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DEFINITION OF TOPIC:
What is the thesis statement? Which aspects of placement and presentation of the thesis
did you find helpful?
The thesis statement is In relation to business ethics, one topic which is very
controversial is whether or not it is ethically sound to compromise an employees right to
freedom of expression, inside as well as outside of the workplace environment. It was
helpful that it was at the end of the introduction paragraph, as is traditional.
Which aspects of the thesis did you find unclear? What additional background or context
would you require in order to understand the thesis?
The thesis was fairly clear, I find stating one topic which is very controversial,
to be extraneous. Perhaps change it to be it is controversial whether.
Are there paragraphs where the author could have used more support?
The paragraph about consequentialism and deontology could use more support in
describing the aspects of each ethical approach.
Peer Review Form p. 2
GENERAL COMMENTS:
Given all of the above, remind the author (and yourself) what you liked best in this
paper?
I liked best the providing of multiple different examples of situations where rights
of employees were compromised.
What do you think should be the authors priorities in revising this piece?
More application of the ethical approaches to the situations and removing I
believe.