaign.
undertaking
propriation
factors entering into marketing before deciding
CHAPTER IV
THE ORGANIZATION AND THE PRODUCT
The Sales Force. The value of the advertising force is affected to a considerable degree by the other marketing forces
of the business. Chief among these is the sales organization.
With this the advertising man must work in close touch, and
it is
It is
in a certain territory.
He
should
know how
they -solicit business, whether they ^aell to the ultimate user or to middlemen, and whajt_service^if any, they give
the buyers kuaddition trr-tekiflg orders.
He should know
whether they operate-Jfom-Jbranches or directly from the factory headcjuarters, and under what system. He should know
how they are kept in touch with the main office personally
or by correspondence and reports. He should know the extent
and character of their sales collectively and individually, how
they are hired and trained, how they are paid, and as
thejr attitudeis
toward advertising.
Often
it
will
More important
still,
Do
2.
they specialize
ness ?
3.
member of
upon
specific
lines
of the
do
busi-
What
in
the
in
any
Familiarity with these instructions is of extreme importance to the advertising man because they represent the con-
The Product.
to
it is.
its
visualized
32
possible line of
The history and the practice of the organization furnish one indispensable means of securing this result.
Study of the product should not only go back to the source
petitors.
from which
place where
it
go forward to the
it is consumed.
Indeed, the buyer's viewpoint
toward the product is often more illuminating than anything
an investigation to discover
by
all
those
for resale.
who
in just
it
either
what esteem
for their
it
own
is
held
use or
purchase
with reference to the class to which
Its position
important to know what technical information is required in buying or using the product. Education of the consumer may prove to be one of the necessary purposes of adIt is
This education
not be merely to teach the consumer to appreciate the product, but also to show him how to
get the best service from it. The task of selling a complicated
vertising.
may
Whatj/ilue_dpes he attach
and how does he discriminate between the product and
to
it
competitors?
Even
The automobile
mobile business.
itself
is
rarely
if
ever
unacquainted with the name arid characIn some lines ofof the particular car he chooses.
bought by one
teristics
who
in the
An
frequently differences.
33
is-
accessories, however,
car, the
buyer
asks for them by the name in less than one-third of the cases.
Some of the supplies required for the running of the car are
asked for by brand in only 10 per cent 'of the cases. Similarly,
in the field of household utilities, it has been found that the
where discrimination
discrimination.
Channels of Distribution.
affects in
i.
ducer
is
directly in
34
money
2.
retailer to
consumer. Here
may add to or
from the force of advertising. This method is used
with those products consumed by the general public which are
there
is
efforts
detract
sumer.
From manufacturer through jobber and retailer to conHere we find two factors through which the response
secured from advertising must pass before it reaches the adMost supplies used by tKe general public and many
supplies used by business pass through these channels.
vertiser.
4.
From
re-
This
or through jobber and retailer to consumer.
method is used with a large number of perishable food products.
It is also used with many products which do not reach
tailer
manu-
tion in method.
it
was wise
to trade
product
could be handled direct through retailers in other territories.
In some problems which the advertising man has to face, the
35
question of exclusive jobbing arrangements and exclusive retail arrangements will become important.
Choice of any
method of
distribution will
and
price.
greatly.
The
In a
field
precision, the factor of quality dominates and the organization which has established *a reputation for this does not find
With
question of quality develops into one of attractiveness in connection with the package^ so that even where the actual products in competition are practically equal in quality, the character of the package has been sufficient to differentiate the
prod-
uct in the
minds of the
public.
quality, price and attractivenessshould be carefully studied by the advertising man who is planning a campaign. He should be thoroughly acquainted with
the status of the product in the competitive market, not
only the
by the
minds of consumers.
CHAPTER V
PURPOSE OF CAMPAIGN
Establishing Reputation.
is
Although the
final effect
vertising
the specific purpose for which the campaign
This purpose may be any one of a number,
is
may
of ad-
not be
undertaken.
and should be
It is
their
and
association
is
PURPOSE OF CAMPAIGN
organization by suggesting, not so
individual character of its actions.
much
its
37
repute, but the
which requires
this point of
view
Extending Uses.
much
business
as
Where an
would
under the usual method of consuming the product, it has frequently been able to discover new uses for^he product which
could be suggested to the general public, opening up new lines
of consumption and consequently new lines of sale.
This
has, in fact, been one of the most important selling and manufacturing developments of recent years, and in it the advertising man has had a considerable share. With his keen appreciation of the value of the new thing, the new idea, the new
suggestion, he has seized upon discoveries of the manufacturer
as opening up the way for an additional appeal to the public
and an additional value in his work. Sometimes this extension of use has required the entry into advertising fields different from those required by the original problem; in other
cases it has meant merely a rearrangement of the old advertising
entirely
new development.
In
38
any case the choice of the media is subject to a somewhat different consideration, where this is the purpose of the campaign.
Gaining Distribution. Probably a considerable number of
advertising- rampa.ig-n which are undertaken, particularly by
young rnr^rerr^ are for the purpose of gaining a larger distributiorL^of the^ product, either over a
Where
distribu-
must be
intensi^jdy
We
is
We
new phrase
we
vitally interested
service-
PURPOSE OF CAMPAIGN
39
which he uses
is
therefore necessary.
mortality of accounts
it
should be and
it
was
the output.
means of
not merely the reasons why the product should be bought, but
the advantage of its continuous use.
life.
It is
not con-
much with
cerned so
great
many
ways.
new trade-mark
no mistake.
is
is
them
its
value.
its
This purpose of
whole operation
is
Familiarizing, Educating, Stimulating. The purpose of advertising per se is to increase public knowledge of a particular
product, organization, or service, so that the effectiveness of
will
be greater.
In
its
PURPOSE OF CAMPAIGN
41
it must
always attempt to increase the familiarity
with these things so that they may become a part of the life
of the business man, the farmer, the householder, etc. It must
further be prepared to educate men in the use of its product
therefore,
and
in
how
to get
sufficiently stimulating to
it.
In addition
it
must
be-
The
may
be either one
all
of these.
wards
their
in
its
is
bent to-
no break
in the
Much
lem
in hand,
worked
out,
desire for
knowledge of
its
it.
CHAPTER VI
THE TRADE-MARK
Meaning
of the
One
Trade-Mark.
of the
first
constructive
is
the adoption of a trade-mark, or the consideration of the trademark already existing, with the object of determining whether
still
to be
many
tools, pieces
mark
write, as
were
ment
to accomplish
its
purpose.
While the trade-mark in itself is a very old method of identification, and while the law in regard to it dates back hundreds
of years, its extended use in the modern sense dates back to
the beginning of industrial expansion and the growth of international trade. Before that.time few of the products required
by people of various countries were distributed over any great
THE TRADE-MARK
43
As
was
be impaired
be
surer of
might
less likely to
in turn
at the
moment
of purchase.
The scope
and
is
designed to help
ready established.
44
The
particular trade-mark
1
2.
is
determined by:
to a
sufficient
that way.
In order to afford a practical and easy means of determining his position, the man who is using a trade-mark may register it with the patent office, giving copies of the mark, the
date of
The
patent office
2.
3.
proper name.
Conflicts
with
other
previous
historical,
marks
to
or
their
knowledge.
mark
is
published in the
official
by the
may
not establish
THE TRADE-MARK
Neither are these
45
all
the information.
all
files
representative of
not generally understood by sales and advertising executives that trade-marks are not property
they are merely an
identification and cannot themselves be transferred, bought, or
It is
sold.
They can be
In this respect they differ from patents; this difference must be, well understood.
business.
mark and
their trade-marks
is
to before there is
is
is
may
be utterly
and having
different customs
and conditions.
46
have secured a
The
colonies of
affairs
in others
when considering such questions. There should be no question about securing such advice as it is the only method of
keeping out of difficulty and getting results worth while.
Wholly apart from the legal
to the advertiser's interest to secure a trade-
Psychological Requirements.
requirements,
mark which
greatest
it is
shall be individual
possible
and
at the
advertising value.
Pictures (Old
Dutch Cleanser,
more of the
Scott's Emulsion,
Gold
Dust, etc.)
2.
3.
Sapolio, etc.)
circle,
crown,
etc.)
4.
V.
The
D.,
fol-
THE TRADE-MARK
47
how
repetitions required to correctly recall and recof twenty items of the four different kinds
series
each
ognize
of material:
the
number of
Material
Recognition
Pictures
Recall
1.04
1.80
3.36
Forms
Words
2.64
4.76
Syllables
5-8o
7- 12
3.96
tion is the
in the case of
most
appear on the shelves of the dealer with the tradeIt is worth w hile to observe at this
plainly showing.
articles that
mark
point,
where
name
it is
in order to be secured.
Where
of a trade-mark,
it is
is
entirely
With
48
that the
method of
name has
make it necessary
name rather than pointed out
Under such conditions a trade-
distribution is such as to
Neither of
these
advertising.
Coined words furnish one of the best solutions to the problem of securing a good trade-name. Such coined words are
different sources.
Among
2.
Tabs, Polarine.
3.
Combinations of
the company's
4.
initial letters
name.
or
initial syllables
Examples:
of
Reo, Armco,
Walkover,
Holeproof,
Jap-a-Lac,
Waxit,
Daylo.
5.
Holsum, Keen-Kutter,
Odorono, Ryzon.
6.
Klim
Examples: Uneeda,
(milk),
Shookid,
Exam-
THE TRADE-MARK
7. Arbitrary formations.
49
It
must be easy
to pronounce.
rect pronunciation.
2.
It
must be reasonably short. The length of Glycothymoline makes it almost impossible to remember.
It
gie,
Mum,
Words
like Zig-
silly
or
vulgar to many people. Euphonious words, especially such as combine the harsh consonants k, x,
or with the vowel o and the liquid I, m, n, or r are
usually good.
4.
It
One
impression of their character and purpose.
Vinol
contains
that
oil, that
might easily suppose
El Rado
device
from the
is
all
facts.
CHAPTER VII
THE CHIEF PSYCHOLOGICAL PROBLEMS
INVOLVED
The Value
In the preparation of
of Psychological Study.
There
some
however,
agencies
sionally overlooked.
are,
and
other
organizations
gations
as
a part of the
The GJrard
Smile
investigations
frequently
enable them to avoid errors
seri-
the project.
To the individual en-
is
The Girard
body
is
designed to
made
a quarter to 20c.
straight.
for
make
every-
sizes,
from 3
smile.
Antonio Roig
in
& Langsdorf
trator, or in the
E,tabli,Hed 1871
An
sion
gratification
50
buying or
of any part
of
the
51
process, a
is
The reason
for this
the fact that advertising depends finally upon the communication of ideas and feelings from one person or group of
lies in
persons to another.
The
original
or "direct to."
already been shown, are to direct established buying habits toward particular products rather than toward other products
in the same class of products in general, or, to direct attention
toward products for which the buying habit has not been established at all. The term "creating a need" is sometimes em-
ing power.
and women
advertising man.
Knowledge
of the
Commodity.
is
52
needs of possible buyers. This analysis reveals at once the nature of the task to be undertaken in the campaign.
It indicates whether the article will be
whom we
a reason basis.
It indicates
whether
suade him that the particular article will satisfy his recog-
53
54
its
kind.
It indi-
consumed
itself
is
or to
the
needs
of
the
buyer.
A Thousand
Are
Boating Pleasures
Yours With a Caille
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and lake
camp, the fishing and hunting grounds, the summer home, picnics,
anywhere and everywhere, without a lick of
work then you'll appreciate the value of a
It
these
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more or
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definite
stern.
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conscious
needs
and
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this
means
habits,
of
the
comTo do
specific
modity advertised.
h.
Where
to the
QunePorfabk'BoatMotor
thumb
to create mental
mena and
play instinct
human
behavior.
It
also
55
and convinced.
HER
And
That
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in
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the
advertising
Of
from
one's
important
than safety of principal and certainty
of interest. He who sacrifices safety
in pursuit of greater income commits
the gravest of mistakes.
definite receptivity.
The
first
two problems
They overlap in
some ways the discussion
planning.
interest
us.
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On
wt
will
application
send The Investors .J^ag-
our monthly
azine,
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CHICAGO
is
and
industrial
familiarity
Some
however,
of
the
deserve
matter,
special
chapter
immediately
fol-
lowing.
The
acquisitive instinct
The
last
two problems
57
here defined are largely problems of execution. The psychological principles involved in solving them are explained in
Chapters IX to XII. The actual work of applying these principles to the construction of the individual advertisement will
CHAPTER VIII
THE CHIEF HUMAN NEEDS AND THEIR
SATISFACTION
Animal Needs.
fundamental and
Characteristic
animals certain
Human
essential needs.
The
differ-
In the
species of animals, such differences are observable.
higher animal forms, for instance, we find the function of
meth-
ods of 'storing up food, and more and more aggressive methods of securing it. The care and training of the young, the
processes of mating, the incipient tendencies toward community existence, develop the needs of play, exercise, combat, leadership, and, to a certain extent, division of labor.
The
In this
call instincts.
These
instincts
58
59
and
left
Groups of
which
similar
in
character
these tendencies
were closely
or result, or in the situations and objects which prompted them, are
for convenience classed together and called single instincts.
mechanical tendencies are said to be instinctive.
When we
we do not mean
mind that
of movements which
all
occasions.
We
it
should be borne in
perfectly definite
and
mean
rather a
somewhat
distinct sets
same way on
loosely classified
set of special
tendencies being
more or
less related to
in general, to things
tive.
This
same thing
is
true of
all
the instincts developed in this way, their importance soon ceased to be wholly or chiefly biological.
Their
Though
6o
primitive men the instincts were few and comparatively simple. As the race progressed they assumed many new
Among
'Thank you,
dear; this
real
is
soap"
to
That Soap
is
and
disinfect.
Lifebuoy.
In
the "Lifebuoy Complexion"; for the sensation of renewed vitality and buoyant
"~
energy which it adds to the bath.
Lifebuoy
is
its
purity
it is
HEALTH SOAP
given to it year
the life-preserver of thcsk.it
Be
clean
manifestations.
61
With
the growth of family and tribal relationinstincts of loyalty, honor, obedience, and sym-
and reverence.
came
pathy. Out of
ships
part, be traced
Men.
Even
most
more
easily modifiable.
life.
perience.
Elaborate traditions, customs, and sanctions are develin art, education, and in religious and civic
treasured
oped,
ceremonial. These become early impressed on the individual,
2.
satisfied.
may
These
62
chivalry,
piety,
honesty,
patriotism,
purity,
tity,
Cleanli-
chas-
obedience, co-operation,
2V1ECCAMO
consists of bright plated steel strips, angle
No
Meccano
to $36.
Department
To
beings.
advertising
3.
In
illus-
achieve
ried
man
many
certain
sires,
and
values
of them the
all
the
can appeal.
struggle to
of these de-
still
more va-
distinctively social
arise,
values
which
one
group
from
other
Stores.
Book No. 5
community
of
etc.,
trate these
today
style,
at large.
fashion,
Ideals
prestige,
Meccano
Company
Inc.
and the
71 W. 23rd
dilettanti
these
no
Street
New York
The
less
building instinct
human
needs.
They
form triggers of
These
stinctive requirements
necessities,
SATISFACTION
in great detail.
All these
wants,
desires,
habits,
63
demands are
They take
the
and
we
what
bution
call
the
YOU Can
respond.
Each of the
companied
by
an
equally
characteristic feeling or emotion.
Sometimes this bears
the
of behaving or
of feeling, and hence
either a
a
is
way
way
either
an
to a Position
of Power
instincts is
instinct
Rise
The
secret of
KNOW EVERYTHING
SOMETHING.
is
to
ABOUT
tions of
The
knowledge.
ables
of
your own
selection.
To
be convinced of
the
this,
I.
C.
or an
An
emotion.
appeal to ambition
man
will find
it
profitable to
make
somewhat
detailed study
64
An
cannot be given, but an enumeration of the more important will be found useful in the analysis
of the commodity, the planning of the campaign, and the actual
of them.
exhaustive
list
in advertising.
Along with a
suggestive name for the instinct are given the emotions for
which the instinct constitutes the basis. The characteristic
in each case.
The
This
list,
and Its
Emotions
Corresponding
1.
Instinct
APPETITE
(Hunger,
To
Sensual
to
Tastefulness,
ant.
fulness,
Relaxation,
SEX
(Illustration,
(Passion,
Lust,
Love, Coquetry)
members
4.
DEVOTION
ness,
(FaithfulAffec-
Loyalty,
tion)
5.
etc.)
tion)
Anguish, Cau-
of
it.
To
To work
(Illustration,
plation.
6.
page 50.)
To
Ease)
3.
It
Enjoyment)
2.
instinct
Retractile
page 54.)
or
(Illustration
page
55.)
Instinct
and
Its
Corresponding Emotions
7.
8.
ACQUISITIVENESS (Pro-
To
giness, etc.)
tion,
HUNTING
(Cruelty, Ea-
save,
to
page
To pursue and
if
especially
gerness, etc.)
etc.
bargain,
(illustra-
56.)
power and
in
Related
motion.
to
SOCIABILITY
someness,
Lone-
Sociableness,
Hospitality)
To
10.
COMPETITION
tion,
Jealousy,
(Emula-
Ambi-
tion, etc.)
superiors.
(Illustration,
page 63.)
11.
To examine
SHYNESS
To
ness,
12.
(Modesty,
Bashfulness, Reserve)
which are
ORNAMENTATION
(Beauty, Display, Pride
in
14.
Appearance)
IMITATION
To
longings, and to
favorable light.
More
as
REVENGE
tred,
(Anger, HaResentment)
CLEANLINESS
(Purity,
WholesomeDecency,
ness)
To
them
in
others
crowd,
15.
exhibit
etc.
resent,
we are devoted.
To conceal or remove
filth
from one
page 60.)
Il-
66
The
and
Instinct
Its
Corresponding Emotions
17.
WORSHIP
(Piety,
Rev-
It
feel
erence, Faith)
ior.
18.
CONSTRUGTIVENESS
To
and success.
19.
SYMPATHY
Pity,
(Sorrow,
and their
allies)
(Illustration,
page 62.)
20.
CUNNING
(Secrecy, In-
trigue, Slyness)
21.
PRIDE
(Haughtiness,
GRATITUDE
(Thankful-
THE COMIC
(Laughter,
Amusement,
strategy.
To
favor our
own work,
possessions,
abilities, etc.
Conceit, etc.)
22.
To
Hilarity,
etc.)
To
feel
itself chiefly in
the
HARMONY
(Symmetry,
Proportion,
Conceit, etc.)
Balance,
The tendency
to continue or to effect
The
when
and
67
patent medi-
false pretenses,
may
be
made
distasteful
by the mere
fact
of
ways the
used
which can be
The experimental
methods have been checked up by the analysis of actual advertising campaigns and the detailed examination of the results of particular pieces of copy.
Of
THE TABLE
Showing the
stincts
and
OF PERSUASIVENESS
relative strength
interests as determined by
power
The highest
pulling
of advertisements.
possible value
is
is o.
Values
from
10 to 92
Appeal
are combined.
Strength
Healthfulness
92
Cleanliness
92
88
Scientific Construction
Time Saved
Appetizing
84
82
68
Strength
82
Appeal
Efficiency
Safety
80
Durability
78
Quality
72
Modernity
Family Affection
72
70
Reputation of Firm
Guarantee
58
Sympathy
54
Medicinal
58
Imitation
Elegance
Courtesy
48
48
Economy
48
Affirmation
42
Sport
Hospitality
42
42
Avoid Substitutes
32
Clan Feeling
Nobby, etc
18
16
Recommendation
Social
14
12
Superiority
Imported
10
Beautifying
10
be described by any or
all
in the table.
Obviously there
versal commodity.
is
as a matter of fact
Thus
no such
ideal or uni-
and beauti-
69
to
way
to the
commodity
first
thing
The
of relevant qualities
list
may
There
each commodity, or at
to
commodity.
Thus, if the commodity to be distributed is nails, the first
quality in the table that is relevant is perhaps "Scientific Con-
Then
follow, in order of value, Safety, Durability, Quality, Reputation of the Firm, Guarantee, Economy, and
Recommendation by Others. Drawing up a special table for
struction."
the
commodity
nails
we thus
Construction
Value
88
Efficiency or Safety
80
Durability
72
Quality
72
58
70
Relative
Value
Selling Point
Guarantee
58
Economy, Bargain,
etc
48
Civic Pride
18
Recommendation by Others
14
as breakfast foods
Value
Selling Point
Healthfulness
92
92
82
Appetizing Qualities
Appeal to Mother Love
Reputation and Guarantee
Medicinal Properties
70
58
50
48
42
42
12
Imported
18
IO
CHAPTER IX
THE CHIEF CLASSES OF ADVERTISEMENTS
Functions of an Advertisement.
dividual advertisement
campaign
in
which
in-
is
it is
all
of the functions
Attention
Interest
Desire
Conviction
Action
4
5
man
will
is
delivered.
It is
mind through
not spoken but printed; its symthe eye, not the ear. The actual
72
groups.
The
functions of a complete
advertisement correspond closely to those of a complete sales
appeal as described above, though the advertisement may not
selling.
In fact
it
may
It is
From
fol-
lows:
1
3.
4.
5.
To
To
To
To
To
securing
any particular
initial attention,
for instance,
case.
The problem of
may
be paramount, es-
In such a case,
lay most stress on this function, or another kind of advertiseor product.
who
appreciate choice
designs, know solid
worth, and approve of
a selling plan that saves
them fully one-half store
prices.
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Measure out
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....
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packed
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74
The Publicity Advertisement. T h e publicity advertisement frankly ignores a part of the work of the sales appeal.
It
all
Some
nearly complete.
Closely similar in general appearance, but quite different
is the class of
These take
publicity advertisements known as "reminders."
for granted a previous association with the goods (either
through experience or through previous appeals) and seek
only to direct the response.
Advertisements on bill-boards and car-cards are likely to
be of this class, since they largely supplement newspaper and
magazine advertisements, and are close to the source of buyAnother factor which tends to suggest publicity advering.
tisements as suitable for outdoor signs is that they are viewed
by the average passer-by for so short a time that a complete
often impracticable.
publicity advertisement is by no
advertisement
The
is
medium and
and the
like.
means confined
It is
found
to
in almost
every kind of
is
The
Classified Advertisement.
advertisements are
commonly
"Want
ads," as classified
kind
75
is
not
unlike that of the reminder type of publicity. They are constructed with little or no reference to the tasks of getting
attention or of fixing an impression.
and the
restrictions usually
such as to
The
make them
his response.
Sometimes
ing, or inducing, as
much
is
attention
Reflex Appeals.
acters in action.
in store
made
The usual purpose
is
is
momen-
tarily, and possibly turn him toward some other form of advertising appeal which accompanies the reflex appeal.
Short-Circuit Appeals.
Making "Dreams"
Come True
Depends
Coffee
mind.
Not
If
is
for
largely
upon
clear thinking.
all
enemies of a clear
to
"do
things,"
POSTUM
" There's a Reason"
Postum Cereal Company, Limited,
OnL
"Human-nature" advertisement
76
U.
S.
A.
specific instincts,
feelings,
77
emotions, or ideals
The following
classification indicates
some of the
articles
2.
3.
Articles that
the
like.
safety or
members of
his famlonger
such
as
insurance, safety devices, revolvers, etc.
ily,
4. Most foods and drinks and smoking materials, especially those bought for enjoyment rather than for
of the individual or
life
ale,
grape
Long-Circuit Appeals.
utilities,
articles that
argument
They
in words.
There, Gentlemen,
is
"
"
able Tread
Under
TO DEALERS
My
When
perfected
to
of
Tread. 1
Consumers. So
"The
T<
f Ti,
Next
of tire
this:
steel studs
for
' '
O. A. BRICTSON, President
BrieUon M'fg Co., 1921 Brictson Building. Brooking.
S.
O.
Address.
Long-circuit advertisement
78
Cct Out
and Mail This
Coupon Todajr
0. A. Briction. Pret't
1921 BrictioD Building,
Brookintt. S. D.
79
is
generally appropriate:
Articles for business, agricultural or industrial purposes, such as machinery, office appliances, agri-
2.
board, lumber,
etc.
Articles that are bought not for their own sake but
as accessories, such as automobile tires, lubricants,
3.
etc.
where competition
keen, such as
4.
Articles in fields
5.
and bonds,
is
aj>
4.
Rationalization Appeals.
common
The
One
human beings is to
or
vote
on
emotional
act, judge, believe,
instinctive,
grounds,
and then after the act is committed, to try to justify or defend
volved.
it
by
auto-
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gl
little
influence
but logical reasoning in the copy; the emotional or short-circuit appeal is cared for by the accompanying illustrations or
other display elements.
We may
our minds.
The
The
actual sale
not want her motive too strongly insisted upon, and the latter
part of the advertisement suitably rationalizes the purchase.
CHAPTER X
SECURING AND HOLDING ATTENTION
is
to be seen.
The
Attention Incentives.
Unless
it
vital
increase in value
is
(and cost). The law of diminishing returns operates, whereby the attention value increases more slowly proportionately
than the amount of space. This increase in value is approximately the increase of the square root of the space. Thus a
half-page is not four times as valuable as an eighth page; it
is
only twice as valuable.
first
num-
use the same copy in a full page, expecting to get 400 inquiries.
To his surprise he secured only about 200. Numerous ex-
perimental tests of other kinds together with practical experience have demonstrated conclusively that the square root law
holds good with respect to attention value as well as to number
of inquiries.
From
this
law
it
83
the smaller the profit, the smaller the most favorable amount of
space. There are many cases which justify the use of full
pages, or double page "spreads" even, because the cost of the
either
space is small in comparison to the profit from sales
size.
maximum
The
covers, inside
most valuable
in the publication.
per cent stronger attention value than the back section. This
is partly because the section is smaller and partly because the
84
tend toward equalization, due to the presence of reading matter next to practically all the advertisements.
The partial
many
19%
28%
33%
$0%
23%
16%
53%
44%
$6%
85
pages.
The
White Space.
The
attention value of
an advertisement
The
is
is
required.
Somewhat
Contrast.
attention
amount
may
type, etc.,
86
thus giving
The second duty of an advertiseThis does not mean necessarily a wordfor-word reading of the entire text matter. It does mean long
enough and close enough attention to grasp the salient features
Interest Incentives.
ment
is
to be read.
conveyed
essential message,
whether
this
message
Hence
we must
The mechanical
not accomplish this. They secure the eye, but not always the
mind.
Such impressions as they do make rarely have any
close connection with the
87
in-
terest incentives.
The
Novelty.
an advertisement
This novelty
shall be novel and distinctive in character.
or
the
the
in
the
be
illustration,
arrangement,
copy itself.
may
There is one danger to be guarded against namely, that of
attracting attention to the device as such, rather than to the
which
commodity, argument, or
ness in an advertisement
selling point.
is
likely to be
cess.
Pictures and
illustrations
of
thing,
and when
this action
is
tised.
arm or
attention
Color
Color.
and
is
is
the time.
Lately
uses.
Among
88
1
To
To
more
effective dis-
etc.,
5.
To
To
To
6.
To
4.
etc.
"Color."
Arrangement.
Proper arrangement of the materials
which compose the advertisement is an important factor in
securing and holding attention. Shape, borders, lines, perspective, direction, and similar structural elements, all need consideration to secure a combination which shall satisfy the eye
and yet offer it a pleasing field of exploration. The material
should be complex enough to invite several fixations of attention and yet so unified and balanced as to constitute a single
field of interest.
89
it
limit for
an
all
effective headline
five
or six
etc.,
several
CHAPTER XI
ESTABLISHING ASSOCIATIONS
Importance of Association.
The
third
All the
is
Too
often
advertiser's
in
it is
an impression that
repetition of the
will be sufficient to
sale.
stamp
This
breed contempt. What is even more necessary is that an association or connection be established such that, given a moment
of need, the
than the
is
the task of
advertising.
ESTABLISHING ASSOCIATIONS
91
nected as
of Contiguity.
Damon and
Pythias.
The
repetition of the
word
to think of
The
equally well be in a picture or even in other symbols.
illustration of the breakfast table with its bubbling percolator,
or the after-dinner group with their demi-tasse may be equally
as effective as the word "Coffee" in connection with the name
"Yuban."
One
to be
found
Castoria."
More
may
tiguity really
of sequence
tells
work more
easily
g2
in
that
is,
in another.
"Forward
This
is
lively,
and more
form of
motor pro-
associations/'
it
in the
as the
rather
in the
ment
to an explanation of the need it will serve. The accompanying illustration will show the difference between an advertise-
ESTABLISHING ASSOCIATIONS
Curtis and
Family Portraits
The Copley
Curtis and
Cameron
Best of Gifts
Boston
The
set up by every reading.
need (gift) suggests the general
(portrait)
this
Prints
Family Portraits
Prints
commodity
Cameron
The Copley
in
Mass.
Boston
93
in
Mass.
The Law
of Feeling Tone.
Associations accompanied by
reinforced
tend
be
and made more permanent.
to
pleasantness
Associations accompanied by disagreeableness tend to be
to disappear more quickly. Thus,
a warning of the evil results that may follow the use of a substitute commodity is likely to be less effective than a statement
The
94
Here
ciation of his
The
of need.
success
We
The Law
of Fusion.
do not always analyze our feelof
and
disagreeableness, strain and relaxagreeableness
ings
ation, comfort and distress, so as to attribute them solely to
colors
all
we do
tends to spread over the whole experience, including the association presented.
The association will gain or lose effectiveness because of the
way
it
is
company
in
extremely
important
for
strictly
psychological
word may
association
it is
ESTABLISHING ASSOCIATIONS
of strain
is
tising this
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attitude gives permanence to the association presented.
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Among
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Frequent changes in size or style of type are inadvisable, because each one requires a readjustment of the eye.
The printed lines should be of uniform length, and
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ESTABLISHING ASSOCIATIONS
7.
light
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enough
97
complete
serve
it.
CHAPTER XII
MAKING ASSOCIATIONS DYNAMIC
Laws
duty of an
In other words, the
advertisement is to influence conduct.
associations should be made dynamic.
Observance of the
laws that help to establish associations permanently in the
of Suggestion.
final
mind
pice-jump"
will
amount of
upon them.
immediately or
words "preciword
one
always calls up the
may
repeat the
refuse to
Various obstacles
tendency to
act,
may
even though the action itself may be posteven this requires an observance of cer-
To accomplish
poned.
tain laws of suggestion, as well as the laws previously stated.
method of appeal
that
is
First,
it is
99
and the response required. Short-circuit appeals will obviously be ineffective where the commodity involves a large exThe purchase
penditure and the need is strictly utilitarian.
will certainly not be made except after deliberation and a close
comparison of competing articles. Thus, an automobile tire
reason-why or long-circuit copy to establish a
dynamic association, whereas a complexion cream or a chewing gum may be sold through a direct appeal to the feelings.
The kind of response that is required must also be taken
will require
The
and mailing it
cannot be so easily induced as the act of stopping at a newsstand and exchanging five cents for a package of mint tablets,
or the act of naming a brand in ordering a commodity that
into consideration.
many
when
brand which has not been specifically named. "Consumer acceptance" is more easily secured than "consumer demand." In general, it may be said that the more difficult is
livers a
human tendency
to obey a
are no inhibitions or obstacles to
It is
and a weak
direct suggestion.
Forceful
I
WANT You
TO CHOOSE
100
It
is
not
The
point
is
Indirect suggestion
is
class
of a
Thus
it is
more
'Tut the
101
to
warn against
is
substitutes
amount
in es-
associa-
tablishing positive
tions regarding the commodity to be sold.
The more we
and Why;
which support
The mere weight of
reasons
them.
etc.,
are
in
as
arguments
logical
influencing
buying
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Among
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Yale
locks.
of the
star.
gested, the
Hence
it is
certainty.
embarrassment
likely to be felt
spelled
by many
is
it.
Repetition.
Repetition of associations tends to establish
also to make them dynamic, provided there is variety
in the appeal.
Pure mechanical repetition of an unvaried
them and
appeal accomplishes
annoy
if it
little.
nail in
my
The rims of my
same
point.
felt,
so
105
and Shoes,"
monotony
On
now
in the newspaper,
as to
its
intrinsic
to
its
weakness of appeal.
to this instinct,
the
presence.
make
to
itself felt
whom
the campaign
is
directed.
CHAPTER XIII
TESTING THE RELATIVE VALUE OF
ADVERTISING APPEALS
Scientific
Laboratory Methods.
The value of
the scien-
many
gists.
Through
to determine in advance of a
methods
often possible
of the most im-
it is
campaign many
portant factors that enter into it. Among the great number
of practical problems that have been investigated in particular
cases, the following may be cited as typical:
infringing trade-names, trade-marks, wrappers, etc. measurement of the relative interest and persuasiveness of different
;
106
107
sales points and qualities of commodities; studies of the influence of different. colors and textures of paper on the effec-
way cannot
many
instances the
exclusive property of the concerns responsible for their accumulation. Three specific cases may, however, be given in
order to illustrate the practical application of the laboratory
technique in advertising.
studies have been made of the relative "pulling
of
advertisements that have been or are about to be
power"
used. The task of tracing returns from single advertisements
Many
The
Pulling
Power
of Advertisements.
Nevertheless
it
is
appearance, arrangement,
style, etc.,
The following
table, for
example, gives a series of advertisements (indicated by letters) with their relative values as
io8
measured
in the laboratory
and
when
the
readers
to the
HO
Experimental Analysis of a Successful Campaign. The advertising campaign of a particular commodity had extended
over a period of two Years, in national periodicals only. The
by the term,
"inspiration."
the space occupied and the media used remained constant, and
the commodity was not one on the sale of which such variables as weather or time of year had any marked influence.
Nevertheless it was feh that the "inspirations'* were by no
means equally effective, and in planning the further marketing
of the commodity it was desired to make a more perfect campaign by discarding the ineffective types of appeal. Analysis
by the printer, the illustrator, the layout man, the copywriter,
and the field investigator proved of no avail Although each
was a specialist in his own field, no one of them could formulate a principle of effective appeal to be followed in the next
campaign, and so the materials were taken to the laboratory.
Tests of "pulling power," in the manner suggested in the
preceding section, made it possible to arrange representative
specimens of the advertising in a graded series. At or,
treme were the specimens with high pulling power, and the
series then tapered off in effectiveness, through good, medium,
and poor, down to the very poor appeals. With this experimental series in view it was then possible, by tracing single
factors up or down the series, to deduce certain clear-cut principles of effective appeal
The
niustratioos.
first,
the
At
were made.
single individual
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Dcoole,
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until at the
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effect
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seen to be less and less pi'ominent. The text at the upper end
of the series described the effects, rather than die mode of
tTH^ififf'Q
^tyy^i
ffin^i^^ic
three
Conclusions Arrived
112
of the laboratory
was
formulation of the
new campaign.
commodity should
It
and structural
commodity but should rather por-
common
It
instincts
name
or di-
and clearness of
toward
softness, vaguecomposition, tending always
ness, and dreamy indistinctness.
contrast, distinctness of outline,
5. Considerably
to
strictly
the
mar-
keting information.
Later investigation and the use of special methods of keying the returns indicated that the experimental laboratory order of effectiveness agreed almost perfectly with the actual
returns.
The correlation between the laboratory measurements and the business results was 92 per cent. This is but
one of many illustrations of the practical value of the technical laboratory analysis of the elements
tising
campaign.
CHAPTER XIV
THE NATURE AND PURPOSE OF ADVERTISING
COPY
When the average man speaks
of Copy.
Often he does
of
advertisements.
he
thinks
of advertising,
not know how large a part of advertising lies behind the adThe Importance
vertisement.
psychologically sound
to practitioners.
The advertisement
upon
to do.
It
advertisement.
vertising
message
is
display and the discussion of advertising copy will be confined to the message in words.
is
dis-
H4
of
fact,
every form of
may
not be
literature is repre-
We
standards of excellence.
is
in
no sense
The
point
is
that such a
judgment
final.
the
Town
Spotless
Adjustment to the Reader. This distinction between advertising English and literature has a deeper significance.
When
ing.
but also a mental sacrifice in digging out its meanideas from one mind to another is diffi-
The passage of
makes it.
That
selves."
Nearly
is
why we commonly
The
writer
all literature
ordinarily
may
of literature.
but
This
is
not so easy as
it
sounds.
he will read
The
it,
it
must be so
it, and
understand
clear
in
it.
a man
is simple compared
molding his conduct and directing his action.
purposes are the ultimate aims of advertising copy.
to the task of
These
latter
A Good Advertising
Style.
If advertising
it
is
copy must
in-
ing of
it.
Nor
enough merely to submerge his personhouse whose message he is trying to conHe must consider first and foremost the reader his
vey.
The copywriter's
character, his interests, and his language.
this.
is it
Il6
Writing from
this view-point,
he
man
in ihe right
though he
know all about his article and the company that made
he needs far more to know its market and the people who
use it. He must view it as they do, feel and think about it
needs to
it,
The
times
were many customers and prospective customers of the product who felt offended.
In their zeal
for adaptation to the reader, with a commendable desire to
get as much response as possible, the company sacrificed a
in Yiddish, there
part of
its
good- will.
THIS ADVERTISEMENT
IS
DEDICATED
an union of trained
a perfect product
The
world tenders respect to the man who is a masmeans and methods, for when he learns and
ter of
and
skill,
respect
are im-
of science
Newark, N.J.
Chicago
REQUEST
Pretentious
style,
117
Il8
Many
it
harm
It
THE TRUTH No 2
.
The only serious accident on the mair line of the New York.
New Haven & Hartford Railroad, thus far this > ear between Boston and
New York, was at Westport, October 3rd, when the engineer, with five
year* of clear record behind him, from some forever unknown cause,
passed Mven signals and warnings and took a No. 10 crossover at 50 miles
an hoar where his speed regulation called for 15. He lost his life and
the lives of six other*. Had the crossover been a No. 20, the speed limit
for which it 25 miles an hour the result would have been the same.
50%
the officials of the road are now figuring to what extent there should be a
readjustment of the time schedule temporarily for the winter traffic.
The New York and Chicago expresses have lengthened their time
for the winter by two hours and a corresponding lengthening of our five
hour trains would mean a winter time of five hours and a half for our present five hour trains. This is quite unnecessary in view of the fact that the
New Haven roadbed and rails are unsurpassed for solidity of construction
by any railroad in the United States; and if it is finally, determined that
with these stops at crossovers there must be a lengthening of time schedules
it will not be more than fifteen minutes for the five hour expresses and in
such proportion as may be found necessary for other trains.
CHARLES
S.
MELLEN,
President
language to the reader. Consider the newspaper advertisements inserted by the New York, New Haven & Hartford
Railroad at a time when public sentiment against it was espe-
The
intellectual
and conservative
119
class of people
them?
antagonistic.
whom
Did
No.
tuna* DUICMID
on Road
of Anthracite."
Safety
That's
means
efficiency.
Lackawanna
mile of
Lackawanna
track.
Railroad
The Road
of Anthracite
sentiment.
Compare with
Lackawanna.
of the
120
The
it
The
tising copy,
to
is
bears.
When
it
reaches his
has no competing attraction for the moment. Moreover, although this reader may be one of many thousands to
whom the same letter goes, he and all the others have been
hands
it
picked out in advance because they are alike in some one respect, such as wealth, education, profession, or social standing.
The readers of a newspaper or general magazine, on the other
hand, are alike in only one respect, their ability to read. They
Those who
all prospective buyers of the product.
are prospective buyers have to be picked out automatically by
are not
Sometimes a crude
the appeal of the advertisement itself.
method is used, resembling that of the letter, such as placing
at the top the salutation:
fun."
The
that
publications.
class
more general
publications.
Such
human
We
must, therefore, conthe qualities that are effective with the great
the differences of
majority of people.
nature.
121
ness.
The meaning
Vague
distracted
all, it is
it-
correctness.
why
The majority of
economy
tomed to correct language,
through the printed word,
at least in
if
I
Distinctiveness without paying
anything extra for reputation
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The Moline-Knight
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distinctive
and
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instantly recognized on the boulevard. It is symbolic of reliability, comfort and luxuriousness, and
is
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generalizations
122
of a cent
One average
the
you save?
Why
tion
by
all this
its
character?
gets atten-
bond
paper used by the kind of men and firms whose messages are important and who do not write for idle or
unnecessary reasons.
No man who
is
feels
any
Hampshire Bond.
makes
its
member
this
124
be incorrect.
Correctness
is
Paint Fine-ness
paint, to
as silk
ivory.
result largely
from
fineness.
it
little
be
and opaque as
Both qualities
makes the
man who
House
great
arbiter,
has
Style,
use.
There
is
paint.
danger
Due* Sty ITkilt LtaJvikiu im
th.ktf-^vt.l.rt^^aam,!,,
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in ttttl
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violating
these
principles.
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lin-eed Oil. J and 5 gallon
led
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in
third
requisite
for
the reading of
tisement,
nomy
it
is
his interests
125
the attempt to say too much in too few words. One case in
point is that of the Turkish bath proprietor who advertised:
days."
Again, conciseness is bad if it results in a vague, genHowever small the space, room
eral claim about an article.
is
to
The
Distinctiveness.
easily ana-
it is
easily rec-
CARTER
from
others.
Efficient Paint
s -
is less
though
Finally,
do you wantr
know about Paint/
rectness.
tinctiveness
definite.
What
lyzed,
and
specific
secured at too
SlrMfy Pur*
White Load
Fre-
b, . m,xJcm. Irapro.rf
Ctrnr
nu
If
lucb k ctl
nfw
nubliibed
mere
eccentric-
which are
at the
appropriate
to
same time
the
subject
Some boxers
and deliver
are scientific
their
they
Christmas
Grand Larceny
The Ancients borrowed from those
before them.
steal
They
and
All
is
It
priate
then, dfefigure
a fine
them
to
make them
as
pass
then-
women
beads of people
Our
English factories
models, but the larceny
use in
our
Christmas
Goods that
it
The
space
is
126
wastefully used
Westciox
Made inLaSalle,
Illinois,
awake
in
YOU
morning, snug
where
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and
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are.
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edged men,
Big Ben."
"A
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shorty brisk
men
let's
Big Ben."
You try it once, you try it twice
thing you know
good old Big Ben
best
He's punctual, he's loyal, he's big all over and good all through.
Calls two ways-five minutes straight or every other half minute
12.50 anywhere in the States, 23.00 any.
during ten minutes.
where
in
Canada "AlaJt
127
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in
La
Sallt,
/Oiiuu. t,
economy
ff'auM'
128
most
will be
That
is
the safer
power
that
selves
felt.
always unsafe when secured at the expense of clearness, correctness, or conciseness. In general, it
cannot be secured by straining for it. It is like personality, like
for
style,
and
Distinctiveness
it.
is
is
advertisements which are conspicuous because of their distinctiveness, such as the advertisements of Prince Albert, Com-
munity silver and Big Ben, were also notable because of their
economy. If an advertisement contains a real message, is well
adapted to its reader and subject, and is clear, correct, and conThis
cise, there is little need to worry about distinctiveness.
quality
missed.
is likely
it
will hardly be
CHAPTER XV
THE STRUCTURAL PRINCIPLES OF ADVERTISING
COPY
As the advertisement
Relation of Qualities to Principles.
is built from the standpoint of the reader, it has been necessary
to consider first the qualities which copy should have, to make
an
effective impression
qualities,
however,
in accordance with
is
on him.
another matter.
some
plan.
is
tive copy.
are
Unity.
Unity.
It
was applied by
tallized into
It
has
vital.
vertisement
is
we
130
The
first
mine what
constructive task of the writer then, is to deterbe the main idea the theme of his adver-
shall
the
When
this
it.
He
The
Catalogue Copy.
it
principle of unity
is
easier to state
The
result is that
effective impression.
The
that ever
Why
Why
is
is
Why
cultivation?
etc.
is
the
Painted by C-
T.iff.t.
(Jopyrieht
1913,
by
Co.
PROGRESS
Our wonderful nation is an ever-growing, ever-progressing
We have planned, we have dug, we have plowed, we
have builded, we have mined, we have, made and we have sold.
We have neither inherited our wealth nor have we laid tribute
But beholdl We are the richest of
upon weaker nations.
one.
them
ail.
Such
is progr
leader of nations.'
made
And
Pat. Sept.
15-22. '90S.
Violation of unity through use of ideas not closely related to the subject
141
132
it
have.
The Point
of Contact.
Unity not only requires concentramain
idea
one
or
theme, but also that the approach
upon
to the reader be from one angle at a time. We cannot in the
same breath talk about beauty and sanitation, or appeal at once
tion
to pride
is
begins.
Its sanitary feature kills
It beautifies the
home.
The two appeals are incongruous, and do not help each other.
One must be subordinated before the advertisement can be an
effective unit.
far
Again the point of contact with the reader must not be too
from the article or there can be no unity. When some great
it is
it
But
usually proves a
sage
article
if
there
is
133
is
a good
also illus-
That's the
button
Which you
will
Fownes
in the wrist.
GLOVES
are always sold under their own
name. Whether the words on the
F
3
NES
re
or
O N or oSSVKs the
famous "paring knife" trade-mark and
the word Fownes in the wrist are assurance of glove value, the world over.
S K
style.
If
West 40th
St.,
New York
Coherence.
that of Coherence.
134
close connection.
tions.
is
that does not attempt to perform all the sales functions, another order must be used. The commonest are the narrative,
company
itself.
It
may
it,
making
or the steps taken in using it. It closely resembles the process of induction considered in the next chapter.
it
chapter.
The
climactic order simply takes the various ideas and arin order of their importance. Often we have a
ranges them
series of questions, to be
series
order
is
The
climactic
useful here.
In the advertisement
"A
Giant
is
Awak-
we have
be
of
In mediaeval
bred only
the
Crusaders.
is
senger.
wars they
before.
service,
microscope.
Even today
utilized as
Bell
parts of Europe.
Policy
One System
Universal Service
order
135
A Giant
is
Awaking
Montana,
376,053,
'From 1900 to 1910 the population of the United States increased 21 per cent. The population
of 'the Great Northwest, including North and South Dakota, Montana, Wyoming, Idaho,
Washington and Oregon, jumped 71 per cent % It is the fastest growing section of the entire
United States. Why ? Because here is everything that makes for solid, substantial wealth
timber, minerals, water power, irrigable lands, stock raising, unsurpassed farming
facilities and three transcontinental railroads.
Settlers are now flowing into this Northwest country in thousands.
Cities are springing
Upas by magic. With the opening of the Panama Canal, Northwest populations will increase
in leaps and bounds.
have bought
We. have seen this time coming for several years.
outright the choicest building lots in the most vigorous and logical of Northwest young cities.
:
We
Maybe
all,
possibly
two or
the
three, at
lots in
cities in
states,
$500
In considering this opportunity, remember the histories of Denver, Spokane, Seattle, Portland, Omaha. They once were raw
The facts about this land are astounding.
frontier towns, now they stand for millions on millions of dollars.
You should read the fact*. Fill in the coupon below or write us a personal letter for full particulars. This kind of
Don't wait. "Write at once for our book.
opportunity comes bat once in a generation.
this
Co.,
Parr
._
Philadelphia, Pa.
137
herence that
we
find so
a string of "becauses."
of the same construction become monotonous and therefore
ineffective
good connectives.
Demonstratives; as
this
and
that.
The
Can you
afford
it?
'soup rightly
the minute?
keep house
when
right on
If 'you can afford to
without
Campbell's
Clam Chowdei
Consomme
Bouillon
Julienne
Printanier
Celer,
Mock
Tomato
Chicken
Chicken-Guraoo
Mulligatawny
Mutton Broth
Ox Tail
Aspirgu>
(Okra;
Clam Bouillon
Look
right
made and
Turtle
rich
Pea
Pepper Pot
Tomato-Okra
Vegetable
Vermicelli-Toman,
139
Only
The
Emphasis.
Emphasis.
It
final
demands
constructive
that the
principle
is
that
o?~
them.
But the
possibility of these
work
may
which
Proportion
negative in value.
To sum up,
as much
form
then, the copy in an advertisement should perof the sales appeal as is consistent with the
Victor Record
of "Celeste Aida"
sune by Carty a
Cart
M Rbadamc
iu
Victor
self.
It
actually^ Caruso
nificent
voice,
with
all
his /own
mag-
the wonderful
art,
bite
J.,
140
U.
Distributors
S.
A.
Aida
I4 i
ranged
in logical order,
It
is,
ar-
all
their importance.
CHAPTER XVI
REASON-WHY COPY
Nature and Value of Reason- Why Appeals.
Reason-why
lectual.
It
tion.
field
of usefulness than
human-interest
The
distinction
articles is often
The danger
of attacks on competitors
142
REASON-WHY COPY
143
is
petitors
positive appeal
is
al-
Drops of Prevention
may
and
established
is
o.r.
infection.
well
habitually
are only
follow,
it
warn
him
wrong one
just as useful to
from the
him to
away
as to direct
substitutes
field, this
have
appeal
entered
may no
new
positive benefits.
A
jj^
Hi
^^
longer
coffee
practical
IMPORTANT
itself.
imitations
Helpful Booklet,
may
"Home
not.
Hygiene," Mailed
and
the
would probably do
most
stress upon the
lay
substitute
It is full
FREE
Address
M
Lehn & Fink,
*SM
144
article
fills
choice between different bindings he leaps over the other deWithout knowing it, he has decided to buy the article.
cision.
Many
same type
the
Evidence of Tests.
The
preferably stated.
Testimony.
Facts and figures.
which the reader himself supplies from his own experience and
Of
knowledge.
almost equal value are tests that he can make himself, such as
the litmus paper test for acid mouth in the case of Pebeco
and the blow-pipe test on white lead in the case of the National
Lead Company's product. Even though the reader does not
actually make the test, the advertiser's willingness to have him
best kind of evidence is that
REASON-WHY COPY
make
is
145
it
Testimony. Testimony, the second class of evidence, consists of the statements of those who have used the article and
are in a position to speak of its merits. This type of evidence
has lost much of its force for thinking people, because of the
fact that it has been used in connection with medical advertis-
ing of doubtful character and because testimonials are frequently given by people who have not used the article and are
most
is
by
The
intrinsic value of
to the reason.
that
that
is
really valuable in a
who
are qualified to
with
confidence.
monial
is
It is best,
known
Records and
Statistics.
The
is
in
the
absolutely specific.
The
When
Significance of Performance
When scientific tests show that of the
power developed by the engine of this car
84.4%
is
up by
friction
(This
rial
onslrating
air-coojing.)
15.6 taken
When
same
car
(Even in
the
When, owners
show an average
same make
of tires of more
of cars of this
life
per set
When
remarkable in
is
Franklin
is
tion or description
light
not on asser-
There
etc.
only one Franklin chassis. But there are five styles of body
including three enclosed types. Direct-air-cooling makes it practicable
to run the Franklin, even in the coldest winter or the hottest summer
is
air-cooled engine.
The
basic advantages
of direct-air-cooling are: (1) nothing to
overheat in the hardest running, (2) noth-
discriminating.
Style
Light Weight
With no
water,
pump,
The
style
and Comfort
radiator, pip-
not
feats
itself
The Franklin
Such
five
F.V. si^ma,. r
as the
^a^"su"n'al^r'^ pi^"ur"c
TI,.
l
Send
of 100-mile
stration,
water-cooline systems.
(All prices
f.
b.
Syracuse
New York.)
Franklin Automobile Co.
Syru.. N. Y
146
REASON-WHY COPY
Instead of saying that one large
company has
47
the roofs of
given interest, not only by being concrete, but by being ex-pressed in terms of action.
cross-country endurance trip
of an automobile might have something of more interest than
along the edge of towering cliffs until it reached its destinaThis method is to be used with some caution. If the adtion.
simply trying to convince a few interested perusually better to stick to the conservative tabulation
vertisement
sons,
it is
is
of figures.
Deductive Reasoning.
begin the
work of constructing a
When
down
The
"A
evidence.
first
then gives the details of construction which prove its sim"Insures Light in Emergency," "Cuts Tire Cost in
plicity.
Half," "Three Lamps for the Price of One." These are examples of head-lines that indicate a deductive appeal.
The deductive order is useful when the general appeal is
one that
is
presented in
an attractive way.
It
Maintenance Cost
An
of
buildings in Brooklyn,
writes
shown
Our
analysis of
it
to
first
measure of authority."
The
maintenance of
the rule."
The Bush Terminal Buildings in Brooklyn, N. Y., extend a mile along the shore.
The net roof area of these buildings is 3, 100,000 ^square
feet
or more than 70 acres.
Every inch of
this is
and, since 1897, when the first roof was covered, the cost
of maintenance has been less than $10.00.
"We
write us
cheapest. Our analysis of first cost of application and cost of maintenance entitles us to speak
The
covering.
The Barrett
office.
5o
who
The danger of
gives
it
is
monotonous.
is
The deductive
appeal, however,
is
classes of readers.
The
concrete fact
may
be a
benefits
by
this extra
$200 spent on
no gear lever
profit is
in the
$2.90 per
tire."
On
may
new Haynes Car," or, "Our average
It may simply be a suggestion of the
Government Service."
obvious that in most
It is
little
has to be read completely before the argument can have much weight. It is not to be recommended,
publicity, value.
It
therefore, in
REASON-WHY COPY
!5!
It is
to
is
ductive appeal
the
is
a deductive appeal.
more
effective.
suf-
because of the prominence of the concern and the exactness of the figures. The
general claims, on the other hand, are such as might be made
ficient interest in itself to attract readers,
by almost any other roofing manufacturer and are not convincing until the evidence has been read.
So far, we have considered the reasonwere in the form of abstract argument in the
This is not always the case, though it is most
Point of View.
why
copy as
third person.
if it
Reason-why copy may be presented in the first person with the advertiser himself as the narrator of his story.
This first-person method has the tone of realism and
typical.
first
It
great deal of reason-why copy is written from the second-person point of view. Examples of this are numerous
in the preceding pages.
number of
cases
it is.
The
ness.
Reason- why copy in the minds of many people is composed of short, snappy sentences like those of a Brisbane edi-
152
torial.
tone
is
article, this
useful.
Some
and
emphatic.
Successful reason-why copy has refuted the claim that a
long advertisement will not be read.
long advertisement will
be read, provided
it
is
made
and
contains real selling arguments. If the purpose of the advertisement is to convince, it usually requires some length.
Deliberation takes time
and
if
the reader
is
to deliberate the
writer
successful.
and
man who
facts.
is
vital,
them
But the
will read
CHAPTER XVII
HUMAN-INTEREST COPY
Purposes and Methods.
Its
cuit" copy
the reader.
makes
Human-interest or "short-cir-
and consequently depends largely upon suggestion very little upon deliberation.
In view of these facts it is natural that human-interest advertisements often depend more upon illustration and other
elements of display than upon the copy itself. Frequently the
copy plays but a small part. It is not in any case unimportant,
est,
is
vidual of that
word
vidual.
from
all others.
"Down
to
Your Thumb
154
those
who
terest association.
The
writer must constantly be on his guard against elements in the display or copy that will distract the reader from
the idea to be conveyed, or associate some unpleasant idea
with it. In the writing of reason-why copy, however, he has
In
merely to guard against unintentional bad suggestion.
writing human-interest copy he is attempting to secure intentional
article
will
make
it.
How
from
on
It
is
as if
in
which
this
method of associating
HUMAN-INTEREST COPY
ideas
is
maxim
"A
155
is
Good
Miss
is
as
as her Smile."
We
body
is
yawning.
One man
The
copy advertising.
Articles such as
depend largely on
Arrow
collars
and Cluett
The
suggestion, of course, is
strongest when the person pictured is one whom we admire.
This point has already been touched upon in the discussion of
shirts
it.
"Prestige of the Source" in Chapter XII, which may profitably be reviewed in connection with the present chapter.
Direct Appeals to the Senses. The simplest, though by no
the easiest, of human-interest appeals is the direct apthe senses.
to
This almost always involves the use of
peal
means
illustration.
It is difficult
methods.
it
is
more
indirect
156
it
must be absolute-
and concrete.
The
article
he bring the
ence.
user.
Only
will illustrate
in this
way can
imagined experi-
this
is
hair.
Any
makes an
Good Taste
in Sense Appeals.
Although
it is
essential that
A
gum
HUMAN-INTEREST COPY
157
butt,
sell
find Prince
Char-
respect.
as Sweet as a
Cow's Breath,"
It
which the
made or
article is
may
it.
We may
We
it"
late desire
esting if
The
following copy
WE
PICK
The
fruit at that
hour
THEM
is
is
inter-
dew standing on
the vines.
When
you open
That
an
of appeal:
AT SUNRISE
among
is
this type
it
is like
in
We make
158
The Campbell process retains all their native qualand freshness and their delightful aroma.
All the other ingredients are equally choice and tempting.
picked.
ity
And
viting
in classing
in-
Camp-
bell's
Imitation.
effective, is
As
We
imagine
has been remarked earlier,
we wish
the kind
man
smiling as he puffs
their pleasure
What
may
give us an
and although
it
may
worn by
really nice
women.
The
great success of
McCallum
There is
hosiery advertising has been due to its restraint.
never any lengthy display of limb and usually there is not
actually descriptive copy except of an informative kind.
suggests
more than
it
says.
children.
are
their
HUMAN-INTEREST COPY
59
peanut butter, jam, grape juice, or candy, their physical pleasure is not offensive, even to refined people.
Few
and
pride, are
among
the strongest
In fact,
of
its effect
begins.
emotions
is
that
known
di-
as the inspirational
type and used for correspondence school courses and the like.
The reader is addressed as "you" and is exhorted to get out
of the rut and become a trained man. He is reminded of his
duty to himself, his parents, or his family. He is reminded
of his need of increased pay and shown the way to get it. By
these and an infinite variety of other appeals to ambition, love,
pride, or acquisitiveness, he is
made
it
may
be.
In such appeals it is necessary to put the reader in a familiar situation or one which it is natural to imagine
such
situations as counting the contents of the
pay envelope, figuring expenses, seeing another person promoted, or the like.
In the case of the business man it is likely to be perplexity
over some difficult problem; in the case of a woman, the discomfort and inconvenience of sweeping or washing clothes by
In any case the head-line must be concrete
old methods, etc.
and strike a responsive chord in those who are sought as buyers.
lL
i<r
J^HE
highest
ideal
of
fastidious
The
Liggdt's Chocolates.
charm of
Liggett'*
flavor
is
Chocolate*
why
but
If
there
is
anywhere
no
ySSSH
in the
Send us lOc
they are
is
realized
because their
lingers
we
stamps or
&
Canada
and we
will mail
you a dainty
tnal
package
Liggett, Boston,
in every respect.
160
in
irresistible
by select shops
00
confections
rich
United States
cities in
of
more
That's
never forgotten
are
lovers
craving for
Mao.
HUMAN-INTEREST COPY
161
Here
the
advertise-
visualized
Exhortation
or
advice
IT'S
comes with the box of 2%^.
But <4&4& are worth waiting
for. They, always taste just a
little better than you remember.
is
Moreover,
greater
character.
last
realism
and
It
stronger
personality.
a
chance
for
gives
colloquial
Bonbons^
Chocolates
^^
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64 IRVING
PLACE
NEW YORK
e&jt&r Cocoa
the greatest
drink for
young people
in chil-
you what
makes the difference
Yes,
tell
I'll
"You have
as
York
and
collecting.
You
know
That's
don't.
"Of
course,
other men.
spare.
have experience
didn't
But
studied
am doing
it
it still,
in all
every minute
and intend
too.
"You can do
"The Alexander Hamilton
to
Could
keep on.
it,
W.
Institute gives
just
such fellows
as us.
"It was planned by progressive educators like
Joseph French Johnson, the Dean of New
Commerce, and
&
countants,
of
Yale
Ox,
Towne.
it
right.
Then
they got th
best ex-
^A
interesting.
Send
for
a copy."
Alexander Hamilton
Ator
I
of
New
"They planned
these, departments.
lip,
W.
York University,
Jenks, of
business leaders like Frank A. Vander-
and by
School
University
Jeremiah
salary
Place,
New York
Institute
City
Without placing me under any sort of obligation nd me your new book. "The Ability to Handle Men." and ful
information regarding your Coune and Service.
: your name, butinew addrew and buiinew portion below.)
(Write:
gives
human
162
interest to a
reason-why story
HUMAN-INTEREST COPY
^3
The
ad-
The
dialogue
is
It is hard to
.sreneral principles apply to it.
handle effectively, however, because it has greater tendency
toward length. There is a temptation also to have opposing
The Story Form. The story form is one of the safest and
most widely useful of all human interest appeals. It is written in much the same way as the stories in the magazines, but
instead of beginning with the most important facts about the
article, it begins logically with the incident that sets the story
who
is
is
told
it is
is
impossible unless
164
it is
ment and
do not care
And Betty! When the last note ends as softly as a falling rose leaf, Betty sits there with her dear little head
drooped, her face flushed and rosy, the most splendid dewy
moisture in her eyes, and she just wants to put her head on
shoulder, and I know it and I'm King. I say it gently,
She
"Betty, come here," and without a word she comes.
cuddles on my big awkward knees and her head slips into
that place on my shoulder, and all I can say is, "Oh, my
my
My
dear.
There
is
is
suggestion
that
may be
left unsaid.
is
much
CHAPTER
XVIII
tant.
difference
all
the
word
often
lies
the
vital
appeal.
The
much thought
When
ture.
its
errors
166
sents an
does.
standing between the writer and reader. Unless a word represents the same thing to both of. them, it cannot convey the
message intended.
Good Use.
The
first
Good
use
is
the acceptance
good
of a word or expression by the majority of authorities.
In
the case of literary composition these authorities are writers
use.
is
and speakers whose position and reputation are unquestionIn advertising copy the standard is somewhat broader.
able.
It includes
Language
word
contin-
by the
ence.
man
of the street, they are limited to a temporary existFrequently the man who uses them holds them in con-
tempt.
In the
avoid French or other foreign words that have not been Anglicized,
and
he uses words
affect
with
^7
effect,
and
etc.
we
ordinarily call
have used since childhood.
Anglo-Saxon words
the kind
we
They should be given the preferPretentiousness at any rate should be avoided. Emollient and detergent have little meaning to the average reader.
ence.
class differences.
slightly different
from that of
in
Boston is
Adver-
Seattle or Galveston.
may
use language
that
smoking
tobacco,
it
is
men
only, such
possible to use
lingo.
It
advances advertising
is
making today
is
in the adaptation of
It is no longer necessary to
correctness that savors of pedantry.
Every
upon the
strict
principle of
structure
must be
How
Very Comfortable!
and
it
Pears' Soap
to the
Matchless for
the Complexion
Pears is the Most
Economical of Toilet
Soaps
its
because
Qualities^
Weak
of
Double-Lasting
is
'fill
/f
THE BEST
composed
of pretentious generalities
168
this
easy
way
Bathe your
the healing, antiseptic Resinol balsams spothe and cleanse the pores,
to clear your
several
face, for
the
complexion
clear,
fresh
dealers in toilet
same language
the
that he
would use
in talking to
them
in
convention.
Exactness.
Words
know
He
should
meaning.
Generalities are to be avoided and specific
instead.
Words
words used
and the
into
our wash
it.
wash
suits."
exactness.
We
in figures
^i
they must not be strained. When a writer speaks of the moan automobile as "like a caress," we feel that he has
tion of
gone a
little
too far.
may
It
help in
diction to see
how
is
general.
It
has
its
meaning
sound,
its
in previous
accompanied
it
mean
literally
experience.
to
Some words
that
mean should
be avoided
Other words are
make
172
enable the reader to pass quickly from one word to the next.
Harsh sounds are those in which close vowels and such
consonants as
k, g, h, x, etc.,
predominate.
They
They may
When we
Tone-Color.
Words
nity or tone-color.
tional diction.
When Vance
the curtain of night and turned the flash-light of his storyWhen the reading pubtelling power into a woman's heart.
lic opened "The Black Bag," they saw in its depths the
source of cupidity. Those who took the lid off "The Bandbox" found the story of vanity, love of finery, hunger of
jewels, and the intrigues born of deceit.
It will
last sentence
It
was a
best seller.
in tone to
The next
We
advertising:
pipe.
^3
The
is
third level
is
some
has
article
of
common
use,
fact
is,
for
of every-day use.
appropriate.
Beyond
language
that
may
and aloofness.
Highest of
all is
in presenting
We
restraint.
am
heart
the elevated
is
My
brass.
174
The important
The
effect
When
the
writer starts out with a vivid figure of speech and then drops
into the commonplaceness of, "It was a best seller," he spoils
his effect
tone.
The
Atmosphere. The last thing to be considered is the atmosphere of a word. This is a slightly different thing from
its dignity and its sound.
Its atmosphere is its suggestion of
place, or
of
life,
When
We
ter.
morning
appetites.
We may
is
ordinarily neutral-
of flowers
grown
heavy, powerful
Scent suggests a
PENALTY OF
LEADERSHIP
TN every field of human endeavor, he that is first must perpetually live
A in the white light of publicity. ^Whether the leadership be vested,
man or in a manufactured product, emulation and envy are ever at
lln art, in literature, in music, in industry, the reward and the
punishment are always the same. ^The reward is widespread recognition; the punishment, fierce denial and detraction. 1[When a man's
in a
work,
for the
whole world,
it
also
becomes a target
be
will
left
severely alone
tongues a-wagging.
who
the artist
if
to slaader you, unless your work be stamped with the seal of genius.
^Long, long after a great work or a good work has been done, those who
are disappointed or envious continue to cry out that it can not be done.
own
him
^Spiteful
its
little
voices in the
domain of
art
HThe
all.
little
build a steamboat, while the big world flocked to the river banks to see
supplant.
desire to surpass.
leads,
he remains
workman, each
the ages.
how
HAnd
all
the leader.
avails nothing.
^That which
is
176
Aroma suggests
fragrance and delicacy of out-of-doors.
or
drink
to
or
the
eat
kitchen
or the diningsmoke,
things
room, but no flowers of any kind.
To go
We
can, however,
make
and that
it
we
shall bring
them
into close
shall
be close to
we do this
touch with us and make a re-
If
Sentence Units.
Sentences,
to
be
effective,
should
be
accordance with the structural principles that are apBecause of the license
plied to the composition as a whole.
allowed the writer of advertising copy, and the general desire
built in
for brevity, it is easy to fall into the habit of writing fragmenwhich are not really sentences, but mere
tary sentences
groups of words.
There
is little
lowing:
All
work hand-laundered.
Prompt
service.
Quality
is
The
convince.
use of a few
these sentences
grammatically complete would add greatly to their effectiveness. If space were not available for more words, it would be
better to omit some of the ideas. There are cases in which
sentences may be mutilated to get them m the space, but this
should be the last thing done, and the words omitted must be
such that the reader's mind will supply them instantly.
it
177
its
closely
modifying
thoughts
Obviously a sentence that is incannot
be a unit. Another frequent
complete grammatically
fault is the practice of taking a modifying idea from its main
idea and giving
it
In point of
fact,
in short sentences.
most
If a
are chosen at
sentences
length
may
Long
sentences are
Coherence
in the sentence
demands
modifiers,
places.
The
changed from active to passive, from subjunctive to imperative, or in any other unnecessary way.
used.
178
form.
ilar
Correlatives always
is
demand
is found in the balanced sentence, which is a compound sentence cut exactly in half, with the two clauses similar in form,
and
The balanced
for
is
it
amples
easily
sentence
is
remembered.
The
We
No
We
can't;
we
could build
Proper connection within the sentence demands that unequal ideas should not be co-ordinated. And
nective at best the writer should examine his
;
is
a loose con-
compound
sen-
sections, this
better
always be avoided, for it does not show the true relation between the idea it contains and the idea of the main clause.
I79
devices in secur-
as
it
can be with
Verboseness
repetition
is
full
fatal to emphasis.
style
little
a glove of
illustrates:
marked
distinction
ticular
distinction in
fit
and
woman.
a sentence are its most imporand should be occupied by important words. Negative and unpleasant words should not be placed there.
In the
sentence, "Among so many investments it is hard to tell which
would pay and which would lose," it would be better to transpose the words lose and pay so as to end with the positive,
pay. Connectives and parenthetical expressions should, if postant places
Evening Post
tells it
today."
The
i8o
It
must be remembered that not every sentence can be emphaThe normal order should be followed unless there is
sized.
Three
is
if
more than
force.
Paragraphs.
paragraph
is
Its construction is
because
it
copy.
Its
it is
method of breaking
urally follows that the shorter the paragraphs are, the more
The whole tendency
attractive the copy will be to the eye.
is
The very
jects that
181
In other
The
and unobtrusive
Emphasis
in position.
in the
sentences.
this
Occupying
short
tion
been mentioned.
CHAPTER XIX
COPY AS AFFECTED BY MEDIUM
The
writer of an advertise-
placed in
it
whatever medium
Our
present
is
The main
is
New
Saturday Evening Post, Iron Age, and Life, but he does not
woman may
approach them in the same frame of mind.
all
woman
Within the
the classes
be adapted to them.
All that
is
it is
impossible to analyze
how copy should
in detail
necessary
is
them to
few important types of media. For convenience, we shall
consider only media in which a message in words is presented.
182
and
to apply
all,
183
how
it,
it,
this class
They
plete.
means
that the advertisement can be fairly comIt can be used to secure inquiries or even orders.
It
All this
can use the reason-why or the human-interest appeal. It permits the use of good half-tone illustrations, color, and, in
It should assume
fact, practically all the interest incentives.
that the reader has a fairly high average of intelligence and
education and should therefore be correct in substance and in
style.
Newspapers
is
rarely advisable.
National Advertising.
It is
commonly
rec-
On the other hand, they are read more hasthan the more costly periodicals and are shorter lived.
tically universal.
tily
184
must usually
boil
it
down
for the
newspapers.
National advertisements in newspapers demand bold, disThere are likely to be many other advertisetinctive display.
by
simple
methods.
As
other
to be bought
seen by people
is
when they
The
It
must
of
all classes
sive articles.
the
and give a
new
value to all
rest*
New York
Sales:
233
West
Jersey Sales:
Ellis
54th Street
i86
The news
journalistic.
quality should
This Man
news
is
interest,
hasn't
heard
the
the copy should always contain references to the war. When this is done
news
yet
But
too
he's
pricking
his
ears,
at
as
men
wise
the
news
ways adds
John
has
for
some
him.
Watch
expression
Monday evening
when the news
will
releal-
force.
Newspapers
Advertising.
department
upon
his
all
do,
Wanamaker men's
Store
and
becomes tedious,
it
suggestion
the
that
much
up
begin
to
develop.
the
partake
the
Many women
depend largely
and indeed
interest
character
read
the
of
news.
an-
latest
columns.
"Teaser" copy preceding a department store
bargain announcement
Store
The advertisements of
stores
news
of
Department
and up
to date.
is
is
to
interesting
Great!
That was his simple comment when he heard the
news of what the JOHN WANAMAKER MEN'S
STORE
was going
to do.
may know
tonight:
the savings.
it
fit
interested.
every pocket-book.
tomorrow evening.
announcement
Second "teaser" preceding a department store bargain
The
Pity of
be
ao
We
It
tbt
like
winter'.
Mormy
days
spreadinr.
cold, and dampnesm all
We
For
Annual
National Qearaway
of Men's Better Suits
and Overcoats
hedvj.
d
ea^'d,tt
5,420 brand
to
"pat spa**- of
toy pieked up from hia
t.lher-"0h. if la jut my
-ay. you must KM mind
The monkey
new
suits
and overcoats,
jusi un-
""h
of America
Zoo
In the
pssrahess
12,643
Men's Suits
and Overcoats
,
Lund
to
awople here
t"
is
<x>
them
to pick
thrown away
B
d'ln, youn,T.. .! ri
I* achool studyinc daily
laiaons whereby the bualmust be better and
..
wld
On
In
Fourth Avenue
.tS."'l
Suits
End
rr $14.50
12350
The White Sale
That Grow* in Interest
You can come u this \
enaker
Sale
after day.
White
of
day
Hi
Mission Furniture
Halved Prices
at
..v,, somethinc
before
ture
er*
Co
("The
Old
tor
worth,
$133,331
every room in the house
invitation
instead of $5
$2. so
tc
House")
On
and
On
Fourth Avenue
End
All
::;:,;;;,.
wT;
p $14.50
B
the >>5<
floor
$11-50
kind, u.l c
zsasflsfia**
f
4,156
pain China
loset
*I
i'.'R*i&
Fancy Overcoats
Serving tables.
tl. fl.50. $1 75
lld.$l.s Pair
lf,ery kind of
;s|$19SO
r
Plenty
of'
ir.de
'i^tiOvt rents)
living-room
this
to
Expect
of
Wanamaker
Sale
Sideboard
may
proceed
with
des-
Special
purchase
o!
j3o 5
a^i5Ser,a
JnVke";
ifht
blue,
nary
rcprnenutive
priced
houses ; and
Never^before
We
believe this
will
be
superb
much reduced)
overcoats
l.?B?...'cV"'
No Charge
sale,
for
Alien
(Size very
189
reason
is
that
it
terms.
The department
Newspaper
The methods of
the
small retail store that carries only one or two lines of goods
differ somewhat from those of the large department store.
in
is
Next
in impor-
190
The
(i
UR
lively
an interest
if
know
some
in
ity
if
little
anecdotes,
stories,
readers
essays,
all
epigrams
with
made to attract
who will look for
M*
umns.
The
^ Rogers
are
New
for
can be
isement
thousands of
small
wisely used
space,
./
Even
customers.
Gm
them
floor,
Si*.
advertising
or get a dis-
a"
*ul
his
into
messages
personality
little
Peet
talks of
Company
read by hundreds of
Street
car cards,
bill-
mediums
in their appeal.
They are
for the eyes of everyone, regardless of wealth or education^ Naturally they depend more on display than on copy, for pictures and color
all
Brief as
Ordinarily this
191
that
it is
man
arguments are of
little
as "Drink
say Kit."
Group
and
Publications.
At
from outdoor
and the
is
like.
reason usually command higher rates per page for their space
than general magazines or weeklies of equal circulation.
is justified
for
two reasons:
First, the
medium
is
which they approach the publication. To increase this advantage many publishers maintain service departments which prepare advertisinterests are
The men in
space in the publication.
know
the
audience
intimately and
department
in
who buy
and mood.
192
Any
most
effective in them.
ness magazines are read for profit and are read while a man
is in a business atmosphere and a business mood.
Mere
assertions or emotional appeals have little weight. The copy
must give facts and give them concisely. Charts, tabulations,
figures, blue-prints,
all
valuable, espe-
The
appealed
ple.
to.
vary
article
adver-
Take
They may
the case of building materials, for exambe advertised in general publications, contrac-
of the material,
its fire-resisting
be shown in comparison with those of competing maIn the contractors' publications, the copy may attempt
to show how conveniently and easily the article may be used
may
terials.
in building;
how
it
etc.
The
architect
may
Quoth Sullivan
was less than that. Then, Mr. Six-Cylinder comes along, going 30 miles per
hour, and rips up the whole pavement
We don't do it that way any more; now we use a
if
phalt;
Milwaukee* Wis.
Old Colony Bldg.
Chicago,
III.
Harwell Place
Atlanta, Ga.
W. J. Cullen
New York City
J. J.
Philadelphia, Pa.
"
"
lingo
193
in a technical publication
194
Simple,
direct
language
is
most
suitable
for
business
of readers.
This
is
Trade Papers.
techincal publications, to
resemblance.
publications are usually dealers who are interested in the article for resale.
In trade advertising, therefore, the copy
connected with the consumer advertising and may reproduce the advertisements that are being placed in general pub-
it is
Copy
for Farmers.
upon a purchase.
the quality of paper and printing does not usually allow the
use of a fine quality of illustrations. It is doubtful, moreover,
whether aesthetic considerations weigh very heavily in the
Is this
Doubt
is
with.
means
loss of time.
that there
is
But what
no connecting
is
more important, it
mind
last
this difficulty
Therefore,
it
sells
with
In other words,
probably price?
new
is like
less expense in time and advertising, and holds your customers from year to year
This
is
just
and the
this
over
attractive.
full details
selling plan.
less effort
and
If
what guarantee have you that the customers you have carefully worked up this year will not be worked away from you
this year.
195
196
of material, provided
man
it is
Hu-
is
The price appeal is usually valuable. Details in the construction of the article, even to the number of coats of paint used
and side-by-side comparisons with competing
are
articles,
frequently helpful.
The evidence chosen should be of a kind to arouse confidence.
if
Testimony,
expressed in their
own language
so
far
as
possible,
even
be slightly ungrammatical.
An important
kind of evidence is in the form of guarantees, either by the
though
this
may
advertiser or
by the
publication.
all
a sectional distribution, localisms are not objectionable. Analogies and figures of speech from the farmer's experience lend
force
as, for example, "Buy your tires as you buy your
binder," or,
"The bed of
the
wagon
is
only hip-high."
by
the illustrations, words, and other symbols used in the adverFor this reason, human-interest copy, usutising message.
ally
accompanied by
illustrations
effective in advertising to
important.
women.
which
The
tell
a story,
text
is
is
found
relatively less
aesthetic sense in
197
women
all
is highly developed.
Proper
of the things which make for ar-
Hand-lettering, liberal
beauty are almost essential.
white space, and the application of the principles outlined in
tistic
On
the
other hand,
taken amiss.
vertisements to
women.
used-
10% More
Your Money
for
Do You Know
That Lies
There
is
in
the Wealth of
Quaker Oats?
one grain
in
which Nature
Fed to mankind
stores an exuberance of vim.
or to animals, it breeds spirit and vitality.
this.
Among
the
Is
to high-class
woman's
publication, because of
notes
all crystallized in
authoritative American styles!
Also Quaker Lace novelties fleshcolored laces, delicate Chantillys, 42inch flounces, Margot flounces, Combination Camisole flounces!
We
have
anticipate'd
Fashion's
trend
in
The
but to choose!
QJJAKER LACES
Send
for the
containing
Quaker Book
style
gowns, waists,
of Fall Fashions,
1
for women !
suggestions
lingerie, etc.
Free on request.
PHILADELPHIA
Makers of Quake* taces. Quaker Curtains and Quaker Craft-Lc
199
wou/cfyou Aav^
in tAis 'Jerfume
HE test was made by 103
'Jest
representative
three of which were the most popular foreign perfumes and three were
of the 103 women chose
Co. Over
domestic, made by Colgate
Colgate's in preference to the imported. Before making the test 61 of
the 103 said they preferred a foreign perfume, yet when the influence of a foreign
label was removed 41 of these 61, or
of them, chose Colgate's first.
&
Every
It
shows very
woman
%
be interested
will
clearly that
it
has a foreign
label
does
is
the
First choice
First
lioice
of
9 women;
'
Colgatie'sl-cUt
Would You
like to
may now
be using.
mite May
make
COLGATE
Note
really prefers.
two wom-
._
2
Foreign Perfume
~
hoiceof low,.intn,Fi.iei>-nl'"lumei
-Foreif
First
choice o
~
First choice of
in
editorial staffs of
This
We will
make
45,
200
women
New York
and department
stores.
Even
as an inducement.
Premiums,
2OI
of
many
articles advertised to
women.
The
classes
discussed
and innumerable
own
and then write the copy from their standpoint. Only when
this is done can advertising reach its highest point of efficiency.
The too general practice of constructing an advertisement for
a general magazine and then inserting it with practically no
change in children's magazines, business magazines, and
women's magazines, is wasteful. While it may be true that
the buyers are the same people, no matter where they see the
advertisement, there is a vast difference in their mood and
attitude in reading different publications, and that attitude is
carried over from the reading pages into the advertising copy.
All advertising copy in class publications of whatever type
should be built according to the golden rule of adaptation to
the reader.
CHAPTER XX
COPY AS AFFECTED BY DISPLAY
Relationship Between Display and Text.
to consider an advertisement as
material:
words
the copy
ornament,
customary
and display
or text
etc.
It is
all
illustra-
these materials
such conditions
accompany
is likely to
it.
202
203
and
An
its
text
and
visualize
Many
it
as
it
will
have made rough layouts in the size and shape demanded and
with sufficient detail of illustration and display elements to
enable them to work intelligently with the finished product
always in mind. They follow this practice whether they want
an advertisement that consists largely of illustrations and other
display elements, or an advertisement that is wholly or almost
wholly
text.
publicity,
of
name of
a method
extensive distribution.
Inquiry Copy.
Where
is
204
broken up into
smudgy
lines
the kind that have been aptly called "eye-killers." Yet frequently they produce an astonishing volume of business, in spite
Even where
the picture is used in mail-order copy, frenot wholly or even mainly for attraction. Often
it is the illustration of the article to be sold, or of the booklet
to be sent upon request. It is rarely that the whole story should
quently
it is
may pay,
because of sufficient
many
205
Three display
its purpose.
often
are
Two
lines work well together.
enough.
These display lines should be in proper position and se-
of emphasis
nullifies its
The
quence.
important one
value for
Taken together
optical center; and the third at the bottom.
the three display lines gives the gist of the message.
This
form
theoretically ideal
is
There
tions.
are,
found
is
in
Head-Lines.
head-line
is
where display
Feet" to
"Warm
a medical advertisement.
it is
wise to
title
head-line
to a
advertisements.
newspaper
article,
portant part of
it.
it
should be short,
is it
206
possible to
make every
one of them
head-line
conform
to all of them.
Any
may
Head-Lines
Brevity.
Brevity
made
is
it
avoided.
The advantage
"Ask Bill."
must contain more than four words
put only four or five on one line. For example
If the head-line
wise to
it is
fact,
tire,"
207
Head-Lines Aptness. Closely connected with the requirement of having the head-line specific is the requirement of hav"Blind" head-lines, such as "Burglars" for a break"Off Key" for a coffee substitute, "How Very Comfortable" for soap, are of no particular value. Even though
they may lead to reading of the advertisement, they do so by
it
ing
apt.
fast food,
deceit
Many
more of them,"
its total
The deficiency of such blind head-lines is all the more apparent when we consider such apt head-lines as "Get a full
measure of
light," or
in a head-line
line
Originality.
is
else.
Orig-
in
a single
is-
208
power.
it,
especially if
human
is likely
form as
preferable.
How
and zvhy
titles
of
word
in the head-
The word
What He
Said," or
"The Smuggled
There is one special phase of self-interest which might perhaps be mentioned in this connection. Aside from the fundamental emotions and instincts of human nature there are frequently temporary interests induced by current events, by the
approach of holidays, or by some other outside stimulus. This
interest is frequently made use of to good effect
"Beware of Bolshevik Agitators !" "Earn $500 Extra Before
Christmas!" and the like, are head-lines that make use of this
temporary
temporary
209
There
is
of a dentifrice, the association of ideas would be unpleasant unless the whole of the copy were read. Of course,
name
we
is
frigerator Poisoning
Your Family?"
or
Die
in the First Alcove," unless the advertising exists almost enEven in cases of this
tirely for purposes of inquiry-getting.
kind they are dangerous on account of the unpleasant, negative suggestions they contain.
Tying Up Display Lines to Text and Illustrations. Headand other display lines should be regarded as integral
of
the copy and as such should be tested according to the
parts
The head-line should be closely conprinciple of coherence.
nected in idea and tone with the copy that follows: otherwise
lines
the interest
it
secures
is
mind
the text.
Yet oftentimes we
when he
reads
and the copywriter, which could have been obviated had the
man who
illustration
y'xty
Years
f Knowing How
Our Evening Dress Clothes Men's
and Young Men's are the very finest
that our Sixty Years o Knowing How
can produce.
Stein-Wocf*
Smart Clothe*
but
when
cheapest.
The Stein-B!och.Co.
Roche}trf,
N.
Y.
Our
Young Matt
'
Dress Suit
There
is
no connection between illustration and headline. The advertisement attempts to do too many things at once
210
2 II
should be displayed with some dignity and refinement. Cheltenham bold type and heavy-rule borders would be hardly
appropriate.
When the reader sees a frivolous picture of a ballroom
scene, it is somewhat of a shock to him to see directly below it
"Sixty Years of
attention to
When
he sees the negative illustration of a grayhard for him to grasp the positive apin
head-line
"The
the
Charm of Health," and perhaps
peal
equally difficult to see the relation of the stork picture to either
line implies.
of these elements.
it is
It is
Condensation of Text.
tions
in the layout
If such
is
then be estimated.
This is only one of the cases which frequently call for condensation of copy. The formula for condensation is, briefly,
as follows:
1
Omit
all
effect.
2.
Omit
all
words.
V,
strength,
druggist
have
it
Malt Nutrine.when miied wi<h milk or sparkling water, makes a most palatable and healthful
drink Mah-Nutrine declared by
S. Revenue Department 3 P UR- null product,
not an alcoholic beverage. Contains \af, per cent null
sdijs-i.qo pet cent alcohol.
ANHEUSER-DUSCH
Booklet 61 (beautifully illustrated) sent
The
ST.
LOUIS, U.S.A.
fre.
212
Omit
Omit
2l3
all
can
be spared.
may
CHAPTER XXI
THE FUNCTIONS AND ELEMENTS OF DISPLAY
What
it
is
in-
"art work."
should be
What
Is Art?
Among
the
common
misconceptions with
object
is
made
out of any
/CONTROL of
all
the processes
of excellence
and reasonableness of
price obtainable in
Each process
in the
Laughlin Steel
no other way.
manufacture of Jones
Company
&
products, from
is
controlled
conducted
in
works owned
and
by themselves.
Works
Jones
&
The American
Laughlin Steel
Single page
structure,
Company
215
2l6
The
depend upon materials or the person concerned,. or the date, or pretty looks, or any other tradiThe quality has two
tion.
art quality does not
elements
distinct
Sfeoe Shop*
4 West 38th St.
Separate Stare,
each of
Store Floor
itself.
By its possession or lack of these ele-
by
ments the
Men's Shoes
quality
is
judged.
The
first
element of the
3.75
piece of china,
tSM
Regular Price
art
is
that of
as
6.50
Men's Thomas Cort Shoes
and Leathers,
expresses the
it
element of
cessity.
Simon
and 38th
Co.
Sts.
the
in
arrangement,
wasteful in
blank
many
its
When
it
is
first
artistic ne-
an adver-
which
for
8.50
the re-
stances
Jfranfclfn
When
it.
all
made,
BENCH-MADE. HAND-SEWED
Styles
shall call
quirements of a thing to
sit
upon in the circum-
All
we
a chair meets
types
commodity
it
presents
present in
ment
it.
if,
in its
to
sell, it
cept.
On
man
is
the
He wants
desire for beauty.
And when he doesn't produce
it
because he's
made
217
that way.
This makes
somewhat a
beauty idea.
even beauty
GE O.C.FLINT
R.J.HOR.NE.R. Co.
may
be
stated
and
pressed
clearly
lowed
in
will
result
SUBSTANTIAL REDUCTIONS
10%
fol-
month of August
at least
in
result
as
RUGS
make, it imperative that they be greatly reduced to make room for our New Fall Styles
which
50%
FURNITURE
DECORATIONS
the
tions
TO
fairly
if
Co.
arriving daily.
Flint
beautiful creation.
20-26West36th.St
New \fcrk
ly
to
power
recognize that both of these
powers are active in beauty development will be able to create
in the advertising field results that are beautiful as well as
suited to the purpose. Beauty, indeed, becomes a distinct selling feature, since the desire or appetite for it is as clearly defined in the individual as the desire for companionship or the
more approachable
ugliness,
He
man
good
more approachable when comput before him in a beautiful form than when
It is
it.
is
also
is
2i8
As
the "copy" or the language of words, however, has already been considered separately, we may pass by
this element and consider under the heading "display" only
art quality.
These are
and
texture.
ornament,
number:
Each of
its
own
well-defined scope
clearly than
words
that creates one impression and establishes one set of associated ideas, while the copy in its choice, arrangement, and
it
is
ments should all work toward the same ends. For that reason
we must know the meaning and values of each of the elements
of advertising display.
i.
Color
elements
is
The
first
that of color.
It
all
tion of
warmth of
spirit
or exaggerated action,
it is
worth
219
using
ill
we can
tising
well afford to take cognizance of this fact in adverto express these ideas of coolness, restraint,
an
idea.
2. Illustration.
A
is
advertising display
This term is of broad scope.
It
may include anything
from
photograph
Carefully
worked
uralistic,
detailed
tion of
any
sketch
or
or
Sale
OUt,
nat-
delinea-
The
pic-
Suitable for
Good
..
ture language
is
ar-
of
rangement
any idea
which is to be submitted
through displav
order co re<luce
object, to a line-
decorative
AT THIRTEENTH STREET
Am,oneement
Wedding
a general
Even
one, more general than any word language on earth.
we Americans understand somewhat the meaning of the picture language of primitive races and certain highly civilized
ones like the Japanese or Chinese.
illustration is
definite ideas
it
which we wish
to
have grasped
in their relative
220
in our
these ideas or has none of these qualities? If we say
words that a thing is refined, our color and our illustration
If
idea.
we
Not only
is
woman
not exactly
such an illustration absurd
is
such a thing will not materially detract from tbe power of the
individual ever to concentrate upon hosiery or its qualities.
3.
Ornament.
known
The
that
as
itself.
22I
vanity, instability,
4.
Type.
With
of form in the various fields of art expression, such as architecture, decoration, and other phases of composition, there is
in type.
have just received from the binders bound copies of Coal Age, Volume 1 (Oct 14. 1911 to
June 30. 1912, inclusive 1 and Volume2 (July 1 to December 31. 1912. inclusive) These books are
bound incloth and include the complete index to each volume. We have on'y a limited supply on hand.
COAL AGE,
505
$3.00
POSTPAID
Attractive, interesting
One of
ation,
line,
ments.
If a
man
222
Here's The
Number Four
il-
lustrative picture.
5.
Texture.
much
Not
u~p~
16
H'-5
'.'-7
pitches as fine as 32
USA
is used,
the question of selection, of
course, is not pertinent. But
ter-heads,
etc.,
it
is
of the
ideas of hardness, smoothness, roughness, compactness, porousness, thinness, etc., are associated in the mind in such a
we seem
to see these ideas or qualities when they appear in objects presented to the sense of sight. Since the eye
recognizes instantly such qualities as strength, permanence,
way
that
compactness,
etc.,
223
ment.
6.
The Importance
of
Form.
If
it
is
clearly
seen that
^y^HLAND
ASHLAND BRICK
is
specially
lurgical
made
made
for Metal-
BRICK
specially
for Metallurgical
and
Chemical Work.
A3HLAND
advertisement
portion to copy.
how much
if this
The
It is
how
material
chaotic.
artistic
or
is
else.
No
matter
is
as surely
a criterion as
is
a matter of building or
224
a subsequent chapter.
Advertising display then is indeed a language. It depends,
like all other applied art expression, first, upon a knowledge
of the commodity to be exploited, and, second, upon one's
conception of how human beings act individually and in
ciples, in
It also implies
artistic
a knowl-
combination of
CHAPTER XXII
THE PRINCIPLES OF FORM
Importance and Meaning of Form. Because of the supreme importance of form in every made thing, it seems wise
to look carefully into this phase of the subject before discus-
else de-
the ele-
and in
rela-
tion to the laws or principles of their arrangement. In designing a house, the architect considers not only its function and
cost,
He sees their
it is made.
and then decides the proportion
minor
and in
and horizontal, which are the
lines, vertical
From
this illustration
we may
225
derive the
first
principle of
226
form, which
is called
Unity."
The
Apprentices:
Dr.
Succeed Us.
Who Are to
Hudson Guild,
Training Those
J.
L. Elliott, of
make a
will
day work
prove a vigorous spur to a greater and more personal effort on the part
of all earnest Craftsmen in helping the apprentices under their charge
to become better and more efficient printers, not necessarily from a
humanitarian standpoint, but because it pays and because it pays big.
ing Trade News, says: "The work Dr. Elliott is doing is so thorough, its
benefits so great to the trade, that he should receive unstinted encouragement." Many others speak just as enthusiastically of the doctor's
work.
Be
sure to
come and
and
Page
illustration
of
all
227
is
advertising space
the latter.
Sometimes the
oblong
is vertical,
as in the
WESTERN UNION
single-column
newspaper
or whole-magazine adverspace
Sometimes the
tisement.
is
horizontal,
generally
as in
CABLE LETTERS
form is
much
the
same
as the
very
Over-night service to
Europe at a minimum
charge. Example: A
room.
The
rectangular.
is
structure
Ask
is
The boundary
composed
lines.
of
CO.
straight
ally good,
too strong
on
this
page.
Even where
the body
is
because
it is
page have a
sufficient
foun-
With a
NELSON
Two
Drill
Spindle
Adjustable
Head
You Pay
One Hole
the Other
for
That's fundamental
you
can't
get away from it unless some philanthropist offers to drill your holes for
nothing. But if you use a single spindle
for the same price for
Intensive manumethods
of the present day
facturing
have proved this to be a wasteful,
inefficient practice
and this tool
offers
you the way out.
Equip your drills with
drill
you pay
it
If-in. to 8f-m. between centers. Note the extra strong construction, casing of all gears (they run in an oil bath). Drills instantly and positively locked in any position.
Capacity
Detroit, Mich.
me
details
on
No
obligation
Name
Finn
Address.
228
placed, well
229
Shapes and
Let us consider the first
"Consistent
Sizes."
Combine Pleasure
The
edges.
which
circle,
is
with Business
GOTO
Philadelphia
direction equally
at every point, and the square,
line
changing
its
OVER TOE
which
the
pearance of harmony
The placing of a round clock
.
inartistic spotting.
To
place the
"The
cut
is
designed to
This
but
it
is
not essential to
See some
of the
most beautiful
roadbed.
breakfast,
Enjoy a bountiful
luncheon or dinner,
No Smoke
No Tunnels
Your Watch Is
Your Time Table
Every Hour on
the
Hour
fast
trains
from 7 A. M. to 10
A. M. to 11 P. M.
Lower two-thirds
tisement.
structural and well distributed. Upper one-third loose,
non-structural,
handled
and
badly
GAS ENGINES
Absolutely MthoutCost
This
b. of
the
is
interest to
will
internal
Several
installa-
"Power" without
results.
No
the
regarding
cost.
ly
absolutely
combustion
STEAM PROCESS
gine.
plant,
prac-
write us
tor estimate.
B.
Meriam
at the plant of
Ask
for
pamphlet of
The
17, 1914.
this lect
rnoine |g
illustrations,
too
much
230
illustration for
one page
231
sufficient
the optical center, in such a way that when they are supported
by type or other material their vicious contrast is less noticeable.
Illustrations of the
right
of
it
in size
which
will exist
in the advertisement
matters of margins, blank spaces, arrangement, blocks of copy, size of illustrations, width of borIt is the clear understanding of
ders, proportion of initials.
such matters as these that secures pleasant relationships in
sizes in any material with which we deal.
of Areas.
The
Greeks,
other people that have ever lived, made their life ideal the
study of intellectual, impersonal form. Through centuries of
ture
possible.
was
mind found
it
difficult to
compare,
An
area of 3 square
inches is not comparable with one of 25 square inches, but one
of 3 square inches and one of 5 square inches are easily comparable.
as the
first.
The Rage
Could Not
of a Spring Freshet
chips
endured.
Culverts prove their worth in
service.
fatal to
Co
"xt'/HoId "SiVpiy
"*w
tossed broken
Armco Iron
hills,
pavement
like
Armco
natural
ticulars
* Metil Co.
C
fc:rx<iaii"'Mei!u
Peuuy'viinU
\Vetil C^Uvert
Pennsylvania
McUl
Culrtrt
Ftp. Co,
Mlnnrioli. Lrl*
Lyto CorrucftMd Culvert Co,
"SfoauIk'cuKSt'c
232
233
The law of
terms:
when
length or area of the other. This leaves quite a play or difference in length or size as circumstances develop that need in-
ging, as
margin
should ap-
tical
and
left,
at the top.
Not only should the Greek law of areas be applied to margins, but also, when possible without interfering with the
it should apply to the width and strength
of the various parts or paragraphs of the copy within the
When it is possible to do this, the effect is doubly
space.
pleasing. There is also often a chance to apply these proportions to the blank space between different parts of the copy
234
display.
When
Not enough
blank spaces.
Balance.
Blank space
is
often
copy.
erect position of
terial
may give little or no thought to its why and whereInstinctive knowledge of this law is a part of the subconsciousness of each human being. It is so much a part of
though he
fore.
us that
passes unnoticed
unthought of, but
and
when
la,
4)1
hvmfol (via*,
hi
<k
fat namerco.
is
it
opposed
or
is
im-
power
challenged
its
mediately
felt.
The
ap-
SYNOL
*Mp OM*
it
BM
|U*M
J7 Dr.Hl.te.
Balance
that
is
advertisement
with
Newspaper
good grouping, but badly balanced
on blank space. Last two lines should
be brought to extreme
left
we
instinct-
balanced
rest results,
arrangement a sense of
dignity, repose, ease
and organization.
make
it
one
that
known
as bisymmetric balance.
235
Occult balance,
position.
'J'HE
form of
that
is
for the
patrician dignity
of
Ac
quiet English
that
there
is
Countryside may
give an added interest to the plen-
perfect
This
type
Among
is
found such
more
subtle,
teresting,
more
always
be
exam-
its
carven
It
drawers and
in-
but
is
less
air
its
convenient
of grave simplicity.
and
sometimes
less restful.
Newspaper
St.,
<
New York
Brortvt?
advertisement
showing
and two
the ends
can
characteristic
and of greater
possibilities,
simple,
Hampton Shops
last
the
.Reproductions
harder to sense
is
of
to-day.
Rooms
Oh
last lines
should be reset.
object,
place two
from
large candle-
236
You
must go
at the left
equal distances from the center, while unequal attractions balance at unequal distances from the center, and further, un-
in
mind
it
is
well to prac-
tice
Our
interest-bearing Certificates of
Deposit are a good "temporary in-
vestment"
While a good opportunity for
and profitable permanent investment is awaited, money can
be earning interest at a fair
rate and be perfectly safe
by
placing it with us on Certificates
safe
a convenient future
date.
W>U
Street,
IQ,000.000
N. w York
Balance,
principle
which
even
the
is
then,
form through
and
circles
may
be
distributed
City
Surphi., J10.000.00O
of
in
throughout the
such a way that
space
a sequence of ideas
ized
ple
is
real-
Movement. If a series
of spots is arranged along a line and attention is directed to
one of these spots, it instinctively follows to the next, and so
is
to
its limit.
on, to the
find ourselves
237
spots but continuing our search for the end of the material
arranged.
The creation of this
uation
is
through
the
principle
called
Move-
of
"Principle
ment."
origin in the
word
sit-
about
brought
its
"action,"
or "motion," which
term applied to the
is
the
human
any position in
which absolute rest is not
in
figure
The
the idea.
position of
jumping,
running,
etc.,
is
This
is
harmony with
the laws
The
suit
both as
and the
light
will permit.
price are
as reliability
Two-piece
make
it
hold
its
shape.
of gravitation.
When this
principle of motion or direc-
idea,
it is
of-
if
you
prefer.
termed movement.
Movement,
then,
is
that prin-
and
and coat
ture
Movement
used, then, to point out the things in advertising display that the creator of the display wishes particuis
238
larly to feature.
The
simplest and
are the use of the arrow and the dart, the pointing of the
finger, etc., but there are other phases to be reckoned with.
the shoe, for an example. If I am featuring shoes and
use the cut of one in a single column next another advertise-
Take
Movement may be
known
as gaze
movement, which
is
and by what
or another advertisement.
It
Manifestly this
human
is
a waste.
being in picture
In-
form
is
mount
what
value.
is
as essential
Movement
Structural or Rhythmic.
Movement may be
movement
Structural
239
In creating forms within the display surface use care that .his
structural or opposition movement does not occur except at
places
tention.
my
finger at the
same
in the
is,
its
tenanced.
Emphasis.
ment whereby
Emphasis
it
in
weakens by
ways
copy
its
may
very form.
But weakening
is
one of the
The same
the word
Many
effect
may
times
it
240
some other method of emphasizing the idea rather than eterThis form of
nally following the traditional italic change.
emphasis
is,
The change
in shape of the
way
of securing emphasis. If we
have been following the
structure edge quite closely,
dropping one paragraph be-
low another
graph
to indicate para-
change
while
the
pay you
to
picked over.
Silk shirts of the
hurry and
assortment
$~
family
But
$-- (not many).
fine
a plenty of the
striped
now
Silk
and
right
The $2.50
kind
lines,
course,
at
Sometimes an
effective
be
had by
may
This contrast of
emphasized
is,
once.
emphasis
secures
now
$--
in or-
If a cut or orna-
attention.
of
and durable as
makes a change
is
madras.
now $
sizes
in
cuts.
size is
intensity,
one or two of
value,
241
in the next
chapter).
The change
in face of type
is
is
cuts, etc.
Perhaps
no
there
is
man
which by
public.
its qualities
The time
is
no probsolved
can
be
successfully
by slavishly folany
lowing every law involved in its solution. To follow one prinThis is because each principle is often to modify another.
It
lem
must be
in
field
It is
often desirable
to
most
effective.
CHAPTER
XXIII
COLOR
Source and Nature.
exists.
change
appear.
As
Color
is
light
it
grow duller, feebler and as darkness comes they disThe brighter the day the brighter the color. Many
;
itself,
may convey
These elements of light, however, must not be confused with the pigments which must be used to represent them
an
idea.
and
like materials,
pigment are not the same thing, and that because of limitation
in materials the representation of the color element may have
another name, or even, perhaps, a slightly different appearance
is
best to divide
pigment study
These elements
of pigment fused together in their proper ratio produce what
This neutral gray has no
is known as a pure neutral gray.
into three elements
apparent color in
it.
it
white.
COLOR
243
The spectrum
later.
arranged
in circular form.
blue are called primary colors. They are primary because they
are elemental that is, each is a single thing or single idea, and
perhaps may seem to express but a single quality.
;
ficial effect
similar effect, because of the mental association with light itself and the effects of light in human experience.
Experi-
made
in dark. corridors
most penetrating.
These
mind
in
human
cites greater
feeling of
mental
warmth.
gressive of
Blue
move more
rapidly, ex-
most
irritating,
all colors.
Be-
244
cause this is so, blue expresses its own idea or quality which
no other color can express for it.
These colors, being elements, should be carefully considered before any of their modifications though the latter are
somewhat more
interesting.
If equal forces of yellow
is
the result.
consciousness
little
fire
is
when
may
do much
damage.
Green
notice that
when
the
is
summer
blue
is
and
trees are
sive heat.
complement,
its
ing has been associated with purple for many ages. Royalty
uses this color for masquerading all that it needs to masquerade; the church to express the ideas of mysticism, humility,
and devotion.
press half as
only.
The use of
clothes herself in
felt
when
it
she
it
to ex-
wore black
a relation to the
must be exposed.
COLOR
Color Terms Defined -Tone.
the sake of a
245
Perhaps at
common
it is
this
point,
for
some
well to define
understanding,
terms in color that are inaccurately used. "Tone" is the term
which applies to any color note whatsoever, including black,
white, and gray. It is so general that when you are in doubt
"tone"
perfectly safe.
The term "neutral" is applied to tones in which no color is
Black is the
Black, white, and gray are neutral.
apparent.
is
effect, as will
Normal
from
shade of color
tone.
It is
same
color.
is
a tone which
made by adding
tint is a color
is
tone which
is
normal
color.
likewise diluted.
possible in
It will
color
is
tints
than
shades
tints
The normal
more
tints
246
be not misapplied. Shade indicates the normal color going towards shadow or darkness tint means the normal color going
;
towards
light or whiteness.
Every color tone has three distinct qualities. It is somewhat difficult to see these qualities each distinct from the other,
but the
full force
This
is
done.
expressed
Hue.
is
is
varied.
the general
in
in either direction
towards a prim-
ary.
us illustrate.
As soon
known
as red orange.
It is
red orange because there
is more red in it than yellow.
On the other hand, if I begin
by putting red into yellow, the color becomes orange as soon
orange as soon as
it
is
leaves red.
It is
as
it
and
it
is
same way,
if
red
is
it
COLOR
violet
247
This
is
tone
is
normal
red.
side of
a binary color, before the color reaches the primary stage, are
known as hues. The hues are yellow orange, red orange, red
violet, blue violet, blue green, and yellow green, and there may
be as
many
Value
is
from intensity is
contrasts which are most
rate
it
to understand
effective
how
and most
produce color
to
efficient in
convey-
we
low-dark, black.
To judge them
accurately we must
partially close the eyes and try to eliminate the color from
them and see them as grays instead of as colors.
The
self ness
as
it
can be got,
weakened
is
in
it
is
any way
it.
When
loses
some of
a red
is
As soon
that quality.
as red
as
it
is
Intensity
and personal
248
appeal.
When
as the
normal
color.
is,
Full-intense,
trasts
Harmony.
agreement
or things.
Harmony
is
concord.
It is
the relationship of
in
laws of these relationships. Sound, being produced by vibrations, has been scaled and each tone standardized, so that the
vibrations of lights
COLOR
249
ness through the sense of sight, in the same way as the tonal
impressions of sound enter it through the sense of hearing.
realm depends.
In the development of color harQualities of Likeness.
is
it
to
two sets of qualities: first, the
consider
mony
necessary
qualities of likeness; and, second, those of contrast.
circuit
it
sets
of ideas.
which
Color
From
the
is
green
half-yelby nature of its composition half -related
to each, as orange is to yellow and red, as violet is to red and
blue.
This establishes a relationship called a relationship of
family likeness. Into green two of the three primary elements
enter. These two elements are found also in yellow green and
is
blue green, although in different proportions. This makes yellow, yellow green, green, and blue green a family harmony, a
likeness, or, as it is sometimes called, an analogous harmony. Blue, blue green, green, and yellow green are
also a family group. Yellow, yellow orange, orange, and red
orange form a group; red, red orange, orange, and yellow
harmony of
About
violet
is
all
have
common
elements.
250
is
The combination
is the third of the three elementary colors.
of yellow orange and yellow green in their full intensity, or of
red violet and red orange, or of blue green and blue violet, is
The law of
selection is
made when
so-called crimson
and
scarlet
is
in intense colors.
and yellow
The reason
The
is
inharmonious
producing a harmony
in
The
may
be u c ed with a larger
IN EPS
AKEUP
Esi
Illustration
HENRY
C MINER
exaggerated
its
background
in
in proportion.
Illustration
in relation to copy.
COLOR
251
colors
may
Full-intense, comple-
general use.
Law
of Backgrounds.
This idea of neutralization is perthe
most
law
of color choice in any field of eximportant
haps
wall
that
is
more than half-intense destroys
paper
pression.
the possibility of seeing people, furniture, or pictures in anything like a fair relationship to the background or to adjacent
objects.
ill
like,
may be."
It is
252
Upon
strength,
more
darker tones.
tints,
possess less
than shades or
relations as will
purports to possess.
The relating of objects of whatever nature to the back-
article
ground idea
is
quality.
Each
quality in color
makes
it
possible to choose
two tones
with wide or close contrasts, as the case may be. If one will
study these possibilities, crude color combinations will disappear.
one-fourth intensity.
is almost as great as can be obtained.
Its contrast in
hue has the widest range, the colors being complements of
contrast
each other. The intensities are forced apart, one being full
and the other but one-fourth. It seldom happens, except under
abnormal conditions, that one needs to use violent contrasts
between each of the three qualities which color tones possess.
in the
haps the most interesting, of all the elements possible in conveying ideas. Color makes an appeal to everybody who sees it.
It is natural that it should be so, because the eye, or sense of
sight, recognizes color
immediately
CHAPTER XXIV
ILLUSTRATION
The Place
mon
of Pictures in Advertising.
language.
The world
over,
lan-
to persons speaking another, pictures conto all persons, in a quite similar way, detailed facts of
So do ours
to them.
fact, illustrations
and
all
very term
to say. Just what they have to say and what they do say
not always be clearly apparent.
The Functions
illustration proper
more
may
of Illustration,is
to
254
From its
tion field.
success or failure in performing this function we may class illustrations as relevant or irrelevant.
is
A
its
Only
5 Days
Left
Wartime Piano Sale
Big
W.^. n ^U,F.4.a~dF~~..l.lMlr.4.Mi.
presume
to be a pretty girl.
The
Such an
however,
tion,
is
Even supposing
illustra-
irrelevant.
the picture
^^f Bargab
Bargain
WheTwe
Say "Hurry,"
It It
for
^"^1
Your
Bargain
Own Good
bility
question
Hallet
N.w
H.llrt
D..U BuOdhi
this type
is very remote in
of illustration. One
Too many
illustrations, destruc-
Whenever a
set
of ideas
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ARMADA
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ILLUSTRATION
255
an
illustration is absolutely
idea he
relevant to the
exploiting
himself,
using
Can
he
should
am
"For what
this
is
ask
NEWBRO'S HERPICIDE
Mikes
illustration?
hair
oft
and
fluffy.
BLAME
DON'T
for Dandruff.
YOUR
MIRROR
sake of
luster
and abundance
extraordinary
results.
will
An
return.
Almost
exquisite
hair
When
call for
you
substitute.
be cited
all
ate
and
of
pictures
childish admiration
has
led
great
manufacturing firms to expend millions on useless
seem
to be al-
most good
been omitted.
Naturalistic Illustration.
Pictures should
256
epoch of acting, in
which the drama sought to
realistic
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filing cabinet!
storage
ahelrlng-foz
Please don't
lor
any
told in the
alistic
possible
fore their eyes.
for
ludicrous.
ranks add
homing ledgers,
etc.
tell us,
office
was
most natur-
8t wl cart cabinets.
Steel
all
its
Library Bureau
I
and
filing
ayatems.
Unit cablneta In
Broadway,
wood and
The
New York
it
is
imaginative
has rudiments at least of
public
intellect, it desires to
for
itself,
judge
mentally to ere-
It
The
must appear
To
in one's
judgment of
pictures.
ILLUSTRATION
257
become
its
types
and the
less
product.
In current times
ment of
fulfil its
functions altogether.
The
illus-
fact;
Decorative Illustration.
The
with which
facts, or at least
minor
facts,
nated
to
idea.
one
are
the
subordi-
decorative
This
suits at $--
all
up
money
big
and interest
forms and
lines
pleasure through
its
This
is
the
Broadly speaking,
258
is
unimportant fact. When illustrations are properly comprehended, this form of treatment will supplant the former one
and mere pretense, with its sentimental associations, will pass
into the background.
Relation
of
Illustration
Other Elements.
to
word
into
parts,
the
If
we
and right-hand
sometimes the custom to place the illustration at
This calls attention, by gaze, to the
facing out.
vertical line, left-
it is
left,
and
is
bad form.
On
faces out,
it is still
it
is
found,
sometimes happens
If it
placed in the right-hand half.
worse. If it faces in, it is better, but very
is
often takes attention entirely from the copy at its left and the
observer, who naturally reads from left to right and whose
carried in that direction, passes from this illustration to the next card without ever seeing the copy.
attention
What
is
is
similar circumstances.
is
it
is
it
accomplish
In magazine and newspaper layouts, cuts
frequently appear too low down, or after the points have been
made. This means either that they are not needed, because
these three things.
the points have been made, or that they may, unless very carefully chosen, lead the observer into another field of thought
is
suggestive enough or
ILLUSTRATION
259
may
moment
and
illustrations
may
be
sufficient.
To summarize a
qualities
is to convey facts
and create a mental condition through sugges-
tion.
Suggestion should play a much more important part
than statement of fact in all places where quality is of any
illustration is to
in
any
sense,
it
People are
so,
is
based
more
inter-
make a more
Because of
same vigor and zeal that pictures do, and it is, of course,
the emotions that create the mental atmosphere desired in
the
much
way.
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ILLUSTRATION
261
pain, or indifference. It is rarely wise, in advertising, to create the condition of pain, or fear, except indirectly in the case
of patent medicines and other articles that are bought only be-
cause of fear.
It
is
a
generally wise to create as pleasant
we
which
to be.
like to
People
atmosphere that recognizes this fact is more likely to produce
results than the one which assumes that everybody must be
met exactly on his own level. People are often much better
than they seem and often understand and enjoy much better
things than they appear to.
CHAPTER XXV
ORNAMENT
The term "ornament" is applied to
forms which have been evolved, or are being evolved,
with decorative intent. The aim of ornament is to strengthen
or define structural lines and to add beauty through a unity
with the thing upon which the ornament is applied. Every
period in history has evolved its own ornament types, with the
same sense of desire for beauty and the belief that ornaments
would realize this end. Sometimes beauty has been the result
Ornament Defined.
certain
sometimes the most intense ugliness has come out of both the
making of the ornament and the bad use of it after it has
found expression.
Decoration as Distinguished from Ornamentation.
The
understanding ornament is the clear distinction between the terms "decoration" and "ornamentation." The ornament itself may be good and the result of its use bad; or,
the ornament itself may be fairly good and the result of its
use extremely pleasing. There are then two distinct things to
realize
when ornament is itself beautiful and when it is decofirst
step in
The
is
to define or strengthen
rug.
They break
shapes and
the rug.
straight, in
harmony with
the
ORNAMENT
263
A Few
Border
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making stronger
the structural lines because of repeating them, cause a decorative effect.
Carving, restrained or confined between certain
lines,
may add
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264
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Showing placing of strong line so as to direct attention in only
Showing lines too far apart and their scattering effect
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tion.
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it
is
placed.
make more
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ORNAMENT
265
expense of the objects with which it is assowould be well to keep this in mind in arranging the
ciated.
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outwart.
its
beauty under
all
circumstances has
ing nature in
materials, for
all
purposes.
This
it.
While it might be possible
unendurable to think of a hair one
wax
rose,
it is
or a shell one.
to
do
Paint, with
it
lily,
all its
to the
possi-
The misconception of
nature
is legion,
266
field
important
chosen.
The second
type of ornament
is
field
of
ar>-
from the
wholly free
There
is
ornament
naturalistic idea.
midway between these two, called convenThe source of this class is nature, and the
a class
tional ornament.
result is a modified
form of the
Ruskin
use than the actual representation of nature itself.
has said, "Conventionalism is man's expression of nature in
his own materials."
This means that conventionalism is the
adaptation of natural motifs, floral and animal, to the individual material in which man intends to represent it. LiberParts are
ties are taken with the actual form, size, and color.
is
At
Historic Ornament.
to discuss for a
this
kind
moment
the historic
ornament
good
it
seems best
idea, because
is
ORNAMENT
267
rently from any place and every place, and printers have taken
these traditional motifs to be "real art," using them for bor-
way.
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illustration.
Abstract border
older periods, like the Greek, Roman, Saracenic, and Byzantine, have expressed actual ideals of life, religious, political,
and
social.
These
ideals
and
in
ornament.
natural,
out
its
ornament.
The
cathedral
268
of
ornament
Every
detail
is
much
ment of
this
pure form
ideal.
which they
lived.
and
this fact
must be recognized.
An amusing illustration
a period was
nificance
somewhat, there is always a decided feeling of cerornament which makes it impossible to use it
tain qualities in
indiscriminately.
ORNAMENT
Ornament
as Applied to Borders.
269
One
vary from a single line to five or six lines, from the Greek fret
to the Gothic .trefoil, from black to white, through the entire
range of the spectrum. Because of this we will consider first
the function of the border itself.
The
chaotic
Shoe Facts
The
which
is
use.
By
coming
rapidly
into
placing a line or
been
produced
when
page would
the
otherwise
The
the border
material,
is
to sustain the
make it
and make it ap-
help
structural,
function of
first
to
less the
Bovts
border
is
Pumps
in
arid? Sports
large
variety.
a purely
ex-
Saracenic motif,
is
press an idea.
sometimes
It
NfflM
off "our
insides
to
An
of which
is
XV
This
is
really, then,
sphere.
Allowing
which
necessary to observe in the use of borders, or their efficacy is destroyed. Since the border is used to harmonize the
it is
rest of the display expresses, it is very debe kept purely abstract, that is, in line or shape
without the suggestion of historic style or of a natural unit.
sirable that
An
it
irrevelant border
sometimes
in
is
as
even worse
bad as an irrevelant
illustration
meaning of ornament is
lief that he must love pictures of anything whatever.
have inherited that tradition.
Initials
use of ornament
and
of
Ornament
We
second
ORNAMENT
Whenever
ket affords.
than the
271
more
attractive
for the
mind not
it
is
difficult
only to select the letter but to connect it with the rest of the
It seldom happens that
world, the use is not in good taste.
its
top
is
horizontal
of advertising display as in
other fields.
are not
!:,,
Oriental
We
of
time
for
such
entirely different
Rugs
whose au-
thenticity
vouch d
for
Is
by the
.importing
great
Thousands
of
than wholesale
prices.
ent-day problems.
The
KENT-COSTIKYAN
Incorporated
select
pieces
frequently
of
ornament,
triangular,
turn
little
272
to
fill
Worse
with copy.
to
fill
out a
line.
it is
used.
CHAPTER XXVI
TYPE PRINCIPLES
Line Meanings.
examine briefly the meaning and significance of the various kinds of lines of which they are comit
will be profitable to
posed.
Words
history.
waving
activities,
The seemingly
lines.
grain,
were
inherent ten-
represented by oblique
dency to use lines to represent various quiet and active positions has led to a feeling for these expressions in persons
seeing such line forms.
Lines may be said to be of
The
straight line
is
two kinds:
and curved.
the shortest distance between two points
straight
which changes its direction at each point, is less direct, nonFurniture constructural, and decorative in its character.
structed on curved lines has not the same feeling of security as
This is equally true in architecthat built on straight lines.
tural construction
in type faces.
273
It is
true
274
Straight Lines.
The same
tion.
line
when
repose,
death,
sleep,
concrete
The
forms.
resented action.
It
announce
CdnGfifaq
gravitation.
Curved Lines
Curved
n
lines
-
Wras
raps Jiff fS
iff
ColonsJ
Goafs Bouses
Uurs
/Ttiffin eru
are
which
American idea*
exhibited only
their
own Salon
onut
curves
in
classes,
studied
each
whenever
it
of
the
enters
any made
thing.
The
Bad taste in mixing many types.
Main body of type well chosen to
be
of
of three
should
circle is
a plane figure
An
that
it
TYPE PRINCIPLES
the curve of the circle
275
from
extreme of the major axis, but changes in a like manner between the same extreme of the minor axis and the other ex-
monotonous than
oval is bounded
a
which
curve
its
direction
by
changes
differently at every two
points between one extreme of the major axis and the other.
This gives a curve of exceeding grace, subtlety, and interest,
and is the curve upon which the most interesting and beautiful
This curve
axis.
therefore
more
is less
subtle.
The
curved
By
this
we mean such
Four Schools
is
or "faces," of standardized type that have been deNew ones are being
signed by the various type-founders.
to
added
the list every year. All of them, however, may be
rieties,
276
grouped in four schools, according to their general characteristics and the source from which they derived their inspiration.
Gothic has its letters of block form, with the line of the
is
is
bilities
and much
Roman
is
Script,
moreover,
is
somewhat
less leg-
class
and
is,
in fact,
ornamental profor
These elements give ample range
many variajections.
In the general class "Roman" are included
tions in design.
most of the famous and widely used type faces, such as Caslon,
with shaded
lines,
"serifs," or
Roman
Modern
Faces.
It is
customary to refer to
The
chief dis-
TYPE PRINCIPLES
277
and the one most quickly recognizable, is that in "oldstyle," or antique, there is no great difference between the
heavy and the light part of the letter, whereas in modern
tinction,
Roman
is
pronounced.
Some
of the
mod-
ern faces have very heavy shading combined with the thinnest
Bookman
hair lines.
Bodini
is
extremely modern.
type faces, such as Caslon and Cheltenham, really comprise many groups of faces, linked together
by general similarities, but differing in minor particulars.
Thus, the Cheltenham family includes Cheltenham old-style,
etc.
Mastery of the
and
practice.
mental
One who
line qualities,
possibilities
type faces that fail to express the facts and qualities intended.
He will also discover some of the practical limitations of dif-
livelier
old-
on rough news-
paper stock, where Bodoni and other type with light hair lines
would have a tendency to blur and lose the delicacy that gives
it is
in
words must be
set in
and decorative
278
wide enough to afford the possibility of securing almost precisely any combination desired.
Hand-Made Type.
If the
problem
is
one
in
which the
let-
the
vertising
woman's
frivolous
lingerie, letters
objects
may
in
theatrical
make-up,
or
and curved
hair,"
one
lines in
is
The
Type Emphasis.
word may be
effectively underlined
when
this is
It may, however, happen so often that the page becomes a spotted mass. Sometimes a stronger type face may
often.
be used, thereby emphasizing the important word. If this occurs many times the page becomes unbalanced, or is likely to
express the same spotted appearance as in the use of underlining.
word produce
the
same
TYPE PRINCIPLES
279
Strength
N
E
CHEAPNESS
B
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V
common sense
femininity
Severity
DIGNITY
ANTIQUITY
Showing how
which
effect,
When
When
italics
are used,
is
how-
italicized
2 8o
It will
is
words
much the same as one sees on
if
very
many
italicized
"CRAFTSMAN"
(TV**, itarkt Rigittfrtd t
Furniture
Furnishings
V. 3.
Paint Ogte*)
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Metal-work
Jlial
Leathers
Needlework
Fabrics
arc
on
sale
at
the
warerooms
of
our
associates
Illustrating a type
in
the
a pond with very thin ice and many holes made by stones or
other missiles. The page as a whole is greatly weakened by
the general use of italics.
It will be seen from this discussion, surely, that an extravagant use of any form of type emphasis is bad taste and that
there
may
at least be
italic use.
in
Chapter
XL
Summary.
It is
dislike.
and
have
TYPE PRINCIPLES
281
printers ignored the possibility of this form of abstract language expression. If one becomes interested in working out
its
when
ment, and the type, speak the same thing at the same time.
Here then are five distinct elements of the language of adver-
own
This
This
is
Twelve
is
point Cheltenham
Old
Style
This
is
This
is
This
is
This
is
This
is
This
Twelve
is
tfi tfi
point
Bookman
point GDli
lEttglfet):
nr
CHAPTER XXVII
LAYING OUT THE ADVERTISEMENT
Functions of the Layout.
It is
always
difficult,
and often
advertisement
is
to look
when
will indicate
finally printed,
and
how
the
will at least
him
avoided.
Technical
skill in
drawing
is
a layout, but such skill is naturally an asset. If the advertisement is to contain an illustration, it is helpful to place before the illustrator a drawing, however crude, that will
show
movement and
gaze.
Lacking such
skill at
drawing and
lettering, the
beginner
produce a very satisfactory substitute by means of a pair
He can cut from one adverof shears and a jar of paste.
tisement an illustration of the size and style he intends to use;
may
know
lines
it
unnecessary to
names of
the
experienced copywriters
make
all
282
manner,
283
may
it
better to
make two
separate lay-
outs.
The Layout
Mass.
Consider
first
this
how
be.
It is
284
rela-
tive height
draw
g*?m
i-
^7
"
rows of
show the
ter ' us * n
broad
f ar
^I
in
lines to
a P art
f or
parallel
text mat-
lines rather
you
that
"layout in mass" for a newspaper advertisement (by courtesy of
Rough
C.
Hayes Sprague)
numerous.
immediately discover
your border is too
that
a badly displayed advertisement would never have appeared if a rough layout in mass had originally been made of
Many
it,
then.
is
285
is
EDISON
COLUMBIA
and
You can buy any one .of them here. Hardman House offers a .representative assort-
intensity.
is
are
common
fault in advertisis
too lavish a
ing display
use of materials. Rarely are
all the elements of
display
Often
433
<B.
news-
and
Sometimes copy and illustrations say all
One color added to black is usually all that
can be used advantageously. To know what to reject is as
important as to know what to select.
needed.
copy
With the layout in mass satisa comparatively easy task to make the
Here exactness in all details is essential, and
factorily arranged,
working layout.
it is
part of the material must be given to the printer. These directions should always be in the margin and may also be in
red ink or blue pencil to distinguish them more sharply from
the copy.
286
To
attached
is
to
leading
the
as
description,
"Single 2-pt. rule."
*"
More
ders,
a
be
complex
bor-
taken
from
if
may
sample-book,
described in
same way,
mistakes
avoid
well,
ble, to
the
but to
it
is
Display
layout for newspaper advertisement (by courtesy of Gilbert Farrar)
Working
lines
should be lettered in
at the places they are
the
same general
and
style
The
the
description
margin as
is
given in
"18
f\m
\J
usage and y
point
who do
the
UK
correct time.
name of
is
un-
It is
election.
E.
faces, either
R.
Call
some day
soon.
BLACKMER
Wacka
J
OPPOSITE NORMAL SCHOOL
type-founder's
catalogue or a book supplied
by the printer showing the
faces he has in stock.
287
8,
For display
and
are
often
24, 30,
used, and occa36 point
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interest,
and
space distribution
and
72.
and so on.
should be noted that the face of the letter
not quite
so large as the body of the type, as there must be at least a
narrow line of white space between two lines of type. Often
It
this
narrow
line is
is
288
make reading
fied,
certain length
in
what
is
to be
size of type
it
may
made
may
then be
be calculated in square
to a table showing the
of
Type
289
may
down
to
380
made
in
the estimate.
In estimating for display lines, it is best to count the number of letters in the copy and to match this against a sample
of the type face under consideration. A space between
two words is counted as a letter. In all cases of doubt, allow
more space than your estimate shows to be necessary. Type
matter, either for text or for display, must not be crowded.
line
If
it is
divided into sections by the display (either illustrations or display lines) the different sections should be designated by symbols and these symbols put upon the layout in the appropriate
place.
etc.,
blue pencil.
If there are several illustrations or other cuts,
these should be numbered on the layout and corresponding
numbers placed on the cuts themselves.
detail
of the advertisement.
The
printer,
if
he
is
a good
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in
Sunday paper.
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geneous
r\$r.
scrtxo
Intelligently
of
money
for advertising.
less
know how
He
felt
in
about him.
paper advertising's much as he and his father
before him had accomplished in half a century.
Although he turned a deaf ear to the advertising;
men who approached him, and lost his temper on
occasions, the pressure became too great and he
persistentadVertisers. Inthecourseofafewyears,
some of them did as much business as he. Their
merchandise Was as good as his and they actually
was
Who
He became an
forced to yield.
finally
advertiser.
And he regrets that he did not surrender years before at a time when newspaper
advertising began to be recognized as an agent of
economy in business instead of an added expense.
below his figures. It is a fact that they accomplished in five years, by the use of intelligent news-
An
some
why
u- lawd
u-.
bulletin,
lipt
Intelligent newspaper advertising describes desirable merchandise in an attractive manner, quotes a reasonable price and
points the way co the door of the man who has it for sale
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or two. It makes more business b> arousing more human
desires.
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turns,
advertising 'turns
net profits of a business ana at me same lime
selling prices possible, which, in turn, increases
.".
diltrict
first
it
creates distribution.
The Plain Dealer With Its Great Army of Thrifty Readers Is Invaluable to
Merchant or Manufacturer Who Wants .to Advertise Intelligently in Cleveland
the
Newspaper
effect of
291
THE PRINCIPLES
292
OF*
ADVERTISING
The
may
Final
Test of Display.
The
fact
cannot be too
strongly emphasized that the general organization of the advertisement is the great essential to an effective impression.
This can be tested in the layout before a line of type is set.
The
and
tests
test of an advertisement, of course, is its resultfulness in dollars and cents, but this test often comes too late.
final
always prove that a better return might not have been secured
with proper selection and arrangement of materials.
CHAPTER XXVIII
THE MEN
General Requirements. The value of advertising in genvalue to any particular organization, de-
For
men who
direct
and execute
we may
profitably consider here the requirements of different positions in the advertising business
it.
and the
this reason,
qualifications a
man
should possess to
fill
them
effi-
ciently.
Advertising is not a fundamental science, nor is it composed of a group of new fundamental principles. It combines
many old fundamentals applied under new conditions and in
new ways.
training broad
The importance of
the different
man
fills.
all
294
These pro-
to the
From this
Literary, Editorial, and Artistic Requirements.
summary it is obvious that the advertising manager's work
requires literary power, editorial capacity, artistic perception,
work
He must
arrangement.
and the
he must have
tions of
pressed.
THE MEN
295
analysis of such factors and their translation into charts, figures, and reports which can be understood by any business
man.
The
advertising manager usually has a considerable organunder him. This involves the selection and handling
of men and the ability to maintain discipline together with the
atmosphere of democratic co-operation which is so necessary
ization
The
who
how
work of
selling
he discovered that
many
of those
know
His
These ideas he passed along to the merchants and manufacwho purchased space through him, and for this service
he made no charge.
turers
He
began
is
As
The
client
of the
296
lawyer is the man who retains him and pays his bill. The
man who employs the advertising agent does not pay him except indirectly.
The
Service.
Of late years the competition between
has
increased
to such an extent that service is now
agencies
being offered beyond the production of copy and advice on the
Agency
vertiser of
some of the
own
detail
which
formerly
had
to
be
direct supervision.
service
still
propositions.
Closely allied with this is their knowledge of
rates arid their ability to secure maximum advantage in the
They have
secure the best copywriters and layout men and develop their
abilities through varied experience to a point where they are
much money
true that the wise agent realizes that it is to his advantage in the long run to have his client
On the
spend his advertising appropriation economically.
as
as possible.
It is
compromise which
for the advertiser.
is
THE MEN
297
department, the art department, the rate and checking department, and the business-getting department. The executives,
however, must of necessity be thoroughly conversant with
every part of the work and must be broad-gauged men as well.
The heads of
agencies include
many
vertising.
than their
own
special fields.
The more
qualifications that
for the advertising manager, the better fitted they are likely to
be to perform their several tasks efficiently and to mount to
positions of higher responsibility.
The
Publisher.
man
esting fact that in the early days the publisher disliked to give
up any portion of the space for advertising, limited its amount,
subordinated
its
position,
and even
left it
out
if
the reading
Until re-
for.
rate
way
possible.
it
to sepain every
298
tition,
tising,
and the revenue which can be secured through adverhave made it an important part of the periodical. In
for
two
Post for
cents, or such
Under
these circumstances
it
is
and
to
measure
this in
terms of agate
lines or inches.
Actually, however, the publisher is not selling space he is selling a service. He is selling the advertiser the opportunity to
address an audience which he has gathered together.
Such
;
When
may
is
that
scriber
In
many
would have
in the pub-
THE MEN
299
must give involves the gathering together of an apIn a word, he must offer
preciative and interested audience.
reader-attention and reader-interest, and the degree in which
he provides them measures the degree of his service.
service he
Methods
of Selling.
The most
who
A few great publishing houses maintain research departments which undertake elaborate analyses of different fields of
business with the object of obtaining marketing information
of value to advertisers.
In connection with this, naturally,
they furnish detailed analyses of the number, quality, and distribution of their subscribers and readers.
Inasmuch as not
all
weak ones, bureaus working in the interest of advermake studies of circulations. The most important
tisers also
Many
all
all
CHAPTER XXIX
PERIODICAL MEDIA
The
First Periodicals.
discovery of printing and came into general use with the develThe earliest form of periodical
opment of cheap paper.
medium was
the
news
letter,
in centers of commercial
of some kind.
The value of
the audience which a periodical provides for advertising messages is therefore not a new discovery nor its application new.
The fundamental value of the periodical media from an
advertising standpoint is due to the instinct of curiosity inherent in human nature and the tendency for readers who have
its
Value.
same
style,
its
reading pages.
This does not demonstrate the value of such free adver300
PERIODICAL MEDIA
tising or "publicity," as
it
is called,
301
though
it
does indirectly
Free publicity,
indicate the value of advertising in general.
in order to justify its appearance in the reading pages of any
publication worth considering, must be so general in character
that it can be tied to the particular proposition only with difEditors are now on the lookout for free publicity
ficulty.
matter, especially since the advertising revenue has become a
much importance
in the
more or
less definite
last
who
are sufficiently
302
Any
interest.
rately the
it
without
who
news
to gather accu-
and
sensationalism
to present
will
The adver-
therefore do well to keep in mind the peculiar characteristics of the newspapers at his disposal in any field when
he makes his selection and also when he determines the method
tiser will
It
displays
its
greatest
people and in more or less general use. Where the commodiof interest and in use only by a small and limited class,
the power of the newspaper is to a large extent wasted because
ties are
so small a percentage of
its
to the appeal.
human
activities
PERIODICAL MEDIA
303
complementary to that of the newspaper; it performs entirely different functions and has different standards of value.
The magazine is extensive territorially, and intensive because
of its segregation from a circulation standpoint; whereas the
newspaper is intensive from a territorial standpoint and extensive from a circulation standpoint.
The magazine selects from the great mass of people in
the country or the world as a whole those individuals who
is
are sufficiently concerned in the interests it presents to be anxious to read about them and to pay for that reading. It picks
out those whose interests are wide enough and whose educa-
tion
is
it
ac-
means a
quires by this
As
final
advantage,
it
is
304
receives, therefore,
more
attention
more powerful
influence
upon
It
the habits of
So much of the
life
of the
women
of the household
is
Furthermore, the
season.
in
The
ber of recipes,
some of
maximum
of suggestion.
The adver-
tising of labor-saving devices for the household in the magazine where discussions are continually present as to the pos-
PERIODICAL MEDIA
305
sibility
Women's
their
The
severe.
styles suggested
Farm
is
Farm
Journals.
group which
the farmer's wife in respect to their work and to the entertainment of the family. At one time such journals also fulfilled the purposes of a newspaper.
Most of them are still limited territorially to certain states or sections of the
interests in
country
common.
Trade Journals. Trade journals are devoted to the dissemination of news and the consideration of questions relating
to the distribution of products of a certain nature or products
to resell.
are of
and accuracy.
little
value.
The
Judged upon
this basis,
many
of them
have capable
306
great
advertising
value
because
they
have
automatically
men
Technical Journals.
nals are
somewhat
The
it
The
As
related in a previous
chapter, many of the better publications in the field maintain
departments equipped to serve the advertiser by preparing adlar field
it
attempts to serve.
Class Periodicals.
human
hood;
life is
it
PERIODICAL MEDIA
human
Practically every
beings.
307
moving
pictures, sporting,
Contracts.
earlier pe-
method of buying
As
a consequence, the
advertising was
the
publishers has lately resulted in a demand for much more exact and detailed analysis of values than was possible or even
considered in the early days.
The
was
all
publication.
The
especially
among
newspapers.
Although
it
is
is
not infrequent.
The
is, the rate for outside advertising in newspapers, has always been different from the domestic rate, that
3 o8
is,
rates, all
in view.
It is
encouraging to
The
rate
which
is
Oftentimes
it
has
lation
to
for.
his circulation
He
was
There has
which
field,
interested.
territory in
PERIODICAL MEDIA
further development
is
309
make
analyses, of course, are ordinarily confined to the general magazines and the technical, class, and trade journals. The uni-
any
field.
made by any
particular firm,
it
was
men who
3 io
advertising thereafter. For that reason, the honest advertisers began to base their choice of publications, in part at least,
upon the character of other advertising carried by a medium.
They rightly considered that every objectionable advertisement diminished by some degree the efficiency of all advertisements appearing in its neighborhood.
This matter has become of such importance to the careful
publisher, the square-dealing advertiser, and the intelligent
agency, that many of the most reputable periodicals have
adopted a rigid censorship of their advertising pages so as to
exclude the unscrupulous and false methods which have a ten-
value.
will
result
in
if
carried to
tremendous
conclusion,
undoubtedly
strengthening of the natural advantages of this class of media.
CHAPTER XXX
OUTDOOR AND OTHER FORMS OF ADVERTISING
How
customary
Outdoor
Advertising
in all ages,
civilization has
Up
and also
was
little
or write.
As
came versed
education spread and more of the population beand writing, the use of signs to an-
in reading
nounce
all
kinds of
sales, all
advertising.
Influence of Signs.
The sign has been associated for
and
with two definite functions which
even
centuries
years
have determined
which influence
its
its
present value.
Even now a
312
313
314
is
all.
The
its
of outdoor advertising make it of great importance for intensive stimulation of the sale of products of general consumption.
It is, of course, impossible for this method of adver-
tising to
action in such a
final
ing
medium
for the
In the great development in the outdoor advertisthe business has divided itself into four distinct
Values.
field,
way
315
signs.
rule,
and desirable
12 to 48 feet long,
generally, though special boards are built as long as 75 feet for
lease, while they are built in all sizes for the individual ownerlocations.
most of these
to
design,
erect
the
maintain
On
is
made
the signs,
or more.
form by building panels, concealing supports, and effectframework to eliminate the objections which
decorative
ing
have been advanced at times against the unsightly appearance
best
local requirements,
316
to determine
reminder, easily read and easily seen, of the fact that a product
on the market, together with some suggestion of its quality,
induced by the character of the design and the wording. From
is
when
ber of boards
For
may
tance, without
lines
with
little
317
and wording
or no effort.
on the mind
is
is
cial cases
in
because
the necessity for leasing ground or space for them, and the
general tendency for restrictions to be imposed upon them in
So long
very
difficult
3T8
319
320
this
medium
in
many
localities.
As
of dealing with several thousand different people in the hanThe condling of such poster campaigns became apparent.
sideration of this matter finally led to the gathering together
of all the local bill-posting firms into an association of billposters, with agreements covering the general use of posters
in such a way that a general advertiser can now make arrange-
showings
it is
field
has
possible to get
From
damage
in
in various civic bodies designed to regulate this part of advertising and there is little doubt that at some time or other the
ready
and
strict
location.
European
cities
of uniform
al-
size, practically
the size of a one-sheet poster, and the spaces reserved for them
are comparatively few and carefully designated. These regulations have had one advantageous effect in requiring the pos-
by artistic work inEuropean countries, but parFrance and England, the poster artist is an artist
stead of by
ticularly in
mere
size.
In
all
the
321
As
work.
to the eye
a development of
its
improvement.
The
old circus-style
is
more
In connection with
decorative designs, advantage has been taken of the possibilities of illumination to add to the hours of daylight several
of the evening hours as advertising possibilities.
For this
purpose in
many
of the
and
bill-
322
L
Painted sign illuminated for
323
city
use
324
boards have been erected for the use of painted signs and
poster advertisers, with illumination directed upon the boards
so that the design should appear as readily at night as in the
daytime. Inasmuch as the people of the cities are to a large
extent free from their labors during the evening, the value of
the illuminated poster and bulletin is much greater than the
value of advertising of the same kind which can be seen only
during the period of daylight.
Electric Signs.
Electric signs are the most recent develin outdoor advertising and by all odds the most spectacular.
Broadway, New York, from 23rd Street to 59th
opment
Street
of
would be scarcely
many a much
was being
Competition for attention, however, created the necessity for motion and color in such signs until some
of the most spectacular are exceedingly complicated in design
exploited.
and furnish an enormous number of movements. The movements are, of course, secured by succeeding contacts produced
by a revolving "flasher," as it is termed, so that different
bulbs or sections light up at different periods.
There are a great many other purposes for which outdoor
advertising
is
ings.
them as
may
note
CHAPTER XXXI
DEALERS' AIDS, DIRECT MAIL, AND HOUSE
ORGANS
Scope of "Dealers' Aids."
of media which have already been described: namely, periodicals and outdoor display, there are several other classes
we
find
window
Not
name.
all
The
material which he
is
this
ties
of his trade.
Window
his
Displays.
As
a dealer's show-window
it is
is
perhaps
natural that
326
lines scattered
their
throughout the country have no such organizasettled policy with respect to the use
tion
The only
that the dealer can use only one winand as he has many offered to him, competition among manufacturers is constantly becoming keener.
Some manufacturers even go so far as to furnish a crew to
dow
trouble
is
display at a time,
put the display in place. The present indications are that the
future will see a tendency in the direction of even more elaborate and expensive displays, with a consequent burdening of
costs
of advertising.
lar items
from an oversupply of
store-cards.
327
328
the druggists
at the Cashier's
In general,
store-cards.
it
may
own
In
many
advertising.
lines of
merchan-
from
their appearance.
Where
service
it is
which
to convince
will be
him
is
to give
him an opportunity
This method, of course, is limited to manufacturers of goods which are consumed generally and which can
be tested in small quantities.
uct
itself.
DEALERS' AIDS
329
Samples are perhaps of greatest value when they are conway with a demonstration of the product. A.
nected in some
gift
has
itself
an
out in
consumer
use of
some advertising
it.
many
parcels, letters,
and
The
bills.
dealer
He
is
sends
out
Thousands
waste
is
due to the
pared and therefore not usable. The general defects and difmay be listed as follows:
ficulties
1
That much of
it
customer
instead of to him.
2.
That
it is
not calculated to
fit
in
with
it is
sent
many
it
it
frequently contains nothing of service from
a store standpoint or as advertising the store to
the customer.
That
Where
likely to be
found an
330
point is that the manufacturer must not view the dealer simply as an outlet for his own goods; he must rather consider
him as a business man who has his own interests, which naturally receive his first thought and which are used as a basis for
judging the value of the help the manufacturer
may
choose to
give him.
Practically every kind of direct mail adverused as a dealer's aid. Some manufacturers even pre-
Direct Mail.
tising
is
handles.
poses.
is
is
used for
by those
work of a personal
sales
wishes to reach.
Many
has
its
own
tomer who
is
selection.
great deal of this material is more closely akin to personal salesmanship than to advertising. The sales letter, for
instance, is distinctly a personal communication.
makes
The use of
it
DEALERS' AIDS
331
vidual problems. If it cannot do this, then the subject matter it covers might better have been presented in some other
form.
It is
in
it
is
mind
his.
is
impossible in ad-
and
class journals.
having
its
The
mail material, provided the writer also keeps in mind the general principle that the material should be adapted as closely
as possible to the class of readers
it is to serve.
House Organs.
An
it is
to reach
332
permits a discussion of matters which are of continued interest in a broader way than they can be discussed in
sumers.
It
Often
it
is
able to establish
in
the continuity of interest between the various groups of offices which compose it.
Some of the house organs of this
type, especially those started by railroads, have grown into
magazines of considerable size and of intense interest to thousands of employees and their families.
is
for a
means of com-
home
office.
The salesman on
the road
is
men,
For
this
sales-
is
Often where
it
it
and
in
DEALERS' AIDS
ing
it
it
may
333
furnish and maintain
As a
who
sells his
is
often
what.
ditions,
no longer dealing with policies, with interior conand with those things which are of internal interest
It is
list,
it
any particular advertiser, provided a need exists for continuous communication between the organization and any other
group of a considerable number of people. Its value will depend upon the degree in which it individually serves the interests of that group, and at the same time, keeps before their
minds the
ideals, policies,
CHAPTER XXXII
DETERMINING WHAT TO SPEND
General Policy.
We
to see
how
now
shall
business, by
its
must be assumed.
Following is an account of an actual campaign which was
worked out in connection with a motor lubricant. Obviously,
many
factors
high
efficiency.
The
liminary investigation will, of course, vary with each particular business and the circumstances of that business.
It
paign
334
is
335
all
in the following
way:
From an
estimate of the
number of motor-cars
in
From an
3.
a similar way.
From a consideration of the output of the motor-boat
factories and the number of marine motors in use,
as
estimate of the
shown by
motor-boat
tories
number of motor-cycles
the registration of
in
members of various
from fac-
localities.
The
New York
New England
27
Philadelphia
14
per cent
"
"
15
Norfolk
"
"
"
36
Dallas
Houston
Oklahoma City
Atlanta
'.
4
"
2
2
El Paso
New
"
"
i
Chicago
Orleans
T-N
Denver
"
i
x>
2
33 6
The
made in
cars, motor-cycles,
was
and motor-
volume
to each
num-
ber of cars, motor-cycles, and motor-boats in the territory covered by each branch and developing the amount in money
represented by the total volume of sales in that territory.
This amount was divided by the total area in square miles, so
that a definite
the
the
total business in
was
Of
in practically a na-
337
That the
vertised.
2. That the distributing facilities entered very considerably into the matter of sales volume.
of the goods.
Those competitors who had secured the most business protected the dealer, instituted some sort of
training for the sales force, and used a satisfaction
guarantee of some kind.
2. The advertising of all competitors showed the use
of practically the same arguments.
3. Very little effort had been made to establish individ1
from a
technical standpoint.
Further-
not only a great deal of fluctuation but a great deal of difference between competitors as to price.
If the student will refer to Chapter III for the factors
which enter into preliminary investigation and compare the
338
principles enunciated in that chapter with the preliminary investigation as stated, he will find illustrated in this case the
media
it
to be used.
more
when
the importance of the item could be suffiand that a considerable portion of the users
not particularly concerned with anything in the way of
ciently illustrated;
were
large.
DETERMINING
WHAT TO SPEND
339
In the
it in comparison with competitive materials.
course of this investigation two outstanding items of indi-
upon
Sufficient tests
condition.
matter,
it
suffi-
to prove this
From
was
The atmosphere
it:
2.
3.
Choice of Media.
The
in advertising.
class
and other type divisions. Street-cars were quickly eliminated because of the enormous waste attached to dealing with
taste
340
cities,
in street-cars.
The number
an advertising campaign
made
it
necessary to consider
company's
terri-
work and
organization.
small part of the population interested in this particular commodity, the small money value of the yearly sale to the
The
matters
connected
with
the
automobile
for
the
"crank"
motorist.
Circulation Analysis.
The choice of the proper number of
magazines and the ones individually fitted to answer the purposes of this campaign was a hard matter, owing to the fact
was
that there
the
which the expenditure of considerable money could be reasonably predicated, out of a number of general magazines offered, a choice was made of about twice the number it was
proposed to use.
policy, the circulation policy, and the reports from the com-
pany's
field force.
These magazines were then requested to send into the advertiser's office circulation records covering fifteen cities
of
341
in
list,
Six months was required for this work, but at the end of
CIRCULATION DATA
MAGAZINE
342
means
man
selling to automobile-
was made.
in
varying ways.
One thousand
and from
and in certain publications having dealer circulation the consumer advertising was run as a part of the dealer copy.
It was felt after visiting the dealers that some means of
identifying the dealer and tying up the campaign to both must
be found. A sign for the front of the dealer's store had long
been used in similar advertising and this sign was made a
feature of the copy to the consumer in the general magazines,
to the dealer in his advertising, and to the salesman, so that
all
him
to
all
to
343
that store.
The
made by
tion
many
signs.
25
Printed matter
12
31
per cent
"
12
Small signs
Direct mail for dealer
Window, counter, and show displays
If the student will refer to the chapters
"
"
"
"
"
"
"
7
7
on media, and
study the principles of selection as given therein, the application of those principles will be very apparent in the investigations
in regard to the
division of the
CHAPTER XXXIII
WRITING THE COPY AND CONSIDERING THE
RETURNS
Copy
From
Material.
The advantages of
esses of manufacture.
2.
The way
4.
which those advantages were to be observed in their action on the operation of the car.
which had been made by the company's engiTests
3.
neers, the results obtained, and the analysis of those
in
results.
made by
from them.
Results obtained by racing drivers, speed boats, aeroplanes, and the like in contests, the opinions of the
under which each of the conwere staged, and the service required of the
6.
7.
The
owner
in connection
effect
The Test
Put a motor
of Winter
Many
itt
oil to
quality. It will
fairly
good
oils
give
if
fairly
ever.
good
service in
conditions of winter.
power
of lubrication.
MOTOR OIL
is
not a
fair
weather
It gives
oil.
carbon deposit.
There is a reason
Motor Oil shows
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hen Tourinrf.
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It will
West
St.,
New York
COMPANY
NEW YORK
Orleans
Consumer comfort
345
It is
346
8.
The
and
product in question.
9.
The
For
this kind.
as follows:
1
The
tion.
2.
The advantage
4.
The
to the consumer.
direction.
When
made
to the
human
interests
was
indi-
2.
3.
1.
For
tance.
1
2.
effect
Scarcely
Sound
FEW
No
OIL
use you obtain
By
maximum power from a quiet, easyrunning motor. You get an oil that will
never deposit a hard carbon crust on
cylinder walls or spark plugs. You get
an oil that lubricates perfectly at all times
on account of a zero cold test. Lastly
fills
the
bill.
its
you get an
oil
that
gasoline consumption
to thirty
per
will
reduce your
anywhen from
will find
it
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truthfully
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Texaco Motor Oil reduces gasoline consumption Ly increasing power. A large manufacturer of motor
cars (name on request) conducted several tests among lubricants competitive with Texaco Motor Oil.
The oil that these tests proved to be the best was twice tested against Texaco with the following results in favor of the latter:
Test No.
Test No. 2
oil,
Reduction
in gasoline
5.187 gals., or
Reduction
28%.
in lubricating oil
consumption per
two
tests.
will
be
You get more out of your motor in the way of power and put less into it in the way of gasoline and
oil when you use Texaco.
Texaco Motor Oil is for sale in 1 and 5 gallon cans at most good garages and supply shops. Ask for
it.
For interesting and informative booklet, "Maintaining a Motor Car," address Dept., F,
Five
West St., N. Y. City.
Philadelphia
El
Pa
348
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Marked
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Fro
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lubrication
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gives
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conducted
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capable*
find out.
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rtryclive and interesting booklet, "Maintaining a Motor Car", addrc*> 0rt. D
who
Texaco Motor
carries
Oil.
Read
this
betn advertised to
and a
75 per cent of
all
This great
The
life.
because
tht
they find *
garage^lAat
Texaco
They
These
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Sign.
will.
in
.tubes,
it.
And
gas. etc.
It is
WHITEHALL
EXECUTirE OFFICES,
BRANCH
Biiladetphi.
Chicago
St.
Louis
Norfolk
NEW YORK
HOUSTON
OFFICES:
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New
Orlean.
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349
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tration to such
The samples
working
human
affairs,
must of necessity
suffer
from the
deficiencies
of the workers, and there are points in each of these advertisements which, despite the care and investigation, are to be
counted as taking away from the ideal operation of the principles
the
the copy
351
The
shown on the
chart
magazines
in
chapter.
Copy Returns.
Tt will
the
esti-
mated value of the publications from the analysis of circulation undertaken, was compared with the total circulation and
the cost of the space, so that a true comparison could be
one with the other.
made
In general,
it
352
was found
were according
to expectations, so
point.
While the returns from the copy were valuable for comparative purposes in considering the relation of the different
publications to each other, they were entirely insufficient to
form a basis upon which the value of the campaign as a whole
dealer.
Consequently the value of the campaign had to be
determined from an entirely different standpoint.
The purpose
whom
The
General Returns.
was
started
When
the expenditure of
vertising
that the volume of sales
it
money
at
for ad-
the expectation
the
sales
$100,000.00
15,000.00
353
Then
would
advertising,
it is
$462,000.00
Advertising expense
40,000.00
Sales expense
30,000.00
pense of selling and advertising at the same or a lower percentage on the total revenue than the condition without the
advertising showed. Unless it does this, the advertising will
add a burden of extra cost to each unit of sale and conse-
FROM
On
this chart
is
maximum
At
efficiency.
totals secured
from Charts
filled
was
filled
out under D.
This char
in the
them.
Chart
showing
work and
upon the new
this
the
way
in
WRITING TH
From
this chart
355
the period, showing from the monthly return the totals for
all branches and the losses for all branches through failure to
secure repeat business.
These charts, the one for each branch and the one for the
totals,
due to failure to retain their customers, and the net gains for
each territory; so that they not only indicated the results in
general through the work of the combined selling and adver-
weak
territories
COMPARISON
Gross revenue Fiscal Year, with advertising
$
Gross revenue previous Fiscal Year, without advertising
Increase
$.
Increase
vertising
Increase
$.
Cost per unit selling, without advertising
Cost per unit selling and advertising on increased
sale
Decrease
....$.
Chart
356
By comparison
business,
facilities.
ADVERTISING CAMPAIGN
BRANCH OFFICE
NO.___,
Head-on sign
automobile road
357
35 8
of this book, he will undoubtedly be better equipped to understand and pursue the business operations which must measure
but the intelligent use of experience and the appreciation of the necessity of experience thoroughly analyzed is
his success
as
much a part of
The text-book
man who
knowledge as such it can cover only what has been discovered and
The application of the things
then only in general terms.
known
the
of the new things to come
and
definition
already
desires to
add
depend upon the student himself, his analysis of the principles contained in the written knowledge, and his more careful
analysis of the
his ken.
new
APPENDIX
REVIEW QUESTIONS
I
Chapter
1.
2.
3.
4.
What
today ?
Define advertising.
What are the limitations of advertising as compared with personal
selling?
5.
What
selling?
Chapter II
1.
2.
3.
What
What
4.
What
is
Chapter III
1.
2.
What
3.
4.
5.
6.
Toilet soap
Furniture
Books
Of what
Chapter
i.
IV
Why
359
360
2.
3.
What
What
Chapter
1.
for
W hy
r
2.
Chapter
VI
How
4.
5.
What
1.
2.
3.
ical
standpoint?
are the leading requirements for a good trade
name ?
Chapter VII
1.
2.
Why
What
is
an
advertisement?
3.
What
fully?
Chapter VIII
2.
What
What
3.
What
1.
meant by an instinct?
are the three leading tendencies of instincts as civilization
is
advances
4.
5.
is
Why is
tant instincts ?
How can a knowledge
instincts
Chapter IX
1.
2.
3.
4.
What
What
REVIEW QUESTIONS
361
5.
Chapter
1.
Name
2.
How
3.
4.
XI
Chapter
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
of typography
which
find
their
Chapter XII
Why
1.
is
the direct
command
3.
in an
advertisement ?
How does the prestige of the source affect the force of a sugges-
4.
By what
2.
tion?
other means
may
Chapter XIII
i
Why
is it
logical laboratory
methods
Chapter XIV
1.
In what respects does
2.
How
3.
4.
What
What
5.
Why
to
differ
make an
is
effective impression?
correctness
advertising copy?
of
jse
necessary
in
362
XV
Chapter
1.
What
2.
How
3.
What
4.
5.
is
is
copy?
meant by coherence ?
Explain the chief means by which coherence is secured.
Without considering the possibilities of display type and other
is
may
Chapter
be
how
made emphatic.
XVI
Why
2.
3.
why appeals?
Distinguish between inductive and deductive reason-why appeals.
1.
Chapter
1.
2.
3.
XVII
What
What
Chapter XVIII
1.
What
2.
5.
6.
How can
7.
8.
3.
4.
copy?
at
Chapter
1.
2.
3.
XIX
What
for the
4.
What
same
article?
REVIEW QUESTIONS
5.
6.
What
What
7.
What
is
2.
common
is
most suitable
publications ?
considerations of style are important in advertisements in
women's publications?
XX
Chapter
1.
the most
sort of material
363
What
text?
3.
4.
XXI
Chapter
1.
What
2.
Why
3.
art?
a beautiful advertisement more effective than an ugly one?
are the five chief elements of advertising display ?
is
is
What
XXII
Chapter
1.
What
is
5.
What
What
What
Name
6.
What
2.
3.
4.
it
display.
7.
8.
What
should be
When
is movement to be avoided?
can emphasis be secured by display?
How
Chapter XXIII
1.
2.
3.
What
Tone
Neutral
Normal
Shade
Tint
colors
364
4.
What
5.
Explain and
Complementary colors
Analogous harmony
(a)
(b)
6.
7.
Chapter
1.
2.
3.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
XXIV
What
XXV
is
ornament?
Chapter
1.
What
What
Chapter
1.
ordinarily produced
What
XXVI
ideas or feelings do straight horizontal lines ordinarily
Straight vertical lines?
ideas or feelings do curved lines express?
is the circular curve ordinarily less desirable than other
-xpress?
2.
What
3.
Why
4.
What
What
5.
curves ?
are the four great "schools" of type?
are the advantages of using hand-made type
lettering"
6.
7.
What
Chapter
1.
2.
3.
or "hand
XXVII
What
How
is it
used?
REVIEW QUESTIONS
4.
5.
6.
365
How
is
the index?
Chapter
1.
2.
XXVIII
3.
4.
5.
of
advertising?
Chapter
1.
Why
XXIX
is
disadvantages
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
2.
3.
4.
are
its
What
advertising standpoint?
Distinguish between technical journals and trade journals.
What are the reasons for requesting an analysis of the circulation
of a periodical? What kinds of analyses are commonly needed?
Why does censorship of the advertising pages add to their value ?
Chapter
1.
What
XXX
bulletin or
poster measured?
5.
What
Chapter
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
What
What
XXXI
366
Chapter
1.
What was
the value of
situation in the field of
2.
3.
Why
making an
Chapter
1.
2.
3.
4.
motor lubricants ?
How
How
How
How
XXXIII
were the talking points of the advertising copy determined?
were they used?
was the value of the advertising tested?
was the value measured?
INDEX
Abnormal
conditions,
need
for
meaning
of
26
efficiency of, 5
word, 51
Advertisement,
free,
classification of,
long circuit
functions of, 9
appeal, 77
74
complete, 72
publicity, 74
classified,
manager, 293-295
analytical and executive
rationalization appeal, 79
use of, 79, 81
reflex appeal, 75
short circuit appeal, 75
functions of, 71
an economic distribution
as a control, 9-10
as a missionary, 10-11
as a direct selling force, 13
circulation, 308-309
product, 31-33
Animal needs,
characteristic, 58
Appeals,
long circuit, 77
rationalization, 79
use of, 79-81
in
in
reflex, 75
short circuit, 75
censorship, 309-310
definition, difficulty of,
early problems
297
factor,
11-12
text,
in,
illustrations,
Advertising,
agent, 295-297
evolution of. 295
functions of 295
ability,
294-295
duties, 293
requirements, literary, editorial
and artistic, 294
outdoor and other forms, 311-321
in,
Aptness in hea
-lines,
207
Arrangement of advertisement, 88
367
INDEX
368
Censorship,
Art,
3io
of advertising pages, 309
Associations,
Circulation,
establishing, 90-97
advertisements,
72-81
(See also
classification
"Advertisement,
of")
instincts, 63-66
Classified advertisement, 74
and
street
Coined words, 48
cars,
copy
190
Campaign,
purpose of, 36-41
educating, 40
establishing reputation, 36
extending organization values,
36
extending uses, 37
familiarizing, 40
gaining distribution, 38
identifying trade-mark, 40
increasing consumption, 39
solidifying sales, 39
stimulating, 40
"Catalogue copy," 130
Color, 242-252
backgrounds, law
of, 251
hue, 246
intensity, 247
neutralizing, 245
shades and
tints,
245
value, 247
harmony, 248
likeness and contrast, 249-250
source and nature, 242
spectrum colors, 243
binary,
244
primary, 243
restraint
and coldness of
blue,
243
warmth of
red. 243
Commodity,
analysis of the, 31-33
connections
establishing
needs, 68
with
xNDEX
Condensation
of
expansion
text,
and, 211
between
and needs, 68
Consumer,
and dealer,
Connections
commodity
369
158
sentiment and sentimentality, 164
story form, 163
imitation,
when
appropriate, 77
338
Consumption,
of factory output, 19-20
figured in zones, 21
statistics in actual practice, 335336
Contracts for advertising, 307
Control, advertising as a, 9-10
113-128
distinction
composition, 113
expression and impression, 115
essential qualities of, 121-128
clearness, 121
conciseness, 124
correctness, 124
distinctiveness, 125-128
economy, 121-125
relation to other parts of advertising, 113
style
in,
115
Copy
poor, enhanced by white space, 85
as affected by display, 202
as affected by medium, 182-201
for business men, 192
for farmers, 194
for technical men, 192
for trade papers, 194
for women, 196-201
Copy
Copy
record, 145
testimony, 145
inductive appeal, 150
point of view, 151
"predicament" method, 91
uses of, 79
classification, 79
Copy
183
newspapers
department
store
advertising, 186-189
news
choice,
sectional
interest, 186
newspapers
national
advertise-
ments, 183-186
small retail stores,
189
street cars and bill-boards, 190
Copy, human-interest, 153-164
direct appeals to sense, 155
dramatic form, 161
newspapers
and
class differences,
167
atmosphere, 174
coherence in the sentence, 177-178
balanced sentence, 178
co-ordination, 178
parallel construction, 177
emphasis in the sentence, 179-180
climax, 180
INDEX
370
Copy
Determining what
Continued
to spend, 334-343
circulation analysis, 340
of,
competitive
statistics,
consumer and
336
dealer, 338
129-
141
132
coherence, 133-139
climactic order, 134
connectives, 137
descriptive order, 134
narrative order, 134
emphasis, 139-141
proportion, 139
unity, 129-133 (See also "Unity in
"talking-points,"
copy")
Copy, writing the, and considering
returns, 344-358
consumer, factors governing advertising to, 344
copy returns, 351
dealer, factors governing advertising to, 346
general returns, 352
psychological investigation, 350
Correctness, essential quality, 124
Curiosity, instinct of, 59
media, apportionment
343
general policy, 334
media, choice of, 339
among,
Display,
copy as affected by, 202
lines, tying up to text, 200
relative importance of text and,
203, 204
Distinctiveness,
essential
quality,
125
Distribution, channels of, 33
gaining, 38
Dramatic form of copywriting, 161
Dealer,
economic
to,
346
Decoration
to,
15
with
orna-
ment, 262-265
Decorative illustration, 257
Deductive reasoning, 147
Definiteness of the printed word,
7-8
Economic,
distribution factor,
IS
Economy,
essential quality of copy, 121-125
of advertising over salesmen, n
Editorial,
294
policy
and
circulation, 309
Efficiency of advertising,
Electric signs, 324
5,
INDEX
Elements
of advertising display,
(See also "Display, functions and elements of")
Emotional appeals, followed by log218
ical, 76,
in display, 239-241
for,
332
rhythmic, 238
structural, 238
shapes and sizes, consistent, 229
mechanical divisions, avoidance
of, 233
proportion, Greek law of, 233
structural unity, consistent, 227
defined, 238
obtained, 236
how
and,
.63-66
movement, 236-239
159
Emphasis
371
"Forward
copy,
associations," 92
Functions of,
advertising, 9
144-147
Evolution of instincts, 58
Exactness in copy, 170
Executive powers of advertising
manager, 295
Expansion and condensation
259
of
text, 211
developing territory, 19
ideal trade conditions for, 18
organization and output, 18
Farmers,
copy for. 194
for
trade-
Form,
emphasis, 239-241
H
Hand-made type, 278
Harmony in color. 248
Head-lines, 205-209
aptness, 207
brevity, 206
interesting nature, 208
originality,
207
specificness, 206
Human
needs, and
emo-
tions, 63-66
(See also
stincts and emotions")
"In-
instincts,
INDEX
372
Human-interest copy, 153-164
feeling tone, 93
when
fusion, 94
appropriate, 77
Human needs,
of civilized men, 6l
sequence, 91
original, 58
I
decorative, 257
functions of, 253, 259
congruity between text and, 254
naturalistic, definition of, 255
place in advertising, 253
relation to other elements, 258
Long
list of,
64-66
Interest, incentives, 86
relative strength of instincts and,
66-68
Jobber,
dealing through, 34
economic effects of
Law
of,
contiguity, 91
journals, 305-306
trade journals, 305
98-
105
329
demonstrations and samples, 328
general purpose, 325
store cards, 326
window
advertising
displays, 325
to,
16
Market,
to,
16
on, 15
value of advertising
circuit appeals, 77
292
Layout,
functions of the, 282
in mass, 283
working, 285
for
tradeLegal
requirements
marks, 43-44
Letters, advertising media, 330
Line meanings, 273
curved lines, 274
straight lines, 274
List of instincts and emotions, 63-66
Literary requirements of advertis-
tests,
knowledge of, 32
Marketing,
changes in, caused by advertising,
3
in .relation to competition and
consumption, 19-22
packages as factor in, 23-25
INDEX
Mass, layout in, 283
Measurement, type, 287
Media, periodical, 300-310
Media,
choice of, 339
Medium, copy as affected by, 182201
Movement, 236-239
definition,
how
238
obtained, 236
N
Nail advertisements, pulling power
of, 69
National advertising in newspapers,
183-186
Naturalistic illustration, 255
tise," 51
Ornament, 262-272
borders as, 269-270
functions of, 269
naturalistic, 265
Ornamentation, 262
Needs,
standardization of
also
field,
320
bulletins,
illuminated, 321
painted, 315
electric signs,
324
307
small
270-271
sources of, 265-266
abstract, 266
conventional, 266
rhythmical, 238
structural, 238
characteristic animal, 58
chief human, 65-66, (See
"Instincts and emotions")
of civilized men, 61
373
Output,
retail stores advertising,
189
consumption of factory, 19
factory organization and, 18
O
Occult balance, 235-236
Old English type, 276
"Optics, law of," 233
Organization and product, 30-41,
(See also "Sales organization,"
and "Product")
Package,
advertising value of, 24
as factor in marketing
factory
output, 23-25
size of, as factor in sales, 23
Paragraphs, 180-181
INDEX
374
309
circulation, 308, 309
contracts, 307
details of analysis, 308
editorial
and
policy
46-49
Publicity,
circulation,
309
free advertising and
its
value, 300
Personal
relation
of copy
advertisement, 74
Publisher, place of, in advertising,
297
Pulling power of advertisements,
107-112
R
Rates in advertising, 307
Rationalization appeals, 79
use of, 79-81
Readers,
types of newspaper, 302
Reason-why copy, 142-152
Reflex appeals, 75
Relative strength of instincts and
interests, 66-68
tisement, 87
Point of view in reason-why copy,
Retailer,
to,
selling,
116
Persuasiveness,
table of, 67-68
151
to,
15
Position of advertisement,
in the medium, 83
on the page, 84
Posters, 321
Prejudice, personal or traditional,
Primary
Sales,
colors, 243
tion")
force, house organ for, 332
methods and organization
cies,
poli-
30
solidifying, 39
Samples, demonstrations and, 328
Schools of Type, 275
Script, 276
Product, 31-33
character of, 31
competitive status of, 31
distribution of, 34
technicality of, 32
usage of, 32
Production,
in relation to competition
consumption, 17-19
31,
Selling
force,
advertising
as
direct, 13
and
to,
155
ap-
INDEX
Sequence,
law
in-
93
of, 91
of")
"Human-
interest copy")
Small
"Color")
Square-mile basis of factory output
consumption, 21
Standard types, 275
Store cards, 326
borrowed
prestige, 102
direct, 99
99
indirect,
laws
98
of,
positive,
loo
prestige,
259
and
magazines, 305-306
Technical men, copy for, 192
of
of
of
of
375
Territorial analysis, 20
Text, relative importance of display
and, 203. 204
Tone-color, 172-174
Trade and
306
Trade-mark, 42-49
certificate countries,
46
meaning
of,
psychology
42
of,
46,
also
(See
"Trade-names")
registering with patent office, 44
value of,
to business organization, 43
to buyer, 43
Trade-names,
attention and memory value
tests,
47
good, qualifications of, 49
Trade
papers,
(See "Trade
technical journals")
emphasis, 278
four schools of, 275
Gothic, 276
hand-made, 278
italics, 386. 387
line meanings, 273-275
measurement, 287
Old English, 276
principles, 273-281
Roman, 276
Script, 276
and
INDEX
376
Continued
Standard and decorative, 275
Type
Sizes, 288
and
letters,
96
words,
V
manufac-
sections, 96
U
Unit,
consumption of factory
output, 19-20
Unity,
in copy, 129-133
to
retailer, 16
lines,
"word form," 96
basis of
4-5, 9-13
Value of advertising
turer, jobber, and
spacing of
Uses of advertising,
White
space,
in advertisement, 85
Window
Women,
displays, 325
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