ESSAY COMMON MISTAKES

Detect the mistakes in the sentences below.

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Congratulations on your achievement and I was going to tell you about

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my plan.
. So you have offered a scholarship to further engineering ..
We plan to met up in two week time.
She just got her lisence, still new on the road.
My parents and I was buzy at work.
If you wan anything for repay your kindness, remember please let us

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know.
I am the brother of the girl you have helped in an accident last Tuesday.
Now, my sister injured her left arm badly but luckly you were
I and my parents at work so could not thank you in person.
But she didn have your contact no.
I have received your letter yesterday.
We shall meets in two weeks time.
Dont stop to write letter.
She could not control her bike and felt down from the motocycle.
We still working.
My sister was noted your address.
I had recieved your letter last week.
I beleave that you had worked hard.
I want to be a sucessful doctor.
. because in that day, all our friends
Your sincerly,
Thanks you last week me that you help me.
My sister just got her license, stil got a new on the road.
That day, she was builed by other road users.
That days, she is already on the way back home.
The other roads users were riding to close so the motorcycle cannot

control her bike.

27. My sister have injured her arm.
28. She have noted your address but never contact her number so this is the
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person that why I writing this letter.

You already help was really appreciated.
If you replay your kindness then you will let us know.
. does not noted your contact number.
You were behid her and kind enough to help.
So you offerend a scholarship to further engineering in London.
We plann to celebrate your success before you left.

Essay Common Mistakes prepared by Ms Sue Soh.

35. Let do our best in our next phrase.

36. The perpose of the visit is helping the needies.
37. We have organize a singing contest for entertainment.
38. Two teacher, who is our club advisers would accompanied us.
39. I write this letter because want request for permission to visited the Old
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Floks Home.
.to furthur engineering cause in London.
We should be celebrated your success before you leave.
Invite others friends too.
That all for now, I stop at here.
Thanks you for you kind act.
We are so thank you that brought my sister to the clinik.
She dont know the motorcycle how to control so she still new on the
road. But sometimes, she was bullied by other the road user because

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they do not seeing the rules at the road.

They were motorist and they are ridding too close to her bike.
Luckily you were behind her so you can help her.
I am felt sorry because my parents and I were at work.
Non-stop praticing.
My parents are send their heartiest congratulations.
I am congratulations on your achievements.

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I congratulations you get offered a scholarship.

I excited you deserve it and effort has paid off.
Before you leave, I have celebrate your succese for bid a farewell.
I will be enroling in medicine programmed in Manipal Univessity.
On the day that happen the accident..
She felt off from her bike.
We will bring some foods.
There are 30 members of the club will be coming and we decided it will

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be accompany by two teachers.

We are plan to clean
We look foward to hear a favourable reply from you.
We must bringing some
We must accompanied by two teachers.
Member of my club are keen..
We also bringing biscuits and magazines.
They would be 30 members of my club will coming.
We after clean the home, it will giveing them a new look.
We belief that will be entertaining them.

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70. I am writing on members of my club are keen to visit the old folks.

Essay Common Mistakes prepared by Ms Sue Soh.

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