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ANNOTATED
BIBLIOGRAPHY
WHAT IS A BIBLIOGRAPHY?
General term for a list of sources used during topic research
What is an annotation?
WHAT IS AN ANNOTATED
BIBLIOGRAPHY?
Cites source following a specified formatting style (we
are using MLA)
Provides a summary and/or evaluation of each source
Annotated bibliographies can include
Summary
Assessment Reflection
Summary
Critique (Assessment of Presentation)
SHIFTS
1. I wonder whether Karla knew of the theft and, if so, whether she
reported it to the police.
WHO/WHOM
Who
2. ____did Mom invite to Marcelas birthday party?
Whom
3. Janice is the student ____ has read the most books.
Who
Whom
5. Before signing up for the class, students wanted to
know ____ would teach the class.
Who
6. ______ will the attorney call to testify?
Whom
FRAGMENTS
FRAGMENTS
A sentence is a group of words that has three elements:
Subject
Verb
And a Complete thought
A fragment seems to be a complete sentence but it lacks
either a
Subject
Verb
Or a complete thought.
FRAGMENTS
What are the two basic ways to correct sentence
fragments?
Add what is missing (subject, verb, or both)
Attach fragment to sentence before or after it
FRAGMENTS
What are the five trouble spots that signal possible
fragments?
A word group that begins with a(n)
Preposition
SPOTTING FRAGMENTS
A word group that begins with a preposition
SPOTTING FRAGMENTS
What are the five trouble spots that signal possible
fragments?
A word group that begins with a(n)
Preposition
Dependent word
SPOTTING FRAGMENTS
A word group that begins with a dependent word
SPOTTING FRAGMENTS
What are the five trouble spots that signal possible
fragments?
A word group that begins with a(n)
Preposition
Dependent word
-ing verb form
SPOTTING FRAGMENTS
A word group that begins with an -ing form verb
SPOTTING FRAGMENTS
What are the five trouble spots that signal possible
fragments?
A word group that begins with a(n)
Preposition
Dependent word
-ing verb form
to and a verb
SPOTTING FRAGMENTS
A word group that begins with to and a verb
SPOTTING FRAGMENTS
What are the five trouble spots that signal possible
fragments?
A word group that begins with a(n)
Preposition
Dependent word
-ing verb form
to and a verb
an example or explanation
SPOTTING FRAGMENTS
Word groups that are examples or explanations
ENG 102
RUN-ONS
RUN-ONS
1. Whats another name for a sentence?
Independent clause
2. What term describes two complete sentences joined
without any punctuation?
Fused run-on
The first public screening of a projected motion picture was
held on December 28, 1895 within one year, the earliest
known pornographic movie was released.
RUN-ONS
3. What term describes two complete sentences
joined by only a comma?
RUN-ONS
4. What are the five ways to correct run-ons?
Add a period
The first public screening of a projected motion picture was held on December 28,
1895.Within one year, the earliest known pornographic movie was released.
Add a semicolon
The first public screening of a projected motion picture was held on December 28,
1895; within one year, the earliest known pornographic movie was released.
Add a semicolon, a conjunctive adverb, and a comma
The first public screening of a projected motion picture was held on December 28,
1895; moreover, within one year, the earliest known pornographic movie was
released.
RUN-ONS
4. What are the five ways to correct run-ons?
PROOFREADING TIPS
Make sure all sentences contain a subject, a verb, and a complete thought.
Check the application of capitalization rules.
Highlight all verbs. Check the verb tenses to ensure that none of the verbs shift.
Is there a subject before each verb? (mood/voice shift)
Cross out all first person pronouns (I, me, my, we, us). Cross out all second person
pronouns (you, your).You must write in third person!
Ensure that there arent any shifts from a statement to a question or vice versa.
Check the words after who/whom. What part of speech is that word? If it is a verb,
use who. If it is not a verb, use whom.
FOR THURSDAY
Read these articles:
FOR THURSDAY
Create your topic/keyword list for summarizing the
articles.
Answer these questions about the articles: