MUET WRITING PAPER 800/4 QUESTION 2

The world today is turning more to electronic communications such as the e-mail, Facebook and Short
message System (SMS). What is your opinion of this growing trend? Discuss. You should write at least 350
words.
Everywhere we turn today, the world is crowded with people busy typing SMSes on their Nokias or iPhones
or someone is staring unblinkingly at a Facebook or Yahoo page on the computer screen. Whether you like
it or not, the age of Information Technology is upon us, and we can either learn new skills and adapt to this
new technology, or be forever lost and stuck in the older generation. In my opinion, I am fully convinced that
this growing trend is the way of the future, and it brings countless benefits to mankind. In this essay, I will
discuss three positive effects of electronic communication, namely its efficiency, enhances communication
and creates a borderless world community.
First and foremost, more and more people are relying on e-mail, Facebook, Short Message System (SMS)
and other types of electronic communication tools because of its high efficiency. This is because in today's
age of globalisation, we need information at the tip of our fingers. Moreover, with the use of these tools, we
can increase the speed of getting the necessary and relevant information within seconds and this will
increase our productivity. For example, gone are the days of using 'snail mail' or regular letters using stamps
and envelopes and many more examples of 'old' technology because it is simply too slow and inefficient.
Therefore, these e-communication tools increases the access to important information which is why the new
generation is fully accepting this growing trend.
Secondly, this form of technology enhances communication among people today. This means that when we
use SMS, e-mails and websites like Facebook, we are able to communicate clearly and directly to our target
audience. Furthermore, people today find that the message is more important than the form it comes in as
an e-mail in short but clear sentences is just as good or even better than a long and formal letter. For
instance, an SMS can give clear instructions in just a few words and this communicates what needs to be
done quickly and directly. Thus, when the intended message can be spread clearly using short and clear
information like in SMSes and emails, communication can be enhanced and there will be less problems of
miscommunication.
Last but not least, e-communication creates a borderless community in the world we live in today. This is
due to the fact that the boundaries that separate each country becomes less relevant when information is
transferred without limitations. In addition, the world would be a better place because there is a sense of 1World commitment, respect and tolerance for the global community through efficient and clear ecommunication. Take for example, we are able to connect with people on an international basis using
Facebook, Friendster, Tagged, Hotmail, Yahoo and others. Hence, these tools will enhance global unity and
create a more peaceful world.
In a nutshell, this growing trend has many positive effects not just to individuals but the global society in
terms of efficiency, enhancing communicative skills and shaping a borderless community. In my opinion, I
still firmly believe that this latest trend is the best way forward and if we do not catch up, we will be left
behind by the tide of development. Our government can encourage the proper usage of electronic
communications by increasing communication amenities and broadband accessibility especially in rural
areas so that they can enjoy the same facilities as city-folks therefore balancing the development of our
country towards achieving Vision 2020.