Revision of grammar and language usage

Correct the following sentences.

1 Solar and eolic energies are developing fastly because they are cheap.
Solar and eolic wind energies are developing fastly because they are cheap
2 This is a risk unnecessary and energy can be obtained from other sources.
This is an unnecessary risk and energy can be obtained from other sources
3 This is due, for example, to frequents accidents.
This is due, for example, to frequents accidents.
4 And the last problem, but not less important for that is that
And the last, but not least/less important problem for that is that
5 Although most of enterprises
Although most of enterprises Although most of the enterprises
6 Other great problem is the possibility of a great explosion.
Another great problem is the possibility of a great big/huge/ enormous explosion
7 because there are less break downs.
because there are less fewer break-downs
8 The handling of radioactive substances have a high risk.
The handling of radioactive substances has/presents/ involves /implies (supposes) a high risk
9 Nowadays, the old machinery that have most industries produces frequent accidents.
Nowadays, the old machinery (that/which) most industries have produces frequent accidents
10 This solution will produce better safety conditions, that results in a increase in production.
This solution will produce better safety conditions, that which will results in an increase in production
11 This causes a lot of problems that they must be solved.
This causes a lot of problems that they must be solved
12 I think we should make something for avoid the use of nuclear energy since is a great threat for the
environment.
I think we should make do something to avoid/ for avoiding the use of nuclear energy since it is a great
terrible/serious/threat for the environment
13 This companies must find a way to manufacture their products without to damage the environment.
This These companies must find a way to manufacture their products without to damageing the
environment.
14 Despite nuclear power is a really effective way to produce energy, we cannot trust it because of the high
risk it involves.
Despite the fact that / Although nuclear energy power is a really effective way to produce power energy,
we cannot trust it because of the high risk it involves
15 The production of the mechanical industry is not very high, due to the managers are not replacing old
machinery.
The production of the mechanical industry is not very high, due to the managers are /the fact that
managers are not replacing old machinery
16 Of this form, they will be able to obtain more products.
Of this form In this way, they will be able to obtain more products/produce more
17 To solve these problems, although seems a contradiction, the enterprises should make greater
investments.
To solve these problems, although it seems a contradiction, the enterprises should make greater higher
investments
18 Aluminium is very used in constructional engineering.
Aluminium is very much used in constructional civil engineering
19 About the robot work in dangerous places, I think that it is necessary to develop new technology.
About Concerning/Regarding the robots work/working in dangerous places, I think that it is necessary to
develop a new technology/ new technologies
20 It consists on the following parts.
It consists on of the following parts (= be made of. Consist in = have sthg as a major part)
21 Besides of these two types, others materials as aluminium are being studied.
Besides of these two types, others materials such as aluminium are being studied
22 Concrete is used in buildings because has great resistance.
Concrete is used in buildings because it has great resistance
23 Energies can be classified by its origin.
Energies can be classified by its their origin
24 Each person should have its own eolic generator.
Each person should have its his/her/ their own eolic wind generator.

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25 The nuclear reactor makes that one of the released neutrons hits other U-235 nucleus.
The nuclear reactor makes that one of the released neutrons hits another U-235 nucleus
26 It is produced a controlled chain reaction.
It is produced by a controlled chain reaction/ A controlled chain reaction is produced / It produces a
controlled chain reaction
27 The use of this device is not indicated when is required high precision.
The use of this device is not indicated when high precision is required
28 This system has an important advantage because is not necessary electrical energy to make that it
works.
This system has an important advantage because electrical energy is not necessary to make that it
works
29 The steam produced by a boiler makes spin the rotor of an alternator.
The steam produced by a boiler makes the rotor of an alternator spin
30 Computers can process and storage enormous amounts of data.
Computers can process and storage store enormous amounts of data
31 Computers provocate reduction of face-to-face staff interaction.
Computers provocate provoke a reduction of face-to-face staff interaction
32 Like employees work with a computer, there is less face-to-face interaction.
Like Since (/ as) employees work with a computer, there is less face-to-face interaction

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