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LIII
WORDSWORTH'S DESCRIPTIVE SKETCHES
AND THE PRELUDE, BOOK VI
IN THE summer of 1790 William Wordsworth and his friend,
Robert Jones, spent their summer vacation in France and Swit-
zerland. The record of this memorable journey has been left to
us in two of Wordsworth's poems: Descriptive Sketches written
in 1792 and The Prelude, Book VI, written probably in 1804. The
journey described in each is, of course, the same, yet variations
in the accounts are quite marked. The immediate reaction as to
the causes of the differences, no doubt, is that Wordsworth had
forgotten many of the details of the journey. Yet this explanation
cannot be true, as a careful analysis shows. Garrod,1 in his para-
graph concerning Wordsworth's poetical theory that poetry "takes
its origin from emotion recollected in tranquillity," hints at the
real reason for the discrepancies:
The question [he says] is interesting, not only in connection with De-
scriptive Sketches, but also as affecting the problem of the essential. truth-
fulness of large parts of The Prelude.
Then in speaking of Descriptive Sketches and The Prelude, Part VI, he
says:
I have not space here .... to institute a detailed comparison of the two
pieces. It will, however, be relevant to .... show, as it can be shown,
the essential untruthfulness of Descriptive Sketches. Wordsworth was two
years distant from his object; but he did not yet understand, I would sup-
pose, the conditions of his art. I will try and show how this was so; and
when I have done so, I will point a contrast by calling attention to por-
tions of the sixth book of The Prelude which exhibit, as I think, a remark-
able truth to impressions fourteen years old.
It is evident that Garrod, judging between the two accounts as
given in Descriptive Sketches and in The Prelude inclines to the
latter as essentially the nearer to the truth.
It is my purpose in this paper to analyze the two records of this
journey a little more fully than Mr. Garrod has done, in order to
show, first, the variations in relating the itinerary itself; secondly,
the changes in Wordsworth's attitude towards certain subjects
treated in both of the poems. My conclusions, I may say frankly
at the outset, do not agree in all respects with Mr. Garrod's.
When the two boys arrived in France they were a singular look-
ing pair, according to Wordsworth's description:
H. G. Garrod,Wordsworth,p. 46.
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Of this the Reverend Mr. Hutchinson says, "The ascent from the
well is a gentle one, not 'sheer,' nor does there appear to be any
hollow by which the shepherd could ascend."12
The Brothers, another of Wordsworth's poems, shows the same
method in regard to the inexact and untruthful use of details.
Mr. Knight's note once again goes to prove that Wordsworth
sacrificed truth for effect whenever he so desired.
You see yon precipice;
.... called,The Pillar.
Upon its aery summitcrownedwith heath,
The loiterer,not unnoticedby his comrades,
Lay stretchedat ease.
So says the poem. The editor makes the following comment:
The 'aery summitcrownedwith heath,' however,on which the 'loiterer'
'lay stretched at ease,' could neither be the top of this 'rock' nor the
summit of the 'mountain:'not the former,becausethere is no heath on
it, and it wouldbe impossiblefor a wearyman, loiteringbehindhis com-
panions,to ascendit to rest; not the latter, becauseno one restingon the
summitof the mountaincouldbe "not unnoticedby his comrades.l3
Upon examining still another poem, Michael, one finds in Words-
worth's own words the recording of the combination of facts gather-
ed from various sources into one whole:
The characterandcircumstancesof Lukeweretakenfroma familyto whom
hadbelonged,manyyearsbefore,the housewe lived in at Town-end,along
with some fields and woodlandson the eastern shore of Grasmere. The
name of the Evening Star was not in fact given to his house, but to
anotheron the same side of the valley, moreto the north.-I. F.14
The late Bishop of Lincoln in his Memoirs of Wordsworthmakes a
different statement as to the source of the poem. He says:
Michaelwas foundedon the son of an old couplehavingbecomedissolute,
and run away from his parents; and on an old shepheredhaving been
seven years in buildingup a sheep-foldin a solitaryvalley.15
Since in various poems Wordsworth has combined various facts
to make one story; since he has paid no attention to exact detail;
and since he has elsewhere been deliberately inaccurate, it seems
that the variation of the itinerary in Descriptive Sketches and in
12Knight,Op. cit., vol. II, p. 137.
13
Ibid., II, 203.
14Knight,Poems
of WilliamWordsworth,
II, 215.
15 Ibid.,
p. 233.
1148 Wordsworth's "Descriptive Sketches"
later he spent two days at beautiful Lake Como and three whole
days at the Lake of Morat; places which are described at length in
the Keswill letter.
It would seem, then, that in 1790, Wordsworth's real attitude
was that of a boy who passed through these affairs, yet scarcely
sensed them, as it is related in The Prelude; and that the attitude
toward the French Revolution as found in Descriptive Sketches
is highly colored by events of 1792 and 1973 which were occupying
such a large place in his thoughts at the time of composition of
the poem that he could not eliminate them from a narration of
experiences which occurred two years previously.
As has been hinted, Wordsworth's chief interest in 1790 was
not in politics but in nature. The first few books of The Prelude
are concerned with the growth of his interest in and love for nature;
a development which, though gradual, was strong. Though the
great outburst of feeling was to show itself in poetry later, in the
Keswill letter there is found the true spirit of nature worship ex-
perienced during his first tour of France. In this account of the
journey he writes:
I am a perfectenthusiastin my admirationof naturein all her various
forms,and I have lookedupon,and, as it were,conversedwith the objects
which this country has presentedto my view so long and with such in-
creasingpleasure,that the idea of partingfrom them oppressesme with
a sadnesssimilarto what I have alwaysfelt in quittinga beloved friend.22
It was Wordsworth's intention at first to give "to these sketches
the title of Picturesque: but the Alps are insulted in applying to
them that term. Whoever, in attempting to describe their sublime
features, should confine himself to the cold rules of painting would
give his reader but a very imperfect idea of those emotions which
they have the irresistible power of communicating to the most im-
passive imaginations" ;23and in the reason for changing the name
is found a love for nature vastly superior to that found within
the poem itself.
Both the Keswill letter and the quotation in regard to the
title of Descriptive Sketches show Wordsworth's love of nature:
which evidently was his real feeling both in 1790 and 1792. Why,
then, does he not infuse more of his feelings into Descriptive Sket-
ches? For this, it would seem, there are two distinct reasons.
First, Wordsworth was only a college youth still under the
22ProseWorks,III, 225.
23
Legouis,Youthof WilliamWordsworth,
p. 152.
1152 W/ordsworth's "Descriptive Sketches"
influence of all that the classic school held most dear. One should
not be surprised, therefore, when the fledgeling poet uses verse
forms and methods of the age, and discusses nature in a stilted
form through the use of many personifications and metaphors.
The traditions of the age influenced Wordsworth to such an ex-
tent that few nature passages in Descriptive Sketches are sponta-
neous and powerful.
But there was still another reason why he wrote about nature as
he did. The explanation is to be found in the manner in which
Wordsworth reacted toward nature (1) immediately, and (2)
ultimately. Undoubtedly, the passages in the two poems de-
scribing the crossing of the Alps illustrate these attitudes better
than any others.
This was the time in Wordsworth's life when nature was to
him a source of sensuous pleasure only with no deeper signifi-
cance, as he tells us in Tintern Abbey.
The sounding cataract
Hauntedme like a passion: the tall rock,
The mountainand the deep and gloomy wood,
Their coloursand their forms,were then to me
An appetite;a feelingand a love
That had no need of a remotercharm,
By thought supplied,nor any interest
Unborrowedfrom the eye.24
Realizing, then, that at the time that Wordsworth crossed the
Alps, nature was the source only of immediate pleasure through
the senses, it is not surprising that in Descriptive Sketches "this
central and supreme memory is wholly lost."25
In The Prelude, Wordsworth admits that many incidents which
were without special significance to him at the time of their oc-
currence led to
tenderthoughtsby means
Less often instantaneousin effect;
Led .... to these by paths that, in the main
Weremore circuitous,but not less sure
Duly to reachthe point markedout by Heaven.26
Such, indeed, was the crossing of the Alps, which in The Prelude
becomes the supreme memory of the entire tour. In it Wordsworth
says that at the time that he crossed the Alps he felt as if he saw
24 Tintern Abbey, lines 75-83. 26
Prelude, VI, 748-'53.
25
Garrod, op. cit., p. 52.
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