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Contents
Introduction
14
Appendices
51
52
52
55
56
59
61
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15
64
15
65
66
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67
Knowing what to do
24
61
71
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75
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33
35
Word maps
36
Clustering
38
Structured overviews
40
Clines
42
Concept circles
43
Pair definitions
44
Brainstorming
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Introduction
www.tec.govt.nz
These resources are based on research into
effective adult literacy and numeracy, as described
in Lighting the Way.1 They also draw on schoolsector work in literacy and numeracy, including
Numeracy Project publications and the teachers
books Effective Literacy Practice in Years 5 to 8
and Effective Literacy Strategies in Years 9 to 13.2
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Knowing the
learner
Knowing the
demands
Identifying the
demands of
problems against
the progressions
Using diagnostic
processes based on
the progressions
Knowing what
to do
Selecting teaching
activities that are
literacy-focused, to
support learning
It is not essential to follow this order in some circumstances, it will make sense to start by getting to know
the learners before finding out what it is that they want to be able to do.
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you work.
Knowing what to do
Tertiary Education Commission Teaching Adults to Write to Communicate: Using the Learning Progressions
To map a task:
1. Make a copy of the Mapping a writing task
noting:
Spelling
Vocabulary
Language and Text Features
Planning and Composing, and
Revising and Editing.
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Tertiary Education Commission Teaching Adults to Write to Communicate: Using the Learning Progressions
Using the progressions, circle the steps that best match the task demands.
Make notes for a checklist about specific expectations.
A. Purpose and Audience
B. Spelling
Notes
(Notes will relate to the focus and clarity required
for the task. For example, to what extent does the
task require the writer to display an awareness of
Notes
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C. Vocabulary
Notes
(Notes will relate to the extent of vocabulary
required for the task.)
Notes
What type of text is required for this task (for
example, a letter, an explanation, a description,
a report, a narrative, a set of instructions)?
Explanation of a process.
What are the requirements for the text type in this
task (for example, a procedure may require a list of
items, a sequence of steps, a labelled diagram)?
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Notes
(Notes will relate to the degree of polish required
by the task.)
Notes
(Notes will relate to the composition or complexity
are clear.
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SPELLING
VOCABULARY
LANGUAGE
AND TEXT
FEATURES
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PLANNING
AND
COMPOSING
REVISING
AND EDITING
Date:
comment
complete
Incomplete
date
Shows
understanding of the
perm process
Spells specialist
words from course
correctly
Shows sequence,
causes and effects
Note form
acceptable
Ask partner to
check
Can refer to course
book
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learner.
specific purpose.
attitudes to writing
progressions.
The first two approaches do not provide hard data
to map against the progressions. They are used
to help you find out the feelings and thoughts the
learners have about writing.
then hand it in. Use this method if you are sure the
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Appendix B.1.
assessment.
This diagnostic process is a general screening
tool, not a formal assessment. By using typical
course tasks for the assessment, you can find out
if the learner will be able to cope with the writing
demands of the course or if the learner is going to
need some support. The assessment will indicate
the specific areas (progressions) where support
and/or instruction will be needed. If the assessment
shows that the course task demands are too
challenging for a learner, reassess using an easier
or modified task. Where it is clear that the learner
would be unable to complete the course with the
support and instruction you have available, other
options may need to be considered literacy tutors
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Assumptions
be evidence-based
include information about the learners from the
six progressions in the Write to Communicate
strand
take no more than 1015 minutes to administer,
and be easy to administer and evaluate
be able to be used by vocational tutors
be able to be extended by literacy tutors.
The process of analysing a writing sample can
offer tangible evidence of a writers development.
Apart from giving a clear indication of how well the
learner understands the topic, writing samples can
give a clear indication of the learners:
understanding of the concept of text purpose
and audience
understanding and mastery of the features of
particular text types and of how they relate to
the writing purpose
grasp of text structure, paragraph and
features
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time available.
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Starter 2: My ambition
the group.
My profile
Name:
Date:
3 A template is a pattern or a model that can be copied or a form that can be completed. A writing frame provides a structured
framework for writing, for example, by giving sentence starters. In practice, the two terms are often used interchangeably.
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Starter 4: Instructions
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SPELLING
VOCABULARY
LANGUAGE
AND TEXT
FEATURES
PLANNING
AND
COMPOSING
REVISING
AND EDITING
XXXXXX
Next, use the Writing analysis template (Appendix B.5) to gain more detailed information about the writing.
For the purposes of this resource, only the relevant progression steps are shown.
Text: My ambition
Purpose and Audience progression
WHAT TO LOOK FOR
EVIDENCE
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Spelling progression
WHAT TO LOOK FOR
EVIDENCE
practise/practice
independantly/independently
fiance/fiance
comitment/commitment.
Vocabulary progression
WHAT TO LOOK FOR
EVIDENCE
EVIDENCE
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EVIDENCE
Yes it does.
Yes it does and meets the basic requirements of this type of text.
EVIDENCE
Yes: corrections have been made. The way the text is written
indicates that the writer is aware of rereading and revising
whilst composing.
A review of the best guess chart shows that this learner is working at a higher step than first thought for
language and text features. She is probably ready to consolidate her skills and move on to the next steps in
all progressions.
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Knowing what to do
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Modelling
Prompting
demonstrate
think aloud
role-play
u
se reminders (What did you
do last time? And you know
that because ... ?)
Questioning
planned and purposeful
open and closed
Discussion
Instructional
strategies
Explaining
Giving feedback
descriptive
evaluative
verbal and non-verbal
spoken and written
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WrP&A
= Writing: Purpose and Audience
WrSp
= Writing: Spelling
WrVoc
= Writing: Vocabulary
WrL&T
= Writing: Language and Text Features
WrP&C
= Writing: Planning and Composing
WrR&E
= Writing: Revising and Editing
of writing.
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WrP&A
WrSp
WrVoc
WrL&T
WrP&C
WrR&E
pages 28, 29
Sharing quality
work
page 30
Using writing
frames
page 31
Organising and
linking ideas
page 32
Using templates
and acronyms
pages 33, 34
Shared paragraph
writing
page 35
Word maps
pages 36, 37
Clustering
pages 38, 39
Structured
overviews
pages 40, 41
Clines
page 42
Concept circles
page 43
Pair definitions
pages 44, 45
Brainstorming
page 46
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Resources
WrP&A
WrSp
WrVoc
WrL&T
WrP&C
WrR&E
to work on next.
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WrSp
WrVoc
WrL&T
WrP&C
WrR&E
progression.
to write.
Good models of a specific text form can be used
are represented.
writing.
progressions.
Resources
similar texts.
Follow-up activities
transparency (OHT).
Overhead projector.
(Appendix B.5).
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WrSp
WrVoc
WrL&T
WrP&C
of instructions.
Alternative activities
an explanation.
writing frames.
challenging vocabulary.
Resources
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WrVoc
WrL&T
WrP&C
coherence.
2. Point out linking words and phrases and other
structural features.
3. Select a text that consists of short paragraphs
Resources
A text that is a good model of an appropriate
between paragraphs.
An overhead projector.
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The
purpose
of the
activity
WrVoc
WrL&T
WrP&C
This activity provides support for learners as they
sequence and structure their ideas to meet the
purposes of their writing tasks. It helps learners
focus on appropriate language for different text forms.
Templates provide an outline or prompts for a piece
of writing, acronyms provide reminders of different
text structures.
By using templates, the learners can focus on
analysing the purpose for writing and constructing
cohesive sentences and paragraphs. They work
both individually and in groups. They practise
using templates (or acronyms see the alternative
activity below) to structure their paragraphs.
Resources
Alternative activity
continued...
Acronyms include:
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Text type
Acronym
Explanation
SEX
Statement, Explain
Explanation
SEE(D)
Statement, Explain,
Example
(add a Diagram)
Argument
APE
Assertion, Proof,
Example
Description
GEE
Generalisation,
Elaboration, Example
Discussion
PPQ
Point, Paraphrase,
Quote
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WrL&T
WrP&C
WrR&E
Follow-up activity
paragraph.
Resources
Templates.
A list of acronyms or other supports as needed.
The guided teaching and learning sequence
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Resources
Word maps
A writing task.
A whiteboard.
WrVoc
WrP&C
Markers.
The guided teaching and learning sequence
1. Identify a key focus word for the task.
2. Decide what the various branches of the word
map will be. These could be: the focus word
itself used with different meanings, other
words that have similar meanings, words from
the same word family as the focus word, words
that relate to the idea or theme presented by
the focus word.
3. Write that word in a central circle on the
board and draw the branches of the map
on the board.
4. Identify headings for each branch with the
learners before starting the brainstorm.
5. Ask the learners to brainstorm words that
relate to the focus word. Record each word
on the appropriate branch of the map
well as nouns.
Critically analyse the relationships between
words, for example, in discussing the completed
word map, are the learners debating whether
the meaning of one word is closer than another
to the meaning of the focus word? Would
everyone agree with the connections?
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Opposite meaning
Cold
Wet
Extinguish
Fire
Similar meanings
Ignite
Blaze
Burn
Word families
Fires
Fiery
Firing
Fired
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Clustering
WrVoc
WrP&C
Resources
styling mousse.
small group.
content.
Follow-up activities
of the cards.
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Structured overviews
WrVoc
WrL&T
WrP&C
and ideas.
hierarchy of ideas.
2. Select key words that relate to one main idea
and organise them into a structured overview.
(The learners should not see this overview.)
3. Draw up a blank version of the overview (that
is, draw the boxes and arrows, but dont add
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Clines
WrVoc
concreting).
of the cline.
Examples include:
, sh
med
ed
riek
ea
, scr
o us
lled
e
y
ga ri
,
, gre
uted
g
o
n
h
i
s
utgo
le d ,
, c al
l e, o
said
ci a b
,
o
d
s
e
,
r
n d ly
ispe
, wh
, frie
b le d
ta r y
i
l
m
o
u
m
er, s
, lon
luse
c
e
r
ss .
mit ,
mle
her
th o
a
f
,
p
dee
ow,
hall
s
,
t
fla
Follow-up activity
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Follow-up activities
Concept circles
WrVoc
WrP&C
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Pair definitions
WrVoc
Definitions
Words
[key word]
[key word]
[key word]
Resources
Two charts for each pair of learners. Each chart
consists of three columns:
the first is headed Words and lists key
words for the topic or task
the second is headed Definitions and is
left blank
the third is headed Words and is left blank.
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Follow-up activity
Telephone Whispers is a similar activity. Increase
the number of learners in the group to four and
extend this activity as follows:
Prepare four different charts, each with five
columns (labelled: Words, Definitions,
Words, Definitions, Words). In the first
column of each chart, write a different list of
key words.
Give each member of each group a copy of
one of the four charts. After writing their
definitions in the second column, each person
folds the page between the first and second
columns and passes the page on to the next
person.
That person fills in the third (Words) column,
folds the page again to hide the first two
columns, and passes the page on to the next
person (and so on until all five columns have
been completed).
When the four pages are opened up, the
learners can check whether the words
and definitions are similar and discuss any
anomalies.
Encourage the learners to use the words they
have used in their writing, checking against the
definitions to make sure they have used the
words correctly.
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Brainstorming
WrVoc
WrP&C
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page 48)
Vocabulary
to entertain or amuse
to persuade or convince
mechanical condition.
to clarify a point
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curriculum_literacy/
Suggested activities
Within the context of their writing tasks, the
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Suggested activities
The learners can begin by completing basic
forms that require personal details.
They can enter the names of their family and
friends into a cellphone, using correct spelling
and upper- and lower-case letters.
Learners can practise linking sound and
spelling patterns by generating families of
rhyming consonant vowel consonant patterns
(CVC) (for example, fat, hat, mat). The learners
can use these words to compose rap songs
or comic poems with you or in groups (for
example, Slim Jim, hes so thin, the doctors
listeninglisten).
Learners at the 4th step
Learners need to use strategies to spell more
specialised words, including those of many
syllables. They need to use knowledge of how
own writing.
Suggested activities
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Appendices
Contents
Appendix A: Mapping writing tasks
52
52
55
A.3 A
n example of a mapped text:
job application letter
56
59
61
61
64
65
66
67
71
71
72
74
75
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Course:
NQF level:
Using the progressions, circle the steps that best match the task demands.
Make notes for a checklist about specific expectations
A. Purpose and Audience
B. Spelling
Notes
(Notes will relate to the focus and clarity required
for the task. For example, to what extent does the
task require the writer to display an awareness of
purpose and audience?)
Notes
(Notes will relate to the accuracy of spelling
required for the task.)
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C. Vocabulary
Notes
What type of text is required for this task (for
example, a letter, an explanation, a description,
Notes
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Notes
(Notes will relate to the degree of polish required
Notes
by the task.)
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spelling
vocabulary
language
and text
features
planning
and
composing
revising
and editing
XXXXXXX
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Course: Office skills
NQF level: 2
Using the progressions, circle the steps that best match the task demands.
Make notes for a checklist about specific expectations.
A. Purpose and Audience
B. Spelling
Notes
(Notes will relate to the focus and clarity required
for the task. For example, to what extent does the
task require the writer to display an awareness of
purpose and audience?)
Use correct layout and register for a formal
business letter. Polite, brief, state the purpose
clearly.
Notes
(Notes will relate to the accuracy of spelling
required for the task.)
All spelling must be correct.
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C. Vocabulary
Notes
What type of text is required for this task (for
example, a letter, an explanation, a description,
Notes
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Notes
(Notes will relate to the degree of polish required
Notes
by the task.)
processing.
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20 April 2008
Sara Jones
Human Resources Manager
Delft Enterprises
Wiri Crescent
Henderson
Dear Sara,
I would like to apply for the position of Production Supervisor, as advertised on the
personnel notice board on 18 April 2008.
I have worked in the Production Team since 2004 and feel I have an excellent
knowledge of production processes and have made several improvements to the way
things are done. I know the strengths and weaknesses of the production area employees
and feel I could work with them to build a strong team that adds value to the company.
I have enclosed a copy of my CV and look forward to meeting with you to discuss this
application further.
Yours sincerely,
B. Bradbury
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Summary chart
PURPOSE AND
AUDIENCE
SPELLING
VOCABULARY
LANGUAGE
AND TEXT
FEATURES
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PLANNING
AND
COMPOSING
REVISING
AND EDITING
Date
Tutor
1. What do you write and how often? (Tick the appropriate boxes)
Every day
Every week
Occasionally
Never
Business letters
or emails
Personal letters
or emails
Short reports (less
than one page)
Long reports
Work forms such
as logs, records,
invoices, receipts
Course
assignments
Text messages
Meeting minutes
or notes
Websites, blogs
Other (list)
2. How do you feel about writing? (Place tick next to appropriate number)
Hate it
1
OKAY
2
LOVE IT
4
3. How good do you think you are at writing? (Place tick next to appropriate number)
NOT AT ALL GOOD
1
QUITE GOOD
2
VERY GOOD
4
4. How confident do you feel about writing in your daily life? (Place tick next to appropriate number)
NOT AT ALL CONFIDENT
QUITE CONFIDENT
VERY CONFIDENT
4
5. How important is writing for you in your daily life? (Place tick next to appropriate number)
NOT AT ALL IMPORTANT
QUITE IMPORTANT
VERY IMPORTANT
4
continued...
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6. What was the purpose of the last thing you wrote for work or study?
8. What do you find difficult about writing? (Tick the appropriate boxes)
Always
Sometimes
Never
Everything
Getting started
Getting my ideas organised
Having to write a long passage
Getting my ideas across
Spelling
Getting the sentences right
Handwriting
Using the computer
9. Do you do any of the following things while youre writing? (Tick the appropriate boxes)
Always OR
when needed
Sometimes
Never
continued...
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10. Do you do any of these things when you dont know how to spell a word? (Tick the appropriate boxes)
Always
Sometimes
Never
11. What do you do when you cant write something that you have to write:
at work?
at home?
in other places?
12. Do you have any problems that might make writing hard for you?
13. What are the best ways for tutors to help you with writing?
14. What are your writing goals? OR What would you like to be able to write easily?
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My profile
Name:
Date:
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2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
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SPELLING
VOCABULARY
LANGUAGE
AND TEXT
FEATURES
XXXXXX
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PLANNING
AND
COMPOSING
REVISING
AND EDITING
EVIDENCE
Spelling progression
WHAT TO LOOK FOR
EVIDENCE
Is there evidence that the writer can draw on and correctly spell a
bank of regular and some irregular high-frequency words?
Do the writers spelling attempts show some understanding of
the sounds of words and how they are written?
Is there evidence that the writer can draw on and spell a large bank
of high-frequency words including some related to the course?
Do the writers spelling attempts show some understanding of
strategies such as use of spelling patterns?
Is there evidence that the writer can spell most everyday words
correctly?
Is there evidence that the writer can use word analysis to spell
three- and (some) four-syllable words?
Is there evidence that the writer can spell more specialised
long words correctly and fluently?
Is there evidence that the writer uses knowledge of word parts
to spell complex words?
Is there evidence that the writer can spell a wide range of
unfamiliar, less familiar, or recently learnt words correctly
and fluently?
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Vocabulary progression
WHAT TO LOOK FOR
EVIDENCE
EVIDENCE
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EVIDENCE
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EVIDENCE
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Method
Sampling/equipment
Data collection
Procedures
Section/paragraph 2
Results
Records of data
Section/paragraph 3
Interpretation of data
Comments on findings
Comparisons
Section/paragraph 4
Discussion of findings
Implications
Conclusion
Statement summing up findings in relation to original aim or research questions
Appendices
Bibliography
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Strong winds
Describe the strong winds that come during a cyclone. Explain the effects these strong winds have on
settlements and on the people living in them.
Heavy rain
Explain the effects of the heavy rain on the countryside. Describe the extent of flooding and the damage
this causes to houses and farms.
Storm surge
Explain what a storm surge is. Describe its effects on coral rock and on the shoreline. Mention how the soil
becomes soaked with salt and the effect of this saturation on farming.
Conclusion
In your final section, draw together all your ideas to answer the set question. Summarise the main factors
you have written about in the three paragraphs in the body of the text. Write a concluding statement about
the extent of the destruction that tropical cyclones bring to the islands of the Pacific.
WORD BANK
hurricane-force winds
destroy
destruction
debris
uprooted
vegetation
buildings
missiles
downpours
intense
landslides
blocking
damage
loss of life
rivers
road
flood plain
property
crops
pollution
waves
coral reefs
high tide
erosion
contamination
dumped
coastal
excessive
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Writing frame #2
Question
What makes tropical cyclones so destructive to the islands of the Pacific and to the people who live there?
Introduction clarification of the phenomenon
A tropical cyclone is ...
A tropical cyclone brings destruction to the islands of the Pacific because ...
Explanation of characteristics and effects
Strong winds
The winds are so strong that ...
The winds destroy ...
People who live there ...
Heavy rain
The rain that comes with a cyclone is so heavy that ...
Flooding causes damage to the ...
Farmland becomes ...
Storm surge
A storm surge (high tides and big waves) occurs when strong winds ...
The coral reef is damaged by ...
The soil on the coastal land becomes ...
Conclusion
A great deal of damage is caused by ...
As a result ...
The people living on the islands of the Pacific ...
WORD BANK
destroy
destruction
buildings
houses
roads
vegetation
trees
rivers
landslides
blocks
property
crops
damage
loss of life
water
waves
coral reefs
contaminated
dumped
coastal
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Giving examples
Comparing
Contrasting
Adding information
Interpreting data
Conclusion
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Introductory sentence
What are you trying to explain?
How?
Who?
When?
Why?
Where?
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