Professional Documents
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by SHAIKH HASAN
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Agreed! Peiyi
Yu
good structure
good
good!
good!
argument
FN7220_Coursework
GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE
GENERAL COMMENTS
77
Instructor
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good structure
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7.6 5 / 10
BACKGROUND (20%)
8 / 10
Evidence of background reading. Comprehensively researched. Academic and prof essional Journal
articles
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Well researched. Some over reliance on reviews or texts. Many articles not f rom
recent or seminal publications.
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Well researched. Signif icant over reliance on reviews or texts. Could have used
more articles f rom recent or seminal publications
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ANALYSIS (15%)
7 / 10
Very little materials are relevant to the objectives of the study. Shows very little
understanding of the topics described in the reading materials. Provides very little
synthesis and analysis of previous research and its relation to the current study
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Very f ew materials are relevant to the objectives of the study. Shows little
understanding of the topics described in the reading materials. Provides little
synthesis and analysis of previous research and its relation to the current study
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Very f ew materials are relevant to the objectives of the study. Shows very limited
understanding of the topics described in the reading materials. Provides very
limited synthesis and analysis of previous research and its relation to the current
study
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"Some materials are relevant to the objectives of the study. Shows some
understanding of the topics described in the reading materials. Provide some
synthesis and analysis of previous research and its relation to the current study "
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Most materials are relevant to the objectives of the study. Shows certain
understanding of the topics described in the reading materials. Provide certain
synthesis and analysis of previous research and its relation to the current study
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Most materials are relevant to the objectives of the study. Shows reasonable
understanding of the topics described in the reading materials. Provide reasonable
synthesis and analysis of previous research and its relation to the current study
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Most materials are relevant to the objectives of the study. Shows suf f icient
understanding of the topics described in the reading materials. Provide suf f icient
synthesis and analysis of previous research and its relation to the current study
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"All materials are relevant to the objectives of the study. Shows suf f icient
understanding of the topics described in the reading materials. Provide synthesis
and analysis of previous research and its relation to the current study "
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"All materials are relevant to the objectives of the study. Shows in-depth
understanding of the topics described in the reading materials. Provide synthesis
and analysis of previous research and its relation to the current study "
8 / 10
Critical T hinking. Evidence of relevant research and analysis. Demonstrate thought processes that
examine issues outside the box and critically assess current practices and strategies
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Some critical analysis of strengths and limitations of the literature but mostly
descriptive
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EVIDENCE (10%)
8 / 10
Use of supporting data/evidence. Provide real lif e examples to support your arguments.l
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8 / 10
Clarity, Structure and Ref erencing Detailed and concise, coherent and f ormal structure, f ocused and
f luent work should be demonstrated. It also should be well presented; Appropriate application of
Harvard ref erencing should be evident.
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Very poorly organized with most of the f ormat specif ied not adhered to. Very poor
use of language with not much accuracy in syntax, grammar and mechanics, making
most parts of explanation incomprehensible and incoherent. Very limited word
choice. Evidence of some research is present.
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Very poorly organized with most of the f ormat specif ied not adhered to. Very poor
use of language with not much accuracy in syntax, grammar and mechanics, making
most parts of explanation incomprehensible and incoherent. Very limited word
choice. Evidence of some research is present.
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Poorly organized with some of the f ormat specif ied not adhered to. Poor use of
language with limited accuracy in syntax, grammar and mechanics, making some
parts of explanation incomprehensible and incoherent. Limited word choice. A f ew
bibliography entries have inf ormation in the correct f orm and order. Citations may
be in alphabetical order. A f ew in-text citations are written in the correct f orm.
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Poorly organized with some of the f ormat specif ied not adhered to. Poor use of
language with limited accuracy in syntax, grammar and mechanics, making some
parts of explanation incomprehensible and incoherent. Limited word choice. A f ew
bibliography entries have inf ormation in the correct f orm and order. Citations may
be in alphabetical order. A f ew in-text citations are written in the correct f orm.
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Fairly organized using the f ormat specif ied. Fair use of language with some
accuracy in syntax, grammar and mechanics, making explanation mostly clear and
coherent. Some variety of appropriate word choice. Inf ormation is nearly complete,
but in the wrong f orm or order. Not in alphabetical order. Some in-text citations are
written in the correct f orm.
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Satisf actorily organized using the f ormat specif ied. Good use of language with
some accuracy in syntax, grammar and mechanics, making explanation mostly clear
and coherent. Some variety of appropriate word choice. Inf ormation is nearly
complete, but in the wrong f orm or order. Not in alphabetical order. Some in-text
citations are written in the correct f orm.
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Very good organization using the f ormat specif ied. very good use of language with
mostly accurate syntax, grammar and mechanics, making explanation clear and
coherent. Wide variety of appropriate word choice. Most bibliography entries are
complete, in the correct f orm and order. Citations are listed mostly in alphabetical
order. Most in-text citations are written in the correct f orm.
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Excellent organization using the f ormat specif ied. Excellent use of language with
mostly accurate syntax, grammar and mechanics, making explanation clear and
coherent. Wide variety of appropriate word choice. Most bibliography entries are
complete, in the correct f orm and order. Citations are listed mostly in alphabetical
order. Most in-text citations are written in the correct f orm.
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Ef f ective organization using the f ormat specif ied. Ef f ective use of language with
mostly accurate syntax, grammar and mechanics, making explanation clear and
coherent. Wide variety of appropriate word choice. Most bibliography entries are
complete, in the correct f orm and order. Citations are listed mostly in alphabetical
order. Most in-text citations are written in the correct f orm.
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"Very ef f ective organization using the f ormat specif ied. Very ef f ective use of
language with accuracy in syntax, grammar and mechanics, making explanation
clear and coherent. Very wide variety of appropriate word choice. All bibliography
entries are complete, in the correct f orm and order. Citations are listed in
alphabetical order. All in-text citations are written in the correct f orm. "
EMPIRICAL Q2 (20%)
7 / 10
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Description of experiments lacked some major aspect. Poor links between f indings
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and literature
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Clear description of proposed experiments. Very clear links between f indings and
literature.
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Very clear description of proposed experiments. Very clear links between f indings
and literature.
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Clear and concise description of proposed experiments. Well developed, very clear
and concise links between f indings and literature.
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Clear and concise description of proposed experiments. Well developed, very clear
and concise links between f indings and literature.