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Day 1:
Pre-Reading Jumbled Poetry Activity (Adapted from Penny Kittle Book
Love)
We will be looking at We Are Many by Pablo Neruda and "On The Pulse of
Morning" by Maya Angelou
Double Notes Log Entry
This I Believe introductory activity scaffolding for Narrative Essay
a. Preview the NPR website
b. Show good examples of several This I Believe Essays
c. Give students time to work on their essays in class
Double entry log for note-taking strategy over Wonder
Mini-lesson over relevancy of genre and audience
a. Why does genre matter?
b. Do we really need to know who we are talking to?
c.
Day
2:
This I Believe grading criteria for short essay in-class writing
Page poetry activity
Small group discussion over themes in Wonder
Tying it all together Wrap up discussion
Day 3:
Pre-viewing film questions
o Have you ever been bullied? Do you know someone who has been
bullied? Are you a bully?
Post-viewing film activity
o Consider the rhyme, Sticks and stones may break my bones, but
words will never hurt me. Did you ever use it to ward off bullies?
Explain why you think this is or is not effective.
o What does the narrator mean when he says, Sometimes being
drug free has less to do with addiction and more to do with
sanity?
o The narrator paints a picture of a cast built around your broken
heart. Its signed by you, and it simply says, They were wrong!
Share a story about a time when everyone around you felt like a
bully, but you knew they were wrong. Explain why you signed
your cast, They were wrong!
o The narrator says, If you cant see anything beautiful about
yourself, get a better mirror. Look a little closer. Because theres
something inside you that made you keep trying despite everyone
that told you to quit. List five things you like about yourself, and
of those five, what do you consider to be your best quality?
Socratic Seminar
Day 4:
Reader Response activity
Day 6:
Researching Childhood Conditions
Research on Childhood Conceptions
I will brainstorm with students other illnesses or conditions that affect
children (from leukemia to Cleft palate to Aspergers Syndrome to autism),
causing them to act or look differently from others. I will then pass out some
short articles on these illnesses or conditions to groups of students. Have
these groups summarize the information and make a short presentation to
other students. These presentations should focus on understanding the
differences and treating others with kindness and respect. Additionally, I will
discuss with the class how society at different times has used different words
to describe students with differences. Have them examine the words used
by characters in the story. For example, Mrs. Albans uses the word
handicapped to describe Auggie. Discuss with your students how different
labels affect our attitudes and behaviors.
Quick-Write over how the research you conducted today made you
feel
Day 7:
Class discussion on themes of bullying and betrayal in Wonder
I will have students respond to the following prompts on the themes:
Bullying and betrayal. To follow up I will have students do a Think, Pair, Share.
They will write down responses to the questions, then students will pair up
and have a brief discussion to explain the reasoning behind their answers.
Bullying and Betrayal Discussion
Bullying
Kids that are different are almost always bullied in some way. How
does Auggie know the first time he meets Julian that he will be a bully? In
what subtle way does Julian bully Auggie? What purpose does Julian have in
bullying Jack? What power does Julian have to force the other students to join
in his cruelty toward Auggie and Jack? What prompts the seventh graders to
attack and bully Auggie? In general, what is Auggies response to the
bullying?
Betrayal
Auggie and Jack are great friends; they laugh together, they talk about
anything and everything, and they feel comfortable together. So why does
Jack betray Auggie by talking badly behind his back? How does Auggie feel
when he hears what Jack has said? At the same time Auggie is experiencing
betrayal by his friend, Via is also feeling betrayed by her two best friends,
Miranda and Ella. How do Miranda and Ella betray Via? What is Vias
response? How do Via and Auggie resolve their individual conflicts and cope
with the pain or betrayal?
Think, Write, Pair & Share
Write answers to these questions in your learning journal:
- How did the action of betrayal make August feel? Jack?
- How did it make the reader feel?
How does the author use these feelings to further communicate the
message to the reader?
Pair with a classmate to share your thoughts.
o Interview a character activity
o Art creation activity
Artistic Activity
New Book Cover
- Remember to include the author and the title
Illustrate a Favorite or Vivid Scene
- Write 1-2 sentences on the back to define the scene.
New Chapter Image
- Each chapter had a picture of the narrator. Choose any of the narrators
(besides Auggie) to draw a full character sketch of them.
Feelings Images
- Listen to the music that inspired the book (Wonder by Natalie
Merchant) and draw images that come to mind. This may be abstract
and your colors can convey your feelings.
Self-Portrait
- The fifth graders at Auggies school normally draw a self-portrait as
one of their art assignments. During the year Auggie attended Beecher
Prep, the assignment was changed to be a self-portrait as animal. Draw
either for yourself.
To earn full credit:
- Turn in neat work that follows the directions and demonstrates good
effort
- All artistic pieces must be in color
- Proofread all written work
- Convey enough detail in your work to demonstrate your understanding
of the book and characters.
Introduce Book Talk assignment due in 2 weeks
Day 8:
Lesson on the Revision Process Students will come up to the white
board and provide one example of good feedback versus examples of
bad feedback. This gets students out of their seats and involved in our
discussion.
The Revising Process and Developing Meta- Awareness
(Adapted from The ELL Writer: Moving Beyond Basics in the Secondary
Classroom)
Thinking About Revision
Write About what you do to revise your essays. How do you define revision
and what does it look like? Try to be as specific as possible and provide some
examples. I will use students responses to this question as a way to open a
discussion on drafting and revision.
Analyze the Assignment
Lets take a look at the assignment. Analyze the assignment for its purpose,
audience, and genre. Then, in pairs, summarize your analysis in a short
paragraph. What are some ideas that you have for this assignment? I will use
this writing prompt as a way for me to gauge how students are interpreting
my assignment. It is particularly useful when I work with ELL writers, because
I can get a sense of what is challenging for them, where I need to clarify, and
what they are planning to do. For ELL writers with limited writing experience, I
often use a graphic organizer or chart (with the categories of purpose,
reader/audience, and genre) so that they cab use shorthand/shorter
sentences to articulate their ideas, before we discuss the assignment as a
class.
Whats Our Progress?
Briefly describe how the writing/drafting is going for you. What area has been
really difficult/hard? What sections of this essay/writing assignment do you
feel the most proud of and why? What still needs some work? I may also
include some of the following questions in order to help students to plan
ahead for their next drafts or assignments: What revision strategies have
worked for you as you have been creating the draft? What is your plan over
the next few days as you think about your next steps with this assignment?
Answering the So What? Question
What do you want to communicate to your intended readers? I will usually
ask students to do this a few times throughout a given writing project, as a
way of having them check in on their own writing goals and intentions. The
goal is to help them see how their thinking and hopefully their writing has
deepened over time.
In-class workshop. Students peer review & take time to self-edit and
make corrections to their essay.
I will ask students to write down at least 3 questions they would like
their peer reviewer to address
Day 9:
Mini-lesson over phrases and clauses
Mini Lesson Topic
Phrases & Clauses
Materials
Various textual examples from Wonder
Connection
In the previous lesson we engaged in a lesson over the components of writing
a persuasive essay. Specifically we focused on ethos, logos and pathos. We
are preparing to write a memoir and these are helpful tools to understand
when considering language instruction.
Explicit Instruction
I created a PowerPoint that defines the terms phrase, clause, independent
clause, dependent clause, past participle, and present participle. The slides
have multiple examples that demonstrate for students how to identify the
difference between an independent clause and a dependent clause. It also
goes into detail about the difference between a clause and a phrase. Once
students have a basic understanding between the differences of a phrase and
clause we will do a whiteboard activity. For this activity students will each
have their own white board that they will write out the answer to my
questions on. This way they get practice writing both phrases and clauses so
it sticks with them more.
Guided Practice
I put together a handout for students to practice distinguishing between a
clause and a phrase as well as between an independent clause and a
dependent clause. Students are invited to use one another as a resource as
long as they are discussing the reasoning behind why they selected the
answer they did. I will be watching and listening to ensure students stay on
task and are not just copying one anothers work.
Independent Practice
As the ticket out the door for the day I will ask students to identify 3
examples from the mentor text weve been reading, A Long Way Gone:
Memoirs of a Boy Soldier. Students are welcome to reference the PowerPoint
and the notes theyve taken over what weve talked about.
Group Wrap-Up
After students have had time to examine the text and classify where in parts
of the text what is a clause and what is a phrase. I will call on a few students
randomly to share examples theyve identified as a phrase or a clause. I will
then ask students to provide reasoning as to why its important to understand
the difference between a clause and phrase in both your reading and writing.
Furthermore why is it important to know the specific types of clauses? Why
does it matter whether you choose to use a past participle or a present
participle? These questions will hopefully help students understand the
reasoning behind the thinking.
Fishbowl Discussion Wonder
o Who do you identify with in Wonder? Why?
Ticket out the door - review over phrases and clauses
Name: _______________________________________________________________Date:
___________________
Part 1 Directions: Choose whether each group of words is a clause or is not
a clause. You may pair up with one partner for this activity if you would like.
Examine your thinking behind why you make the selections you do. We will
go into a group activity after this so be prepared to share your reasoning for
your answers.
1. Because we left early
Clause / Not a clause
2. Under the bed or in the closet
Clause / Not a clause
3. Johnny wasnt listening in class today
Clause / Not a clause
4. The cottage looking over the valley
Clause / Not a clause
5. Four bald eagles soared over the river
Clause / Not a clause
6. After it had finished raining
Evidence of having written at least one rough draft that has been
submitted for peer evaluation
Extended Definition Rubric
Category
A
B
C
D
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clearly
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identifies the topic and
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but does
summarizes
but one or
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not clearly
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explanations explain the
in the
lacks clarity. are sketchy
topic or the
definition.
and/or
criteria.
worded
unclearly.
Criteria
Each
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criterion is
not all, of
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makes an
worded so
the criteria
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that the
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writing
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so that the
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understands clearly
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few or no
criteria.
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that the
reader
clearly sees
how it
supports the
criterion.
Warrants
Conclusion
Form
Mechanics,
Spelling,
Grammar,
Use
The writer
clearly
explains how
each
example and
contrasting
example
illustrates
the criterion
to which it is
related.
The
conclusion
both
summarizes
the
definition
and extends
it to provide
a new
insight
based on the
thinking that
has gone
into the
definition.
The writers
introduction,
each
criterion,
and
conclusion
are
separated
into different
paragraphs.
For the most
part, the
writing is
clear and
free of
problems.
sufficient
detail so
that the
reader
clearly sees
how they
support the
criteria.
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explains how
most
examples
and
contrasting
examples
illustrate the
criteria to
which they
are related.
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conclusion
summarizes
the
definition
but does
little to
extend it to
provide a
new insight
based on the
thinking that
has gone
into the
definition.
The writers
introduction,
each
criterion,
and
conclusion
and
separated
into different
paragraphs.
For the most
part, the
writing is
clear and
free of
problems.
sufficient
detail so
that the
reader
clearly sees
how they
support the
criteria.
The writer
explains how
some
examples
and
contrasting
examples
illustrate the
criteria to
which they
are related.
The
conclusion
summarizes
the
definition
but does not
extend it to
provide a
new insight
based on the
thinking that
has gone
into the
definition.
they are
related to
the criteria.
The writer
makes an
effort to
relate the
examples
and
contrasting
examples
to the
criteria, but
this
The writing
is all in one
paragraph
or the
paragraph
divisions
appear
arbitrary.
There are
few or no
warrants.
The writers
introduction,
each
criterion,
and
conclusion
are
separated
into different
paragraphs.
The writing
includes
some
problems
that impede
the readers
The writing
is all in one
paragraph
or the
paragraph
division
seems
arbitrary.
The writing
is all in one
paragraph
or the
paragraph
division
seems
arbitrary.
The writing
includes
many
problems
that
impede the
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includes
many
problems
that
impede the
The writing
is all in one
paragraph
or the
paragraph
divisions
appear
arbitrary.
effort to
understand
what the
writer is
saying.
readers
effort to
understand
what the
writer is
saying.
readers
effort to
understand
what the
writer is
saying.
Day 13:
Exploring Precepts
To begin I plan to dress as Abraham Lincoln and talk about the value of truth
throughout the length of his life. I will proceed to ask students to think of
someone who they consider a hero in each of their lives. Then, Ill have
students choose a precept that helps show why you believe them to be a
hero.
Class collaboration on rubric for Narrative Essay
Rubric over Narrative Essay
Students and I will collaborate to create the grading criteria for this
assignment to be graded on.
Book talk over Wonder
Day 14:
Chalk Talk
Chalk Talk
Respond to these questions by writing your answer or responding to another.
o Why would the author title the book this way?
o What does it mean to be a wonder?
o Who was a wonder in this novel?
o What does wonder have to do with the theme of this novel?
Post-reading discussion activity
Post-Reading Discussion Activity
1. Dont judge a boy by his face
What do you think of the line Dont judge a boy by his face which appears
on the back cover of the book? Did this affect how much you were interested
in the story? How much did this line give away about the story you were
about to read?
2. Auggies appearance
Throughout Wonder, Auggie describes the way that people react to seeing his
face for the first time: by immediately looking away. Have you ever been in a
situation where you have responded like this to seeing someone different?
Having now read Wonder, how do you feel about this now? Auggies face is
not fully described until quite far on in the story, in Vias chapter August:
Through the Peephole. How close was this description to your own mental
picture of Auggie? Did you have a picture of his face in your mind while
reading the book? Did the description alter that picture?
3. Auggies personality
How would you describe Auggie as a person in the first few chapters of the
book? What about the final few chapters? Has he changed significantly? Are
there any experiences or episodes during the story that you think had a
particular effect on him? If so, how?
4. The Astronaut Helmet
In the chapter Costumes Auggie describes the astronaut helmet that he
wore constantly as a younger child. We later learn that Miranda was the one
to give Auggie the helmet, and is proud of the gift, but that it was Auggies
father who threw it away. What do you think the helmet signifies to each of
these characters and why do you think they all view it so differently?
5. Star Wars
Star Wars is one of Auggies passions. Why do you think this is?
Do you see any reasons for Auggie to identify with these characters, or to
aspire to be like them?
6. The use of humor in Wonder
Auggies parents bring Auggie around to the idea of attending school by
joking with him about Mr. Tushmans name, and telling him about their old
college professor, Bobbie Butt. To what extent is humor used as a tool
throughout Wonder to diffuse difficult or tense situations, or to convey a part
of the story that would otherwise be depressing or sad? Look at the chapter
How I Came To Life.
7. Via
What did you think of Via as a character? Did you empathize with her? Why
do you think Via was so angry to learn that Auggie cut off his Padawan braid?
Do you think Vias own attitude towards her brother changes throughout the
story?
8. Mrs. Albans
Look at the emails between Mr. Tushman, Julians parents and Jacks parents
in the chapter Letters, Emails, Facebook, Texts. Up to this point in the story
we have seen how the children at Auggies school have reacted to him. Is
Mrs. Albans attitude towards Auggie different? What do you make of her
statement that Auggie is handicapped? Do you think she is correct in saying
that asking ordinary children, such as Julian, to befriend Auggie places a
burden on them?
9. At the ice cream parlor
The author has explained that she was inspired to write Wonder after an
experience at a local ice cream parlour very similar to the scene described in
the chapter Carvel, where Jack sees Auggie for the first time. In this scene,
Jacks babysitter Veroncia chooses to get up and quickly walk Jack and his
little brother Jamie away from Auggie, rather than risk Jamie saying
something rude or hurtful. What do you think you would have done, if put in
that position?
10.
The Precepts (Rules to Live By)
- When given the choice between being right or being kind, choose
kind. -- Dr. Wayne Dyer
- Your deeds are your monuments. Inscription on ancient Egyptian
tomb
- Have no friends not equal to yourself. Confucius
- Fortune favors the bold. Virgil
- No man is an island, entire of itself. John Donne
- It is better to know some of the questions than all of the answers.
James Thurber
- Kind words do not cost much. Yet they accomplish much. Blaise
Pascal
- What is beautiful is good, and who is good will soon be beautiful.
Sappho
- Do all the good you can, by all the means you can, in all the ways you
can, in all the places you can, at all the times you can, to all the people
you can, as long as you ever can. John Wesley
- Just follow the day and reach for the sun. Polyphonic Spree
Day 15:
***See The Revising Process and Developing Meta- Awareness for the
process students will use during this workshop.
Reflection
Final Precept You Will Carry Share Out
Pair and Share
Reflection is an essential component to many aspects of life, including the
writing process. I will have my students write a page or longer reflection on
the unit. What were your interest and difficulties? Did you find any of the
characters in Wonder relatable? If so, who? Finally I would like you to talk
about precepts in your reflection. What is your understanding of a precept?
What is one precept that you carry with you or plan to carry with you in
your life? Be prepared to share this last answer with the class.