Name : Sarah Nurul Izzah M

Class : XI MIA 2
ANALYTICAL EXPOSITION TEXT
The Problem of Being Too Fat
Being too fat is commonly known as overweight or obesity.
It is simply defined as too much body fat inside.
Overweight potentially leads high risk of health problem.
Being too fat is recognized as a major factor for heart
disease. Due to the overweight,the heart will work harder.
It can lead to the heart attact.
Furthermore, obesity potentially rises blood cholesterol
and blood preasure. In addition, being too fat can change
the amount of sugar in the blood. This will cause diabetes
and other serous disease.
Beside all of that, being too fat is often avoided by many
young women. They said that becoming too fat will bother
their physical beauty appearance.
More serious studies are necessary to see the effect of
obesity. However it is clear enough that overweight is not
good enough for healthy life.

Generic structure of analytical exposition

text
1. Thesis : Overweight potentially leads high risk of
health problem.
2. Argument :
a) Being too fat is recognized as a major factor for
heart disease
b) Obesity potentially rises blood cholesterol and
blood pressure

c) Being too fat can change the amount of sugar

in the blood. This will cause diabetes and other
serous disease
d) Being too fat is often avoided by many young
women
3. Reiteration : It is clear enough that overweight is not
good enough for healty life.

Is Smoking Good for Us?

Before we are going to smoke, it is better to look at
the fact. About 50 thousands people die every year in
Britain as direct result of smoking. This is seven times as
many as die road accidents. Nearly a quarter of smokers
die because of diseases caused by smoking.
Ninety percent of lung cancers are caused by
smoking. If we smoke five cigarettes a day, we are six
times more likely to die of lung cancer than non smoker.
If we smoke twenty cigarettes a day, the risk is nineteen
greater. Ninety five percentof people who suffer of
bronchitis are people who are smoking. Smokers are two
and half times more likely to die of heart disease than
non smokers.
Additionally, children of smoker are more likely to
develope bronchitis and pneumonia. In one hour in smoky
room, non smoker breathes as much as subtance causing
cancer as if he had smoked fifteen cigarettes.
Smoking is really good for tobacco companies because
they do make much money from smoking habit. Smoking
however is not good for everybody else.

Generic Structure

1. Thesis : Nearly a quarter of smokers die because of

diseases caused by smoking. (p.1)
2. Arguments :
a) Ninety percent of lung cancers are caused by
smoking.
b) If we smoke five cigarettes a day,we are six
times more likely to die.

c) If we smoke twenty cigarettes a day, the risk

is nineteen geater.
d) 95% people who suffer bronchitis are people
who smoking.
e) Smokers are two and half times more likely to
die of heart disease than non smokers.
3. Reiteration : additionally, smoking however is not
good for every body else.(p.3)

Name : Aditya Rizky Saputra

Class: XI MIA 2
Writing is a Great for Money Online
The emergence of the internet has given internet
enterpreneurs many ways to make money. Writers are one
group that have benefited from their talents as a result in
the rise of internet based jobs.
Blog writing is an increasingly popular way to earn money
online determined by the owner of the blog. They are very
popular because of the blogs are usually written on a
certain subject area but can vary as its content is heir
simplicity to get up and running. There are many free
websites out there that will help you set up your own blog
plus advertisement is a potential money.
Article writing is an increasingly popular way to earn
money online. Make sure to gear your articles to promote
and advertise you own business ventures. These articles
are a free way to market the products and services you
offer for free. The most effective advertising with these
articlesbcomes from the dialogue box that is inserted at
the end of each article. These dialogue boxes contain links
to basically any website you eould like to drive traffic to.
For intance, you might have one link in your dialogue box
to a product you are selling and one to a blog where you
are promoting a discussing other products.

Writing takes some time to gain credibility through but

once its done earning potential can become very
powerful.

Generic Structure
1. Thesis : writing is good in making money.
2. Arguments:
a) Blog is a potentially earning money
b) Writing articles is good in earning money
3. Reiteration : credible writer is powerful to make
money online.

Importence of Library
I personally believe that libraries are among
humanity most important institutions for several
reasons.
Firstly, most of humanitys collective knowledge is
stored in libraries. Secondly, libraries protect and
preserve this knowledge. They also classify or
group the materials into logical and easily
available divisions.
Furthermore, libraries make the materials available
to everyone and even provide librarians to help us
find what we need.
Finally, libraries are our link to the past and our gift
to the future.
From the facts above, i conclude that libraries are
important institutions for humanity.

Generic Structure
1. Thesis : libraries are among humanity most
important intitutions .
2. Arguments:
a) Most of humanitys collective knowledge is
stored in libraries.
b) Libraries protect and preserve this
knowledge.

3.

c) Libraries make the materials available to

everyone.
d) Libraries are our link to the past and our gift
to the future.
Reiteration : libraries are important institutions for
humanity.