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report, by its very nature, defends itself against the risk of being read.
First, students will tend to simply restate or rewrite the comments, opinions, and facts of the
article or case. The only reason this should be done would be to enable you to make your point
about the comment/opinion/ facts. The essential task is to have a point, and to make it. And
that point IS NOT to merely provide a recitation. You are to THINK about what is contained in
the materials and provide evidence about what you are thinking. This problem commonly
arises when a student spends most of their time restating and not evaluating the
material.
Second, students will tend to miss the linkages to the core content/ concepts as reflected in the
readings, cases, and lectures. You must make explicit linkages between the situation you are
reading about and the material we are exploring and applying in this class. This problem
arises when a student fails to provide a link, fails to be precise about a link, or provides
a link that simply does not apply.
Third, there are problems of expression there are awkward or non-existent transitions
between thoughts, comments are repeated, or the student simply does not make a point in a
clear, concise and compelling way. This problem arises when a student tends to be
superficial or tends to interact quickly without purpose or organization.
Fourth, there is an overemphasis on being negative and taking the role of critic, rather than
being constructive and balanced. This problem arises when a student tends toward being
personal and disagreeable rather than focusing on the disagreement.
Here are some of the notations one might encounter in an evaluation of written material that
suffers from these problems: