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by Brandon Gibson
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T IME SUBMIT T ED
23-SEP-2016 09:59PM
WORD COUNT
787
SUBMISSION ID
710112995
CHARACT ER COUNT
3446
PA
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Comma Splice
Comma Needed
Comma Needed
Comma Needed
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Comma Splice
WC
5
Run-on
Narrative
GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE
GENERAL COMMENTS
94
Instructor
Brandon,
/100
Great work! Just be sure to keep an eye out f or runon thoughts and comma splices. T hese seem to be
hindering some of your ideas throughout your
writing.
PAGE 1
Comment 1
Your page numbers are correct; just be sure it's in T NR f ont, 12 pt.
Comment 2
Good MLA header! I would double check that all line spacings are set at 0.
QM
PA
You have an error with Pronoun-Antecedent relationship. Your pronoun does not have a
def inite antecedent; conf using.
QM
Run-on
Run-on sentence:
T he sentence contains two or more independent clauses. Separate the clauses with a period or
semicolon.
Comment 3
Good way to "lead" your readers with this main thought; as an encouragement f or the next
assignment, I might have encouraged a f ew more details to expand the "so what" response.
QM
Run-on
Run-on sentence:
T he sentence contains two or more independent clauses. Separate the clauses with a period or
semicolon.
QM
Comma Splice
You have two thoughts joined only by a comma. You need to add a coordinating conjunction or
separate your thoughts into two separate sentences.
PAGE 2
QM
Comma Needed
Here, you've f orgotten to include a comma. Suggest reviewing rules f or appropriate comma
usage.
QM
Comma Needed
Here, you've f orgotten to include a comma. Suggest reviewing rules f or appropriate comma
usage.
QM
Comma Needed
Here, you've f orgotten to include a comma. Suggest reviewing rules f or appropriate comma
usage.
QM
Run-on
Run-on sentence:
T he sentence contains two or more independent clauses. Separate the clauses with a period or
semicolon.
QM
Comma Splice
You have two thoughts joined only by a comma. You need to add a coordinating conjunction or
separate your thoughts into two separate sentences.
Comment 4
No comma necessary here. You have the f irst part of a correlative pair, where you include "not
only" and "but also."
QM
WC
Word choice error:
Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very dif f icult
to do. Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too
hard to come up with a f ancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a
handy tool when you're trying to f ind a word that's similar to, but more accurate than, the one
you're looking up. However, it can of ten introduce more problems if you use a word thinking it
has exactly the same meaning.
Comment 5
Italicize titles of larger works, like books.
PAGE 3
QM
Run-on
Run-on sentence:
T he sentence contains two or more independent clauses. Separate the clauses with a period or
semicolon.
Comment 6
Good! You really make strong connections in your conclusion to your original main idea of how
you experienced a good deal of growth sophomore year.
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somewhat clear Main point or thesis has some issues with understandability
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Some minor issues in readability Writer displays strong ability to use grammatical
conventions appropriately
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