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throughout the production so things were run easily as well as produced to their
maximum potential.
What feedback have you received?
Overall our feedback was particularly positive, there was a good mention of how
engaging our production was and how our technical aspects such as narration
and split screen helped the production look more professional.
My peers also claimed the narrative was very consistent and clear as it was
executed through skilfully with a tripod in ALL of our different shots.
The lighting was good and suited the natural themed narrative however there
was no particular mention as to if it could be improved/if it was outstanding.
Mise en scene was accurate as my group and I decided to film in our own
locations for particular scenes and picked a location that would be known for a
date
Audio was well suited and emphasised comedic effects however some felt that
some of the audio was particularly distorted due to wind, as well as some of the
sound effects being quite over the top EG the stair scene.
Also, there was criticism of the fact my group did not use titles as well as a film
noir however I felt it was quite difficult for us to introduce a film noir as many of
our scenes were unsuited to the themes it creates.
How could improve your preliminary task?
There are a few ways I could improve my preliminary task. Overall I find I could
have added titles when editing so the audiences had a between understanding of
themes and characters involved. Similarly a main title could have been added so
audiences had something to remember the production by so they could share via
social convergence on social media for instance. With the audio I feel we could
have also improved by perhaps using personal mics instead of a boom mic. This
would cancel out background noise as it would be closer to the main dialogue
source. When fixing the abruptness of the audio fading I feel I could have
increased the full effect fade so the audio did not finish as quickly as it did. EG
when Michelle is speaking it quickly fades so you cannot hear the final words of
her sentence
I would not improve how I worked in a group as I felt we worked efficiently
together and overall produced a high quality preliminary production.